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My gallery · by **Syla Delaney** » Wed Nov 07, 2012 3:40 pm

Page 60.
As well as the Chapter one end.
To answer a few inconsistencies I've made, the puppetmaster has gone back into the Ripped Narwhale plushie, which Shelly is currently carrying.
The dragon dissipated after it was no longer needed.
Kyle is helping Alyna to walk.
The odd place inside the house is like Narnia, it comes and it goes. So now, it's spat them back out into the normal house, and also explains why the police couldn't find them.
It's also a few days later by this point, even though it only took them a few hours on the SAME day, for all of this to happen.
[[Yes, it's only been one day. Amazing, no?]]

There was a lot that I should have depicted, but it would have taken several more pages than I would have liked to draw.
So that's everything that's important.

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We're almost there... A door. I bet this one...
Wait, we're in... a normal looking house? It's all run down... like it should be.
What? I think we're out! Look!
Wait... what are we going to say though? They'll never believe all of this.
The truth I guess. If they don't believe its their problem. We can show them the engine and everything, and let them deal with it. I'm sure they can get Zane back, and everything.
Zane... I could hear him scream with me... I'm worried about him.
Wait... what?
When you split the mask, it hurt him too. I think we shared it. We were both his apprentice, so the bond is shared between us. When you broke it, I don't think Master expected you to be able to. And it ended splitting us both off.
So he should be ok now, right?
I dunno. I really don't. I'm worried about him though. All of this was my fault. We're all here because I was stupid.
It's ok. We're almost home now.

It seems like they've been worried about us too.
It does. Kids going missing is never unnoticed. You ready to deal with all of that?
We're going to have to. But I think we can handle it.

My gallery · by **Syla Delaney** » Wed Nov 07, 2012 3:41 pm

I love those comments and critiques.

My gallery · by **Neforium** » Wed Nov 07, 2012 3:44 pm

dat... Was... AWESOME!!

And it's only the 1st chapter ;w;

My gallery · by **Syla Delaney** » Wed Nov 07, 2012 3:46 pm

XD
Thank you!
Yes... only chapter one.
I didn't think it was going to take this many pages to get to this point, nor did I ever expect TO get to this point.
I honestly thought it would die around page five when I started...
But I just kept making pages, sort of like
'eh, I like this, who give a care if no one else does'
So I just kept going...

My gallery · by **Keero** » Wed Nov 07, 2012 3:58 pm

Chapter 1 <333
I can't wait to see the many more chapters to come. c:
BLOODIED CHILDREN COME OUT OF NOWHERE.
That's got to be a shocker to the authorities.

My gallery · by **RenaiRoa** » Wed Nov 07, 2012 5:42 pm

How many chapters you planning to do?

My gallery · by **Hawkclaw100** » Wed Nov 07, 2012 11:22 pm

EPICNESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

My gallery · by **squirelife** » Wed Nov 07, 2012 11:32 pm

Kyle! Yeah your alive ^^ i think i have a favorite character X3

My gallery · by **Raventune** » Thu Nov 08, 2012 8:55 am

Love <3

My gallery · by **Syla Delaney** » Thu Nov 08, 2012 9:53 am

Thank you so much everyone!
More pages coming soon...
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