by wind song » Sun May 12, 2013 4:43 am
Oh gosh guys, this was so hard to judge o-o
Thank you for entering and I'm glad everyone enjoyed the elemental kiamaras, there will definitely be more in the future!
The winner is~
Andiliion!
Even after reading all the other forms yours stuck out to me and the story was so different and extremely well thought out!
I know you will take amazing care of Chai, the art was breathtaking as I'm sure you've been told many times <3
The motion, the personality, everything was perfect!
I'm afraid there will be no runners-up, though I was extremely stuck between the forms of Andi, Chasing Dreams, Tyasi, Spottedsong, Tempest Rain, Drizzle and Eeveeprincess1.
Andiliion wrote:Username:Andiliion
Name: Chai
Gender: Female
The day my element was discovered:
Ugh, not again. Why does this always happen to me!
Every morning I would wake to find myself entangled in vines, flowers, moss, and other types of parasitic plants. I always have to tear myself from the ground or be stuck, some days its not too bad but recently its been getting worse. The plants have started to grow thicker and its harder for me to get out of them without losing a few tufts of fur. This is ridiculous, plants can’t grow this fast. I wonder if I can talk to anyone that knows something about this. I wasn't sure who I could talk to about the situation, so I sat and thought about all of the other kiamaras that might know anything about plants. The old hermit! Yes, the old hermit would surely know something about the plants, afterall she lived in the forest and had to survive all by herself.
...
The outside of the hermit’s den was surprisingly well kept. It was a very old one story house that was once owned by humans, but now it was in too bad of shape for anyone to live in. The walls were starting to wear away and had ivy growing up them, the roof was also caved in. There was hardly any trash anywhere, only plants. I scratched on the old wooden door, but there was no answer.
“Hello?” I slowly pushed the door open and cautiously poked my head inside, but it looked like she wasn't here. Oh well, guess ill just go ask someone else. I had started to leave when I heard a rustle behind me, I turned around to see the old hermit carrying a small rabbit she must have caught.
Who are you? She asked me as she entered her home.
“Oh, my name is Chai.” I said as I followed her into the house “I wanted to ask you a few things.”
She turned around to face me and said “Well, what would you like to know”
“I was wondering if you knew anything about why I always wake up to plants wrapped around me.”
“Oh that is an interesting question.” She said as she went back into one of the rooms and flicked her tail to signal me to follow her. She pulled out a small bag of what looked like rabbit bones.
“What are you going to do with those?”
“With such an unusual question comes unusual answers.” She picked out a bone and gave one to me.
“What do you want me to do with this”
“Ask your question and then break the bone under a stone and bring back the big pieces not the small ones, I will help you interpret the answer.”
“Ummm okay.” I thought of my question and took the bone outside and smashed it with a large rock. I gathered up the pieces and carried them back in to her. “Here, oh and I was just wondering but, what's your name?”
“My name is Marrium” She said as she looked over the bones I'd given her. “Oh this, this is very strange.” She sounded concerned.
“What, what is it?”
“I can't read these bones...” Marrium looked back up at me “I can always read the bones.”
“Oh well, im sure its fine.” I didn't believe she would find me an answer anyway. “I was just wondering...” I started to leave and Marrium followed me outside, we were both shocked when we looked over at the area where I smashed my bone. The ground had a huge crack in it with tiny cracks splintering off of it. I turned around to see what Marrium had to say, but she looked right through me as if I wasn't even there. “Marrium, are you okay?”
“It wants you back.” She said as she stared at the crack.
“What does? What are you talking about!” I snapped.
“The earth, it wants you back. Thats why plants are drawn to you, its trying to make you one with the earth again.” I was confused but soon realised she couldn't read the bones, because the bones were not the target the crack was. The crack was what she was meant to read. “If you do not learn to control the earth, you will end up being a part of it.”
“How am I supposed to control the earth, thats impossible!” I was scared, and I didnt know what to do. Marrium wanted me to do the impossible, and if I didn't in a sense I would be killed.
“I do not know, but I will help you. Chai, the earth is drawn to you for a reason. It wants to keep life in balance and you, you are an imbalance. You posses power unknown by others, a power that was taken from the earth and now it wants it back.”
-Chai doesnt learn how to control the element itself, she only learns she has the ability to-
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by Chasing Dreams » Sun May 12, 2013 4:46 am
Username:
Chasing Dreams
Name:
Chaska
Gender:
Male
The day my element was discovered:
"Chaska you fool, don't you dare take one more step!" Nanuk barked. I gave Nanuk a sinister grin. For it was imbedded in my personality that I be the one to take risks.
"You think I'm a fool? Hah! You're just a pup. A little, kid. Pathetic!" I spat out those words, and I meant everyone of them. For Nanuk was always trying to get me in trouble. I despised that little child. He took after his father. Always bossing people around. Well not today. Today I would be on my own. Today I was going on an adventure. I wanted to leave and run away to better places. But of course, Nanuk was there to stop me.
"Chaska, take Nanuk with you and gather some water from the High River, would you dear?" My mother begged. Her sore, raspy throat made me feel too much pity for her.
"Of course mother, anything for you." I trotted over to her and licked her cheek. I gathered some moss to help carry the water and tied it in a sack around my neck. I turned to Nanuk and barred my pearly white fangs. Or so I thought they were. That didn't seem to phase Nanuk, for he walked right over to my side. The tips of his fur brushed mine. My fur stood on end, I just about had enough of this.
"Nanuk, personal space!" I snarled, snapping at the air right in front of his face. He took a few meger steps to the right and then continued to walk along side me.
That pesky little mouse won't leave me be! I could be half way to High River by now...I had a nasty habit of always thinking negative. No matter the circumstances.
