[Suki~]

Raven and the pack started walking toward the clearing, The night sky was pitch black, Karma suddenly stopped and looked at them moon and sighed, Victoria looked back at Karma, "What's up with Karma?" She mummbled, Raven and three other wolves turned around to see Victoria, Raven blinked twice "I don't know, Just let her be." He sighed. Victoria nodded, Then Raven yawned, "Besides, It's time for bed." He yawned, Later that night, When the pack went to sleep, Victoria blinked, and her ears twitched, She lifted her head and looked to see Karma looking and a little rose pedal on the ground, blowing because of the wind, Victoria thought "What is wrong with her, I am worried!" Victoria then went back to sleep and Karma stayed up all night

Tell meh what you think!!! or

Edited: I will make the second page later today!

[Suki~]

I KNOW WHY YOU NOT LIKEY!! BECUZ IT HORRIBLE AND YOUS NO LIKEY!!

[Noctyrn]

I like the blue one the best!

One tip though is not to bump every couple minutes. Maybe wait until it is off the first page?

[Suki~]

Oh, Thnx for telling me, You like the blue one? Oh! That's Karma! She is beutiful!! Here is page two:
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[WolfGirl7]

Wow Gimpsy! This is awesome! *goes to page two*

[Suki~]

Thnx wolfy!

[WolfGirl7]

Thnx wolfy!

No prob!!