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I expect you to be active on both fanclubs and rp with the family often; it's a HUGE booster if you're already active on the fanclub. I WILL be looking to see how active you are with other characters.
On Anais' side she has one brother, Aang. PM Fox for Ruadh's details cause I don't wanna mess it up ene
Tamashī wrote:So what I like to see in forms is effort, obviously. I don't value skill as much effort, and less is more in my opinion. I also love to know what the name you chose means, so a meaning would be a-ma-zing. Hm... I like creativity, that's for sure. And uniqueness of course. Ahm... Wow this is hard, haha. Ooo, backstories are fun! I love hearing about pasts! But I'm personally not a big fan of uber tragic pasts with blood and death, those annoy me a lot. A simple one is perfect. Ooo, I love stuff based around songs, or a lyric-less song to listen to while I read. Yeah, I think that's it. cx


My Box wrote:Hai! I'm .Sweet-Paradise. I'm moving into an account with my twin sister! As of now if you have anything to speak to me about, chat me up there.

{I, BrightHeaven, promise to take care of this Kia to the best of my abilities. If I do not, I will admit it, and Kat, Fox, and/or Apple have permission to find him a better home.
Avery -
"Wake up sleepy head!" Reminder said as he jumped on his sister. "You've been sleeping for like- forever!"
"Okay, okay! I'm up." She said, squinting at the bright light that was right in her face. "Yes, I know that I promised you to go to the forest. I'll be ready in a sec, so now, please give me my privacy." Pushing Reminder out of the door. Quickly, he ran downstairs and jumped around, super excited to go to the forest, since Avery said it was super cool. Around 5 minutes later, Avery got out of her room and walked down the stairs.
"Mom! Dad! I'm taking Reminder out for a walk!" She said.
"We will be back soon!" Reminder added, and without a reply they both ran out the door, out into the cool morning air. It was a humid and foggy day, so they decided to walk around the long way. Soon, they reached the small forest and both walked into the shade. Birds chipped all around them and Reminder looked up and did a small twirl.
"Woah! It's amazing!" he said, looking at Avery.
"It is, isn't it?" she replied. "Hey do you want to have some fun?"
"Sure!" he said back quickly because he was already getting a bit bored. Avery nodded and started to walk off towards a trail off to the right, and Reminder followed close behind. After another ten minutes, they finally reached a small pond.
"We are here!" Avery announced, smiling, then, surprising Reminder, she jumped into the pond. "Come on! It feels great in here!"
After Reminder jumped in, they spent the rest of the morning splashing each other, playing and laughing, until they got super tired and decided to head back home, soaking wet.
Anais -
"Wakey wakey, my morning sunshine!" Anais said and gently woke Reminder up. "Remember today is baking day!" Reminder loves to bake, so Anais had planned out a 'baking day' for him, which was every Sunday morning, which was when they had no other activity around.
"Uhmmppp" Reminder said as he turned around to avoid the sunlight that was streaming through his room.
"Come on.... you promised you mommy!" She said again, turning Reminder back and giving him puppy eyes. Reminder stared back at her for a moment, then they both started bursting into laughs.
"Okay! I'm up" he replied and pounced up. "Can we pleeasee make chocolate chip cookies today?" When he heard his mom's reply, which was a yes, he jumped up, did a mini dance around his room then sprinted downstairs to get the ingredients ready.
Together, they spent the morning and the afternoon punching cookie dough, rolling cookie dough balls and pouring chocolate chips everywhere. By the time they were done, that had already made 8 batches of 12 cookies on each platter, baking each one slowly in the oven.
"Are those chocolate chip cookies I smell?" Avery said as she bounded down the stairs, sniffing the air.
"Of course it is dummy!" Reminder replied. "Come over if you want to taste one! Later on there won't be anymore left because we are giving 7 batches to charity!"
After about an hour of enjoying their amazing cookies, Anais and Reminder did go to the church and gave them 7 neatly wrapped boxes, saying that it should be given to the poor. Leaving the church, Anais said "You know, I don't think I've ever felt so awesome!" And without an answer, Reminder started laughing again.
Ruadh -
"C'mon li'l sunny boy! It's time to go see the sunrise!" Ruadh said as he shook Reminder awake. "You said that you would come with me yesterday night!"
"Urmmph... I know, I know" Reminder said. "I'll be ready in about 10 minutes." He got up and did his morning things and sloopeed down the stairs and walked over to the front door. It was still dark outside and he still didn't get why he needed to wake up so early just to go see the sun- something that they saw every single day!
"I know you will love it!" His dad said as they hiked along long and rocky cliffside path. "When my dad first brought me, I thought that it was meaningless until I actually saw it! So lets hurry up and get to the peak!"
"I know that- but I highly doubt that this will impress me.." Reminder said, squinting at the grey sky, then looked up at Ruadh. "Dad, are we there yet? My paws are already getting tired!"
"Just hold it for a little bit longer!" Ruadh replies as he started to run up the mountain. "The sooner we get there and see the sunrise, the sooner we can get home!" Those words were what got Reminder to move faster, sprinting up the mountain after his dad.
"Hey! Wait up! Don't leave me!"
Soon, the arrived at the top of the mountain and sat down, feeling the cold air brush through their fur. "Anytime now.." Ruadh's voice said, trailing off as Reminder noticed the sky starting to light up, blue, blue, pink, pink, orange, pink, purple- oh! So many colors! Reminder looked up at the sky open mouthed and said. "I-I c-can't believe this! It's so beautiful!"
"What did I tell you?" Ruadh said as he smiled and hugged Reminder. "Someday, I hope you will bring your own son or daughter up here to see the same thing that my dad showed me, and what I showed you today."
Sister;;
*the two siblings sit closely together*
*asks question*
*they fight back and forth telling the other to answer first*
*brother answers first*
*next question*
*sister answers first*
*next question*
*they both whisper together*
*waits for answer*
*they both sprint out the door, laughing*
Mother;;
*mom inches closer, Reminder inches away*
*asks question*
*mom answers first then nudges son*
*he rolls his eyes and answers*
*next question*
*mom tells him to answer first for everything
*he is annoyed and doesn't argue*
*next questions*
*he answers every question first, not complaining*
*after*
*mom scolds him for a 'bad attitude'*
Father;;
*the two sit very far away*
*asks question*
*no one answers*
*waits for answer*
*both say the same thing*
*they laugh and dad gently punches him in the shoulder*
*next question*
*dad answers first, then he answers*
*next question*
*dad flips the chair over playfully*
*he follows and they both start laughing*
Reminder Art;;
By Nekumura

I, Parachutes, promise to take care of this Kia to the best of my abilities. If I do not, I will admit it, and Kat, Fox, and/or Apple have permission to find him a better home.









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