[merry!]

This woman created my sister, and brother, and I, but like most homunculi we outlived her, in fact it is said that a homunculus can live indefinitely unless killed. Humans are not long lived in the first place especially in a world with out the conveniences of modern medicine.

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Cover


-prolonged coughing and squealing- Sorry, I'm so sorry this took so long, sorry for the awful quality, sorry, I am so sorry, so very, very sorry...

[corn nerd]

This is going to be good!! I love the first page!

[merry!]

U//v//U Aw, Carni you're really too sweet<3, thank you.

[Siberian]

Oooh interesting
Tell me more
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[LOCW_Bluestarwarrior]

Yay!

Just as a suggestion, you should post a link to the cover here an a link to here on the cover. It makes it easier to navigate.

[merry!]

Thank you, Siberian, Thank you, Blue. Yes I did that I didn't realize it didn't put it as colored in, I will be so grateful when the automatic page linking is made x3.