[Robyn Hode.]

Username:Abuse's Song
Name:Kai
Gender: Female
Age:14
Story:Kai slowly swam through the still water kicking around and laughing she neighed as she leapt out of the water. Happy as she could be, but as she saw the men near the water she tried to swim deeper into the water. She heard the voices echo into the water as the men stared down at her. Kai slowly swam towards the men as one of them put the palm of his hand on the surface of the water, she nuzzled his hand and rose her head out of the water to stare at the men. The men stared at her tail and look at each other the talked in different language that Kai didn't know. Kai neighed up at them as they put down a net towards her, she didn't know what the thing was but she tried to get away from it because whatever it was something screamed danger at her. But the men caught her and tossed her into a bag, they dragged her up a path towards some unknown place. As light finally filled the bag she was in she saw more men but this time they had different outfits some where in plain brown clothing with feathers but others were in different colors but they all had feathers apron their heads and other spots. As the men walked away and left Kai sitting there another creature walked up to Kai but instead of the cruel men this was a girl and she spoke calm to Kai keeping her calm as she started to spread a liquid apron her fur, as the girl sung a beautiful song Kai started to drift asleep.

Voices, voices pierced her sleep as she woke to men staring down at her body in disgust, a man threw a large stone at her body as Kai neighed out but then drifted off to sleep.

The next time Kai woke up again she fell into the water as the men threw her in, she swam around happily feeling the water against her skin again but as she saw her tail she looked at the markings apron her self that the girl made as she sung her beautiful song. Kai neighed happily as she remembered the girl and still had the markings, she would be different than all her friends but at least she had an interesting story about the life outside of the water to tell them.

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Is it okey that we made more than three paragraphs?

[Soph6297]

No really, you should keep it short ^^

[Soph6297]

Username:Abuse's Song
Name:Kai
Gender: Female
Age:14
Story:Kai slowly swam through the still water kicking around and laughing she neighed as she leapt out of the water. Happy as she could be, but as she saw the men near the water she tried to swim deeper into the water. She heard the voices echo into the water as the men stared down at her. Kai slowly swam towards the men as one of them put the palm of his hand on the surface of the water, she nuzzled his hand and rose her head out of the water to stare at the men. The men stared at her tail and look at each other the talked in different language that Kai didn't know. Kai neighed up at them as they put down a net towards her, she didn't know what the thing was but she tried to get away from it because whatever it was something screamed danger at her. But the men caught her and tossed her into a bag, they dragged her up a path towards some unknown place. As light finally filled the bag she was in she saw more men but this time they had different outfits some where in plain brown clothing with feathers but others were in different colors but they all had feathers apron their heads and other spots. As the men walked away and left Kai sitting there another creature walked up to Kai but instead of the cruel men this was a girl and she spoke calm to Kai keeping her calm as she started to spread a liquid apron her fur, as the girl sung a beautiful song Kai started to drift asleep.

Voices, voices pierced her sleep as she woke to men staring down at her body in disgust, a man threw a large stone at her body as Kai neighed out but then drifted off to sleep.

The next time Kai woke up again she fell into the water as the men threw her in, she swam around happily feeling the water against her skin again but as she saw her tail she looked at the markings apron her self that the girl made as she sung her beautiful song. Kai neighed happily as she remembered the girl and still had the markings, she would be different than all her friends but at least she had an interesting story about the life outside of the water to tell them.

Congrats!

[Robyn Hode.]

Username:Abuse's Song
Name:Kai
Gender: Female
Age:14
Story:Kai slowly swam through the still water kicking around and laughing she neighed as she leapt out of the water. Happy as she could be, but as she saw the men near the water she tried to swim deeper into the water. She heard the voices echo into the water as the men stared down at her. Kai slowly swam towards the men as one of them put the palm of his hand on the surface of the water, she nuzzled his hand and rose her head out of the water to stare at the men. The men stared at her tail and look at each other the talked in different language that Kai didn't know. Kai neighed up at them as they put down a net towards her, she didn't know what the thing was but she tried to get away from it because whatever it was something screamed danger at her. But the men caught her and tossed her into a bag, they dragged her up a path towards some unknown place. As light finally filled the bag she was in she saw more men but this time they had different outfits some where in plain brown clothing with feathers but others were in different colors but they all had feathers apron their heads and other spots. As the men walked away and left Kai sitting there another creature walked up to Kai but instead of the cruel men this was a girl and she spoke calm to Kai keeping her calm as she started to spread a liquid apron her fur, as the girl sung a beautiful song Kai started to drift asleep.

Voices, voices pierced her sleep as she woke to men staring down at her body in disgust, a man threw a large stone at her body as Kai neighed out but then drifted off to sleep.

The next time Kai woke up again she fell into the water as the men threw her in, she swam around happily feeling the water against her skin again but as she saw her tail she looked at the markings apron her self that the girl made as she sung her beautiful song. Kai neighed happily as she remembered the girl and still had the markings, she would be different than all her friends but at least she had an interesting story about the life outside of the water to tell them.

Congrats!

Thanks so much ;u; I love this one so much