Re: New WoI Teenie: Halibell's Brother [[OPEN]]

Postby Chasta » Sun Mar 04, 2012 7:51 am

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His Name:
Akira
From Japanese 昭 "bright", 明 "bright" or 亮 "clear".


Personality:
Attitude on Life
Akira always tries to find the good things in life and tells them to those around him, even when he doubts the truth behind his words himself. In his eyes, it's better to make sure that everyone else is happy, while he will act as they do to keep them from worrying and to keep from causing them any problems. He doesn't see life as a bad thing, but he doesn't see it as a good thing, either. Life is just something that's there. Life is just something that is.
Attitude towards Family
Even though their parents left them, Akira holds nothing against Gorenheim or Xestra, as he understands that they had to give up their lives if they where to save Halibell's and his own. As for his sister, even though he is younger than she is, he still feels like he should be there to keep her safe from harm, whether she likes that or not.
Attitude towards Himself
While he thinks a lot of others, Akira doesn't think much of himself or pay much attention to what would be best for himself. No matter what he thinks of something, if it makes somebody else happy or will benefit somebody close to him, than he'll be sure to do it and do so well. Once his mind has been set to do something, he makes sure to get it done, no matter how difficult it is.
Attitude towards Others
While he doesn't care much for his own wellbeing, Akira will do everything in his power to please somebody else, even if doing so could get him in trouble. If somebody tells him that doing something won't do anything bad in turn, he does it without thinking through to check the possibilities of anything going wrong until he's already in a bad situation, then using the newfound information to try getting himself out.


Story:
Silence, and nothing but. That was what usually encompassed the land they lived in. But this day was different. This day was one that would never be forgotten by those who was there. It would haunt them forever.

The snap of a twig, the soft rustle of the wind through the underbrush; or was it? The glowing green eyes against the wall of black that was the night sky told the answer, and it wasn’t one that was to be liked. A low growl sounded from beneath the shadows moments before the forest burst to life, animals darting around in all directions. Before anyone knew what was going on, North Pack was under attack, and not one that would be easily escaped.

Make it stop. Make the thunder stop... Letting out a whimper, Akira thrashed in his sleep, copper eyes shooting open when the sound was less and less like thunder. It was then that he realized what was going on. That the sound wasn’t thunder, and it hadn’t been part of his dream. One moment he was swimming in the white waters with his sister in the lands of his dreams, the next, he was in the middle of an attack from the Kronadors. Within seconds, he went from lying on his back, to standing on his feet, weaving through pack members and enemies alike, trying to locate his sister.
Finally spotting the black female, he gave a quick yip to grab her attention before he was hit on the side by the tail of a Kronador, spinning him slightly before he took off running. Without even thinking of looking back to make sure Halibell was following, he sprinted away, his mind set on nothing but getting to a place that was safe, even if he could only stay there for a few day. “Halibell, you’d better keep up! I’m not going to be able to find you while keeping us both safe if you get yourself lost!” Even though she was older than he, Akira always felt like he should keep Halibell safe from harm.
Blue, teal, green... White! Catching a glimpse of the river up ahead, the young male lengthened his stride, which caused him to slow only slightly. Reaching the riverbed, he slid into a stop, using the gained momentum to launch him over the quick-moving water. With a soft thud, he landed softly, resuming his run only momentarily. When there wasn’t the sound of anyone landing on the other side after him, the male stopped and turned around, scanning the area of which he just crossed, finding nothing. Taking a few steps back towards the rushing water, Akira dropped his head and stopped, knowing he wouldn’t be able to go back to find her as long as the sounds of the others fighting remained. Pacing back and forth, he hoped to find any glimpse of his sister, but was able to find none.
Letting out a soft whimper, the brown male walked along the bank upstream, no longer knowing where he was supposed to go. He knew where he wanted to go and where Halibell would most likely try getting to as well, but had no idea of how to get there. He had always been surrounded by a loving family, but in the blink of an eye, that was all gone. Suddenly, he found himself completely and utterly alone.
For now, Akira knew he would be forced to find a place to stay the night; one that was close enough to the camp to continue trying to find any of the pack members, while still being far enough to not be detected. After leaving the mist that surrounded the river, the yearling found a low-hanging branch that would suffice for shelter for the remaining hours of night; of which how many where left, he had no idea. He would have been running for mere minutes, but he also could have been running for hours. Along with that time, there was also that which was used up while sleeping before the attack, trying to get away from the camp, and his unsuccessful search for his sister. Dropping onto his belly, the male crawled under his temporary shelter, turned so he was facing the direction he came, and fell asleep.
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Art(must):
First piece

What are his parent's names?
Gorenheim and Xestra, more commonly known as the Alphas of the Northern Pack.

What is a WOI?
What are Warriors of Isket?
Warriors of Isket fight to find peace for the land of Isket, against the Kronadors.

What does a Warrior of Isket look like?
A Warrior of Isket could be a big wolf with normal ears, long ears or really short ears, as well as having three different tails as well. Also A Warrior of Isket will always have really special Armor! Their armor also must alway have a chest plate and a back plate.


What armor do teenies get?
The Teenies get wooden, training armor.

[lor=#9b2e0f]Will you join the RP?[/color]
I can't see why I wouldn't. It will be a very fun way of getting back into role playing as I used to.

Have more of a story in my head, but not enough time to get it written down or posted.
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Re: New WoI Teenie: Halibell's Brother [[OPEN]]

Postby Junsui » Sun Mar 04, 2012 7:55 am

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His Name: Ryolan {Ree-Oh-Lan}
Personality: Brave but yet timid at times. He's pretty shy with females, but friendly with males. He wants to be a great warrior, and is all too quick to want to kill things. He's also gentle with animals that he doesn't eat, he respects them. He knows he's only young, but pretends he is grown and powerful. He can be a bit rude at times, and has almost no filter with his mouth. He's a handful, yes, but he can be loveable. Mischeivous as he is, he has a golden heart. He protects those he loves, and it's hard not to befriend him with his fiery spirit. He loves to just run out in any open spaces, and in training he takes it hard if he fails something. In truth, he is sometimes too proud of himself, but other times he doesn't take enough credit for the warm heart he has. He is a good friend to have, except for the times when he feels like playing pranks. He's not sentsitive, and if someone where to pick on him, he would laugh and throw it right back at them. He also hunts in his spare time, but he's rather clumsy in enclosed places. He also trips over his own paws occaisionally, but laughs at himself and gets right back up.
Autumn is his favorite season, for his coat camouflages well in that time. Playing in the leaves is also a playful habit of his in that season. He loves how long his legs are, and challenges other males to races all the time. He doesn't know it, but some females admire him for this trait, despite how cowardly he can act sometimes. He may be a lazy one at times, but only when he knows he can without harming anything. He acts like a leader, and quite a few follow him. He is respectful of those with more power than him, unless they act unfair. He knows right from wrong all right, and he rarely does things wrong.

