Re: Plumerian #82

Postby koegami » Tue Jun 03, 2014 11:22 am

Possible reserve.

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Re: Plumerian #82

Postby Medd » Wed Jun 04, 2014 2:38 am

Reserve with the name Jackson... c8
He's super kawaii
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Re: Plumerian #82

Postby TinyEldritch » Wed Jun 04, 2014 3:13 am

Reserve with the name Duke, oh god I'm gonna have fun with this. <:

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Re: Plumerian #82

Postby The One & Only Vapor » Wed Jun 04, 2014 1:11 pm

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possible reserve <3

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Re: Plumerian #82

Postby Gaelic » Fri Jun 06, 2014 7:10 am

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K o t o r i

Postby .Eclipse. » Fri Jun 06, 2014 7:16 am

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» Basics
Name;; Kotori
Meaning;; "Sprits;Guide owl"
Pronunciation;; Ka●Tore●EE
Name Origin;; Japan
Accent;; British
Gender;; Male
Age;; 21
Sexuality;; Straight
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» Who am I?
●Rude ●Grumpy ●Outcast ●Violent-prone ●Does not believe in love
Katori is the type that doesn't like to be around others one bit. He is always a bit rude to others and is just overall a very grumpy Plumerian. He often refers to others as "Loud" or "Annoying". This causes Ri to often be pushed away from the crowd and be more of an outcast. Although, Ri tries to act as if this doesn't hurt him, but it does. He is not sure why he is like this- it's just his demeanor. He can also become violent- but rarely actually does anything serious damage [mostly verbal threats]. He is witty smart-alec and almost all the time sarcastic. He doesn't believe in any of that soppy "love" and has 0 compatibility with any other Plumerian.

» Likes and Dislikes
Rude Plumes
His disorders
Red
Apples
Scars
Lies
Rumors
Cheating
Being clean
Glow-y items
Fireflies
Milk
Rain
Nature noises
Ocean
His mohawk


»Katori'sDisorder
Ri is inflicted with a case of Bi-polar. This disorder causes Ri to change his mind about a lot of things with little thought. He also can become incredibly nervous or get anxiety attacks if he feels threatened or pressured, and can cause him to lose control of himself and he can lash out unknowingly and this is why he stays alone. He fears that he will hurt other when this happens to him. He feels unwanted and left alone; he is pretty much an introvert.

» The lies
Ri has a fear of being lied to. This is the one thing that ultimately can ruin his entire life. He has always been like this since a very young age. Even if its the smallest little thing, it will tear him apart inside. This causes trust issues, too. Thinking out someone lying to him makes him want to crawl up into a ball. And if you lie to him- be prepared. He will become extremely distraught and just repeat "why are you lying to me". He will sob and have a nervous breakdown. He will threaten and throw and break.Despite being a grouch, Ri has never told a lie in his life. He is literally the most honest plume ever. He will tell you everything you need to know, even if its in a rude manner, at least you know he is being 100% honest.
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» That Time

I let out a small sigh, in occurrence to the now spilled cup of juice on
the table "Can you calm down" I mutter out to the small Plume-
only standing a foot or so tall "You're making a mess" I grimace.
With wide eyes, they look back up to me, quivering in fear "Sorry" They
stare at me, then flick their tail and run off. This is why I hate company
he states to himself. Trying to rush his visiting family out the door.
"Nice of you guys to visit" my eyes shift to the clock, in bright red
5:59 flickers "but it's getting kind of late.." I hold my breath waiting
for the reply. "Oh- ok. Come on kids" My Cousin calls to the kids "Time to l
leave". They gather their things and leave. Once again, I am alone to swim
in my thoughts. I strip of my t-shirt and lay in my empty king size bed. My
eyes flicker- and then I am asleep.

beepbeepbeep. My alarm pounds my eardrums causing a ache. I paw at my
face and then I sit up. Drowsily, I hang my feet over the side of the bed and
they touch the cold carpet.I cringe a bit, but then firmly plant them to the
floor. I step into the bathroom and groom my flat mohawk back into its
volumus form. I pick a new shirt and begin to head out the door to walk
to the coffee shop.

