by sailorsolarsystem » Fri Sep 14, 2012 5:17 am
I know fail name XD not feeling too creative today lucky I drew him yesterday huh? XD
OK I have been working with some criticism from you guys and this is what I have come up with so far. (It's a bit better right?)
Height:14.1
Gender: Male
Owner: Austriagirl
Equid Name: Fabian
Equid Age: 5 years
Congrats Austriagirl!
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by Plainsong » Fri Sep 14, 2012 5:26 am
That's a pretty guy, you brought up there.

You really improved with the quipping but there's one thing that I noticed when I looked at the equids you've done - the brindling is always 'from here to there' why don't you just try something new and stop the brindling in the middle of the body or something? Make one part of the brindling come from the belly, while the other part comes from the back until they nearly meet in the middle or something like that.
Also you may want to look at natural horse colors again? It's not that I wouldn't like the colors you chose, but it looks very unnatural to me. (At least I've never seen a dark horse with creamy face/legs) But that's just a minor point.
I really like that you seem to try out the airbrush tool, don't be afraid to use a bigger variety of color tones to make the equid more 'shaped' and not so flat. Might be a personal opinion of mine, since I like that, but well... just saying. xD
All in all I think you're doing very well and I'm looking forward to see more of your designs... unfortunately I can't adopt any more equids though I would love to own one made by you. They have something really special about them. <3
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by debijayn » Fri Sep 14, 2012 5:28 am
Ooo, first one I've seen by you. Grats on getting into the dream team!

But wow. This guy is amazing. I'm in love. I like his dark colors. He has a couple different shades, but they all work nicely together. I also like his simple design. Easy to redraw, but yet still very striking to look at. Not so many stripes that he looks like a zebra, but enough to give him a unique, almost primal feel. Amazing job! Here's hoping he's my first. =)
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by myth; » Fri Sep 14, 2012 5:45 am
Wow OuO I loves him. Wouldn't mind winning him and am prepared to fight for the laddy. Do we fill out a form for him?
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by sailorsolarsystem » Fri Sep 14, 2012 5:48 am
ᴍʏᴛʜ + ᴅᴇsᴛɪɴʏ wrote:Wow OuO I loves him. Wouldn't mind winning him and am prepared to fight for the laddy. Do we fill out a form for him?
If you win him I'll ask you to fill out the form.
It says in the first post how you can win him, along with the rules

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by ~ F o l t i c e ~ » Fri Sep 14, 2012 5:52 am
Much better

I really like his design, especially with the socks. Still, it couldn't hurt to make more with louder patterns and colors. White, for example, with black, or maybe brown and orange. It's okay to have bright colors and hairs. Hope this helps

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by debijayn » Fri Sep 14, 2012 5:59 am
Love those stripes though. Especially how they start off larger at the bottom and taper off towards the top. Different and awesome.
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