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What is a Kiamara?
A Kiamara is a wolf-like creature. They have long, fluffy manes on the top of their heads, running down between their shoulders. They all have spots on their bodies- a trait in which will never be bred out of their DNA. They also have feathers- every Kiamara is given feathers when they reach the age of 2 years old. Their diet consists of fruit as well as meat- they prey on similar creatures that wolves would. Kiamara can be very shy before they get to know you. Can you win a Kiamara's heart?
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so here we are! a ridiculously out-of-season Kia that's still pretty determined to get some more candy before the snow settles in! also hi I'm Viscus and i like colors
Embellish in the form and feel free to add extras! I love artwork, and nicely coded forms are huge weakness of mine (ღ˘⌣˘ღ)•Congrats to the first place winner and all honorable mentions, happy holidays! •
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by Lᴀᴅʏ 美夜子 » Wed Nov 27, 2013 11:06 am
username;; Thalia. But please refer to me as Hali. Everyone does!
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eye color // orange
hair color // dark purple with lavender highlights
fur color // light gray, dark gray, and purple gray
overall // stubborn - manipulative - secretive
name // Verali Monique Cree. Pronounced Vera - lie.
nickname // ❝ I don't do nicknames❞ - Verali
age // 15 years of age
species // kiamara
----------positive traits // persistant - stuborn - manipulative
----negative traits // persistant - manipulative - stuborn
likes // night - secrets - lies - showing people she d o e s care-----------
dislikes // girly-girls - day - people - caring--------
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Verali wrote:You know what they say; "curiosity killed the cat". If you insist on being nosy, my name is Verali Monique Cree. Do NOT call me anything other than that. Okay? Good. My mother chose my middle name; Monique. My father chose my last name; Cree. It is the same as his. It is Native American. I won't go into detail. I don't want to bore you to death. You can likely guess who chose my first name. If you are idiotic and don't know, I chose my first name. My parents called me little flower until I was old enough to choose my name. I wish they called me something different. Something that didn't show... vunerability.
------------------------------------------- When I Cared
I was walking in he woods one day, I was only 8. I saw a beautiful bird in the forest. I said "Hello little bird. What is your name?" She said "Hello fellow friend. I am Verali. What is your name?" I said "Why that's such a beautiful name. I don't actually have a name yet." "Well a name is an Identity, and Identity is a unique person. And how are you supposed to be a unique person if you don't have a name?" Said the bird. "Well... I -" I started to reply. "Well nothing! You can use my name! Verali. You will now be known as Verali Monique Cree!" Said the bird. "Well... I can't just steal your name! How did you know my middle and last name?" I asked. "Is it stealing if I give it to you?" The bird said smugly. "I guess not... But what will I call you? And how will I ever repay you?" I said starting to cry. "You can call me Little Bird. You can repay me by being a good person, changing the world. Caring for others, showing compassion. And most of all, falling in love. Be happy. Be true". Said Little Bird. "I - I can't thank you enough. I will. I promise. I give you my word that I will do as you say." I said in between sobs. "Goodbye little Verali. Have a good life. Always remember me." Said the bird as she started to fly away. Then BANG!
---------------------------------------- Silence. Ear-deafening silence. The worst kind, the kind that is harder to listen to than the loudest noise. The bird had been shot by a hunter as she started to fly away. "Verali! V- ver.... Vera.... Li..." I said in between sobs. "No! No no no no NO! Verali! Please... please dont be d e a d... Please.... Dead. The word flew through my mind. Dead. Dead. Dead. d e a d. Over and over. She's can't possibly be alive. She's dead. Or even worse d y i n g." "I can't take... no more... Please no more. I can't handle anymore! You were... my.... only.... f r i e n d...." I said as I ran to her. At this point, I couldn't even see where I was going. But I ran towards where she fell. When I got near the spot, I slowed to a walk. Dreading the heart-wrenching pain I knew I was going to expirience. "V- Verali... Please.... say something.... anything. Just don't be d e a d......."
---------------------------------------- Nothing.... I stoop down next to the little bird. "Verali... I'm so sorry... I could've saved you, told you to stay. But I let you go. And with you, took a piece of my heart. I think it s h a t t e r e d. Is it possible... for one's heart to break in a million pieces? In an instant? In a milli-second? In one d a y? Well mine just.... did." I lay down next to the bird. "I- I'm so sorry....." I looked around for the hunter. He was no where to be found. He just left. Left her there. Lying dead on the dirty, wet, mud washed ground. He could at least check to see if the bird was dead or something! So she could give him a good whip to the back of the head with her tail. She stood up, brushing the dirt off her. She then picks up the body. “I will remember you whenever someone says my name. I will not forget. I will never forget.” She said with a small sob. She walks all night, looking for the perfect resting place for the bird. Verali finally found the best suitable spot; a patch of flowers under a big oak tree. The flowers were the kind that only bloom at night. She started digging with her paws. Occasionally sobbing of crying out when she thought she heard the bird talk to her. “It’s all your fault. You could have saved her, helped. Something. Anything.” A small voice in the back of her head said. “Shut up. I know! I know it’s my fault!” She yelled. And that is when she snapped. The kind, sweet, loving Verali gone. She finished burying the body. And got up, with a new attitude that changed her perspective forever.
