[Soph6297]

To get her write a short (20 sentences) story about her discovering something interesting.

(Oh Soph, she's so pretty!)
Username: G.L'S
Name: Marina
Gender: Mare
Height: 16.3hh
Story:
[center]In the early spring when Marina was just young, light filtered through the trees and danced off the ground around her. The world was such a happy place in Marina's eyes for everything glistened in the daily light, her mother was happy and everything around her seemed to be bursting with life.

When Marina joined her mother's herd and met other foals her age, she noticed something different about their families. There were two kelpies tending to each of the foals and the second ones had strange looking horns.

"Momma, what's with the Kelpies that don't look like us?"

"Those are boy Kelpies, they're the other foals' fathers,"
her mother answered placidly as if her mind was elsewhere.

"Where's my father?"
Little Marina asked now feeling different from the other foals.

"He left a long time ago and I never saw him again,"
her mother answered quietly then bent down to graze,
"But let's not talk of such sad things."

This thought of a father kelpie always nagged at the back of Marina's mind as she grew up in the herd and watched all her friends play with their fathers. One day when she was a weanling, she grew tired of this mystery and ventured off to look for her father on her own deep in the dark sectors of the bayou. She wandered for days calling for anyone who might assist her in finding her father or her father himself but was felt unanswered until she whinnied herself hoarse. She stopped by a large pool of water and began to weep for this father she wanted but never met, wishing somehow he could find her and just say hello so she would know who he was.

As she wept, an alligator slunk through the water, seeing the young kelpie as an easy meal and tried to snatch her from the water's shores. Marina screamed a raspy yell and saw a large male thunder out of the woods and charge toward the alligatorwith muderous intent in his eyes.

"Stay away from my daughter!"
The kelpie screamed and slammed his hooves inches from the alligator's face, enough to scare the creature before turning to address the daughter he'd longed to meet for so long.

exactly 20 sentences. Phew!

[AnnabelLee]

[b]Username:skyler456
[b]Name:Skyler
[b]Gender:Female
[b]Height:2 meters
[b]Story:
A free roaming horse has no expectations, except when it has something troubling them. But she may not know what it is yet, so they have to explore. They have to explore and find every single detail around them. Even if its not a good thing to know. But they will find out if they explore. And this horse is roaming. And she will find something, we just don't know what.

"My forest is big enough for me and other animals who choose to live here, but none are. Strange. Strange for a forest so full and beautiful not one bird or mouse can be seen in the tall canape or the soft soil." night when the night fill the blue sky turning it to dark one tree would fall, but it fell so perfectly not hitting another tree like it was gently pulled out of the ground and placed on the ground with ease and every night this happened like nature was trying to erase its self from here, this location. And this would probably bother you if you lived in this forest. But would en it make you curious?

TO BE CONTINUED! (for dramatic effect) if you want me to finish it send me a message

[Soph6297]

Remember 20 sentences only C;

[Cathy Hunter]

Username: Colorless Heart
Name: Queen of the Nights Roses
Gender: Mare
Height: 14.5hh
Story:
Sigh
The time had been walking in a speed of a flower growing and the movement of a continent.
Under the largest tree in the forest, standing in the spotlight of the moons wise eye and making the shadows at the ground mysterious creatures, lay a mulberry mare with blushred mane and tail, looking quite tired and bored as the shadown danced over her body.
Infront of her hooves where a closed flower. A strange one to, most looking like a cactus with knots, and the mares rosered eyes was bounded at it like she was in a trance. What she was waiting for was abious, if you knew what flower it was.
Then, the mares eyes widned as the white knots on the cactus slowly made movement. The moon hid behind a cloud and there was no light, but clearly a white flower, with elegance, opened up to show it's beauty to the forest around it.
A smile played upon the mares muzzle and her rosered eyes closed slowly when her face turned in a relaxed and joyful exprassion.
Sigh
The mighty beautiful flower was pointing it's petals at the mare and she opened her eyes again and looked at the flower with adoration. A joyful tear of happiness fell down her cheek and to the ground as she layed her head aside the blooming cactus flower, smiling into her sleep.
____________________________________________
The red-orange morningsun was warming the ground and the fur at the mares body, and she slowly opened her eyes and looked at the cactus flower.
Sigh
She stood up and gave a respectful nod, turning away and heading back to her herd with heavy steps and a feeling of being knew. The sun shone on the cactus' withered petals of the beautiful flowers that bloomed only that night and closes forever.

