[TabbiKat]

Whoo! first page! If there is too much blood i will remove some.
Panel1
back in time...
??? : Please Fara, don't do this...

panel 2
Fara : *flexes claws*
panel three:
no, please... Aghhh!*screams*
panelfour
why..? *dies*
Fara: why did I..? *gasps and stumbles back* I'm a killer...
panel five
back in the present day....
Judge: In light of this new evidence, i find Fara unfit to live in the forest of plenty as a nefe, as her crime of murder in life so clearly defines her otherwise. *turns to a large black wolf* fetch Amatsu! he can escort this creature down to darkpit, where she may spend eternity as a rown.
Fara : please no, anything but that it wasn't my fault! *screams at judge* I didn't mean to! i just got so angry..! it wasn't me! I didn't mean to... please let me go!

forest of plenty - heaven
Darkpit - hell
Rown - spirit of darkpit
Nefe - spirit of forest of plenty

[Knuckles the Echidna]

It's pretty cool so far. I like how you started in media res