I cross my street, skimming the cars that pass by me. I was looking down when a Plume knocked be back after hitting my shoulder. I jerk my head up "hey can you wa-" I stop as I glare at the Plume. It was a girl."I'm so sorry!" she shrieks out "It's ok.." I mutter. She looks at me once more, and then she was off. This was the first time I could feel my heart beat. The first time..I felt it. Who was this girl..why did I feel like this.

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» When I know
Ri has a instinct when he knows when someone is being dishonest. He always can tell a lie from a truth, even if you get down and cry on your knees, Ri knows a lie when he hears one. He uses a mixture of reading facial expressions and just a gut feeling it's a lie. But never once was he wrong. ever. As I told, above nor does he approve of lie so you should really watch what you say around him...especially if your a compulsive liar.
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♠ The Great Akatora — Red in the morning... Take warning

Postby monty » Fri Jun 06, 2014 9:25 am

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Taken by security cameras at the scene of one of the various crimes.


Name: Akatora

Species: Plumerian

Birth date: 05/26/1989

Sex: Male

Gender identity: Masculine

Sexual Orientation: Hetero-flexible

Bounty: Currently 3,000 U.S. dollars

Markings: Black over-coat with marble-like white and yellow stripes on torso, tail and back. Yellow feathers located on the tail and the ear. Large white and yellow mane. Yellow eyes.

Wanted for: Breaking into various different animal shelters and allowing all occupants to escape. Various hideouts have revealed hidden refugees from shelters and traces of his paw prints and DNA.

Information source: Information was gathered from various family members discovered through DNA strands left behind. Family members included; second cousin, uncle, removed aunt and great uncle. Witnesses revealed information about the suspect after interrogation. All witnesses were set free. Sources have proven to be reliable and consistent.

Characteristics: Take caution upon engaging with the suspect. Suspect #82 is highly dangerous and immune to our anesthetics and seems to blend in with shadows. Suspect also always disables security alarms and security cameras. Make sure officers in pursuit are well armored and have an abundant supply of humane weapons to try to stabilize it. Suspect #82 is also the causation of a few patients to go crazy.

Sources:
Received 11/03/2013 wrote:Akatora handed me a moth eaten file and said;
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There, you've read their side, will you at least hear mine out now? It's only fair, is it not?
First things first; I am not the criminal they portray me as. I'm simply trying to free the trapped animals that did nothing to deserve such poor treatment. Do you honestly expect me to sit down and just let them kill the innocent? There's one thing they didn't mention in my file; I've never freed those in the safety of the non-kill shelters. I don't see why you can't view it from my perspective. Have you walked in to an animal shelter and seen the suffering? Can you not hear the poor animals' cries for help? No... of course you can't. You're only human, it's not your fault for being close minded. After all; it's the classic close-mindedness that leads to my kind being trapped into cages awaiting their death or to be trapped in the custody of a human. All because humans are too stubborn to coexist... It's hypocritical. You view animals as a threat yet humans pose as the biggest threat of them all... Bah..
Enough of my ranting; allow me to tell you about myself. I am the great Akatora. When I was younger; my markings resembled more of a tiger, much more than they do now. Since you probably don't know; in Japanese the word "Akatora" translates to "Red"(Aka) and "tiger"(tora). I feel as if I look more like a skeleton than a tiger. When I was younger; I did have a red-tint to my pelt, one that I out grew. However,,I don't go by my name for the meaning anymore; but for the pride behind it and the strength of it as it rolls off your tongue. The strength of a tiger, no? However... the "red" portion of my name fits. Red is the universal color of danger, which is exactly what I am... a danger.
I am Hetero-flexible. Confused? Understandable. What hetero-flexible means is that I mainly am interested in the opposite gender but I'm not afraid to swing the other way.
Wait... I smell more of your kind coming... the bad kind with tranquilizers and sticks... Until we meet again, human...