Story:Ryolan could not hear his sister whining from the roar of the waterfall, but if he had, he would have been even more terrified than he was. Ryolan leapt down from the waterfall, curious to see if he was safe for now. He was alarmed to find that Kronadors surrounded him, and he dashed away. Racing in a zigzag pattern, Ryolan fought to stay ahead of the Kronadors. He panted hard, chest throbbing. He stopped to look around from behind a jagged spear of rock, and could not find his sister. His eyes widened. S..Sister? He thought, but shrugged it off, guessing that she was dead and he soon would be as well if he didn't move. He darted away just a a head appeared from behind the rock, hissing in a snakelike fashion and giggling madly. Ryolan darted to the left and right repeatedly to avoid their snapping heads, gaining on him. He leapt over a small crag and yelped in fear. He then cursed himself for attracting more Kronadors and realized there was no one to hear him howl for help. He used the last reserves of his energy to throw himself ahead of the Kronadors, gasping hard, each breath like fire in his mouth and flames in his lungs. Finally, he could run no more and turned around. Snarling fiercely, and bit the head of the nearest Kronador and leaped away from the jaws and landed on top of two. Scared out of his life, he thought he saw his sister, but in his mind he knew he was close to blacking out and was hallucinating. Smashing two heads together, he flung himself on top of a rock and watched as the Kronadors slowly crept up the rock, cursing at him for being hard to catch. If I ever get out of this, I'm going to brag about how hard-to-catch I am to the other Warriors. He thought before thinking, That doesn't matter! Why would you think that when you are almost as helpless as a newborn pup on ice!
Whimpering in a pathetic fashion, he sighed and readied to face his fate. They were coming too fast, and too many were as well. I haven't even killed one, just made one unconcious for now. he thought, tears brimming on his amber eyes. But then he narrowed them, and leapt off the rock with great force. The lizard-like Kronadors hissed in annoyance and chased after him, but he was far away by then. He kept going until he found a small cave, and planned to cave part of it in if the Kronadors made their way in. Loosening the rock and soil, he whipped himself to the very end of the cavern, and waited for the evil ones to charge in.
They never did, but intelligent Ryolan knew better than to come out, so he ate a small passing mouse as a snack. They could easily ambush him from the front, so he knew he needed to find another way out before the cave caved. Sniffing in the dark, he found and small, soft patch of soil between all the hard rockon the cave floor, and began to dig faster than a terrified mole. The earth slowly grew deeper and the hole grew larger, but time was running out. Earth was crumbling from the cave roof and oxygen was running low as well. He found himself gasping from time to time until eventually his paw was surrounded by light. A path! He thought. He dug it deeper until, after a few hours, he was able to worm his way through. When he looked out, he was suprised to find that it was night, and saw his blood scattered on the earth, from when the Kronadors attempted to ambush him. He kept a close eye on the shadows, carefully watching his surroundings. Seeing as it was too dark to see if anyone had lived, he found a close shelter of trees and hills, and nestled himself in a blanket of leaves and soil. It was warm and thick, comforting him. He slept in peace in the gentle meadow, for he was far too tired to sleep with fear. Hoping that the Kronadors had left, he attempted to flush his worries away by sleeping, but soon he was awoken by his own fears. Every hair on his spine bristled, and a slow growl emerged from his mouth. He leapt upward, looking around him. The woods seemed awfully quiet, too quiet by a WOI's standards. He looked at the dark, murky forest which he had believed to have been a meadow, and quickly thought to get out of here when a snapping sound came from just where his ear was a second ago, and he sanrled and raced away, thinking he was lucky to have woken up now. Panting to gain more breath and therefore more energy, he dodged another snapping head, yelping as blood began to trickle from his left foreleg. I hope I die as a warrior, He thought. He turned and landed on a Kronador, snarling in it's face until he jumped as it bit him, running in the opposite direction of the Kronadors. The waterfall he had been to before grew larger in his vision, and he slammed into it, washing the blood clean off of him. Almost all of it was his own. He could not find any of the pack where they had been but an hour ago, and he realized the Kronadors were cornering and ambushing him. He raced to hide somewhere else, and he heard a distinct call that sounded like his sister, Halibell. "Halibell!" He cried, happy to know that he had one wolf left in his family. He charged toward the sound, ignoring the blood gushing from his leg, and the ringing in his ears, and burst through the trees only to see she wasn't there. But the Kronadors, however, had gotten frustrated and gone to search for other WOI to hunt, helping him to slow his heartbeat and calm himself down. If the pack has hidden, the Kronadors will never find them, those scaly beasts. He said, and promised himself to go look for them once he had gotten a good rest and was hidden just as well. However, the imaginary howls of his sister in his head did not cease...
Art(must): I will draw and order art.
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Second: viewtopic.php?t=1067883
Third: viewtopic.php?f=30&t=1069361
Fourth: {Ordered} viewtopic.php?f=33&t=1081102 They made the lines for me.
Fifth: Another SAI file: http://i56.tinypic.com/25spe8g.jpg
What are his parent's names? Lord Gorenhiem and Lady Xestrah. They sacrificed their lives for their children, including Halibell and Ryolan, in the battle with Kronadors.
What is a WOI? Warrior of Isket. Their enemies are Kronadors, and they live in a beautiful land of many creatures.
What armor do teenies get? Wooden armor, used for training, until they get their own.
Will you join the RP? Of course. c: He will be a wonderful character to RP. ^^
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Re: New WoI Teenie: Halibell's Brother [[OPEN]]

Postby CaptainFirefly » Sun Mar 04, 2012 7:56 am

O.O *jaw drop* Markinggg!!!!
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Re: New WoI Teenie: Halibell's Brother [[OPEN]]

Postby zima. » Sun Mar 04, 2012 8:04 am

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Re: New WoI Teenie: Halibell's Brother [[OPEN]]

Postby sodafarts » Sun Mar 04, 2012 8:54 am

Your Name: ~Just.Peachy~

His Name: Khuda (KOO-duh)

Personality: Shy, almost reclusive. Other wolves often make him nervous so he sometimes just all together ignores them. However, he really likes newborn/young pups and is driven to do whatever it takes in order to protect them. Normally he would never even hurt a fly, but he has such a deep hatred for Kronadors that it does not bother him a bit for killing one. Even though he is big, Khuda is not very fast at all, but his mind is. Instead, he uses his smarts, size, and strength to fight, and usually comes out on top.

Story: wip

Art(must): coming up!

What are his parent's names? Lord Gorenhiem and Lady Xestrah, if I spelled them correctly ^^

What is a WOI? wip

What armor do teenies get? Wooden armor.

Will you join the RP? Of course, what else would I do with him besides art? XD
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Re: New WoI Teenie: Halibell's Brother [[OPEN]]

Postby Emma-Chan » Sun Mar 04, 2012 9:14 am

I absolutly love hims Neara! too bad i has one or id try out for this beauty
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Re: New WoI Teenie: Halibell's Brother [[OPEN]]

Postby rem sleep » Sun Mar 04, 2012 9:19 am

Your Name:
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His Name:
Muhashmy
[Muh-ha-shee-mee]
Translating from Swahili into, "Weak".

Personality:

Shy
Shmy [shee-mee] is a very timid individual who shies away from most strangers. He feels uncomfortable when around people he considers strange or anyone new. He doesn't mean to be so shy, but whenever he does reel himself into a conversation it's a Pandora's Box.

Social
As stated above, though shy Shmy loves to run his mouth. He enjoys talking with everyone and everything, his brother especially.

Curious
Shmy loves to explore. He can't seem to help himself, but whenever he sees something not known to him he feels he must check it out. For future reference. ;)

Generous
Shmy is willing to give anything and everything so someone else might smile. He believes, somewhere someone is smiling. And that someone, may as well be you. :)

Good-Natured
He's a very sweet WoI who loves to help out. Even though he's very shy he loves to talk and socialize with others. He's very generous with everything he has, including his trust. Most who know him consider him 'sweet'.

