Re: WME: Norwegian Fjord(Yellow Dun)

Postby dragons whisper » Sat Nov 17, 2012 11:02 am

Omg mg omg omg this is my favorite so far!!!!!!

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Re: WME: Norwegian Fjord(Yellow Dun)

Postby S h e b s t e r » Sat Nov 17, 2012 11:17 am

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Equid's Name:Chester
Height: 14,2 hh
Age:8
Gender: Stallion
Story: [The narrator is Chester] When I was born it was a very cold day, with snow on the ground and blowing all around. It was pretty hard for me to stand. I just kept falling! I finally figured out how to stand.A few months later As I gain my strength I wanted to gallop an race the other Colts . I went to go play with them, so we galloped an never looked back. Until we got to the entrance to the woods. Our parents always tell us to Never ever go in them. I wanted to go in. The other colts left me,because they didn't want to get in trouble. So I am standing there, thinking about going in. Then I take my first step into the Wild Unknown forest. I wasn't frightned, just curious. I love adventures. As I walk through the woods, I start to see a little animal which I never seen before. I walk closer and closer. It was running super fast. I thought it wanted to play tag, so I chased it. The faster the creature ran, the fast I galloped. It continued until it ran into a little hole in a tree.So I Stop sudden an hit my face on a branch. I shook off the pain an stood there, Lost in the unknown woods.
I hear a horse neigh in the distance. I was so excited that my Dam found me! So I galloped to the calling neigh. When I got close I saw it was not my mother. Or any one Equid at that. It had a bigger bulkier body with shorter mane an tail.? It had bunches of weird markings and feathers. Then I see a light, but its moving? Then I here chatter and chanting! I start to see a figure as it comes closer. Its a Indian that my Dam told about in stories!! I get scared for the first time, so I hide behind the horse with markings. The indian stop and slowly grabs something but I can't tell what it is. All of a sudden something flys over my neck and pulls! I try and try to gallop and get away but I can't over throw the strength of the indian. He hold on to the rope while getting on his horse and he rode away while dragging me.
We stop as we came apon a place with more indians and bunch of other horses and weird triangle shapes. He puts me into a little fenced area with lots of grass and a piece of fruit and water. I wasn't hungry I just wanted to see where I was. I little indian comes up and tries to touch me, I just sniffed her. I saw horses just walking around with more weird markings. Horses would come up to me and sniff me all the time and ask what I was. There were foals too! But they wouldn't come to me. As the days past Indians would also come and pet me. Then One day the indian who caught me walked over with some liquid that was red. He pettd me and used the liquid to put weird marking on me like all the other horses. I was kinda happy and excited to get them though? Two years past. I still have people feeding me and coming to pet me. They even started to let me out of the fence with the other horses. That Day the indian who caught me, Jump on my back. I was having fun riding around with someone on my back. I felt like all the other horses. Then we rode to the edge of the forest. I thought to myself. I wondering if I should be wild again. But then I said Pfft nahh. I love being tamed!
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Re: WME: Norwegian Fjord(Yellow Dun)

Postby Aravel » Sat Nov 17, 2012 11:20 am

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Equid's Name: Domestic name: Solemn - I feel this deserves an explanation. So, when he was taken to the labs, obviously the scientists didn't know what his name in WME was, if such a thing, so noting upon his behavior , they name him Solemn, since he wasn't as nearly gleeful as a wild WME. Read the story to know exactly why. ^^
Height: 14,2 hh
Age: 4 Years
Gender: Stallion
Story: I let out a very heavy sigh and glance at the summer sunset. It’s bright gold and blues reminding me of one particular day. I shudder and glance down, but the thought keeps coming back to me. So, I relive it:

Overlooking the valley, I stood on a tremendous hill. It was large enough to see the rivers and the bases of the mountain. It was quite beautiful, especially the bright, fiery light coming from behind the mountains. It gleamed with reds and gold, and a fine yellow emanating from it. But what really made it beautiful was the mare standing beside me. She was gentle and sweet, a perfect match for me, and we were thinking of starting a herd…

But there was something wrong. Listening with my superb hearing, I twitched my ears listening for the sound. Out of the trees, I saw something unnaturally green rushing towards me. I didn’t know what was going on, but it was obvious that the humans inside the vehicle were examining us two. But if they’d been watching, they’d know that the distance between us was great and I’d be able to escape with my love too easily. I didn’t understand then.

