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Re: Pound of Hope [A: OPEN/D: OPEN/COME. ADOPT. LOVE.]

Postby miike » Thu Sep 06, 2012 1:26 pm

I am looking to adopt...
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Kennel number:
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Name:
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Breed:
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Why do you want this animal and what will you do for it?:
I want this character because I feel she displays a certain side of my personality that is not shown very often. She seems small and quiet, but very spunky and hotheaded at times. I feel like I never had an innocent character and I really always wanted one. Also, I've never had a hoofed character.
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Re: Pound of Hope [A: OPEN/D: OPEN/COME. ADOPT. LOVE.]

Postby albinny trancy » Thu Sep 06, 2012 1:34 pm

I'd like some critique!
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Re: Pound of Hope [A: OPEN/D: OPEN/HAPPY 2ND ANNV, POH!]

Postby Auyn » Thu Sep 06, 2012 2:35 pm

[quote="Arathorn"][center]I am looking to adopt...
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Kennel number:
P53

Why do you want this animal and what will you do for it?:
I will

Name:
Lord Dragonbane

Nickname:
Bane

Age:
Immortal, currently 173 Years old. He gained his immortality around his 8th year, and his "price" was taken around his 150th.

Sex:
Male

Sexual Orientation:
Straight, although he has been gay in the past.

Current status:
Single, Mate was killed in the Fire, but he has never sought or found another mate or anyone decent for him.

Breed:
Gypsy Vanner Draft Horse

Way of Ruling:
Monarchy

Birth date:
August 15

Birth place:
On a small forest clearing near a river somewhere in North America (Border of Michigan and Canada)

Current residence:
Somewhere in Ohio

Occupation:
Former Lead Stallion, current Rouge

Title/Rank:
Lord, Master

Hobbies/Pastimes:
Racing, running, leading a herd, bossing other horses, eating, swimming and friendly fighting.

Talents/Skills/Powers:
Pulling/dragging heavy weights, racing, negotiating.

Personality:
Bane.
The name itself has a powerful and masculine ring to it, just like it's owner's personality.
Bane is a strong and brave stallion, who once was the lead stallion in his herd, until the fire came. After the flames drove and killed away most of his precious herd, he shed not a tear. He is self-reliant and courageous when needed, especially in front of others, when his reputation is at stake. He is also strong-willed, as he often is forced to live through tragic events happening to himself and others whom he loves or cares for, which is the cost of his immortality. Even though he often does not show much affection, he deeply cares for many other horses. Due to the fact that he does not have much experience on showing affection and love, he often has trouble showing it, as he often tends to be rude and aggressive, but that is just who he is, even though he struggles to fight it.
Basically he is a strong and proud leader, and he is respected for his wisdom and his skills, but he still has many troubles in his life, even though he tries to ignore it.

Past History

First Memory:
Sun in eyes, with blood stained on his pelt, as his parents were murdered shortly after his birth.

Most important childhood event that still affects him:
Murder of parents.

Why/How?
He wishes to avenge them and find out who did it.
Past failures he would be embarrassed to have people know about and why: He once challenged a lead stallion for the lead role in a herd one day when he was only a yearling. He nearly won, but was beaten due to tripping over a rock and cutting his foreleg.

Physical Characteristics

Height:
16 Hands (64 inches)

Weight:
1,500 Lbs

Posture:
Tall and proud, head sometimes held high

Build:
Big boned and sturdy, yet not over weight looking.

Expressions:
Generally monotone and bored looking.

Describe their smile:
When he smiles, which is rarely, it is small but soft and sweet. You can tell it is sincere.

Distinguishing features:
The dragon skeleton marking on his shoulder. It runs in his bloodline.

Style (Elegant, shabby, etc):
Like royalty. He will wear anything with gold or silver with gems, but only if he must.

Health:
Suffers from a bad cough in the fall, unknown causes.

