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| Artist | CopperChaos [gallery] |
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horsy1050 wrote:Unwrappable equids were created last year around Christmas time. You are told only the base colour. This year is slightly different. Last year you could only edit the markings slightly, this year you control the style and colour of the quip if you win it!
Like all other equids you need to fill out the form to win it. The winner will be announced as close to Christmas day as possible. This is also when the colour is revealed!
Merry Christmas!
Username: SpartanAmethyst
Equid Name: Wish I could hold this off, but... I suppose I'd choose Akemi, meaning "Bright (Aki) and Beautiful" (-mi), to describe her personality.
Equid Age: 4 years
Story:If I won I want the quipping to be:
It had been a peaceful morning; Akemi, just a filly, lay warm beside her mother's softly marked coat. Blue eyes stirred behind their lids as a chilly wind blew in, swirling briefly in their shared cave before it dissipated. As they slowly opened, she gave a soft sigh; it was a sound mixed with sadness and contentment. The cold had stirred her from another dream of snow, ruffling her short mane and stealing some of the warmth from her frail form. We're too far down the mountain, dear," she remembered her mother saying. The valley doesn't get snow, and I'm not strong enough to make it all the way to the plateau; I'm sorry baby. Her mother was sick, so Akemi just nodded and smiled, then laid down to sleep. She didn't know it'd be the last time she'd nuzzle her mother goodnight.
Finally awake, Akemi yawned, and turned to look outside; what she saw had her little hear skip a beat. "Snow!" She exclaimed. "Mama look at the snow! It's white and shiny and beautiful!" She whinnied, though took no heed of her mother's lack of a response. Leaping up, Akemi bolted outside, leaping bravely into the new and very, very cold material. It felt just like it did in her dreams; soft and chilly and cold. It was then Akemi noticed her mother wasn't there; turning to look back in their shelter, she saw the mare's still form, lying peacefully in the darkness. "Mama?" She called softly.
Trotting back worriedly, Akemi nuzzled the pale mare's muzzle; she was so cold. "Mama?" She said softly again. Once more there was no answer. Falling to her tiny knees, she cuddled as close to her mother as she could. "No, no mama please, please don't go," she whimpered, sniffling and crying. She hadn't foreseen this coming so soon; but now it was here. And her mother was long gone. For hours Akemi laid there and cried, pleading for her mother to come back, until finally the sun began to sink below the horizon, staining the snow in brilliant shades of fire.
The crunching of snow eventually broke the newfound evening silence, and Akemi's fine ears perked to listen better. They were multiple entities coming closer, and her puffy blue eyes widened in fear. At the sound of a soft growl coming from outside, the little filly's heart froze; wolves were commonplace this time of year, and her mother wasn't there to protect her. What should she do? She couldn't fight them off, she was much too small! Her mind raced with options, almost as fast as her heart. Now, with her systems filled with adrenaline, she made her decision.
Leaping up from her place beside her mother's body, joints stiff from the cold and her vision still slightly blurry from her tears, she bolted out and past the three wolves that were sniffing just outside the cavern entrance. Tiny hooves tearing chasms in the sparkling snow, Akemi ran for the safety of the forest; at least there, maybe she could lose her pursuers. She hit the trees at full speed, her thin, frail legs thundering subtly through the light layer of snow, the wolves hot on her heels. She didn't know how she was keeping ahead, but she wasn't about to stop and ponder a miracle.
All too suddenly the safety of the trees were gone, and she burst into a clearing that overlooked a small cliff; and though the drop wasn't extremely long, it would probably still kill her; she was small and frail, and the ground wasn't very forgiving. Akemi backed herself to the edge of the cliff and closed her eyes, waiting to feel their fangs tear at her skin. But the pain never came; all too suddenly the growls turned to yelps, followed by heavy breathing and angry snorts, broken only by the sound of thundering hooves. After a moment, a voice reached her ears. "Hello beautiful," he said, and when she opened her eyes, she found a handsome stallion in front of her. His coat was beautiful like the dried valley grasses, and he had kind green eyes, just like her mother. "I'm Jarek; don't worry, I won't hurt ya. What's a little thing like you doing alone on a cold Christmas night?"
I love how the quipping is just barely a shade lighter than the base coat c:
And it to be focused on her face, neck, & body, such as this:
(Though slightly thinner & daintier)
And the legs to look like this (quipping into four identical white socks):