And with that... I never saw Akatora again...
Face to face that is.
I never heard his scratchy voice again. I was told by a friend that bright yellow feathers had been seen by the entrance of the nearby animal shelter; just lurking before disappearing. He does the same to me, Akatora that is. Sometimes I can see his harsh yellow eyes glaring at me in the dark shadows of my room. Or I'll see the outline of this elusive plumerian. He knows I was seeking him out for the reward. That 1,500$ boundary the government has placed on his custody, alive of course. I was a fool for thinking I could capture this mysterious, free spirit. I was going through a tough money situation and I thought this was my way out... Just a warning; stop trying to find him. He doesn't want to be found. The great Akatora will stalk you with those judgmental eyes and that cold harsh voice... I can feel him glaring at me as I type this report, be careful of the great Akatora, or he'll follow you too...

— Anonymous source



Received 02/17/2014 wrote:He's after me. I'm not safe. His cold yellow eyes. Those freaking eyes. I thought it would be easy money; 2,200 bucks is a lot. I never thoughT IT'D LEAD TO THIS. I NEVER THOUGHT IT'D LEAD TO THIS. I never thouGHT THE FOLDER WOULD BE THIS BAD. Hahaha... HAHAHHAHA.... The foldER... That was FUN. FUNNY FUNNY AKATORA. Funny Akatora with thoSE AWFUL JUDGEMENTAL Funny eyes. Such funny eyes. Always STARING AND JUDGING. Always there to play with me... Hehehhehehe... funny JUDGEMENTAL Akatora...
— Hospital patient #739, died of heart failure,
suspected to be triggered
from paranoia


Multiple other sources complaining of feeling of being stalked, two sources above are most severe.



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You don't really believe them do you? Why would you? I'm not a monster; I don't cause the paranoia from others. I never return to those whom I visit. I don't want to hurt anyone, I don't even understand what I'm doing. I cannot help the lack of comfort people get from my striking eyes. They are quite pretty, aren't they? They failed to mention that the victim who died of heart failure was also
schizophrenic and had a history of hallucinations. Trust me, I looked it up to defend my case. I'm not some rebel they label me as. I don't like pain. I don't like suffering. That's why I clear out those shelters. Humans use their selective hearing to the cries of those trapped in cages. It's disgusting... And you believe me to be the bad guy. You've only heard one side of the story; the first side. Why don't you listen to mine first; and then decide whether I'm the villain?



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Personality:

Akatora is quite a character. Where do I even start?

Self Righteous

He always believes he's doing the right thing. He always believes that no matter what; he's causing some good in the world and yet he doesn't completely ignore the bad qualities he's creating as well. Along with his self righteous beliefs; he acknowledges that his actions can be perceived as "bad" and he takes credit for them as well. He believes firmly in the Yin and Yang balance; whatever good he contributes to society; the same amount of negativity is released.

Cocky

His striking colors impress himself. He loves the way they look whenever he passes anything reflective. He's not afraid to flaunt off his patterns. His favorite features of himself are his feathers. Akatora feels as if his feathers compliment him very well. He also takes great pride in the size of his mane. Other than his looks; Akatora is quite cocky about his intelligence. He takes pride in his ability to debate very well and is known to take on opponents that are smarter and has gotten into tough situations.

Witty

Akatora loves to make snarky comments. Almost all of his friends and family love to hear his snarky comments. However, he has control. He never makes any, or at least tries not to make any, insensitive comments. He also tries to conceal his snarkiness until the perfect moment; that's why his comments usually resonate in others' minds as important. Akatora's wit is mainly dependent on his immense intellect.

Manipulative

With the way he argues points he thinks he's right; he manages to convince others he's right or to at least consider seeing things from his perspective. His words are powerful and they leak into those whom he's arguing with's minds. He can make someone see from his point of view without even trying too hard. Even when he realizes he was wrong in an argument; he won't stand down, he's much too proud.

