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A Wolf's Life belongs to me.
All characters belong to me.
Rosie belongs to Emo-Goth-Wolf.

[prettypony0914]

i dont really understand the story
and try to make the words clearer
just some advice i guess

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I know all this, and I'll try and work on it; but we have only just begun on the storyline, and there will be a lot more. Later on.

[bearcups]

I think to improve on these you might want to look up pictures of wolf / dog skulls. For instance, the top right panel wolf's jaw looks broken and twisted, as well as flat. The writing isn't actually that bad, but I guess you could put more effort into writing it better.

[Green Arrow]

I like it :3

[breadstick]

Thanks. I had some issues that day, so I'll fix it as soon as possible. But I'm no longer looking for any Critisism. I try my best on these pages. I don't like my art being critisised that much. I'll try extra hard next time. I guess I'm just not too good at drawing them...I prefer not to use reference.

Thanks! :3

[bearcups]

Well, if you dont get criticism you won't improve. Thats how I managed to be a decent feral artist. ouo

and redlining. that helps so much.

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Sorry. And thanks anyway. ^.^

[cass.]

i think you have a cute, distinctive style. <33
although aeiou is right, to improve, crit and redline is always the best! ^^

don't take it the wrong way, work upon every sound bit of advice and you'll soon find yourself featured! :3
and the story is lovely ^-^