Likes
Item ~ Why

Clouds ~ They float so freely in the air...It expresses freedom like no other...

Raspberries ~ They're very sweet and they're just so juicy!~

Winter ~ The snow looks so elegant on the floor of the forest...

Fall ~ The leaves are simply to curious not to investigate.

Rabbits ~ Fun to chase! :D

Swimming ~ Fun! The water's nice and cool~

Snowflakes ~ Cool to the touch, catching them is enjoyable.

Dislikes
Item ~ Why

Hot ~ Too warm! MELTING. D:

Squirrels ~ Not much meat on those buggers.

Blueberries ~ No distinctive taste.

Kronadors ~ Of course. :I

Story:
WIP

Art(must):

Made by me:
Working on it~ <3

Made by others:
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As a little animated wolf, by DJ Pon-3 ♫

Getting more! :D

What are his parent's names?
Gorenheim and Xestra, more commonly known as the Alphas of the Northern Pack I think. :)

What is a WOI?
A warrior of Isket battling to find peace and protect the land of Isket against the Kronadors, horse-like reptiles that fight to defeat the peacebringing WoIs.

They are big wolves with varying ear sizes and tails. Only three variations are available for tails and ears and they always have armor with a chest and back plate.

What armor do teenies get?
Wooden armor, until they mature all they can have is training armor.
That is, until they find their own. ;)

Will you join the RP?
Yes! :D
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Re: New WoI Teenie: Halibell's Brother [[OPEN]]

Postby Vixen_Roe » Sun Mar 04, 2012 10:03 am

Oh my lord *grapples insanely* :D

Your Name: Why, Vixen_Roe, of course :)

His Name: Segavax

You may not remember Neara, but a while back I said on your livestream that I wanted a charachter called Segavax but couldn't find a suitable one?? Well, now I have :)

Personality:

Note: Please read the story first, so the personality doesn't spoil it :)

Strong of will and fierce of heart: He has grown a lot both menatlly and physically since the last time he saw his sister. He feels that since he is unfit for battle because of his innability to follow orders, which stems not from ignorance but from a hearing impairment, he feels that he must prove himself in other ways. He works hard in the camp, pushing himself to his physical limit and making an effort to always catch more prey than the day before.

Anti-Social: Since the fatal night when a massive group of Kronadors savaged his land and people and Segavax was forced to flee to the Western pack as a teenaged Warrior, Segavax has secluded himself from others. Since he is mostly deaf in both ears, he does not have many friends and has not yet been on his mission to find his armour, even though he is most definetley old enough, for the Alpha Warriors fear he will not return. His few attempts at making friends have failed because he thinks they think he is an idiot and, though they do not mean it, the other teens look down upon him and speak as if he slow of mid as well as hard of hearing. Because of this, his only true friends are Dillav (a young Warrior) and the old Northern Shaman, he of many names.

Wise: Being unable to train to fight, Segavax spends a lot of time with the Shaman of the Northern tribe. The wizened old Warrior is also hard of hearing (because of age, not a near-fatal occurence like Segavax) so he and Segavax find each other to be excellent company. Through gestures, occasional speech and sometimes telepathy (with aid from the butterbirds), the Shaman teachesand passes on much of his knowledge. Segavax enjoys spending time with the Shaman, the he is more interested in the stories of great battles than knowing which sub-species of Henora will give you a stomach ache.

Clever: Because of his hearing impairment, Segavax was a terrible hunter for the Northern pack when he first arrive in their land. Being scarcely able to hear himself, he would crash through the undergrowth like a month-old pup, scaring off all the prey in a mile radius. No Warrior would deign to hunt with him, and he soon learnt he must be more intelligent in his hunting. Soon, instead of racing through the brush in hot pursuit, he began using different hunting techniques. In Autumn, he would be almost completely camoflagued in the red-green leaves, hiding unseen and pouncing at the last moment. In Spring and Summer, he taught himself to hold his breath for long minutes at a time, lurking like a 'gator in the water, waiting for a deer to come for a drink in the sweltering heat. And in Winter, he created clever traps to ensnare his prey before delivering the clever blow. So, it may not have been the most ethical way to hunt, but Segavax bought back mighty amounts of prey.

Fun-loving and Brave: When not hunting or biding his time with the Shaman, Segavax likes to play with the younger Warriors. One of his favourites is Dillav. Segavax loves Dillav a he is one of the only Warriors who doesn't mind having to repeat himself constantly, or spending long periods of time in silence. Segavax teaches Dillav some of his hunting techniques and, in return, Dillav teaches Segavax what he learnt in training. Segavax would protect Dillav with his life, as he is the only Warrior other than the Shaman who understands him.

Story:

Note: I thought I would start with Segavax's perspective on the night the Kronadors invaded, if that's okay :]

Segavax looked around, his amber-ice eyes blazing and fearful as he took in the bloodied scene around him. His beloved home, the Northern pack, was overrun with Kronadors.

After the last Great Battle, when the Kronadors were feircely outnumbered by Warriors and faced near extinction in the aftermath, they went into hiding in the depths of the Oak Forests, swelling in numbers and training their young into killing machines. Three years later, just when the Warriors of the Northern pack had fallen into the illusion of safety, the Kronadors burst out of the forests deep in the night, catching the Warriors off-guard and quickly and efficently scattering their troops.

When the wave of Kronadors struck the unprepared back, Segavax was lost in a sea of mayhem and writhing bodies. Seperated from his family, he blindly struck against the heavy, scaled bodies surrounding him. Being only a young teen, he stood no chance against fully-grown, well-trained Kronadors. Just when all seemed lost, his father burst through the crowd, dismembering a Kronador as he leaped into battle. Though his fathers will was strong and his battle-fury mighty, his wizened old body couldn't last and he soon fell under a writhing mass of Kronadors. Father! Segavax screamed, trying desperatley to reach him, but it was too late. Frantically searching for a glimmer of hope, Segavax saw his sister cowering behind the body of their mother as she fought off 5 beasts. Mother, Halibell! He called, racing towards them. When he finally reached the remaining members of his family, his mother's body fell, her eyes wide as she saw her children. Run, my brave pups she whispered as the last breath of life slipped out of her.

Seeing his sisters stunned gaze, Segavax blindly ran straight into a line of snarling Kronadors. He lost sight of Halibell as he fought his way through the pack and burst into the cool forest. Racing wide-eyed through the forest, Segavax ran head-first into a large boulder that loomed out of nowhere. Head pounding and tears streming down his cheeks, Segavax fought for conciousness. He ran deep into the forest, his head muddled as he struggled to remember a thought nagging at him. But he could not think anything through the roar in his ears and the pounding of his heart. Stumbling through the forest, needles whipping at his face, he came to the edge of a cliff. He shook his head firmly, sure that there was something he had forgotten, but his thoughts were too vague and fuzzy and, as the dark shapes of Kronadors burst through the trees, he did the only thing he could think to do. Segavax jumped.

As the blood roared in his ears and the pounding of his head and heart grew ever louder, Segavax snarled at the oncoming waves. Sure that he was going to die, he sqeezed his eyes shut and slammed head-first into the crashing waves of the Calimari Waterfall . His ears instantly filled with water and clogged his ear canals. Body aching and mind numb, only a name remained stuck in his mind...

