by Horse » Mon Apr 28, 2014 10:44 am
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name;; Gingersnap
theme song;; Titanium by Sia and David Guetta // It doesn't really go with Gingersnap's personality, but it goes with her past of how strong she acted.
story;; Light breezes ruffled the she's fur as she stood out in an open, endless field. Blossom petals fell from trees into her fur as she stood standing, before breaking into a smooth - paced run, enjoying the wind in her face. Wild flowers seemed to grow up to the she's face as she ran, purple eyes reflecting the sun. All was good and all was calm.
Boom!
Cracks of thunder awoke a sleeping nest of khumas, their ears perked and their eyes darting around, wide and awake. Rain thudded down onto the roots of a tree, which a tiny khuma was dreaming under. The khuma woke up, her eyes, filled with fear. She looked down at a tunnel, further under the tree, which lead to the rest of the khuma nest.
This khuma's name was Gingersnap. Gingersnap was a curious khuma, exciting and happy at heart, but usually always showed the shy parts of her. She was often gentle and peaceful, even though some khumas she knew could unlock the adventurous side of her.
More cracks of thunder and lightning banged down at the tree, which then lead to a loud crack- not of thunder, but of something else. the khumas stood still- the tree had broken. Discovering this a short while after, the khuma nest climbed through the tunnel, darting out of the nest, the queens out first.
Poor Gingersnap was trampled and still remained under the tree, her soft coat becoming muddy from rain that was leaking inside of the den. Just before taking off, the she felt a pain in her paw- it was stuck in a muddy root. Gingersnap let out a yelp as she whined, pulling herself furiously in the direction of the den opening. Her paw wouldn't budge- the khuma let out a number of cries but the rest of the nest was already out of sight, finding high ground incase of a flood.
Gingersnap loosened her grip as she became tired and the tree cracked more- the rain didn't help at all. She whined and closed her eyes, trying to block the whole thing out. Is this a dream? Please be. I need help, I need help, I need help. The world seemed to stop and become still as Gingersnap gave one last pull and her back paw came loose. The khuma darted off right before the tree fell, unharmed by it- the only problem was her foot.
After a long time of running through the rain, Gingersnap found a small, dry cave which she un-hesitantly crawled into- not knowing another khuma was inside; but soon she found out.
A gentle, old female khuma appeared from the back of the cave, looking generously down at the young one. She noticed Gingersnap's paw and was able to wrap it in cobwebs and almost fully heal it- Gingersnap still has a few problems with her right, back paw to this day, though it doesn't hurt her at all. The storm soon cleared up and Gingersnap and the older khuma were able to spend some time together, though after a while the older khuma disappeared one day when Gingersnap was healthy and ready to move on.
This unknown khuma- Gingersnap will never forget her, though she is currently off to find a new nest. She feels that it is time to move on and become the strong khuma she has always wanted to be.
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horseback ride, which explains the username.
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by merry! » Mon Apr 28, 2014 11:57 am
horse wrote:username;; Horse
name;; Gingersnap
theme song;; Titanium by Sia and David Guetta // It doesn't really go with Gingersnap's personality, but it goes with her past of how strong she acted.
story;; Light breezes ruffled the she's fur as she stood out in an open, endless field. Blossom petals fell from trees into her fur as she stood standing, before breaking into a smooth - paced run, enjoying the wind in her face. Wild flowers seemed to grow up to the she's face as she ran, purple eyes reflecting the sun. All was good and all was calm.
Boom!
Cracks of thunder awoke a sleeping nest of khumas, their ears perked and their eyes darting around, wide and awake. Rain thudded down onto the roots of a tree, which a tiny khuma was dreaming under. The khuma woke up, her eyes, filled with fear. She looked down at a tunnel, further under the tree, which lead to the rest of the khuma nest.
This khuma's name was Gingersnap. Gingersnap was a curious khuma, exciting and happy at heart, but usually always showed the shy parts of her. She was often gentle and peaceful, even though some khumas she knew could unlock the adventurous side of her.
More cracks of thunder and lightning banged down at the tree, which then lead to a loud crack- not of thunder, but of something else. the khumas stood still- the tree had broken. Discovering this a short while after, the khuma nest climbed through the tunnel, darting out of the nest, the queens out first.
Poor Gingersnap was trampled and still remained under the tree, her soft coat becoming muddy from rain that was leaking inside of the den. Just before taking off, the she felt a pain in her paw- it was stuck in a muddy root. Gingersnap let out a yelp as she whined, pulling herself furiously in the direction of the den opening. Her paw wouldn't budge- the khuma let out a number of cries but the rest of the nest was already out of sight, finding high ground incase of a flood.
Gingersnap loosened her grip as she became tired and the tree cracked more- the rain didn't help at all. She whined and closed her eyes, trying to block the whole thing out. Is this a dream? Please be. I need help, I need help, I need help. The world seemed to stop and become still as Gingersnap gave one last pull and her back paw came loose. The khuma darted off right before the tree fell, unharmed by it- the only problem was her foot.
After a long time of running through the rain, Gingersnap found a small, dry cave which she un-hesitantly crawled into- not knowing another khuma was inside; but soon she found out.
A gentle, old female khuma appeared from the back of the cave, looking generously down at the young one. She noticed Gingersnap's paw and was able to wrap it in cobwebs and almost fully heal it- Gingersnap still has a few problems with her right, back paw to this day, though it doesn't hurt her at all. The storm soon cleared up and Gingersnap and the older khuma were able to spend some time together, though after a while the older khuma disappeared one day when Gingersnap was healthy and ready to move on.
This unknown khuma- Gingersnap will never forget her, though she is currently off to find a new nest. She feels that it is time to move on and become the strong khuma she has always wanted to be.
❥Congratulations on your new Khuma! I really loved your story<3, and Leafe, you had a great plot, but you could have added more.
if you were looking for a sign, this is it.
this is your closure.
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by Horse » Tue Apr 29, 2014 7:36 am
Thank you sooo much! I love Gingersnap <<3
>virtual hug< c:
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by Horse » Fri May 16, 2014 11:44 am
MerrySandwich,
I have a question;
I hope I'm not bugging you, but when will Gingersnap grow into an adult? She is so pretty and I would love to see her all grown up <<3 I hope I'm not rushing you in any way, I'm just wondering <<3 c:
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by Horse » Sun May 18, 2014 2:56 am
That would be wonderful, but please don't feel rushed <<3 I wouldn't mind if you took your time to age her c;
Thanks so much <:
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