Hygiene:
Always neat and clean. Rarely seen with dirt on his fur. He never eats food that has been bitten off of before.

Characteristics

Mannerisms/Poses/Movement:
Very smooth and elegant with a proud manner.

Describe their walk:
A smooth, gaited walk with a hint of elegance.

Habits/OCDs/Obsessions:
Always has to have the last word, and expects most horses to address him with, lord, master, or sir.

Do they curse, and if so, to what extent?
He curses when things go badly or against him, but only under his breath.

Write a piece of dialogue that this character might say (can be between someone else):
"I expect you to be fair, as i am royalty, and expect no less from such as you."

Voice:
A low voice, but a voice of one with wisdom and patience. Like a narrator

Describe their sleep patterns (light/heavy sleeper, no sleep, sleeps too often, etc):
Light sleeper, with a fair amount of sleep. When stressed, he sleeps less, and sometimes speaks in his sleep.

Psychological/Personality Attributes and Attitudes

Intelligence Level:
High, due to his experiences and his thinking level.

Character's long-term goals/desires in life:
Find a new herd to rule, and to find out his parents' killer.

Character's short-term goals/desires in life:
To find a mate, and to gain new knowledge about his previous herds' members.

How self-confident is the character?
Appears quite confident in public and around others, but has anxiety sometimes and frets.

How do they see him/herself?
He sees himself as a responsible and mature horse who deserves better then he has.

How do they believe s/he is perceived by others?
A strong and amazing master/leader, which is quite true at times.

Is this character generally dominant or submissive?
Like a King, dominant.

Patience level:
Fair. He will generally have more patience with foals.

If granted one wish, what would it be?
To have his parents alive again.

Biggest Vulnerability (non physical):
His past. He has never spoken of it, but has hinted to it a few times.

Greatest Fear:
Having another herd lost and being stripped of his powers.

Likes/Dislikes

Likes: His followers, being praised, having a strong reputation, and having a herd.

Dislikes:
Anything that will ruin his herd and his reputation, being disliked, and being reminded of his past.

Favorite Color:
Black and Gold

Simple Pleasures:
Sunsets, lakes, music, swimming and running, and being with friends.

Greater Pleasures:
Leading and ruling his herd

Where does this character like to hang out?
Near a lake or ocean, with a lot of land and green grass.

Motto/Personal quote:
"Respect will be given to those who show respect."

Emotional Characteristics

Describe character's sense of self-control:
Quite controlled, and he never looses his control.

How does this character act in public?
He is often calm and controlled, and he thinks carefully before speaking.

How does this character act in privacy?
He acts the same, just thinks different and sometimes paces.

How does this character act around strangers vs. how they act around friends?
Not much difference, just that he has more topics to talk about with his friends.

Reactions to----
Conflict/Danger:
Scrunches up his face and thinks of every possible solution.

Rejection:
Says or does nothing, just is a little upset.

Fear:
Usually thinks about it a lot and worries.

Change:
Welcomes it only if it brings good things to him.

Stress:
Paces and chews lower lip as he thinks about it often.

Being wrong:
Is shocked and tends to deny it.

Offending others:
Quickly apologizes then leaves to go slap himself mentally.

Praise:
Smiles and feels good inside.

Being hated:
Tells himself that everyone has an enemy, even though he doubts himself.

How does this character generally express themselves?
Calmly and secretly, he hides it in the way he acts and what and how he speaks.

How does the character view life? A positive thing;
a way to gain power and reputation.

How does the character imagine his/her own death?
Something brave and courageous, like how a knight or king should die. Brave in battle.


Other

What song best fits this character?