HALIBELL Segavax awoke screaming. A dull droning in his ears pulled him back to reality as his words reached his mind dull and numb-sounding. His body sweat-coated and shaking, Segavax slowly began to reassemble himslef. Halibell is gone. He thought firmly to himself, but something seemed to nagg at him, the strange sense that he could still save her, that all was not lost when he blindly abandoned her so long ago...

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1st (of the first part of the story :))

What are his parent's names?

Father's name is Gorenheim and Mother's name is Xestra, They are the High Alphas of the North Pack. They both died when Segavax and Halibell were torn apart.

What is a WOI?

A Warrior of Isket is a wolf-like creature who live on Isket. Their are four different types of Warriors and they range in rarities from common to very rare.

What armor do teenies get?

They have wooden armour, then, when they go through the trial all teenies must, they find the perfect armour. This armour is made out of metals and jewels, mostly.

Will you join the RP?

Of course, though I may not be able to post as much as I would like, I shall try. I would love for Halibell and Segavax to have a reunion, no?? ;)

WIP!!
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Re: New WoI Teenie: Halibell's Brother [[OPEN]]

Postby Reine Des Loups » Sun Mar 04, 2012 10:13 am

Image <----- Chasing dreams did this <3 Thank you Chasing!









First lets start with why I want him. Durrhurr everyone wants him, but this is my way of seeing him. I also love made up names, so kyzak doesn't mean anything x3

I know there are a lot of these, so why not give it a try?
Good Gog that face * dies* Its so innocent! ;u;
Ive been desperatly trying for a woi, Trying out for everyone I see. But this one, I saw out of curiosty. I looked at wrath wip before returning to your gallery. I realized, just as I was about to click page 2, that there was a new woi! I went to see him, and I was starstruck. I needed him! Those eyes burn so bright, and those Holographic markings, Probably people think ' who cares what the hay it has holo markings' I didn't see it that way. Those eyes and markings drew me in. The burned so much. I just needed the innocent little creature with such beautiful eyes <3
It would make my dad more than happy, becuase not long ago, well a family member of ours, ( Who was special to us all) Died :c
And if I did get him, I promise ill keep him forever in my heart <3 And rp with him and deepen his personality there.
And I think that is the shortest way of explaining how I want him. There are TONS more reasons c:
Would explode if I won c:

I may add more to story. Neara, I really hope I win, I know im not the greatest artist but I just hoep I do win c: Ive been through lots and lots of sad stuff lately :c And, as you know, If I didn't want a WoI this badly I wouldn't put my hours into this.

Your Name: iceeon. In the rp ( If I win him Goog gog I really hope I do) You may feel free to call me Ice, I, or Ic.
His Name: Kyzak Tohone Lumus He doesn't like to be called Kyzak Tohone Lumus He pefers being called Kyzak. Only in dire need do they call his full name. He is often called: Kyzak Ruhikana Tsunsue, but thats not his actual 'last name' His mother gave him and Halibell different 'last names'. Halibell's was: Ruhikana Tsunsue and Kyzak's was: Tohone Lumus
I chose this name because it reflects so much. The name, like his holo markings, show his true colors. When you see the written name, it sounds evil, a beast, but when you say it, The name slips out so kindly, so sweetly, It also reflects his personality, where he is almost beastly at sometimes, but a chunk of love at other times. Also in the rp ( if I win him) If any wolf is in dire need feel free to call out KTL! Instead of Kyzak Tohone Lumus ;)

Personality: General personality
A soft and gentle wolf. He hasn't seen Halibell in quite some time. They had to part their ways when the troops pushed them back. He longs to meet his sister once again, know that he knows where she is. He is shy around most isket wolves, especially since they stare at his holo markings. Every second of the day, he can't stop thinking about Hallibell.

Social He loves to talk and make friends. Although he doesn't have many, he is always loyal to his very few friends, and most of that is because they dont see him as a shiny, holographic wolf who is a worry face. They see his true self.



Sweet Natured Kyzak is Very sweet natured, he wouldn't want to harm a thing unless it hurt him or is posing a threat.



Cautious Since he lost Halibell just because he jumped that waterfall, Kyzak Always thinks twice and wasn't as spunky as He used to be. You can often see him watching where he places his paws, as for that became a habit when he had to survive in the muddy, peaty banks of the Kronodar territory.



Clever Kyzak is all-together clever. He discovers he hunts best in Summer, because the dry arid trunks and leaves of trees look like his coat. Sometimes he just has to sit there and the prey comes to him. In the dry season of summer, His Holographic markings look like a shiny pool of water. His Holographic markings, he counts as a blessing. In winter ( The hardest time to hunt of all) The holographic markings look just like the seeping, cool ice. He often catches the most of any woi in this season. In spring in the hardest, because His coat color stands out. However, If he lays near a bank, his camoflauge sometimes works. Kyzak Hunts mostly near the banks of the rivers, because the muddy ground looks like his coat.


Kind Kyzak is very kind. He always wants to help, everyone, anytime. He often helps Igino. He helps him ALOT. Kyzak has a good reputation, and most of his friends dont care that he's a prince, a royale prince. Kyzak is nice, so most woi's ( Except the really self-centered ones) Dont care that he is highly ranked and royal. Even though he is kind, Some think that he is a prince so he will be lazy. So most dont want to hunt with him. That is not true because Kyzak is one of the most clever hunters.

Fierce And Loyal Since his mother's and father's Death, It has made Kyzak more cautious and secretive. It has changed him more than that too. Since the death of his parents, Kyzak has become very protective of the Central Pack. He fights with his life and is not afraid to die. Kyzak doesn't have the greatest reputation on fighting, because most think the attack of the kronodars has made him flimsy and weak. But it has made him stronger. Kyzak tries his best in fight-training, knowing that if he masters it, he might end up saving them all. He is not afraid to die, only because he'll be with his pack once again. He is strong of heart and tough.


Sensitive As metioned before, Kyzak is fierce. That doesn't mean he doesn't have feelings, though. Kyzak can get his feelings hurt very easily. The slightest taunt can make him depressed the whole day. Luckily, not many taunt him. Except the rudest pups and teenies. He often goes to his friends when he is hurt, and they make him feel better. Kyzak, once hurt, Doesn't recover easily.

Obidient Kyzak, Being the son of highly ranked alpha's and the older sibling, Much was expected from Kyzak. However, Play was allowed. Not being stubborn like his sister Kyzak loves to learn. He scorns anyone who is misbehaved or rude, most would not expect this from the almost always kind acts of Kyzak. Kyzak is proud, and hopes that he is doing the right thing and making his Ma and Pa proud. Even though he left his sister. He wants nothing more than that. Kyzak belives if you give kindness, you should be given politeness and kindness back. Those who do not do this are shunned and ignored.


Patient "Patience is virtue" That was what his parents belived. Unlike his sister Kyzak is able to sit through things patiently with out squirming whining, or fussing. He can wait for hours just to get permission to teach the pups how to hunt ( Play-hunt) Kyzak was supposed to be very patient in his learnings in the northern pack. He had to be etremly, extremly patient when he learned how to read. ( One thing Halibell was able to focus on!) He also had to be patient and clear his mind when he was learning new battlemoves and hunting moves. One ignored move could kill them all.