Proud

His pride also ties in with his cockiness. He takes pride in anything he does. He won't submit to anyone and doesn't even follow by his own rules sometimes because of his pride. His pride gives him a massive ego but he feels that his looks and his intellect gives him enough to back it up.

Loyal

He's loyal to those he loves and what he does. Once he sets his mind to something; he doesn't abandon the idea until it's done. All of his personal projects are either finished or in the process of being finished.


Adventurous

There's nothing Akatora loves more than a good adventure. Danger doesn't phase him; his response to people who ask if he's scared is; "Yes, the world is dangerous but I've already gone through hell and back. That time was sad, yes, but it made me enjoy life and I know there's nothing to be afraid of."

Trustworthy

When it's all said and done; Akatora is a friend you could trust your life with. He's proud of the fact that he's never lied to anyone about anything besides small fibs. His mind contains many secrets of all his friends and left over family. He'd never tell any of them.

Shut - up

In return of being the secret-keeping friend; Akatora doesn't let any one into his world. He keeps his past and his secrets to himself. He always claims to be waiting for the right person who would understand what he was going through and wouldn't pass it on. He knows everybody talks; he knows that once he lets it out it'll never be contained again. So because of that; he keeps it bottled up, which lead to a severe anxiety attack at one point. He's long-since recovered and he's taken to talking in inanimate objects when he's alone; it gives him a sense of security.

Mysterious

It plays a role in him being shut-up. Mysterious is an adjective that everyone universally agrees fits Akatora. He's rarely seen yet you know when he's near. Something about his person makes you want to get to know him more. Something captures your attention and draws you in.



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Believe of perfect happiness

Akatora's belief of happiness is best summed up as freedom. He wants his free life back when he didn't have to worry about getting caught if he were to sit down and rest. He acknowledges that he's getting older and he can't always be moving as much in the best interest of his health. He also misses the less chaotic life of his childhood where he stayed in one place. His perfect idea of happiness is tranquilness and freedom.


Regrets

Although the passage above would hint that Akatora regrets starting his escapade, it's not true at all quite the opposite. His biggest regret is that, at the rate in which he's retiring, he hasn't helped out more. He regrets he couldn't save the lives of those who travel out of the animal shelter in garbage bags with their deceased companion.

All in all, his ultimate regret would be not spending as much time with his mother when he was young and not getting to know her. He doesn't have very many memories with her and at times has trouble recalling what she even looked like. He hates this about himself and stresses over it.

Ultimate goal

Ultimately; he wants to settle down and start a family. Although, he knows that he has to do the impossible and clear his bounty before he can do anything. He wants to have someone to tell his stories to just like his father did to him. Although he knows he pushes back this goal with each shelter he raids. He does work a little bit towards his goal; he hits one less shelter every three months. He's managed to bump it down to only five shelters every three months.

In terms of his raiding; he is leaving it in the hands of one of his best friends to stir up trouble within the human community, even more than there already is. He knows he can trust this person to get others riled up and he knows that something will change. It's just a gut feeling to him but he knows he will live to see his dreams come true.




Likes:
Freedom
The art of debating
Freeing those whom are trapped unfairly
Success
Laughing
The few times he can spend with friends
Cherries and Clementines
Caves, they intrigue him
The unknown
Adventure
Exploring
Dislikes
Neon colors
Being confined
Being controlled
Pain
Fire
Heights
Self harm
Tomatoes and apples
The color red, it reminds him of blood
Dictatorships
Liars
Hypocrites




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The dagger His dagger is Akatora's favorite tool to use. He views it as that; a tool. Although he may use it a a bluff; Akatora has never once used his dagger to attack another living creature. He uses it as a tool for freeing animals from shelters. It's used to pick locks and cut the wires of security cameras. Akatora's dagger is decorates with a yellow feather, much like the ones located on his person, tied around it's brown, soft handle, perfectly designed for him to hold in his teeth. The blade is a smooth steel with small little scratches in it from where Akatora sharpened it. While he's in combat or on a mission he will sometimes take the feather off to protect it from harms way.



