by geotalon » Sat Mar 22, 2014 3:32 pm
Thanks for being patient with me, I had a hard time picking between two forms. With the help of this kia's parents' owners, I finally was able to decide a winner. Without further ado, congrats to
bear! Your idea for him was really neat and I love all the thought you put into it!
Sorry there are no RUs for this babe ^^' If you can't say anything nice to the winner, please don't post in the thread.
bear wrote:

Username / Hello, I'm bear.
I've loved this boy's design since I laid eyes on him when he was posted
as a new baby boy, so here I am, trying out for him.
I hope you enjoy my form and my concept for him!
Name / Soren - Ramses (Ram-seas)
'Stern' - 'Son of ra, the sun god'
Gender / Male
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Boastit and
toast it
and
raise all your glasses!Cuz they all
know that
I
rule all the masses! ❞
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Personality /
Sarcastic - Audacious - Perspicacious - Individualistic
Soren can be rather sarcastic at times, finding joy in joking around.
He is usually a little harsh in his sarcastic ways, either muttering or full on
blurting out. He will usually quickly make sure that the other knows that he is
just being sarcastic shortly after, as he likes to know that others understand too.
He has a vast knowledge of many things, but is quite locked in and individualistic
about himself, so it is only rarely known by others that he is quite intelligent.
Adding on, he is very hard to get to know, as he does not let others dig deep into him,
as it is a rare case when he lets someone dig into him and fills them with his true personality.
He is also quite audacious and will do rather bold actions to get a thrill.
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One upand
one upand
throw up your hands now!Partying hard just to
watch them
all
bow down! ❞
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Under the current vastness of the blue sky, a monstrous sand storm rolls in from the distance. You must be quick and hurry to seek shelter before it arrives; to be caught in the grasp of a sandstorm is not something deemed wise. You embark on your search for shelter, but something catches the gaze of your eyes; something discovered as you had scanned the sandy streets through the corner of your eyes. It’s bright, you noted this firstly; and gives off a nice sheen, but it is clear to you that it has been damaged. After having glanced into the distance, gazing upon the more easily spotted sandstorm; you decided to swipe the fascinating object, and stash it into the confines of the ragged bag you carried. Shortly after, you run off to a nearby shelter.
The shelter is packed, you notice upon entering. Not wishing to catch somebody else's attention, you put your back to everyone and retrieve your newly found object; scanning over it to decipher what it was.
Upon closer inspection, it seems to be a scroll; with its sides coated with a shimmering gold. The paper is ripped; probably from being lost in the streets, you figure. You snicker; regardless of the condition, you could still sell this for a good amount of money.
You carefully unroll the worn scroll, keeping it away from anyone’s eyes. It has a fair amount of text written on it, in neat, cursive writing. Well, nearly half of the writing, anyway.
12th, February, 2014.
History of Pharaoh Ramses, the Son of Ra – The sun god.
Born on November 23rd, of the parents of Santonio and Jay. The sun god, Ra, had blessed the parents with Ramses, as of a way to send his son to Earth.
Yeah, right. Let me be the one to tell you about my history; rather than my scribe.
I was born the 23rd November. A time when I continued going on with life, doing as my parents asked me to. I was the everyday usual Kiamara; just I could not do anything I found along the lines of something interesting; as you see, I was young and incapable. I cannot say where I lived as I grew up, as my memory is hazy for this part of my life.
When I reached my teenage years, I started to gain some knowledge on life. I was home schooled, for a small part of my life as an adolescent; but I then continued on teaching myself the things, the things that I found interesting. I remember, I took the most interest in science at that time.
After a few years had gone by, when I had struck nineteen years of age, my parents had started to get annoyed; they were displeased with the personality I was taking up. They had said, they were proud of who I was – I have no doubt that they where only talking about my vast knowledge – but they couldn’t stand how sarcastic I had grown to be.
It was a clearly shown, after some time, that it was time for me to move out – I was an in my adult years at this stage – so I set out with only my bag on my back and my multiple feathers. I had decided I would travel for a long time, to get away.
I had made my way into Egypt, after having conducted random wandering for quite some time. I had gathered more items, they were to assist me in the random sandstorms of the country.
I found some interest in the pyramids of Egypt as I did not have a vast knowledge of ancient history. I wish I did though; but I speak the truth when I say that I am glad I did not. As it would seem, I would not be where I am today if that had been the case.
I came along a town shortly after – they were having problems regarding their food and crops at the time. I also found myself to be starving during this period.
Through my knowledge, I figured out why their crops were dying. I had studied a lot along the lines of biology in my years of science fascination.
To make the story shorter – I helped them and they did not see into my personality. They did not have a current ruler and they thought of me as utterly magical, I could say. I did not tell them my name at the time, but they saw me as something else. That is why I have two names to this day.
Ramses, the son of the Sun god. I can definitely see why they call me that.
The town is now flourishing in wealth and food. It has gained more population since I became the, say, Pharaoh. I am trying to get them to call me King, as I feel that we are no longer in the past, but in the future.
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Art /
x - By myself
x - By Bebop
x by myself
x by Aida'y
Will you be active with him? /
Of course!
Having thought up all this about him, I definitely will not waste
my imagination and time if I win him.
I have many hopes that I can do many things with
him and develop him more in the future if I win him!
Extra /❝The Kings Items❞
Soren always wears the following jewellery:

Two on each horn, never taken off.
The Arabic on the first translates to ‘Obey’.
He may wear other jewels.
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crown banner credit - x
orange banner credit - myself
huge thanks to Zandom XP for being my story editor <3
Area's with word limit total word count: 1,000.
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by yuketsu » Sat Mar 22, 2014 3:39 pm
hmm congrats
cant say im disappointed but as a supporter always cheering you on!
Have some of the art...except shipping art ene
but anyways i was wondering what other good forms were there what was the other one X3
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by bear » Sat Mar 22, 2014 3:50 pm
aa thank you so much! i'm so happy aaa
i'll take super good care of him <3 no way i'll let this gorgeous kia sit there and do nothing
thank you so much again!! i can't wait to develop him more!!
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