Experiment 16: Crux, owned by [ K A L I T O R ] by SpartanAmethyst

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Experiment 16: Crux, owned by [ K A L I T O R ]

Postby SpartanAmethyst » Sun Dec 30, 2012 11:12 am

So, first adoptable as a (I assume) temporary artist for the R.A.W. I wanna keep this guy so bad you don't even know ;3; Some quick info on him:

+He's loosely based off a red wolf.
+On his left forepaw he's missing a toe; if you win him, you can decide how he lost it. (This can be part of his history)
+On his hind legs there are gears that have replaced his joints. These allow him full movement of his legs that he didn't have before. (onset of arthritis in his hind legs)


[ K A L I T O R ] wrote:Username: [ K A L I T O R ]
Name: Crux
Gender: Male
Age: 12 years
Personality: Independent. Exalts his new intelligence. Loaths humans because of their greed. Quiet but with a loud mind. Bitter. Cruel sense of humor. Uncaring of others. Detached. Cold. Prefers being alone. Easily irritated. Indifferent. Realist. Strategic. Logical. Tough. Unbreakable. Insensitive due to past. Lacks social skills. Curious.
History or other Short Story: Humans. They are greedy, egotistic beings that spend their entire life clawing their way to the spotlight. They love to show off their pointless items and brag about every little thing that they own. Not just that, they brag about the living things they 'own.' I think this is why my human bought me from the very beginning. He wanted to have something better than what everyone else had. Most people had small dogs, but he wanted something bigger and better; so he got me.

I was born in a specialty breeding kennel and spent the first couple years of my life being professionally trained. I knew every command these simple-minded humans could think of. I was a 'superior' and 'high quality' sale. My human eagerly paid high dollar after hearing that. He was a bachelor and lived in the finest neighborhood in the most elegant home. Everything he owned had to be the absolute finest. At first I ended up being his most prized possession and like possessions I was never given a name. I was taken to every event he went to and was shown off to everyone who would listen but at each social gathering I was dubbed a different 'name.' I was whatever he wanted me to be at the time. Sometimes I would be given powerful names like Thor or Czar around business men. Other times I would be given pathetic names like Mr. Wiggums or Sir Spot around the ladies. Also like possessions, I began to be forgotten. Years went by of me lying in my custom kennel. I was alone. Sometimes when he came out to feed me he would be crying. He was alone. What these silly humans don't get is that fancy possessions won't make you happy and while he was wasting his life away with his petty riches I was growing older and older in my kennel. Arthritis began to eat away at my back legs. I became slow and feeble. I was not the beautiful wolf I once was. To him I was nothing now so he gave me to the R.A.W. research. Maybe he wanted to say his old pet helped pave the pathway of robotic wolf companions? What's cooler than a robot pet? It gave him one last reason to brag about me.

From that point on I was under the knife. Gears were warped into my hind legs curing my arthritis. My front legs were reinforced with metals to prevent the wear and tear of age. Metal spikes were embedded into my shoulders and haunches I guess to look cool. A leading computer company known as Crux Industries paid to implant their computer software into my body, hence my name. They embedded the software system into my chest and placed a metal breastplate with their company logo as the software cover. Wiring was inserted all throughout my body to transmit the software signal to every point in my new and improved form. With my new body I was faster, stronger, and more intelligent than I had been even in my youth. The software also allowed me to speak English. Not only that, but Crux Industries paid to have another program installed into my. Every time I heard the word 'Crux' I was programmed to state the Crux Industries slogan: "The power to create." I was a walking advertisement for a man-made business. It was sickening. I was now a living ad instead of a professionally trained wolf.

After a time the implants stopped not just for me but for every experiment. All of the kennels were emptied at the labs. I was taken from the surgery rooms and loaded onto a giant ship along with all of the other R.A.W. experiments. Every experiment and scientist was present on the ship. I knew something major was happening. We all knew. We were no longer dull animals that didn't know we were being herded to our doom. Each and every one of us knew we were about to be discarded somewhere in endless space. We all became anxious. I accepted it.

It's funny how life is sometimes. Our voyage was interrupted for the better when our ship crashed into an unknown planet just outside the Milky Way. I guess I should restate: 'it was for the better for me.' I was somehow sparred from the initial impact, but as I crawled out of the wreckage bodies of my brethren littered the jungle floor. I couldn't tell if some piles of burning metal came from bodies or from the ship itself. I could not mistake the smell of burning fur and the crisp popping of bones though. Fur and metal painted the thick foliage of this new planet and dying shrieks filled the atmosphere. Chaos is what it was. I was reborn in chaos. I stumbled away from the wails and ruin only to trip over a chunk of metal shortly after. I was no longer looking at the wreckage. My paws were before me and a bloody numb was all that remained of one of my toes. My weary lips pulled back in a wicked grin. Lying amongst the dying I knew this was the happiest day of my life.
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4 Facts about R.A.W: 1) They reboot at random and it can take a couple hours so they just lay there motionless and stuff. Kind of like my old computer. 2) The scientist from the journal is nicknamed Jedi like from STAR WARS. Maybe I'm a geek though and it's not Star Wars inspired. 3) While traveling through space via high tech space craft the scientists and the R.A.W.'s crash land on a life sustaining planet. This is probably good for the R.A.W.'s since they were going to be abandoned/eliminated. 4) From experiment number eleven on each R.A.W. had a microchip implanted into their robo-bodies.
BONUS QUESTION: What was my inspiration for the metal spikes on his shoulders and haunches? I first thought of murlocs from World of Warcraft or the Elite Hunters from Halo. Then maybe a lionfish or one of the animals from Avatar. Or maybe you're just so talented you didn't need inspiration and this is just a trick question.