Akatora's quirks and fears



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Acrophobiafear of heights
Although he may spend his time rescuing small animals; his worst fear is heights. He hates being high up; in fear that he may fall. He avoids high places at all costs. Although he's never been endangered by heights before; the atmospheric view down to the ground always frightened him.



Thanatophobiafear of death
Although Akatora may be excited about exploring new regions; he's terrified of death. He doesn't want his life work to be for nothing; he feels that if he were to die then everything he worked for would go with him. It'd be leaving a project unfinished; which is one of his pet peeves.


As for his quirks, Akatora has a terrible habit of talking with his mouth full as well as eating fast. He's used to eating in a rush because he's usually on the run and it's not very charming when he does sit down to eat dinner with someone. He typically doesn't have company with him while he eats so he tends to chew with his mouth open on accident, since he's not thinking about it.

Paranoia is another one of his quirks although it's not as sever as the word implies. He's more worrisome than paranoid. He worries for those whom he rescued and if they got away or not since he can't be around to make sure. He worries for what's left of his family in fear that they could be tracked down for interrogation. He also worries about the well-being of those he hasn't saved yet. Yes... more worrisome than paranoia.

He has a bad habit of talking too fast. However, he always fixes this mistake mid sentence and it sounds as if he changed accients for only one word. Some people question this and he just shrugs it off and acts as if he has no idea what they're talking about.


Theme song:

His theme song is definitely You Should Have Killed Me When You Had The Chance by A Day To Remember. In fact; his favorite quote is some of the song lyrics from the song.
"The only thing that's going to bother me
Is that you'll all call yourselves my friends"
He feels this best describes himself because there are some people who tormented him when he was young and small for his colors and his hairstyle, but because he grew up to become "famous" they claim to be his friend, just for the fame.

Relations

Childhood... "friends"

Growing up; Akatora never had very many friends. He was disliked because his mane was different and he was small for a male plumerian. He was also picked on for his dad having a limp in his walk. They said he had too much of an active imagination when he tried to retell the stories his dad told him. He never had more than two friends at a time and even then he never paid them a lot of mind. He didn't need friends, he had his dad and himself.


His dad
Akatora idolized his father more than anyone in the world. His father was brave and helped alongside figures like firefighters until he retired early thanks to a leg injury while working. While Akatora was growing up; his dad told him stories of his work helping people in need. Most of which was exaggerated or completely made up all together. Akatora never minded, he thrived for the stories growing up, they were the only reason his parents could get him to sleep at a decent hour. He always knew there was something wrong with his dad's leg but he never thought it'd be anything more than a limp. What Akatora didn't know was that after the accident; his father was too afraid to get treatment for his leg. He couldn't tell how sick has dad was really getting.

His mom

Akatora's biggest regret in his life was that he fought with his mother constantly when she was only trying to help. He always viewed her heartfelt suggestions as nagging and nitpicking. He was never told that she was sick, that there was a tumor growing in her lungs that eventually caused them to collapse at the most unfortunate time. He never understood how she died, he never understood it was cancer. He still doesn't know but he regrets every sour word he breathed to his departed mother; the only one he'd ever have.

Assorted/distant family members:

These members show up at random during Alatora's adventures. He almost never knows who they are but he treats them with the same courtesy they treat him. He always answers basic questions for them but nothing more. He can tell they're family because they typically have colors or markings similar to his and their voice is usually similar. He doesn't trust them with any personal information and never tells them about his parents when they ask.


Why?