Shy Kyzak is shy, he is kind, good-natured and obident and patient, but even with all that he is very shy. When he sees a female he likes, he often shies away and speaks almost in whispers. When this happens you can often see him flicking his gaze at the female for quite some time. Sometimes Kyzak is shier on some days, sometimes he's more outward.






Kyzak Isn't all together the one that wants to be the ' best warrior' He doesn't care, as long as he is happy and treated well.

Likes: Females, even though he is shy around them. He is a showoff X3
His sister, Belli ( His nickname for Halibell)
His long-gone parents,
and
His friends
AND soothing things.
Thesea. Was his best friend before she died.
Snow! He loves to run in it! ( Not counting falling in the drifts X3)
Shallow water ( He loves the icy coldness on his feet! <3)

Dislikes: Evil, mean things,
Competitive Males ( Ugh, what showoffs)
Kronodars, ( Why in heck would he like them >:I)
Tormenters, ( AGHH!)
and the troops who drove him out. ( Durrhurr, They killed his parents >:{ )
And the way most of his pack, {except for his parents, Halibell and himself} died of starvation.
Luther. He doesn't hate him, he just would of liked a little more 'classy' Mate for his sister.
Summer. He hunts the best in this season but its so hot
Spring. Its a pain-in-the-neck for him to hunt in spring.
Deep water. Its traumatized him for his life.





Story: ( I made it kindof short so I wouldn't kill you) NOTE: REAL NAMES OF REAL WOI'S ARE MENTIONED IN THIS! DONT BE UPSET ALL WOI'S GO TO RIGHTFUL OWNERS! I JUST DIDN'T WANT TO SAY ' THE WOLF' MADE UP 1 WOLF, MIIKAA SHE IS NOT REAL A WOI! Thank you ^^
I thought the week was perfect, until that day. The Night of the attack.
Fear struck the air. Wolves screamed as there lives were cut short. Why did today have to happen? Isket was supposed to be peaceful!
I gasped as around me countless wolves were slain, without a word, just slain then thrown aside like prey with maggots. I gasped in horror as my father took on one of the biggest Kronodars, The Royale- I was cut off with a shriek to see my father, slain on the sandy ground. " No! Da!" I thought. It was moments later when my mother, covered in smeared dust and blood leaped at the Royale Alfa Kronodar, Screaming at us to run. The one who killed my father. That one, was taking on my mom. The Kronodar swiped her away with a fierce blown paw, slamming her against a rock and knocking her Dead. " MOM!" I screamed at the top of my lungs. Wait...Where was HALIBELL? The last time I saw her at a glance was when she was cowering behind my mom's limp panting wildy. I wouldn't run without my little sister following. When the Kronodar lost focus of them I saw him look happily at a corner. " Mmmmm a princess feast! Eh? My buddies will like the taste of you. " NO HALIBELL!" I screamed, I raced into the Kronodar but was backed off with a kick in the face by a hoof. Pain seared through my voice and I tasted the tang of salty blood. " Run.....Halibell.....Now..." " No!" She screamed. " Im not leaving without you" I cast her a grateful glance and then whispered " run" When The Kronodar got bored and distracted. When we took off I realized the Kronodar was following us. I went faster. Fur on end I ran...and ran... I felt fire nipping at my feet, but I knew the 'fire' Was hot kronodar breath. I didn't want to see the ugly drooling beast behind me, so, I kept my focus ahead, Hoping Halibell was somewhere next to me or beside me. Suddenly I felt the fire release. But faint traces were still there, So I automatically asumed there were a few young beasts following me. I kept running until I had to go into a zig-zag formation. I gritted my teeth And closed my eyes as I stepped on a thorn, And when I opened my eyes, I realized I lost them, but I heard voices yelling: " The prince is over here!" and such, so I kept running, my legs ached and my heart pounded, My paws bled but I kept going. In my panic I forgot something..Something improtant...But my memory was to blurred by panic to remeber. I stopped by accident fumbling backwards because I realized the ground curled away, as if pointing to the Roaring white falls next to it. Blood roared in my ears. I had two choices. Jump, or get brutually mauled. I jumped. The air around me raced by me, whistling in its unknown language as I fell...Down...down....down..... The fall was nerve wracking, And I felt gravity slip by as if it was abandoning me. I hit with a splash realizing at the last minute I couldn't swim that well, especially with a roaring thundering waterfall right next to me and bloodthristy kronodars calling your name. I fought the Icy coldness trying to keep my calm. In my flailing I realized I had gone under water, noticing only because Once I saw white, now I just saw black. Cold, Icy, black...Was I dying? Reality came back. I WAS under water! And on top of it, my vision was blurred. I struggled to get air but only got a heapful of water in my lungs " Halgibegg!" I called . My speech distorted by the water in my throat. I spat out as much water as i could and thought frantically " swim swim swim!" I pounded with my forepaws until they were to tried to go anymore. It was the voices of the Kronodars that kept me going until I reached the bank. For A minute I just laid there, stunned. I got up slowly,The wind made my drenched coat worse, so When I got out of the mud I ran as fast as a could, as hard as I could. " Maybe Darzek and Rayo can help me" I thought, knowing of the brave warriors because of my mom. I was panicked, And I swear I could have a heart attack from fright. I ran, and ran. And ran. until finnally I HAD to rest... My muscles ached and my head throbbed from running to much. I couldn't go on.I scoured halplessly for a safe den, free of kronodars. " Kronodars are everywhere, its there territory" I thought bitterly. In my blurry scour I spotted a 'cliff' with quite a large crack. Not big enough for Kronodars, of course, though. I ran right for it, Slipping my upper body easily through the crack. The rest of my body I had to push though. Panting as I fell sideways through the crack. To my surprise, Inside the cliff was much bigger than I expected. My heart slowed as I relaxed and felt drowsy, and safe. I curled around anixiously trying to sleep. I heard the rough voice of kronodars outside that made my heartbeat faster. It was about an hour before I finnaly slept peacefully. " Ive just ruined my life" And My family was my life..." I thought, before finally drifting to sleep...
I woke to the rank, hot smelly scent of Kronodars. I thrust my muzzle to the crack to see if I could spot any. There were none. I squeezed my body out, then with a plop I landed on my head. I got up, shaking the dirt of my fur. I scented for prey, but my nose was clogged with the sticky, smelly mud. I pawed at my muzzle, growling. Then as Quick as the fastest warrior, a rabbit came blurring out. I raced after it, Pounding through the peaty black mud that was the Kronodars home. As I rounded the corner I was close enough to get it so i leaped...But was suprised to have my jaws land on nothing. But their was something odd..The ground wasn't muddy! I looked down to see lush blue grass tickling my toes as If saying ' welcome back!' Then reality came back. " I need to find Rayo, Or atlest Darzek!" I bounded forward, letting the wind carry me. Ruffling my fur and cooling my skin it felt like hours before I finally felt like I needed rest, no matter how much my legs hurt. I needed my rest before nightfall.

I layed softly in the grass, i watched the silky blades toss to-and-fro, to-and-fro, it was so mezmorising... " Can you wait to see your sister?" A voice yapped at him from inside. The thought was too much for Kyzak and he was going to let a made-up voice rise that happiness any higher. He wouldn't be able to take it if it did. " Hallibell! Oh Halibell I miss you.." I thought longily. I rose slowly from the sandy patch I was laying, and looked at the beautiful moon shining above me, making my holographic markings shine lightly " I cant wait to see you!" I thought happily. I need rest,though..but of course I was going to see Halibell! Now , I need to get my rest....

