[Syla Delaney]

Page 30?!?!?!
30 is a large number. Where did this number come from?

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Dude. This is one long hallway.
It is.
This hallway is too long.
We've been over this about 18 times now.
How did we even get down here? I mean, like it was 156 hours walking down this same long hallway with Alina, and then it was like we were still walking down this long hallway, and Alina's not there. And that's where we still are. Walking down this long hallway, and the door is still like 5,000542834056826885603450690450 miles away.
Kyle, I think you just need to take a moment to calm down. The door's right there. And it's only been about ten minutes. I have no idea where Alena went, but if we get through this calmly and without panic, it will make things a whole lot easier.
IT HAS NOT BEEN TEN MINUTES! I KNOW TEN MINUTES! AND THAT IS NOT IT!
Kyle! It's not been that long! Look, see? A door. The door's right here. It's not whatever ridiculous number of miles away you said it was. I bet we'll find outselves in the house, and then we can just climb out a window, or a door, and be out. Alena probably just snuck past while we were distracted. She'll be right there laughing at us, and we can go home.

Wait, this is really weird.
What?
It just feels weird. Sort of tingly. And I've got that Deja Vu thing going on. I saw something about it on the discovery channel though. It has to do with the brain making assumptions or something. No big deal.
Dude. Stop being such a dork. I can't take you and your scumbaggy hacker self serious when you're quoting the discovery channel.
Shut up, I'm about to see if I can open it... wait. It's unlocked already. Oh my gosh.

WHAT? WHAT? LEMME SEE!
Ow! Hang on a second get off me!
Dude? What is it? I want to see-

Holy .
I know right.
Dude. What am I looking at?
I have no clue.
Is this like one of those paintings by the crazy guy with the mustache?
I don't know. We're in big trouble though whatever this is. I mean, those are doors floating sideways. And I can't tell, but I think those stairs are running upside down.

[Syla Delaney]

&^%#*&%*!@&$%&*^%*^%#*%^ yeah. Comments and critiques.

[Keero]

"by the crazy guy with the mustache"
I cracked up on that part. xD
Love this, as always Syla.
And then Kyle's face in the third panel. Priceless.

[Syla Delaney]

Thank you Keero!

[geinkotsu]

Eeee~ Absolutely wonderful. I love the way you drew the two guys in the first panel *anatomy-five*. The hand in the top-second does need work (But who am I to talk, I cant draw hands either! xD). I love love love the last panel, the depth is wonderful in your blocks and swirds, although I feel maybe it is lacking some perspective? I am not sure what form of perspective or depth you were going for, but it looks stunning <3

[Syla Delaney]

Haha!
Thank you Gein.
My hands are terrible and lazy all the time, but maybe I'll go back and clean this up later. There are all sorts of perspective issues in the last panel, and it was, again, laziness. I was sort of like -eh, it resembles what I want, I'll just throw some dark lines on there, some dark areas where it should be dark and throw it up on Oekaki.-
I wouldn't call my first panel anatomy high five worthy, but thank you so much anyway!
I'll see if I can do a better job next time even if I don't clean this page up.

[geinkotsu]

Ffff, dont worry about laziness man. If you over expect from yourself (trust me on this), you get overwhelmed and exhausted and usually cant draw because of the stress of expecting too much and having others expect the same. Many reasons why people end up tossing their comics (me included).

[Syla Delaney]

Haha!
I sort of was like, what the heck. I'll make it crappy so that I can get on with the plot. This part here is way too boring. I'll just speed on through to the good stuff.
So thirty pages later I'm sitting here in this mass of badly done pages, looking back over them all like, 'is this even readable? Eh, whatever. Time to churn out some more!'
I sort of wish that I would spend more time on a lot of my work, but I got this whole burnout when I did that. My lab 23's were good looking, but I just didn't have fun with them after I got through a couple!
Thank you so much Gein. Long story short, I know those feels. I just stopped caring.

[geinkotsu]

Do what works for you and is the most fun, besides, I think this sketchy look works amazing for you. I personally love it alot, it is part of what made me want to read the comic if I were to be honest <3.

[Syla Delaney]

Haha!
I guess if that's what you like... o_______________o
And the same for you! Just do what you want! If that means just throwing lines on a piece of paper, do it! Art is about the feeeeeelllls.