[Syla Delaney]

PAGE 30!
WOOO!
That makes this what... maybe about 90 pages or so now?
That's a bit of a guesstimate. It would probably be in the 95 to 100 range right about now if you include the cover, prologue, and bonus pages.
...
That's a lot of pages.

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Shelly, what are you doing here?

I do what I want. You told me yourself, its the ROLE of a puppetmaster's title! You do what you want, you take what you want, and what I WANT is him!
Shelly, that's one thing you may NOT have. He is dangerous. And I have taken responsibility to kill him.
Well I won't let you. He's MINE.
Ugh.... Why did I have to do this... I always knew starting young was a bad idea... Shelly. Go home.
No.
Yes.
NO.
YES.
NOOOOOOOOOOO. He's MINE. And I'm taking him. I'm not stupid. I know full well what he IS. And I don't plan on letting anything bad come because of it. That's why... if he does anything I don't like, I'll kill him. I've got thread wound inside of him.
All it takes is a little tug, and he's gone.
That's... surprisingly well thought out.
I know.
I commend you, but I can't let him get away now, Shelly. I won't let you-
NO! I don't have to listen to you... I DON'T HAVE TO LISTEN TO ANYONE. No one else knows what I want. Or what I can do. You keep telling me its my power to do this, or to do that... But I have to keep sitting here like this stupid little kid... Like everyone else... When I know that I'm not! I'm smarter than everyone else is... Smarter even than all of those parents... and teachers... and the other ones too. In fact, I don't even think YOU'RE smarter than I am...You said I was to the puppetmaster what Zane is to the terror... Doesn't make me better than you are too? Doesn't that mean I can make my own decisions by now? I don't need you any more!
YOU AREN'T READY SHELLY.
No. I know that I am. It's time for you to leave.
YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT YOU'RE DOING!
I release you.

[Syla Delaney]

Comments and critiques always appreciated.

[jillybean711]

first comment :3 yet again. This is a interesting page. I really like it. X3

[LonelySnowGirl]

Awesome page xD what made me laugh abit was the no yes no part x3 I love this twist ;P oh shelly

[Keero]

Oh wow. Look at Shelly go! I cant believe she's letting go of Mr Narwhale though. That's somewhat disappointing. Anyhow, it must feel terrible to be Zane right now. To die or not to die? That is the question.

[Syla Delaney]

Yup.
There goes Shelly.
All ready to go and face the world.
So sassy she is.
Thank all of you guys.
XD

[Raventune]

....Woah.

[Syla Delaney]

Thank you.
XD

[Lyrico]

Pff.

I do what I want.

You so sassy, Shelly! xD

[Syla Delaney]

She is, she is.