Still, the vehicle kept pressing on, so we were forced to flee, not to mention it was my instinct. I let out a frightened screech as I gracefully galloped along with the mare. She and I stuck together until I told her to run a different way. I didn’t really want to fight, in fact I was terrified, but I had to. I couldn’t lose her. I couldn’t live knowing she was captured, if they even could. But I couldn’t risk it.

We split apart, but I longed for her warmth by my side. I knew I couldn’t have it though. I led the car onwards over the slopes. It seemed to be able to cross just about anything. Then, I observed it. It jerked as the mare ran away, but it continued to watch and follow me. And it seemed to only want me. It was strange. And even stranger, it seemed to know exactly where I’d go.

And suddenly, I understood. It was smart indeed, and too late to turn now. I was surrounded and trapped. Suddenly, many of the same green vehicles came out of hiding. There were at least 4 or 5, plus a larger one with a longer butt. I couldn’t run anywhere, so I tried to fight now. I reared in the air to try to scare and back them off. They didn’t move a single bit. Not even a flinch, and being so helpless never made me angrier than that time. I staggered forward, quite out of breath from running, and now, I know it was all for nothing. A trick to torment me and tear me from the love of my life. It was devious.

I again reared, just in case, but truthfully, I wouldn’t dare touch one of those icky things. I wouldn’t even try to destroy it. Several of the vehicles opened and out came humans. One with a stick-looking object especially frightened me. I let out angry-like noises, or tried, but it came out as whimpers. And even worse, my feeble attempts seemed almost amusing to them. They spread around them a net-like thing and began to inch closer to me.

I felt the space closing, and the last chances of freedom getting smaller and smaller. Yet, I refused to give up. I started charging, though getting close to them still scared me, so I’d back off at the last second. It almost seemed to work, but they had a strong look of determination in their eyes.

I had nothing else to do except my last resort. I kicked wildly and neighed, frightened almost painfully. My heart was racing so loud, but I can hardly remember what happened next. What I do remember is that all chances of escaping left. And I felt something hit me. Hard. I stumbled around, my freight eating me alive. And then suddenly: happiness. Pain was absorbed and relieved, my heart calmed down, and I was no longer afraid. I fell and crashed to the hard ground though, and closed my eyes. I had a dreamless, peaceful rest. But it wasn’t long enough, and at that point, I wanted to stay asleep forever.

I didn’t remember how long I was asleep, but it must have been long. Not like years or anything like a coma, but at least a few days. Instead of the sunny skies and bright happy days, it was now filled with clouds and rain and thunder. And I was in a new place: a small enclosed box that overlooked a field. And below me was dried grass with a scent of sweetness. Of home. Instantly, a longing for home came to me, and then a craving for that beautiful mare.


I wake from my day dream. I’m still in that same enclosed space, but it’s not so bad anymore. I’m used to it, since I’ve been here for about a year now. But I still get those longings. And I wonder about her. About that mare I always loved. I wonder if she’s moved on, and something inside me hopes not. But I do realize I just want her to be happy, and change my mind. I hope she has. I hope she’s happy and free. I already know I’ll be here until my last breath. Like a rose losing it’s red petals, counting down the days till it’s free from this life.
But something in me shakes my head. I doubt she has, just like I never will. But I feel the urge to find out. So I get up, and glance. Maybe I’ll be able to see her from here. But no. So instead, I leap out. I’ll find her, meet her, and come back. I could never leave, but I must see her again. I must.

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Re: WME: Norwegian Fjord(Yellow Dun)

Postby gross » Sat Nov 17, 2012 11:57 am

What a lovely stallion. I guess it won't hurt to try.

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Re: WME: Norwegian Fjord(Yellow Dun)

