by wind song » Sun Oct 21, 2012 12:37 am
Congratulations:ArachnidYour poem struck me the first time I read it, I adore your style and it's so very different and metaphorical which I love.
Just beautiful! The concept of the artist was so so nice and a pleasure to read.
Arachnid wrote:▪ Username: Arachnid
▪ Whelkon Name: Calix
▪ Poem:
A pure, snowy white whelkon was born
quite a contrast to the sister curled next to him
his fur rippled like a creature all of it's own
Though his parent's loved him;
how could they not,
the child was weak
tortured, they knew
by the little voice inside him
whispering about
his pure white coat, which made him feel without doubt
something was wrong and something must change
in order for him to be normal again.
That night, with the world at rest
dear Calix set out to put his heart to the test
and by chance, perhaps, he stumbled upon,
and artist who's name I am beyond.
The artist laughed joyfully when he saw his fur coat
And with a stroke of a brush, and a jar of paint,
restored Calix's coat to a beautiful color
and after a final dab of the brush
two amber eyes shown from beneath his fur coat
Therefore, the dear Calix, having completed his quest,
returned home with a lesson, one to be learned;
Coat colors don't always appear right when one is born;
sometimes it takes some coaxing to let your true colors show.
Weird poem, but I hope you like<3
He is Elaine's brother n.n Elaine is owned by Charchar2.▪ ▪Profile▪ ▪ ▪ Owner:
▪ Name:
▪ Gender: Male
▪ Age: 19
▪ Rarity: Uncommon
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by Quitting CS... » Sun Oct 21, 2012 1:14 am
Does it have to be a self-made poem, or one that we just think its him? C:
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Quitting CS.
The community I used to love has grown into a rude, hateful group. I can't take it.
The Trade Rant Thread, rude trade messages, adoptables where you get blamed for copying everyone...
There are good here, I know there is, but sadly, it is outweighed by the bad.
If I, piratepanda, meant anything to anyone here, promise me you give someone a compliment each day, a random stranger or someone you know. Even simple words can make someone happy.
You can still find me on Flight Rising (Piratepandas) or Transformice (Piratpanda).
Goodbye CS. It was fun while it lasted.
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by Shaynn » Sun Oct 21, 2012 1:23 am
▪ Username: Stormbird. Trying again for a whelkon.
▪ Whelkon Name: I'm going with..... CLOROPHYL!
▪ Poem: Its not exactly about Clorophyl but its a nice poem...
RAIN
The birds stop their singing
The wind starts to grow
The rain is coming is all I know
Drip drop, drip drop
I take cover, puddles start to grow
I see a rabbit find its burrow
I sit and watch from under a tree
Rain is landing wherever I see
It’s landing on flowers’ petals
It’s landing on trees’ leaves
The rain is gentle, the rain is quiet
The sound is soft, the sound is beautiful
The wind gets noisy, thunder spoils it all
Lightening zips through the air and lightens up the sky
But rain still flows from above -unharmed
╔════════════════════╗shaynn------[ intj ] • [ ♀ ] • [ dA ]
╚════════════════════╝ S ᴏ ᴍ ᴇ ᴛ ɪ ᴍ ᴇ s . . . you just have to
take a--ᴍ ᴏ ᴍ ᴇ ɴ ᴛ--to--ʀ ᴇ ʟ ᴀ x.
ʙ ʀ ᴇ ᴀ ᴛ ʜ ᴇ; find a ʙ ᴇ ᴀ ᴜ ᴛ ɪ ғ ᴜ ʟ
-------------------place . . .
and not ᴛ ʜ ɪ ɴ ᴋ.
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by 4kcuo » Sun Oct 21, 2012 1:33 am
▪ Username: Arachnid
▪ Whelkon Name: Calix
▪ Poem:
A pure, snowy white whelkon was born
quite a contrast to the sister curled next to him
his fur rippled like a creature all of it's own
Though his parent's loved him;
how could they not,
the child was weak
tortured, they knew
by the little voice inside him
whispering about
his pure white coat, which made him feel without doubt
something was wrong and something must change
in order for him to be normal again.
That night, with the world at rest
dear Calix set out to put his heart to the test
and by chance, perhaps, he stumbled upon,
and artist who's name I am beyond.
The artist laughed joyfully when he saw his fur coat
And with a stroke of a brush, and a jar of paint,
restored Calix's coat to a beautiful color
and after a final dab of the brush
two amber eyes shown from beneath his fur coat
Therefore, the dear Calix, having completed his quest,
returned home with a lesson, one to be learned;
Coat colors don't always appear right when one is born;
sometimes it takes some coaxing to let your true colors show.
Weird poem, but I hope you like<3
with school in full swing i'm likely going to be mobile-only except on weekends, sorry guys!!

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by PantheraUncia » Sun Oct 21, 2012 2:25 am
▪ Username: |Leopard303|
▪ Whelkon Name: Summer leaves
▪ Poem:
Green leaves cover the mystery.
His horns like the dense forest,
His eyes a bright sun.
His beauty is to be seen uniquely,
No one with the same opinion.
As the sun rises,
His pelt shimmers,
And his horns glint.
Will the mystery show?
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by midnight133 » Sun Oct 21, 2012 6:31 am
▪ Username: midnight133
▪ Whelkon Name: Nymph
▪ Poem: wip
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Quarantine brought me back after a several year break lol irl unlikely to be here regularly so won't be responding to messages or trades ~
I am incredibly busy. To anyone who I am a artist for I am sorry for my inactivity. When ever I have time and inspiration I will make some adopts. Thank you for being understanding.

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