Re: LW #8

Postby Painted.Roses » Sun Dec 30, 2012 1:38 pm

Name: Rhiaghan (pronounced Rye-gone)
Gender: Male
Why is he/she blind?
Rhiaghan was born very healthy to two similar-looking parents. His father groomed him to be an excellent family caretaker and flyer. What his father neglected to teach his son, however, was humility. Rhiaghan grew up challenging others of his kind to contests to test their sport. Races, obstacle courses, puzzles, you name it. He'd always win... and not always in the most honorable of ways. So one day, as he was racing a female flyer, she gained on him. Forgoing any sense of fellowship or honor, he tucked his left wing and collided with her, sending her spiraling off the path... and straight towards the ground. Rhiaghan's eyes widened in horror as he saw her plummeting to her death. He'd expected her to be able to catch herself! Immediately diving to save her, he was unable to do anything but latch on and throw himself between her and the ground, only softening her fall. The female made it out unscathed. Rhiaghan hit his head so hard that he lost one of the most important senses for flight - his eyesight. Now unable to race or properly compete ever again, Rhiaghan struggles to recover and find a purpose for himself, feeling very guilty and very stupid. But, perhaps there is hope for him. Who knows what he'll find in the future?
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Re: LW #8

Postby Leaf. » Mon Dec 31, 2012 12:10 pm

Name:Slikim
Gender:female
Why is she blind?Because of a curse. She was only young when it happened. She had found a tomb, and her dad told her not too.She found a caving on the wall, not far in. The words were backwards but she could read them.
'ɹǝƃuɐ ʇǝʎ 'ʎʇǝɟɐs uʍo ɹıǝɥʇ ɹoɟ puıןq ǝq ʇsnɯ ǝƃɐssǝɯ sıɥʇ spɐǝɹ oɥʍ ǝɥS' she read.'She who reads this message must be blind for their own safety, yet anger' She hasn't yet found out how it's 'for her safety' and is still trying to work it out
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Re: LW #8

Postby ege » Tue Jan 01, 2013 5:10 am

Thanks for entering! =)
I've added the end date to the first post. If anyone wants it extended, please say so!
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Re: LW #8

Postby ege » Mon Jan 28, 2013 1:41 pm

Painted.Roses wrote:Name: Rhiaghan (pronounced Rye-gone)
Gender: Male
Why is he/she blind?
Rhiaghan was born very healthy to two similar-looking parents. His father groomed him to be an excellent family caretaker and flyer. What his father neglected to teach his son, however, was humility. Rhiaghan grew up challenging others of his kind to contests to test their sport. Races, obstacle courses, puzzles, you name it. He'd always win... and not always in the most honorable of ways. So one day, as he was racing a female flyer, she gained on him. Forgoing any sense of fellowship or honor, he tucked his left wing and collided with her, sending her spiraling off the path... and straight towards the ground. Rhiaghan's eyes widened in horror as he saw her plummeting to her death. He'd expected her to be able to catch herself! Immediately diving to save her, he was unable to do anything but latch on and throw himself between her and the ground, only softening her fall. The female made it out unscathed. Rhiaghan hit his head so hard that he lost one of the most important senses for flight - his eyesight. Now unable to race or properly compete ever again, Rhiaghan struggles to recover and find a purpose for himself, feeling very guilty and very stupid. But, perhaps there is hope for him. Who knows what he'll find in the future?

I liked the name and the story. ^-^ Congrats!
(Sorry for judging a day late, I forgot what day it was)
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Re: LW #8

Postby Leaf. » Mon Jan 28, 2013 1:44 pm

Congrats Painted.Roses
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