      Dad why?
      Why did you bring them here?
      Why won't mom stop coughing?
      Why are they putting us in cages?
      I don't like this, I don't like these men, the smell like dread, the smell like those you told me to avoid in your stories.
      Dad why did you lead them here?
      Why would you lead them to mommy?
      What are they doing?
      Why are they poking her with that needle and tube?
      What is the fluid going in it.
      Why isn't mommy breathing, Dad?
      I thought you loved her, Dad how could you!
      Why Dad?
      Why did you do this to her. To me.
      Why is Mommy gone now, why do you look so guilty?
      Why won't Mommy come back and fix my hair?
      Why won't she get up and tell me it's OK, that we'll all be fine?
      Why isn't she protecting me for this?
      Why isn't my mommy here, Dad!
      Where is she?!

      She's there but she's not.
      You said it yourself, that's not her.
      Did you bring them here just to do this?
      Did you bring them to our house just to take us away from it?
      Did you bring them here to take my mommy away?
      Why can't you walk Dad?
      Dad why are they taking you too?
      What's going on Dad? Why aren't you fighting back?
      Why are you saying I'm sorry Akatora?
      Why are you doing this to me?
      Dad what are you doing?
      Why are they putting the needle and tube in your leg too?
      Dad why aren't you moving?
      Dad why aren't you putting me to bed?
      Why aren't you telling me a story about how you saved the life of the president instead of taking my mommy and daddy away?
      Why won't you come back?
      Why are you leaving?
      Why aren't you grieving with me?
      Dad why aren't you listening to me?
      Why can't you hear me?

      Why aren't they taking me too?
      I want you Dad, I want you and Mommy, I want to go to.
      Why aren't they taking me?
      Why are they putting me in a bigger cage? I don't want to be in here I want to be with you and mommy.
      Why are they putting dried pellets in with me, I don't want this.
      What's going on Dad?
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      Why has it been two days already Dad?
      Why do these humans peer there faces in my cage?
      Why haven't I slept in two days?
      Why didn't you tell me a story so I could sleep?
      Why are people staring at me and why am I growling?
      Why did I try to bite that little girl's hand? She didn't take away my mommy and daddy.
      I didn't want to hurt her Dad.
      I didn't want to make her cry...
      I didn't mean for it.
      So tell me Dad,
      Why are they taking me to that room with the needle.
      Why are they taking me to the room I lost my mommy and daddy in?
      Why are they doing this to me?
      Why are they trying to strap me down?
      Why is the needle getting closer?
      Why Dad, why do I suddenly resent the needle?
      Why is it that I fight it?
      And why is it that I'm stronger than these men with the needle?
      Why am I able to jump over them?
      Why is it they're not able to scramble after me?
      Why are they sliding all over the floor?
      Dad what's going on, why is my escape this easy?
      Why am I lucky enough to find this dagger and escape?
      Why couldn't you have escaped?
      Why is it that I can and you can't?
      Why couldn't you have been the hero like you were in your stories?
      Why aren't you with me Dad?
      Why aren't you with me when I started my journey as the great Akatora, Dad?
      Dad, I don't need you anymore.
      I don't need your false stories about rescuing orphans from the fire.
      I don't need it, Dad, because I'm an orphan now and it's your fault.
      I don't need you Dad.
      I....
      need you.


The shelter

      Another minute goes by... which turns
      into an hour... which turns into two hours.
      The same thing. A human comes by, pokes
      it's head in my personal space, I growl, the
      human gets offended and moves on to
      another exhibit. They get all huffy; it's
      hysterical. Am I supposed to glorify you
      just because you have opposable thumbs?
      Since when did becoming human make you
      likable? I want nothing to do with humans.
      Yes, only a select few killed my parents, so
      that means I have to be forgiving? I have to
      be forgiving to the species who sticks their nose
      in my prison just to coo at me and unknowingly
      mock me and my tragedies. I don't want this...
      I want to go home. I want to be with my mom
      and my dad. I don't like this. I don't like these
      feelings. I want things to be how they were
      before. I'd kill for just one more story from
      my dad... Just one more story please...
      Only one, please. Tell me a story and take
      me away from my pain. Take me away from
      all of this; from watching Mommy stop
      breathing... I can't act this tough. I can't be
      grown up. I don't want to. I have to be strong...
      but I can't. Please Daddy. Just one more
      story... Please, it's not the same when I tell it.
      It's not your voice. It's not your confidence.
      It's not you... It's not the experience that's
      being retold... It's just a ghost. Although Dad,
      I know you'd want me to be strong. I'll try Dad,
      I'll try. I'll do it for you. Just give me strength
      to handle these humans. Just give me strength...