EDIT: Cleaned up the history some. I apologize about the small personality. I normal just give the basics and let roleplays determine how he acts before I expand it.
EDITx2: Put some art for him down. c:
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Re: Experiment 16: For Adoption

Postby SpartanAmethyst » Mon Dec 31, 2012 8:15 am

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Re: Experiment 16: For Adoption

Postby Hu Tao » Mon Dec 31, 2012 9:15 am

Username: ~Wingedomen~
Name: (I trying to think of a good one...always wanted a R.A.W. <3)
Gender: Male
Age: 12 years
Personality:quick on his feet, clever, wise, a robot wolf-lie-detector xD
History or other Short Story: (WIP)
Art: (Can be ordered) (WIP)
4 Facts about R.A.W:
R.A.W. stands for Robotically Advanced Wolves
They have increased strength and speed
They have a possibility of re-boots
Rain deteriorates the metal, causing loss of function
BONUS QUESTION: What was my inspiration for the metal spikes on his shoulders and haunches? (This is just for fun, will not affect my judging~) Aliens? xD

Just wanted to say, I love the idea of this species! I read every word on your thread and looked at each wolf. (Vivir is one of my favs) Someday I hope to own a custom.
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Re: Experiment 16: For Adoption

Postby Mackiot » Mon Dec 31, 2012 4:12 pm

Username: Edwina
Name:
Porkipine
Nickname:
Pine
Name Explanation:
the spines on his back, to me resmle a porkiepine, so that is were it omes from ^^
Gender: Male
Age: (in dog years) a little under a year old
Personality: shy, nice, kind, sensitive, lonely, funloving, brave, positivity/ negitivity depend on the situation, almost never gives up, curious
History or other Short Story:
i walk alone, on this sstrange world... as a pup; a normal pup, not a a freak machine, i was happy... i was joyful with my brothers and sister, i loved my mum and pop... i even got adopted to a family of humans... they loved me, cherished me, fed me... they became the world to me... but that all hanged, when they gave me to them... being a pup, i had been a curious rascle, always sticking my nose into things they shouldnt be... one day, i saw a cat on the other side of the road... this was probibly my fith time outside alone... and i had no idea what a cat was either... at first i barked at it, and when it whent running, i had to chase it... bad idea... i didnt see the truck coming. i ran, and it hit me, knocking e to the side of the road... things bcame blurry for me, and i couldnt focus to well, i saw my human come running to me, and things became getting blurry. eventually i blacked out.

i oke up, my humans rushing me into a large white building. a man came to them he spoke, but i couldnt understand him with the rinnging in my ears... the man took me and rushed me to aa room, with large machines laying around. he layed me down and took out a mask like thing and covered my face with it... it made me drowsy, and i blacked out.

i woke up, i felt stiff and cold... i was in a cage. i look out, my owners look terrified by me. i shift, and i feel something i never felt before shift on my back as well. i tensed up. i didnt want too look at me back, so i stared at my paws, and almost screamed when i saw wires on them. i look at my sholder, were now is a large metal plate with spikes, and i look further down my back at the spikes just poking out of my back. terrified didnt even explane my emotion i see more wires on myself, even metal were skin should be, and almost start balling. i felt different... and looked different. i look at the man who did this to me, standing behind my family. i growl.
"he may act diffrenyl, but this is because he is confused, it might take a while for him to become normal again" the man said.
normal? you call this normal? i thought angerly.
the family put me in a cage, a strange thing for me, and brought me home. they locked me in th bathroom with a bowl of water and food. i whimpered... they nver locked me up before... ever... i wanted to cry... i wanted to scream... i wanted to break something... i wanted to lash out on someone... a growled to myself. the only question i had rolling accross my mind was; why me?

the day the sent me back to the man was a day i regreat... my family finally trusted me again... i was sitting eating out of my old dog bowl and my old dog food, when the little girl came up and started scratching behind my ears, a spot i loved. she slowly strted going down to my back and touched my spikes, i weird feling shot through me, and i trun around and growl, i couldnt stop myself. the girl shrank back into a corner and i closedin on her. she screamed and i pounced and bit hard down on her arm. i felt blood trickle down her arm were my teeth peireced her skin. her older brother and two parents came running in, i turned and growled at them... i wanted to stop so baddly, but it was like something possesd me. they had to call animal control to finally get me and tak me back.
Art: (Can be ordered)
WIP
4 Facts about R.A.W:
~these wolves are artificaly altered, so they have metal parts that replace normal body parts like legs
~RAW are able to fully comunicate in English. this is due to tampering of their brain.
~RAW are more intelligent then the average animal.
~when born, the pups do not have their metalic parts, but as they grow, the metal pushes from beneath the skin out, and into place. the procces is very painful and and few servive the transformation.
BONUS QUESTION: What was my inspiration for the metal spikes on his shoulders and haunches? (This is just for fun, will not affect my judging~)

PORKIPINE?!
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Re: Experiment 16: For Adoption

Postby SpartanAmethyst » Tue Jan 01, 2013 4:06 am

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Re: Experiment 16: For Adoption

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Re: Experiment 16: For Adoption

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