HORRAY FOR EXACT REMAKE PAGE OF THE FIRST VERSION!
Oh how I fail.
Well I did change the rocks. In the first version it was just a random break-off to a bunch of rocks. Now that is obviously like "wha...!?" NOT LOGICAL There must be a casual give away from the grasslands into the borderlands in order to be more realistic ^.^
Cover
*based off of* for previous page
Eclipse (My other WIP comic)
Now I usually do simple subtitles and dialogue here.
But I feel like storyvising it this time.
Aeayuri leapt awkwardly to the side when the immense net went whistling past her, missing her white scales by some mere inches. She flared her wings in surprise and automatic recoil, nearly tripping over herself from the unexpected appearance, before quickly gouging her claws into the grass again and rushing onward away from the angry predator racing up behind her.
~That was too close for comfort, she thought nervously, considering again her options of flight.
~The rocky borderlands were ahead, the scraggly peaks of a thousand rocks reaching aimlessly towards the blue sky; dead, grassless fields of stone, as are the affects of a live volcano. Seeing their pale, bleached and rugged surfaces sprouted an idea in the blue key's mind, an idea for a different way of survival against her angry foe. I bet I could lose him by going over those rocks...
~She glanced behind her, at the vehicle hungrily crushing grass and pebbles beneath the spongy rubber wheels. Its engine was roaring like a starving beast, the curved plasma ray at the apex of its top was flickering with live energy. It was worth a try.
Aeayuri veered a sharp (and risky) turn into the hard and rocky borderlands of the volcano's bed, hoping her plan would be a successs; but merely hope cannot save a prey from a predator.
And this is why I chose the theme song I did.
Run for your life >x3