Link to flower - Queen of the Night - Moonflower
When you read it's location, you will proboly find it weird that I placed it in the forest. But that would be just as realistic as the kelpie, wouldn't it?

[G.L'S]

(Oh Soph, she's so pretty!)
Username: G.L'S
Name: Marina
Gender: Mare
Height: 16.3hh
Story:

In the early spring when Marina was just young, light filtered through the trees and danced off the ground around her. The world was such a happy place in Marina's eyes for everything glistened in the daily light, her mother was happy and everything around her seemed to be bursting with life.

When Marina joined her mother's herd and met other foals her age, she noticed something different about their families. There were two kelpies tending to each of the foals and the second ones had strange looking horns.

"Momma, what's with the Kelpies that don't look like us?"

"Those are boy Kelpies, they're the other foals' fathers,"
her mother answered placidly as if her mind was elsewhere.

"Where's my father?"
Little Marina asked now feeling different from the other foals.

"He left a long time ago and I never saw him again,"
her mother answered quietly then bent down to graze,
"But let's not talk of such sad things."

This thought of a father kelpie always nagged at the back of Marina's mind as she grew up in the herd and watched all her friends play with their fathers. One day when she was a weanling, she grew tired of this mystery and ventured off to look for her father on her own deep in the dark sectors of the bayou. She wandered for days calling for anyone who might assist her in finding her father or her father himself but was felt unanswered until she whinnied herself hoarse. She stopped by a large pool of water and began to weep for this father she wanted but never met, wishing somehow he could find her and just say hello so she would know who he was.

As she wept, an alligator slunk through the water, seeing the young kelpie as an easy meal and tried to snatch her from the water's shores. Marina screamed a raspy yell and saw a large male thunder out of the woods and charge toward the alligatorwith muderous intent in his eyes.

"Stay away from my daughter!"
The kelpie screamed and slammed his hooves inches from the alligator's face, enough to scare the creature before turning to address the daughter he'd longed to meet for so long.

exactly 20 sentences. Phew!

[NightGaze]

Username:
NightGaze
Name:
Romian
Gender:
Mare
Height:
16.2 hh
Story:
I was walking down a shoreline one day when I came upon a strange object. It was grey, red and blue. It had wings like a bird, but they stuck straight out, and they didn't move. It was about the size of a small rock. I raised my head, hearing a buzzing sound. It looked just like the object, but it flew and was much bigger. I tilted my head, and kicked some dirt over it, finding no real use for it.

(The object is a toy plane, if you didn't understand.)
Dropping out, If I won, give it to the next best.

[Soph6297]

Closed. Judging.

[Soph6297]

(Oh Soph, she's so pretty!)
Username: G.L'S
Name: Marina
Gender: Mare
Height: 16.3hh
Story:

In the early spring when Marina was just young, light filtered through the trees and danced off the ground around her. The world was such a happy place in Marina's eyes for everything glistened in the daily light, her mother was happy and everything around her seemed to be bursting with life.

When Marina joined her mother's herd and met other foals her age, she noticed something different about their families. There were two kelpies tending to each of the foals and the second ones had strange looking horns.

"Momma, what's with the Kelpies that don't look like us?"

"Those are boy Kelpies, they're the other foals' fathers,"
her mother answered placidly as if her mind was elsewhere.

"Where's my father?"
Little Marina asked now feeling different from the other foals.

"He left a long time ago and I never saw him again,"
her mother answered quietly then bent down to graze,
"But let's not talk of such sad things."

This thought of a father kelpie always nagged at the back of Marina's mind as she grew up in the herd and watched all her friends play with their fathers. One day when she was a weanling, she grew tired of this mystery and ventured off to look for her father on her own deep in the dark sectors of the bayou. She wandered for days calling for anyone who might assist her in finding her father or her father himself but was felt unanswered until she whinnied herself hoarse. She stopped by a large pool of water and began to weep for this father she wanted but never met, wishing somehow he could find her and just say hello so she would know who he was.

As she wept, an alligator slunk through the water, seeing the young kelpie as an easy meal and tried to snatch her from the water's shores. Marina screamed a raspy yell and saw a large male thunder out of the woods and charge toward the alligatorwith muderous intent in his eyes.

"Stay away from my daughter!"
The kelpie screamed and slammed his hooves inches from the alligator's face, enough to scare the creature before turning to address the daughter he'd longed to meet for so long.

exactly 20 sentences. Phew!

Congrats!

[G.L'S]

Oh yay! Thank you so much! I luffles her :3