Postby KittyCatKita » Sat Nov 17, 2012 12:12 pm

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Equid's Name: True Name: Odesseyo (for his amazing journey that he takes to be become a tamed equid); Tamed name: Orpheus (named after the legendary musician, poet and prophet known for his abilities to charm all creatures and even the stones with his music)
Height: 14,2 hh
Age: 6
Gender: Stallion
Story: "Odesseyo! Where do you think are you going?"
The young colt froze in mid step, the tip of his hoof just barely touched the ground when the stern call came from his mother. He made an almost inaudible groan and twisted around to look back to her with a muttered, "I was going to go play with my friends"
The golden mare's ears flicked back, obviously unimpressed with her son's answer but she knew she could do very little to stop him. Odesseyo was always one who sought out adventures, curiousity got the best of her colt and he rarely stopped asking her why. She finally shook her head but sighed out, "Well... don't leave the valley!"
"Yes momma!" He called to her as he kicked up his heels and squealed happily. With a pleased grin he took off through the grass towards the forest where he was to meet his friends.
"Ha! Don't leave the valley," he snorted out his nose "all the best places to race are in the hills!" His little hooves skittered over the stones as he ground down to a halt and his sides heaved heavily with each panted breath. Odesseyo found the area unusually quiet and a frown dipped over his face. His long ears pricked forward and twisted, "Guys?" He quieted for a moment and listened intently for a response, "Guys!" he called again louder this time.
It was then he heard the click.
His head whipped to his left, staring into the hole of a long, thin stick. It was the strangest stick he had ever seen, the sun reflected off the surface and glittered over the rocks below it and the bushes rustled faintly behind it. "Now why was it doing that?" he wondered curiously.
He leaned his weight onto his haunches and went to step forward to investigate. He wanted to know what this stick was and he wanted to know now. He hadn't even lifted his hoof before there was a low fffpht sound and it suddenly it felt as though a thousand mosquitoes had struck his shoulder.
Odesseyo gave a half rear and leapt away, running as fast as he could away from the monster mosquito shooting stick but he could hear the sounds of something following him. He wasn't about to turn around to find out what it was as he raced for the valley's edge.
As he ran he shook his head roughly because his eyes were beginning to play tricks on him. The world began to blend together. Warmth and cold flashed through him from the tip top of his ears down to the soles of his little hooves. He felt his lids grow heavy and want to close, encouraging him to lay down and sleep. He shouldn't have been so tired, it wasn't night time yet. What had that mosquito done to him?
He knew he had to get back. Momma could fix this, whatever it was and that would make it all better. Had to make it back, he tried to push himself hard, get back... The ground rushed up to meet him and he could feel the rock scrape at the flesh of his knees as he dropped.
He struggled to lift his head, to get back to his hooves or call for his momma, but no sound came from him. He could hear the crunching of a monster making its way across the stone toward him and saw a strange, bear-like shape bend over him, what was that? Was it going to hurt him?
It was then he felt the touch of a human for the first time, the soft furless flesh stroking down over his neck and the low rumbled tone, speaking to him but he didn't know what was said. That sight and warm touch were the last things he remembered before he blacked out and carefully was loaded into the padded trailer.
The days passed into weeks, and the weeks to months. The birds sung each spring while life appeared in the world. The leaves of autumn turned brown and fell to the icy grip of the snow-filled winter. The cycle began again and again, heedless of the world around it. During this time Odesseyo grew and he became known by a new name.
Orpheus was what the humans called him. He wasn't sure what an Orpheus was, but it sounded good. One of the humans had called him quite the charmer; the favourite of the stables, all of the workers seemed to adore him.
Orpheus liked that. He liked the attention of the humans... well... some of it. Each day they came to his stall. Some days just groom him and took great care to clip his mane and make him look absolutely gorgeous. Other days they poked and prodded him and ran tests after test after test. Sometimes they took blood with needles, or took his temperature; he would admit he hated that part.
He didn't know why they needed these things or why they were studying him, but it gave him ample time to study them in return. Humans fascinated Orpheus. They were bizarre creatures, just when he believed that he understood them, suddenly something new would come into existence that would destroy all his theories.
At times he heard the other equids being housed at the stable tell tales of the wild, of how they wished to return, or how they wanted to go there one day. He snorted out a low laugh when he heard this, he didn't agree. He liked it here. Free food, a warm place to rest, fresh water and all the treats he wanted!
Orpheus also heard recently he was going to a new home. He didn't know what that was, but he was excited. He hoped it was good, like sugar cubes or molasses. He often day dreamed of what it might be like, this new home. He, Odessyo-Orpheus, hoped it would be a glorious adventure!


