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Judging now

[Hobbit Geek]

Yay! Good luck everyone

[Autotomy]

Indeed! ^_^

The winner can have my art, I'll just erase Milky's name if I don't win. Shame to put a perfectly good drawing to waste.

[Hobbit Geek]

Same goes with me

[Baby bunnies!]

I spent all last night trying to get three that I really liked so that judging this would be easy.... It was so hard to pick those three, and even harder to pick the winner. Those who did art did a wonderful job! Everyone did great on the poems and stories.
But I had to chose my favorite.. I wish I could give you all a prize for your great effort that you put into this. (Actually , I might. xD )

Congrats to hobbit geek, I simply fell in love with the poem. The story was good and showed lots of emotion, in a small twist. And the personality was fitting for him. You did good on the art, I liked the fact that you drew a picture of how he lost his sight in one eye.

If anyone would like me to comment on their forms then I can do that. Also could those who didn't win, tell me if they have a WTE or not. And if you have one could you tell me your favorite. (Surprise will hopefully come. )

Username: hobbit geek
WTE Name: Samwise (Sam for short)
WTE Age: 6 years
Gender: Stallion
Height: 15.3 hh
Personality: he may be blind but he is completely trustworthy, some people, horses and whiptails think if your blind you will go crazy and do dangerous stuff because you can't see. But this is not true with Sam, he is more trustworthy then any friend I know. He will always be there for you even if you don't want him. He may need help time from time when he is about to run into a wall or fall into a steam because he can't see it, but life never seems to get his spirits down and he is always cheerful.
Story:
Sam smiled as he grazed on the sweet green grass, his whole whiptail herd was grazing around him. His father, Everett who was lead stallion, was looking out for any kind of danger. the moment seemed so perfect, which is why it must have had to end.. everyone's head went up as they heard Everett's warning that danger was near. everyone gathered the foals as a large mountain lion came from the trees. as he watched his father battle the Mountain lion, Sam had an idea, it was crazy but it might just help. He galloped towards the large cat, ignoring the warning of his mother to bolt in the other direction. his father got pushed to the side as he and the Mountain lion jumped at each other, the large cat being on a rock across a stream while Sam being at the grassy field. they met in mid-air, claws and hooves ready. after about 10 minutes of fighting in the stream, one of Sam's back hooves slipped on one of the rocks at the bottom of the stream and he fell. The large cat seemed to smirk as it drew its claws down the right side of his face, and Sam blacked out from the pain.
When he woke, he found his mother laying beside him, She was grooming the fur on his back. He shakily sat up and realized something was different, thought could not place it. he looked around and saw all the other whiptails were muttering to each other, he heard about half of what his heard said, one stallion said "he was stupid to try and take on the Mountain lion by himself" a Mare nudged her foal away from Sam and said to her "Don't go near that fool, he might get you killed." it was all the same, except one colt named Kovu who Sam very much disliked, he was talking the the Filly names Katrina that Sam had a crush on and he said "That fool is likely blind" at that moment Sam realized what was different, he could not see out of his right eye.
10 years later
Same nuzzled his mate Katrina as he watched over his herd, yep he was now lead stallion even though he was blind in one eye. He smiled as he saw his twin fillies May and June play with Kovu's twin colts Jasper and Dale who's mother was that foal who's mother warned not to go near Sam in case he got her killed.
Poem:
how I became blind, a poem (short story) by hobbit geek

I was a as wild and free as any young colt,
Never listening to my mother when she says to bolt,
I thought I was wise, for it was in my name,
But when it happened everyone said I was lame.

It started when I was older, a teenager you could say,
I thought I could take him, but I knew I had to pay,
I only wanted to protect my family from the big cat,
Yet afterwords they all saw me as some large rat.

I knew my chances were slim,
But I still beat him,
Yet the price was my sight,
In which one eye will never see the light.

I wish I had listened, but I know at heart,
I will always protect my family so we may never part,
I am now older and blind in one eye,
Yet I never give up hope or tell a lie.

Art: optional
http://i50.tinypic.com/5txg0k.jpg
Genes: Chestnut Base, Tobino: AA, Appy: Aa

[Hobbit Geek]

Thank you so much!

[The One & Only Vapor]

-_- -stares- Congrats.

I'm curious, baby bunnies. You've made me too curious...who were the three? I'd like to know if I was a finalist. XD

I do own a WTE- at the time I entered, I owned none. And now, it is over, and I own 3. XD I must say, though, my favorite of the three is probably Res, or Respersa.

And please, do comment on mine! ^^

[Baby bunnies!]

Thank you so much!

lol love that icon! And you are welcome!

-_- -stares- Congrats.

I'm curious, baby bunnies. You've made me too curious...who were the three? I'd like to know if I was a finalist. XD

I do own a WTE- at the time I entered, I owned none. And now, it is over, and I own 3. XD I must say, though, my favorite of the three is probably Res, or Respersa.

And please, do comment on mine! ^^

It was hobbit geek, G.L'S, and you. Everyone did so well and it was really hard to narrow it down.

okay cool .

Alright so the personality that you made was great! The art was awesome too, a little off color but that doesn't matter. Your story was well written, however my question about it was, did a human purposely send a falcon to try and collect a WTE's eye or kill it? It just didn't make a hole bunch of sense, but it was still really good.

[The One & Only Vapor]

Ooh, yeah. G.L.'S was really good too. XD

Thanks! I think I liked the way his personality turned out too. XD Yeah, his color was a little off, but for some reason I couldn't get the shade right, so I had to work with that. XD And on the other side of his face, I just put little pieces of white because it was a three-quarter view in the art but side-on in the picture, and I doubted the other side was plain. XD Thanks for the comment on my story! It was a leetle bit rushed and I didn't work out every minor detail, but I liked the idea of a falcon raking his eye. The original idea was that the falcon was to attack Sitio's(Sam's) neck and kill him, then show the man where he was. XD I suppose I should've been more clear on that, I'm not sure. It was really just kind of random but it turned out pretty well! ^^ XD