[MothMonster]

[quote=“IzzyBee"]Me and Panda will get around to judging, I myself have been stuck doing as much school before Christmas break, so please be patient ouo[/quote]
bump this thread has been dead for a little while

[eli ayase]

bump.

[IzzyBee]

We have a winner! I am terribly sorry for the long wait, school got in the way and I have been having personal issues, but I finally got around to judging. Our winner is... Vocal!

I liked how simple the story was, and the name was interesting as well, take care of Ariel ouo

a r i e l

this is him. the legendary
man. the man who was able
to create something, out
of nothing.

this is him.

ariel cheiro idris is his
name, though he goes by
the simple ariel. his
tribe called him this, as
he was one with the spirits.
it had no real meaning,
other than the meaning
of creativity. but if
you must know the entire
meaning of his name,


Ariel means 'lion of god'.
Cheiro means 'smell'.
Idris means 'ardent master'.


His story all started with a
simple walk in the woods.
Cheiro was taking a stroll
by himself when all of the
very sudden, he came across
what seemed to be a glowing
tree. Its leaves gave off a
blue radiant glow. So, of
course, Cheiro delicately
hauled himself onto the
lowest branch and picked
up what lay in front of
him. A dead bird. He
searched the eyes of
the bird and breathed
in the dying energy of it.
Then, he plucked off

several feathers. Just a few. He held them up, the colorful feathers,
and studied it before letting them go. Instead of falling to the ground,
they hovered in the air. Dumbstruck, Ariel took the feathers and put
them in his mane. He, from that day, wont let anyone touch his feathers.
Even if he is now very old and frail, he treasures them.

[eli ayase]

Oh wow...

Thank you so very much, Izzy! I will take care of Ariel!

[MothMonster]

Oh wow...

Thank you so very much, Izzy! I will take care of Ariel!

Congrats

[your conscience]

//updated the first post, sorry for taking so long