A rosy light filled my eyes as I opened them wearily to the sound of a voice. " Halibell..?" I asked sleepily. " Whaat? NO!" Dont say a word and follow me!" The voice said. The speaker turned out to be a small-boned wolf with odd blue stripes. " Whoa!" Who are YOU?" I asked. " Shhh!" The wolf hissed. " My names Mikkaa" She said in a barely hearable whisper. " Now be quite, their coming for you!" " Who?" I whispered. " The krona-" The sentence was cut off by a loud roar. " Thats him!" The wolf whimpered, thats Him! The alfa Kronador! Hes coming for you!' I gasped. " The one who killed my father" I thought weakly. I felt sick. The alfa was supposedly to be a huge green-black kronador with eyes that seemed to be acid, burning through you. " Does Rayo know?" " UGGGH dangit! I don't know Rayo! Im a loner! OK?" I couldn't blame her, if it weren't for me and Halibell's mothers description of him, I would never known he existed. " We have to hide! I hissed. But when I turned around to where Miikaa was, I just saw a flurry of white fur running for its life, I could take the cue! I darted off right after, panting. I never had been good at speed " And never will" A naging voice hissed. " You'll die!" I shook the annoying voice away and focused on the pawprints of Miikaa to know where we were going. I rounded to a stop as I stood gaping at a wide river, with Miikaa at its banks. " We'll die!" She howled. " I can't swim!" I didn't care, I grabbed her scruff and raced as fast as I could before plunging into the cold river. When we finnaly made it to the bank, Miikaa stared at me as If I were the Royale Afla himself. " Idiot!" She hissed. Before marching off. " Alone again? Eh?" The annoying voice taunted. " Now that your off your track youll NEVER Find Halibell!" The voice spat. Then suddenly, as I was about to give up, I saw a flash of yellow. " D-D-Darzek?!" My mon had told me about him, and I needed a pack to join, PLUS maybe he could help me find Halibell! D-Darzek?" I called, the yellow wolf spun Around and looked at me. " Yes?" He asked firmly. " Who are you and why are you here?" He snarled." I- Im lost and can't find my sister.." Darzek looked at me, almost shockingly. His mean demeanor vanished. Very well then" Darzek said proudly. " You may take refuge at our grounds" He said, and turned around. " Follow me" He said, and I obeyed. Little, very little did I know, I was going to become a full member of the Isket Wolves....

" Higher! Faster!" Darzek barked. I did as told and whipped around at my full speed, coming around back and biting his tail. Of course, I didn't put pressure! " Much better!" Darzek yelped. " Now thats the end of today's training" We had done much more than that so I obeyed and went back to my small den, a simple mouthy cave with a tiny pool of water. The rosy sunset color of the sky, soon faded to be a pitch black, with stars comforting me. I soon fell into a deep, deep sleep thinking nothing will ever hurt me again.., only to awaken by that nagging voice. " So you think thats it?" You REALLY think the Alfa Royale Kronador has stopped hunting you?" Imbecile!" The voice snarled. " Well hes after you, and be prepared No-worry!" The voice howled, before fading to a whisper. I shoved deeper into my den, unevered by the voice bringing up Kronadors,, I went depper into my den until the stacalites were all around me. I felt safe, but I HAD to get rid of this voice! drip..drop..drip..drop.. The sound of tiny waterdroplets falling in the most...haunting way, unevered my out of my wits. " This "voice" Is driving me insane!" I screamed inside my head, and at that, I fell into a troubled sleep...


I padded through the prickly grass, it stung my pelt, and gave me blisters on my pads. " What a hard trip for getting water!" I snapped. As I neared the river, I saw a few young pups splashing joyfully. " Me and Halibell used to do that.." I thought, my heart wrenched with sadness, a troop of Warriors went to find her, but they couldn't. I just gave up on finding her. I stepped into the icy waters, the water and soft stones cooled my pads as I drinked slowly... the serenity and joy was split by a shriek. I flung my head up to see a large Kronadar Male carrying two pups. " No!" I shrieked and raced as fast as i could. I snarled at the Kronador and instead of giving up and dropping the pups, it turned and fled, with them!" I ran, as fast as I could, toward the huge ugly beast. When I finnaly was close to attack, we where far, far into the dark forest. The pups were crying and screaming when the Kronador halted. I took this chance to leap on its back and tear at it soft neck and mane. The kronador shrieked as I tore out a clump of shimmering scales. I clawed and kicked and bit as hard as I could until the kronador fled after I dropped to the ground, I was bleeding severly, as because it had been able to bite and scratch me too, It even rolled on me once. I picked up the two stunned pups and brought them back to the grounds... I was proud, Yes, Yes I was! I was Kyzak, and I could survive without Halibell, no matter how much I missed her.


I layed down, me and a couple of other teens were talking. It was good to have some wolves to talk to, after Mother and Halibell dissapeared. " Bet'cha I could beat you to the river" Lestat cooed. " No way!" I snapped at him. " Your to slow!" I joked.

" Yeah right! Lets race!"
Fine then" I barked.
" 1...2...3...GO!" I took off, I was used to prickly thorns and whipping bushes, so I had a greater knowledge of the course, however, Lestat was one of the fastest teenies there was. I veered my course as the bubbling river came in sight. Lestat and I were now neck-to-neck, Paw-to-paw. Then at the last minute, I jumped forward and landed on the stones, or the finish line. " See I could beat you!" " Beginners luck" Lestat muttered and shuffled away. I walked into the cool water and rolled in it a few times before getting a drink and going back to the circle of teenies, and proud look on my face. Lestat looked grim and angry. " I heard you won!" Fallon said yapping, " So you won this!" She threw me a bone with a hunk of meat on it. I slurped it down, before winking to Fallon and returning to my den. I sighed as I laid down on the cool stone floor. I watched some pups play with a bone, I immediatly identified them as Eowyn and Xerxes. " Hey Kyzak, Watch this!" Eowyn yipped and landed squarley on the bone ripping at it. " Kill it Eowyn!" Xerxes yipped playfully. When Eowyn was done tearing the bone, she brought it to me. " You deserve this Kyzak" She said, before dropping the bone and pinning Xerxes. Life was good. And that was that.

I watched as a couple of glowing butterflies swirl around me, whispering in their own thoughtful language. " Nice to see you again" A voice yapped behind me, while I was mezmorised. " What the- Oh! Hi Miikaa!" I barked. She looked stronger now, less fragile. " I have good news and bad news for you, thats why I came" She sighed and didn't wait for my answer, she started right on in. " Good news is, Ive heard reports of Halibell. Bad news is, Your whole life, your pack, is dead. Except for Halibell." I screamed . But suprisinly the others didn't wake up.The butterflies, scared, returned to the trees. " At least Sis is ok....." But when I turned around Miikaa was gone.



" Wake up sleepy head!" I woke up to see Xerxes and Eowyn peering over me. I fumbled back, alarmed, before gaining my senses, realizing they were just two giggling pups. " Yes..?" I asked, trying to act like me being scared never happened at all. " We know you were scared, fluff-head" Eowyn giggled. Xerxes cast her a look that made her go quite. I ignored them. " What is it?" I snapped. " Well, we want you to take us to the water-pool!" I paused, before agreeing. " Fine" I muttered. The two Pups looked happily at eachother. " Well, the sooner we get there, the sooner we can leave" I sighed. " Okay!" The two pups yipped excitedly.