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Seven seconds, ten years, and five hours. That’s how long it’s been since I ran away. I never look back. Never regretting the decision. It was the best one I’d ever made. No pain, no hope. No rules. This is how I live my life. No regrets, nothing. I must admit it does get lonely sometime... But it’s okay. I have myself.

Favorite Candy;;
Her Grandmother's Homade Snickers"Granny? Are they almost done?" A young Verali asked. "Not quite yet honey." She said as she ruffled my hair. "What can we possibly do more?!" I asked exasperatedly. "Well, we still have to let them cool. That is after they get out of the oven." She said. *Huffs* "How long will that take?" She said impatiently. "You are an impatient one Verali. Aren't you?" "I- impatient? Me? No...... I don't even know what that means!" Verali replied. "It means not liking to wait, hurrying me up, ect." Her grandmother said. Ding! "Verali, would you mind getting them out of the oven? Don't forget the oven mitts!" Her grandmother said. "Okay!" Said the innocent child. "Granny? Do I have to go back home to mum and dad..... I - I mean... I just love being here with you so much...." She dropped off. Her grandmother had no idea about what was going on at home. And Verali was too scared to tell her, her father threatened to beat her up if she said anything. "Of corse you do honey! Their your parents! And they love you!" "Yeah right…." Verali thought. "If they loved me.... why would they neglect me? And hurt me? And.... and" Her thoughts were interrupted by a loud wailing. "Verali! Quick! The stove! Get some water!" "Where?!" asked a very scared Verali. "Nevermind! Just go! Run Get out of here! Call for help!" Her grandmother yelled. "B... but granny! What about you?!" I very worried Verali asked. "Just go. Take the recipe with you!" "B... but." "Nothing just run!" Verali takes it and runs. Never looking back, never looking down. Just forward. “But how far will this get me?” Verali asked herself softly. If only she knew then...
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Dreamscape - By Thalia.
"Dreamscape" is art of Verali as a human. It shows how she looks out at the sky. Hoping to see the Little bird fly by. She is looking out at the background that is quite colorful compared to the human depicted in the drawing. She is quite gray and distasteful, but there is a reason for all that. It shows her being like a black hole, sucking in all the beauty. She looks up to the stars on the inside, but on the outside she is black. I explained this piece as best as I am capable.... So it may or may not be a bit confusing for you guys. <3333
Just Sittin' - By Scootaloo.
"Just Sittin' " By Scootaloo is art of Venari just randomly sitting/laying down. This one isn't that hard to explain. XD
Avatar - By Scootaloo.
This is just an avatar of Verali.....
Hopless Sadness - By ~Pogo~
This
amazing piece of art it of Verali is showing her sadness that no one has ever seen. This is the inside of the impenetrable shell. The inside of her; in which she so deeply hidden she doesn’t even remember what she used to be like when she cared.
Theme songs:
Nothing Left to Say - Imagine DragonsC'mon - Panic! At The DiscoHow Far We've Come - Matchbox TwentyBoluevard of Broken Dreams - Green DayTime of Your Life - Green DayWake Me Up When September Ends - Green DayOther;;
I'd like to thank Viscus for this wonderful oppurtunity to try to win Verali's heart. Even as hard as that may be. C; I just wanted to say that my form is not special. Not the
one above everyone else's. We all have an amazing chance. I hope whoever wins her/him goes to a good home. Also I'd like to note the name change. At first I was going to name her Venisa, but then I realized ~Koda~ had a lovely kia already with that name. So my good friend suggested the name Verali. I loved the name and decided to use it. And I changed the name, "so why not change everything else too?" I thought. At first she was going to be the odd-girl, the sad, shy kid. But then I had a sudden burst of creativity. I would make her the rebel. The shatter-proof rock on the outside, but a broken child on the inside. Also I did not mention this in the form, but Verali's parents had a very bad relationship with her. Her father abused her and her mother was an alchohol-addict. Eventually her mother passed. Verali did not miss her. Even though she was her mother. They were not close. One day Verali came home to find his father on the couch with... some other lady. That was it. She ran to her room and packed a small suit-case. She packed her grandmother's homemade snickers recipe, her felt teddy bear and some clothes. She bolted out of the house. Her father didn't even go as far as to ask where she was going. Again I didn't mention before that that is why she was in the woods. Some may have though that she was exploring or something, but it was because she ran away. I decided to add some therme songs to my form. Thes songs I think represent her very much. She listens to them all the time. These are her 'go - to' songs. She will listen to them when she has different feelings ; sad, happy, hyper, ect. Again I would like to thank Viscus for the wonderful oppurtunity of trying out for her. Making the form was really fun and I discovered my 'coding skills' that were hidden in th back of my mind. C; <333
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Bᴜᴛ, ɢɪʀʟ, ᴛᴏɴɪɢʜᴛ ʏᴏᴜ ʟᴏᴏᴋ sᴏ ᴘʀᴇᴛᴛʏYes, you dowordswordswords✖✖Tɪᴍᴇs sǫᴜᴀʀᴇ ᴄᴀɴ'ᴛ sʜɪɴᴇ ᴀs ʙʀɪɢʜᴛ ᴀs ʏᴏᴜ✖✖_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
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by Golden.AUO » Wed Nov 27, 2013 11:07 am
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