Overview of the past

I wish I could say Akatora had an easy, fun childhood, but in all honesty he didn't. His parents died at a young age forcing him to grow up too young. His dad injured his paw in an accident and his mom had cancer. Eventually the pain grew too much for both of them to handle so they both agreed to drop Akatora off at the same shelter they planned to be euthinized in. What they didn't plan was for Akatora to be in the same room. Akatora jumped to conclusions and thought it was all to spite him. In the shelter, he hated everyone who walked by. He learned how harsh and cruel some humans were early on; his tendency to snap at people who walked by his kennel resulted in him sentenced to euthinization early. If he wasn't too quick for the humans who imprisoned him; he would've been caught. He just barely managed to grab a dagger from surgical portion of the shelter; he still uses it to assist him in his raids. Slowly over time his bounty grew a he raided more and more shelters over time. At first the governments thought nothing of the small creature who raided animal shelters at night. But then they began to worry; what else could he rob into? What havoc would the free animals cause? So because of that; Akatora has been living as a fugitive for a majority of his life.

But who could possibly contain a free spirit like his?


A final word

You know; when I was younger I had a red pelt. That's where the inspiration for my name came from. The red tiger they called me... I'd like to believe that growing up, natural causes turned my hair to the dark color it is now... but I believe just the opposite. Is it natural to watch all the pain that I have? I'd like to think that all the suffering and pain turned my fur black. What else could it possibly be? The discoloration started when I escaped from my prison they disguise under the falsly clean name "shelter". It's unnatural for a shelter to be cruel.


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There is some art that I've ordered that hasn't come in yet. ^^



Art credit:

1). Drawn by me
2). Drawn by me
3). Drawn by XxAjb92999xX
4). Drawn by Blackhuskey
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What makes me a contender for this lovely Plumerian?

Well, I'm not going to lie I saw this section on other forms and I felt like I should make one too. Since this is about Akatora, not me, I'll keep this short. It's completely in your viewpoint whether you think I deserve him or not and either way I respect your decision. I guess what would make me deserving is how hard I worked on this; especially on the art. The second art piece I made took me almost three hours because it was such a tricky pose and I still don't think it's good. I took time out of my day to try to add in at least one hour every few days into the character development and I'm still creating new things to add in as I type. xD

What do I plan to do with him?

Well, one thing I loved about making his character come to life was that there was never any wrong answers and I could shape him to be whatever I wanted. I definitely plan to role play with him and I'd love to broaden his personality and story line even more. There were many things I considered with this character such as; what if there was a twist where he really went by another name? that I never implimented but there were some useful ones I could bring up such as "what if he does get caught what would happen?" "What if he can't talk his way out of something?"


One thing that I plan to do with him from the get-go is that I want to help Qua with their form for Plumie #100 by helping develop their character by Akatora being one of his enemies. It would open up room for stories and art and I would love to help them with that. Akatora and Qua's character Lucky are almost the same, that's why they'd despise each other.



All in all; I had fun creating this character, regardless if I'll get to use him or not. I'm trying to distract myself from real life stressed through adoptable characters and this certainly helped me so thank you! <3 The winner can have my art as well. c:

I would also like to thank Ricecatkyo for reviewing my form, giving my a great critique of my form and helping me develope Akatora even farther. The advice I've received really helped me bring this character to life. <33



OF COURSE I'M THAT AWFUL PERSON WHO HIDES THE LAST ONE IN THE LONGEST THING I'VE EVER WRITTEN AHHA.

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Postby .Eclipse. » Sun Jun 15, 2014 6:33 am

What are you mainly judging on; the quality of the content or how long the content is?

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