We walked through the soft sand, or the 'long way' so the bushes wouldn't hurt the pups. Not to metion the thorns. When we got there, the pups immediatly floundered into the water, chasing after fish and snails and everything else. Once, Xerxes bragged he caught a frog, but that was immediatly was submerged when Eowyn came up with a trout. I had felt like that when I once caught a rabbit, but Halibell came back with a 3 fish. " Oh Halibell, I promise Ill find you" I thought, and with that, I tried to shock some more memories into me by watching the pups play in the frothing water. I Didn't want the pups to think I was a pain-in-the-neck worry-face, so I stepped up, fluffed out my fur and called out: " Who wants to play catch the moose?" " Me! Me!" The pups screamed. " Pfft you shouldn't play Xerxes, you always win!" " Well do I fish-breath? If thats so go and play with your daddy" I saw Eowyn get red in the face before marching off angrily. I feel sort of irritated at Xerxes rudeness. " So bevahed, arent they?" I heard a voice scoff.I turned around to see Fallon. " Its the break of dawn, I can't blame them" I confessesed, blushing. " If Lestat heard that he'd laugh you know" Fallon said. Gosh, was she obsessed with him or what? " Lestat Tetat, Whatever" I said rolling my eyes. " Ha!" She laughed before flicking her tail. And with that I returned to my den.


I was going to find Halibell and that was that.

In the middle of the night I woke up quite a few times. I could hear Some other teenies snoring through my cave wall. I covered my ears and tried to sleep, I was desperate. These were just like the times When Dad used to snore so loudly Halibell cried. my heart wrenched when i thought the name 'Halibell' " You will save her, stop fretting" A voice somewhere inside my head nagged. I walked out of my cave feeling the moon beat down on me. Like my mothers gaze when she was pleased with my training. I Looked up thinking about the Royale Alfa Kronodar. ' The one that killed Mardelius' And my father' I thought, my heart pounding faster when I thought ' Father' . i only knew about Mardelius because of Darzek. " And Fallon too" I thought. If I had a best friend, not including Halibell, Fallon would definetly be it. " Ha! You have a crush, dont you?" A voice deep inside my head whispered. Deep inside my heart I felt that, but I shuned the feeling. " I need to find Halibell, not moon over silly she-wolves!" I thought angrily. I could still hear the teenies snoring loudly, for a minute my spirits lifted. " I wonder what Thesea would think of Fallon" I thought. As if the world were answering, dawn broke, a rose light painted the sky and for a minute the water fall looked promising. " Buts its dangerous" I thought. As if on cue Darzek strolled out. " Ah, dawn the most beautiful time of Isket" He sighed, happily. " Yeah" I agreed looking towards the moon that was only slightly fading. " Your thinking of your sister, aren't you?' He asked. I nodded wearily. " I cant blame you, she must of been pretty awesome. Im sorry I couldn't find her" " Its not your fault, its mine" I blurted out. " I abandoned her, so long ago..." My voice faded to a whisper. " Tell me what you did" Darzek said softly. I explained, how I left her lagging with bloodthristy kronodars going after her, and how that caused me so much trouble..... After I was done Darzek looked at me. " The past hurts" He said. A slight edge was to his voice " Either you can hide and fret about it, or you can learn from it" Darzek said.

And I think those were the words that rung in my ears when I found Halibell.



Image <------ Redbirch and me made it. I did markings, shading and background, she did base and lines. NO STEALING!



Art(must): viewtopic.php?f=33&t=1067637 <---- 1 Simple Drawing. viewtopic.php?f=33&t=1067644 <----- 2 Armor concept.( Full body viewtopic.php?f=33&t=1069071 <------ 3 Kronador and Kyzak ^^
viewtopic.php?f=33&t=1069376 <----- Kronodar and Kyzak, simple sketch.
viewtopic.php?f=33&t=1071573 <----- Him and Halibell <3
posting.php?mode=post&f=33 <--- VERY Lazy drawing X3

viewtopic.php?f=33&t=1071693 <---- Him and Halibell again.
viewtopic.php?f=33&t=1072321 <------ Hrmmm, I dont know what to label this XD
viewtopic.php?f=33&t=1072338 <----- Him dreaming of Thesea, Halibell, Xestra and Gorenhiem. viewtopic.php?f=33&t=1073339 <---- Armor Concept ( Head shot)
enough? viewtopic.php?f=33&t=1073345
Sorry im so terrible :? Some art may be ordered.

What are his parent's names?Lord Gorenhiem and Lady Xestrah Of the North. Died weak and because they were protecting their pack. Has shaken Kyzak.
What is a WOI? A WOI is a big Hybrid wolf who live in the Land Of Isket. They fight against they everraging Kronadors, in a struggle for peace. Now there is only Rayo's Pack. Northen Pack died out. There are five types of Woi, Big Wolf with long ears and a long fluffy tail.
Big wolf with normal ears and a long tail.
Big wolf with noraml ears and a normal (round ended) tail
Big wolf with short ears and a curled tail.
however the most common is long ears and a long fluffy tail.
What armor do teenies get? Wooden Armor, after their training is done, they go on a quest to find their armour. Which is often frightening, changing the teenies.
Will you join the RP? Of course! Ive been dying to have a Woi and if I got Kyzak I would Die Plus you said it in rules. Whow ouldn't obey rules? ( I was thinking He and Halibell could meet in the Rp, If I get him!) I also read some of the RP posts to help me out on the story ;)
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Re: New WoI Teenie: Halibell's Brother [[OPEN]]

Postby Novie Kenari » Sun Mar 04, 2012 10:42 am

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Your Name:
Distant Planet
His Name:
Sorren
Personality:
The death of his parents shook him greatly, but gave him a stronger heart. He is now much more courageous, and a lot nicer then he would have been as a pup. But it also sparked a sense of 'I don't trust you' attitude.
Story:
FIRST DRAFT
SECOND DRAFT
FINAL

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The sounds of prolonged panic and horror shook the air, Breaking the normal peace of Isket. An Elderly packmate cried in the distance, but was shortly cut off as one of the krondours cut his life short. Mother tried so hard not to let us see our warriors and family dieing, but it was hard not to see when it was happening all around us. Another, louder cry broke out from the woods just above camp, Another cry that was taken by the Krondors. A new lace of sorrow that shone in Mothers' eyes told me that that the cry must have belonged to Pa and she recognized it as his. I glanced at Halibell, and i could tell she knew just as well as i did. licking her on the nose, i quietly whispered in her ear. " Don't worry Hali, we'll get out of this together. You, Me, and Mom."
She aknoladged my words with a curt nod and turned away. She must have other things on her mind. Wanting to talk to one of them, I looked up at mother who was scanning the distance ahead for any oncoming Krondors. "Mom, where will we .." Horror and fear cut me off. One of the largest krondors i ever saw popped from the hillside, blood dripping form his disgusting, twisted teeth. Mother and Halibell let out gasps of fear themselves, and before i could stop to react Mother attacked the thing screaming at us to run. She had sacraficed herself for us. Nothing we would ever imangine her doing. Feeling a light tug on my tail brought me out of my thoughts. Halibel was glaring at me, mouth slightly gaped open. "Run you great lump!" she barked and took off in the undergrowth.
All i can say is things were happening to fast. Now what will the two of them do? this was truly the last thing i wanted to happen. Halibell had a good head start, so i figured i may as well catch up with her or loose her just like mom and pa.