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Re: WME: Norwegian Fjord(Yellow Dun)

Postby jzprincess » Sat Nov 17, 2012 12:15 pm

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Equid's Name: Kero
Height: 14,2 hh
Age: 3 years
Gender: Stallion
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Kero stomps his foot in frustration prancing at the gate restlessly. Throwing his head in the air and looking around with fear that she wouldn't show up. Yet she was late something that she never was, never this late anyways. In the fear the memory sneaks up on him then crashes down like a tidal wave hitting the beach in late November. The day that he had been taken from the only place he would ever truly call home. -80

The day was windy making Kero's already bad hearing worse. Since Equids didn't have very good hearing. Kero nickers at the other colts and runs off nipping at a small brown females hind end. She narrows eyes at him before chasing after him and getting him back in the butt herself. Kero smiles at this before going off and joining in a little battle to the top of the mountains. He caught up to a small little black and white female and nipped at her ear before taking off and passing more foals. The older Equids were looking and laughing at the silliness of the small foals. -107

Then everything went to slow motion, the older Equids started to scream at the younger Equids to run and run as fast as they could. Kero turns and to see the large horse like creatures running at them with humans on their backs. Ropes in their hands, they started to chase after Equids until one of them noticed him and his unusually coloring's. Kero wasn't able to move frozen in place with fear. He wasn't able to move until another colt wild in frantic ran into him and forced him to move. He turns around and runs feeling the ground under him shutter from the thunder of the large horses hooves hitting the ground. He notices a the small black and white filly that he had been playing with earlier with a rope around her neck. He charges towards them seeing the little mare getting dragged to the ground. He whinnies to her that he is coming before jumping and breaking the small rope that held her captive. He lashes out against the humans, an unknown fight coming up inside him. A rope gets thrown around her neck and pulls at him to stop fighting. He doesn't give up still fighting against the men that were holding him.- 209

Kero nickers for help, wishing that someone would help him like he helped the small black and white mare, but then he didn't want anyone to get stuck in the mess that he was stuck in. Kero thrashed wildly as another rope gets thrown around his neck. Trying to swing his head to bite the ropes away but something sharp digs into his neck. Numbing his body and making him fall to the ground. Darkness started to edge into his vision but not before he sees that other Equids with different colors getting captured. He didn't know why it was happening the humans had never once bothered them, but now they were take Equids. Darkness covers the rest of his vision and Kero closes his eyes, falling helplessly into the humans hands.-132

Once Kero comes to again he sees through bars the moving mountains. Looking around more he sees there are three other Equids in the large box with him. Two of the three were asleep while one of them was awake and looking scared and frightened. Kero hear a loud ringing in his ears before he starts to feel dizzy and falls to the ground and falling into the blackness again.- 70

Once again Kero wakes finding himself this time in a small wooden box with bars at the front of the box. Showing the other boxes and the horses which it held. He tries to nicker to the other horses but he finds that he isn't able to come out with a sound. He notices the soft hay under him and leans his head to try it out in taste. Once he gets a taste he spits out the hay and shakes his head before pulling himself to his feet. Shaking off he wanders up to a promising looking bucket towards the front of the box. Seeing the food he sticks his head down greedily and starts to eat not caring to see if it was safe of not. He perks his head up when he hears a small voice saying, "I won't hurt you.".........-143


Kero shakes his head and the last of the memory. He snorts and begins to prance at the gate again. He sees the girl which raised him and nickers gladly at her. He trots up to where she came to the fence a treat in her hand. He nibbles at her hand until she allows him the treat. He shakes his head up and down before nuzzling her hand. He didn't know how but she had managed to tame him and change him into a tame Equid. Kero knew one thing though, he couldn't live without her.-97
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Re: WME: Norwegian Fjord(Yellow Dun)

Postby Lilian Nightshade » Sat Nov 17, 2012 12:16 pm

Pony§ wrote:Just one question: Do we write a story where we write when he/she startes out wild, then gets tamed and get gets wild again or just wild and then tamed.?


He can't go back to the wilderness. He is a tamed equid and also has been in a lab because of the genetic researchs, so he is no longer suited to the wild. He wouldn't survive out there.

And to those thinking about RP'ing with him in case you win: This equid is tame and will stay tame. There's no way to make him wild anymore, if you're thinking about joining an RP, you could very well start one about tamed equids that live in special stable dedicated only for that species. There are many tamed equids around, after all.
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Re: WME: Norwegian Fjord(Yellow Dun)

Postby mawsoleum » Sat Nov 17, 2012 12:18 pm

We don't have to go into deep detail on the lab, though, correct? Just his capture?
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Re: WME: Norwegian Fjord(Yellow Dun)

Postby Lilian Nightshade » Sat Nov 17, 2012 12:21 pm

No, this is not needed. As I said, you can shape the plot in any way you prefer, you just have to focus on the capture scene somewhere in the text.
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Re: WME: Norwegian Fjord(Yellow Dun)

Postby sodafarts » Sat Nov 17, 2012 12:30 pm

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