Smidgen wrote:It was still dark out, but I remember not being able to wait any longer for my mother and father to wake up. I was maybe 2, so I had not had many Christmases before. But this Christmas was special, for I was having a white Christmas! Snow was new to me, and I remember trying to walk on it and simply falling right through. What a surprise that was! Luckily, my parents were up by then and came to my rescue! I was so excited! Then, my parents showed me the best surprise of all. Our very own Christmas tree, surrounded by presents wrapped in colorful paper and candy canes all over the tree.
I can still remember opening all my presents, but one present was so much more important to me than any other. It was a small stuffed bunny, with a little red bow around its neck. With this present came a book, and it is still my favorite book of all time. It was The Velveteen Rabbit. I could not stop reading it, for parlor magic seemed so beautiful and amazing to me. My bunny and book went everywhere with me for the next week, until my mother said that bunny would get homesick if I brought it too far away too often. So to save my bunny I left it home, but only in the care of my mother or father.
I remember eating candy canes with my father all day long, never caring how sick I would be from all the sugar. My family laughed, and danced, and sung old Christmas songs full of joy and love. We played games, talked, and simply sat in one another's company, relishing the feeling of family. Then we went outside for a snowball fight, which I won. It was amazing, and my bunny and family were there for it all!
Nickabeth arched her back against the bitter wind thats chased through the pine trees and laid upon the small herd with its icy tongues. It had been a very harsh winter, even she was finding it hard to cope. The snow was deep, past her knees and many of the younger foals stood shivering with the snow chilling at their bellies. It was only a matter of time before they would succumb to the winters hungry grip on the world. Night had just began to set in and the moon stood guard in the sky, hopeless to help them other then to light their struggles with milky white light. The stars even seemed touched by their discomfort and twinkled brightly as though they were trying to lift the little herds spirits. Nickabeth leaned towards one of the foals, trying to comfort the filly with her own body heat. the foal nestled closer to her and they both drifted to sleep.
The morning air was not much warmer then the night, the frost crystals sparkled on the pine needles around them, it was actually quite beautiful in the early morning sun. Nickabeth shook her coat and a cloud of snow cascaded off her back and resided among the drifts around her feet. The others slowly began to emerge from the snow, the young foals clung to their mothers flanks trying desperately to warm their tiny bodies. Nickabeth turned her head to look at the filly that had nighted with her, and her heart stopped. The filly was gone, no where to be seen. Nickabeth let out a shrill cry for the filly, but no response came. Looking around desperately her eyes fell on a set of tracks, small and unsteady, making its way out of the forest and towards a human village.
The wind slapped her face as Nickabeth raced across the open plane that separated the herds territory and the human village, behind her the foals mother followed, the determination shone clear on both of their faces. the snow sprayed around them as their hooves turned it up. reaching the village they slowed slightly, nostrils flared as the drank in the scents in hopes of finding any signs of the little filly. Humans shouted around them and chaos broke out. The mother let out a cry of glee and bolted forwards. in the very centre of the little town was a huge pine tree, decorated with shiny foilings and round colourful balls, on the very top sat a star and nestled in among the bottom branches lay the sleeping little filly. she slept soundly her little sides rises and fell rhythmically. Both mares were about to enter the town centre to retrieve her when a shrill squall made them turn.
A little human girl with a freckled face and braided golden hair bent down next to the tree and peered down at the filly. "Daddy! santa did it! he did it!" she cried. "He got me a Mountain Equid" she cheered clasping his tiny mitred hands together, then quietly knelt next to the filly and laid her hand very gently on the sleeping filly's withers. The filly's eyes fluttered open and she peered at the little girl, leaning forward to sniff at one of her braids. The two little ones stared fondly at one another, a clear connection had already formed between them. Nichabeth glanced at the filly's mother. their was a saddened look on the mares face, but at the same time there was accepting. Their eyes met for a moment and both knew that the filly was where she belonged, in the loving care of the little girl. Nichabeth and the mother returned to the heard, without the filly.
Several years later Nickabeth spotted a girl and a young equid bounding through the drifts of snow laughing and dancing. Nickabeth recognized the filly, she was all grown up now but still had the same fire in her. The girls hair hung in two thick golden braids and her cheeks were splashed with freckles. From where Nickabeth stood she heard the girl say "You were my best Christmas present ever"




? wrote:My first Christmas you ask?
Well lets see, it was a cold wintery morning it was snowing and the earth was white, a white Christmas I was only a filly and with curiosity I had to know what this white substance was! I ran out into the snow kicking up flurries as I did, sticking my tongue out hoping to catch a snowflake. I was too focused on the snow when I slipped and faceplanted the snow, ouch, that was COLD. wip
















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