an hour goes by, and the screeches died down slightly, but they were still occurring here and there. Being alone in the woods was hard to tell what was going to be where, or even what direction they were heading in. Yes, i finally got to Halibell, and we have been sticking together thus far. But i do remember one of the elderly wolves when we were slightly younger telling us about moss on the trees. what about moss.Raking my brain for the answer, i sat resting. Halibell seemed a bit tired herself, and collapsed next to me. "so now what?" Halibell groaned.
"we stick together." i said quietly, trying to keep my voice from quivering from the recent panic. We had just got done out running another krondor, my tail almost taken off by it. But it stupendously fell into a small ditch, giving us a chance to run. Now here we sat, figuring on what we do next. After a few deep breaths and a few minuites time to rest, we got moving again. "So what is your plan Sorren?" Halibel asked.
"I think we should go see if mom is still possibly alive some how." saying my main concern, i felt a slight weight get lifted from my shoulders. "You speak crazy talk."
Halibell laughed. "now common.I bet the packs out west will take us in."
Halibell's remark had made me slightly mad. "Are you insane?! why would a rival pack take us in, you know we are the kids of two highly ranked alphas! if anything, they would want to kill us."
I emidetly regretted what i had said, for my sister looked hurt, and turned away. "fine. If you want your way oh wise one, then lets head back to camp, wherever that is. Oh wait! you don't know do you?"
She did not continue, but simply stepped aside. "wont you lead?"
i knew it. she was not at all happy, or pleased. After all, we werent happy. Our frustration was dawning on us from the moment mother sent us away, What was she thinking?
But before i could finish the thought, a loud crash came from some nearby rocks. We both turned, wide eyed and scared. The very last strand of my hope poofed at that moment, if Krondors were at every turn, then there was sure Death waiting for us. "Run!" i shouted, taking off for the direction where the trees thinned.
Heart racing once again, i didn't pay attention to anything behind me.I didn't want to look back and see one of those ugly krondors drooling all over and making their usual racket. Or even worse, see them getting Halibell. That would just be a nightmare.
After clearing my mind, the thought about moss came back up. but i did not half to rake my brain, i remembered. Moss always grows on the north side of trees, and we lived north. if we followed it we could find our way home! Skidding to a stop, i turned around to talk to halibell, but to find i was alone. were did she go? How long have i been running?so caught up in my own concerns i didn't think about Halibell.
A loud crash came from the side, turning around i saw her sprinting towards me with a huge krondor chasing her. Her eyes were huge with horror, and the krondor looked as mean as ever. Fur standing on end, I began running as fast as I could, Not wanting to be close to the thing. Ahead the sounds of crashing water came, only meaning one thing. a water fall. Glancing behind at Halibell who was still somewhat far from me, I yelled over my shoulder with a brilliant plan in mind. "There's a waterfall Hali!"
"What?" she barked back.
"A waterfall!!" i howled even louder as the sounds of the water grew louder. But Halibell still didn't seem to hear me. Figuring by the distance between us and the running we were doing, i would not be able to tell her my idea. But the idea was simple. Just jump off the waterfall and loose the krondor, and we could rest without worry afterwards.
Now the waterfall came into site. the jump looked far, but livable. Not wanting to think about that, i blocked it out of my mind and continued onward. I could hear Halibell calling me, but we couldn't stop. Not until this krondor got off our tails.
Closer the edge came, and the more the fear swelled in my belly. But being krondor food would not satisfy me. Closing my eyes, i jumped. Feeling the air move swiftly through my fur was nerve wrecking, along with the feel of gravity slipping in my weight. CRASH.
everything went white.

water flooded my ears. My vision was still blurry, and time felt like it had flown by. The air felt thicker, and the smell was soothing. Coughing, i stood up. Confused by the solid, dry land benith me, i fell back down again. "easy young one." a voice came.
"wh-who are you?" I barked, scared now.
"a stranger with no name." it responded. The voice was deep, and raspy. like an old male wolf, or some other creature. but what other creatures spoke on Isket? none that i knew of. Also now paying more attention to my surroundings, i picked up a smell of blood. was it my blood? I did not know. "Why cant i see?" i barked, wondering if the 'no name' would know.
"You hit your head on a rock on your way down. It will come back, you just shook a nerve in your brain. By the way, what made you jump from such a hight?" It responded.
"I...I was running from a krondor. Have you seen my sister?"
"Sister? I only saw you. Unless im mistaken."
Fear swelled in my belly. Did the Krondor get Hali? Did she not know i went down the water fall? "When will my vision be back?" I barked loudly.
"no need to shout young one. It will be back by tomorrow."
"I don't have til tomorrow! fix me so i can find my sister!"
"patients. She will be fine."
Rolling my eyes i tried to glare at him, but i didn't know if i was glaring at a rock or the actual no named thing.
"why son, that there is a rock. im sitting behind you."
knew it.Whipping behind me, i pulled back my lips. "Fix me."
"Im sorry, but you will half to wait. But i must warn you, You will be on your own form this point on.Morning is coming, and im expected back home you see. So best wishes to you, and for gods sake stay in this cave until you can see. Dont worry it will not be long. I have left food for you in the corner, and there are puddles everywhere." With that, the stranger left. Frustrated and annoyed, i sat down,scowling. Only good thing was, is that it was quiet enough to think. Or better yet, i could sleep. Thinking of sleep made the sudden realization poor over me that i was exhausted and my feet hurt really badly. Perhaps it was better that he stay wherever he was. With that, he layed down, yawing. and soon, the world seemed to buzz away and finally, mind was at ease.

Hours later, I opened my eyes to find that i could see again. Where i was was quite beautiful, Moss and red rock surrounded me, and looking over my shoulder i could see the white water pouring down what must be the entrance to this cavern like thing. Mystified, i stood up and walked twords the water. Who knew caves could exist behind waterfalls? Wondrous i stuck my head into the waterfall, a stupid thing to do because it pushed me to the ground and soaked me to the bone. Shaking out the droplets, i realized that there was a large cut in my side. That must have been what caused the blood smell last night. Sighing, i looked around for the pile of food that strange wolf was talking about. if it was even a wolf, I did not know.
After a few minutes of searching, i came across a big pile of hares. They smelled horrible, but some food would do better then no food. After all, its not like i could go and hunt for myself. I didn't know how.
After a few minutes of stuffing my face, I thought about Halibell again. Worry began to cloud my mind, almost to the point to where it was unbearable. I had to find Halibell. I had to go out and search for her, No matter what stood in my way.
But the homey cave was hard to leave. So i decided to stick around for a while and go over what i had learned from father, and maybe use those skills to survive. Perhaps as well, Mother was still alive. A new strand of hope began to form, and New ideas began to bubble.






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What are his parent's names?
fathers name was Gorenhiem mothers name was Xestrah both high ranked alfas of the north.
What is a WOI?
a woi is a hybrid wolf that can have long tail, curly, or regular. they are warriors who protect the peace in the land of isket. {adding more after research}
What armor do teenies get?
wooden.
Will you join the RP?
yes.
artwork:
(whats shown in the post so far is all by me.)
.::Beauty among chaos::.
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