"Look, there's High River... but, the bridge is broken!" Nanuk said, looking up at me for guidance and help.
"You think I'm blind! I can see that the bridge is broken, go a little closer and see if we can jump across." I barked out orders. He needed to learn that I was in charge. Er, well, at least in charge of him!
Nanuk did as he was told and ran closer to the edge. His wobbly little body frame, lazily carried him closer.
"N-not too close! Nanuk!" I cried. He disappeared with a squeal. That clumsy little rat threw himself over the cliff. My eyes grew wide. I raced towards the edge. Something inside me burned. Nanuk needed me. I flung over the cliff, my mind then took control. I didn't know what was happening. But I felt a warm glow around me. Like an aura, only heated. I couldn’t open my eyes, yet for some reason they felt open.
Branches jetted out from the side of the cliff and I used them too jump down to grab Nanuk. I caught him by the scruff of his dirty little neck. A tall proud tree burst out of the ground and cushioned us with it's pillow of leaves.
The warmth left my body, and I could finally see again.
"Nanuk... are... are you okay?" I asked, also asking myself the same question. Nanuk nodded and backed away from me a little.
"You feel hot..." He whispered.
"I know... I think, I think I can control an element. Earth." I looked up, at the top of the cliff. All the branches that had jetted out, with each step I took on them. This power, this ability, saved both our lives. And I just realised. At that moment went Nanuk fell off the cliff, how special he really is too me. Nanuk isn't trying to bother me, just learn off of me.
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by knifedoq » Sun May 12, 2013 5:05 am
Username:
lithium.
Name:
Thalia
She reminds me of Thalia's tree
aka
The tree from Percy Jackson
Always standing tall and proud, protecting the others.
Gender:
I personally see this kia as a female
The day my element was discovered:
Swirling leaves brought her alive
Dust and dirt baths her
Then she claims the earth as well
The tree stands tall and proud
Hold the earth in its roots
To never fall for another
The earth claims her as well
In her breathe, the wind blows
In her anger flames erupt
Her calmness brings the rain
Her being calls the earth
Art:
meow
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by Andiliion » Sun May 12, 2013 5:12 am
Username:Andiliion
Name: Chai
Gender: Female
The day my element was discovered:
Ugh, not again. Why does this always happen to me!
Every morning I would wake to find myself entangled in vines, flowers, moss, and other types of parasitic plants. I always have to tear myself from the ground or be stuck, some days its not too bad but recently its been getting worse. The plants have started to grow thicker and its harder for me to get out of them without losing a few tufts of fur. This is ridiculous, plants can’t grow this fast. I wonder if I can talk to anyone that knows something about this. I wasn't sure who I could talk to about the situation, so I sat and thought about all of the other kiamaras that might know anything about plants. The old hermit! Yes, the old hermit would surely know something about the plants, afterall she lived in the forest and had to survive all by herself.
...
The outside of the hermit’s den was surprisingly well kept. It was a very old one story house that was once owned by humans, but now it was in too bad of shape for anyone to live in. The walls were starting to wear away and had ivy growing up them, the roof was also caved in. There was hardly any trash anywhere, only plants. I scratched on the old wooden door, but there was no answer.
“Hello?” I slowly pushed the door open and cautiously poked my head inside, but it looked like she wasn't here. Oh well, guess ill just go ask someone else. I had started to leave when I heard a rustle behind me, I turned around to see the old hermit carrying a small rabbit she must have caught.
Who are you? She asked me as she entered her home.
“Oh, my name is Chai.” I said as I followed her into the house “I wanted to ask you a few things.”
She turned around to face me and said “Well, what would you like to know”
“I was wondering if you knew anything about why I always wake up to plants wrapped around me.”
“Oh that is an interesting question.” She said as she went back into one of the rooms and flicked her tail to signal me to follow her. She pulled out a small bag of what looked like rabbit bones.
“What are you going to do with those?”
“With such an unusual question comes unusual answers.” She picked out a bone and gave one to me.
“What do you want me to do with this”
“Ask your question and then break the bone under a stone and bring back the big pieces not the small ones, I will help you interpret the answer.”
“Ummm okay.” I thought of my question and took the bone outside and smashed it with a large rock. I gathered up the pieces and carried them back in to her. “Here, oh and I was just wondering but, what's your name?”
“My name is Marrium” She said as she looked over the bones I'd given her. “Oh this, this is very strange.” She sounded concerned.
“What, what is it?”
“I can't read these bones...” Marrium looked back up at me “I can always read the bones.”
“Oh well, im sure its fine.” I didn't believe she would find me an answer anyway. “I was just wondering...” I started to leave and Marrium followed me outside, we were both shocked when we looked over at the area where I smashed my bone. The ground had a huge crack in it with tiny cracks splintering off of it. I turned around to see what Marrium had to say, but she looked right through me as if I wasn't even there. “Marrium, are you okay?”
“It wants you back.” She said as she stared at the crack.
“What does? What are you talking about!” I snapped.
“The earth, it wants you back. Thats why plants are drawn to you, its trying to make you one with the earth again.” I was confused but soon realised she couldn't read the bones, because the bones were not the target the crack was. The crack was what she was meant to read. “If you do not learn to control the earth, you will end up being a part of it.”
“How am I supposed to control the earth, thats impossible!” I was scared, and I didnt know what to do. Marrium wanted me to do the impossible, and if I didn't in a sense I would be killed.
“I do not know, but I will help you. Chai, the earth is drawn to you for a reason. It wants to keep life in balance and you, you are an imbalance. You posses power unknown by others, a power that was taken from the earth and now it wants it back.”
-Chai doesnt learn how to control the element itself, she only learns she has the ability to-
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