Story:

The brilliant stars glimmered as the cool breeze flowed through the willow trees' leaves and the grass danced along.
The wind swept small waves across the pond, which scattered the moon's yellow reflection.
"It's like another moon in the water," a large, black and white horse though as he gazed at the flickering reflection. The horse had a brilliant marking on his shoulder of a dragon skeleton, which was the marking of the Dragonharl family line. It was sought out for, yet cursed. Every owner of the so called "tattoo", had become immortal in some way or another. Yet the imortality came with a price. The price differed, depending on the owner, but it was generally something that the owner valued and cherised deeply. But this owner, Lord Dragonbane,
despised the immortality, and wished it gone. He had lost many horses and followers as his price, which also scorched his lands and forced him to leave his lands and surviving members to start over. His price was known as the Fire.

---------------------------------------------------Past Travel------------------------------------------------

The stars twinkled in the brilliant moonlight, caressing the faint glow that was given off by the moon.

A'Injukali...

The lone stallion gazed at the moon, recalling the sweet, melodic voice of his love as he was muttering her name.
The moon reminded him of her, as her name meant Child of the Moon.

Bane missed his herd already, but as being the lead stallion, he knew his role.
Once every month, the lead stallion from every herd must go to The Counsel, a group of the wisest and strongest horses in all the land. There, the lead stallions debate and discuss the news going on in their herd, and to discuss any danger or coming trouble.

The trip to the Counsel took a few hours at a smooth galloping pace, but Bane always set off early, just so he could take a trip to his birthplace, a small pond surrounded by willow trees.

This month, the word spread of a wildfire warning, as it was mid July, and the heat was drying everything in sight. Even the once luscious grass turned a sulky brown as the harsh rays gave no mercy. Bane knew the danger of leaving his herd alone during such a vulnerable time, but he knew there was no escaping the meetings. He rushed to the meetings, and spent less time at his pond then he usually took, but alas he was still too late.

The meeting was rushed, as everyone knew of the upcoming danger that could be lurking around every corner. Bane raced home, as fast as his aching hooves would carry him, and often tripped due to his rushing pace. As soon as he had arrived in his territory, however, he felt something was wrong. His pace quickened even more, and as he drew near, he saw a flicker in the night, with an orange glow drowning out the moonlight.
He froze, his hooves stuck fast on the dry ground as he watched in fear. The flames danced across his face, as if dancing in tune to the winds calm breeze.

He reared up and sped towards his fleeing herd, which were small little shadows racing away from the beautiful but dangerous flames. He called and called as long as he could, searching for his beloved. But his only response was the fire, crackling in the night, scorching the lead stallion's precious lands, leaving him with nothing but burnt grass and the faded scent of his herd members' fear.

After hours of searching through the now blackened forest, he gave up.
He hung his head low, and laid down for the night, now realizing that his payment has been taken.
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Re: Pound of Hope [A: OPEN/D: OPEN/COME. ADOPT. LOVE.]

Postby the force awakens. » Fri Sep 07, 2012 8:35 am

A minor WIP, I just need art of him and I will be done.

I am looking to adopt...
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Kennel number:
F55

Name:
Flying Wing, but most call him Fly.

Breed:
Flying Clownfish

Why do you want this animal and what will you do for it?:
I want him Flying Wing because he is so unique and I love his design. I will draw art of him and add him in my future fantasy story that he gave me the current inspiration for. I enjoy that he is such an amazing creature, and that he is very unique.

Personality:
Flying Wing has several different perspectives of his personality, so let's get started right away.

Popular
Everyone enjoys being around Flying Wing, because he is known to be the only Flying Clownfish at the school he goes to. Everyone fights to spend even just a few minute with him. He's not the type of popular you would expect, for example "stereotypical popular." He's actually very kind and most like him because of that. Others say Flying Wing is stupid and dumb.

Adventurous
Fly has been known to be a daredevil, and does many things most flying clownfish wouldn't do. Such as growing hair, then dyeing it a light shade of black (for example.) He'll jump off the top of the pinkish-white barrier reef he lives in, for example.

Shy
When around fish and animals he doesn't know or trust, Fly will be very shy. He'll run away and whimper, and sometimes even cry, if that is the situation. He doesn't show it much, but every once in a while Fly will run away from a situation like there's no tomorrow.


Likes:
Fly enjoys his popularity and loves nature. Nature is huge with the school of fish he schools with, but he always enjoyed it.

Fly also enjoys fish with a small amount of sarcasm, because most fish that harass him are always sarcastic.

Dislikes:
Fly hates glass and most trash from the land near his reef because once a 20x20 mirror was mistaken as food and many fish and other ocean animals died. That has much to do with his history.

Fly hates when the fish in this one group attempt to sing. The one group made Fly holler and go crazy.

History/Background:
Fly has a long history, just as how he has a long and diverse personality.

It started one day, when his parents had just started caring for three recently-hatched fish. Two fish ended up dying for some unknown reason, which made Fly's parents very overprotective and strict of Fly. He was forced to follow many "rules"; which included never leaving the house after sunset or before dawn, never going out to school without an adult, and not talking to anyone outside of the anemone that the three lived in. Deep inside, Fly hated them. He wanted them to die, or never come back to see Fly.

Soon, that wish came true.

Fly's parents were searching for food during a cold winter-like ocean. That was when the two found food. "Food" was really a mirror! When Fly found his parents dead, he was free. No one ever came to see Fly or his family, so there was truly no one to watch him.

Everything changed within a week.

Fly became a daredevil and finally went to school. Due to his "wings", Fly instantly became a daredevil and attended school. There were only a few people that hated Fly, and they became bullies instantly.

Everything stated in the last paragraph remains true to this day. Now I found him, and would love to have a creature like Fly. He's super kind, and I'd bring him with me everywhere.

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WIP

Other:
None.
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Re: Pound of Hope [A: OPEN/D: OPEN/COME. ADOPT. LOVE.]

Postby Desmond » Fri Sep 07, 2012 10:02 am

Arathorn: Make sure your form's skeleton is less than two pages, please. ^^; We spot-check forms that are excessively long when the majority of it is little slots like that. We don't allow forms that start off ridiculously long, it's a pain for us to read.
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Re: Pound of Hope [A: OPEN/D: OPEN/COME. ADOPT. LOVE.]

Postby Rabbitheart » Fri Sep 07, 2012 10:16 am

Is mine too long? It's on page 473 I think. I was thinking about finishing the story, but I didn't want to make it too long for you guys. XD
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Re: Pound of Hope [A: OPEN/D: OPEN/COME. ADOPT. LOVE.]

Postby Desmond » Fri Sep 07, 2012 10:21 am

Yours is fine, because you used the standard POH form. ^^; Most of it is story, so it's passes that rule. We made that particular rule because some people thought it'd be fun to submit forms like this one in other agencies, and all of us POH staffers loathe those. :c So we decided to auto-disqualify anything that - when all of the character's information and the story and such is stripped out - is longer than two pages.
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Re: Pound of Hope [A: OPEN/D: OPEN/COME. ADOPT. LOVE.]

Postby albinny trancy » Fri Sep 07, 2012 10:25 am

Is mine okay? :3 For Chance and Trigger, I mean.
So excited! Getting my first Kiamara in a month because of train. and .Blue.'s breeding!!! <333
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Re: Pound of Hope [A: OPEN/D: OPEN/COME. ADOPT. LOVE.]

Postby Desmond » Fri Sep 07, 2012 10:28 am

It's fine. ^^; Like I said, it's just the length of the skeleton/stripped out part of the form - the length of the content isn't measured for the rule. c:
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Re: Pound of Hope [A: OPEN/D: OPEN/COME. ADOPT. LOVE.]

Postby Rabbitheart » Fri Sep 07, 2012 10:29 am

Ah, okay. Thank you very much -3B-! :3 I've been stressing out over my form for awhile. I want to make sure that it's just right. XD So, if it's okay, do you think I should finish the story? ^^; I still want to avoid making it too long though...
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