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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Howl of death » Tue Nov 29, 2011 2:28 am

Box of Beasts wrote:Here is one I came up with just now! :D

Quite the Plumbing


Hayley's family lives in an old run-down shack just outside of Geltsville. Her family was rich many, many years ago, but they have lost so much money of making bad decisions. Anyway, they currently have no electricity and they often don't get water. But tonight they had some, and they read for entertainment. It was a quiet night out in the woods, and Hayley's father, Drew, just came home form a visit the city. "Hayley, please lock the windows and the door. A man is on the loose, and he recently was in a mental hospital." Startled, Hayley jumped up, locking the windows, closing the blinds and the doors. "Sweetie, I've had a rough day, I'm going to bed. Your welcome to stay up." He said, and without an answer, he hobbled off to bed.

An hour later, Hayley was reading when she heard a large knock at the door. She went to the door, opened it but noone was their. She stepped out onto the poorch, and the door suddenly slammed behind her. A large scream was heard from inside. Hayley, now sobbing, kicked open the door, and ran to Drew, but he was in the bathroom. "Drew? Are you okay?" She asked cautiously. "Yes, yes.. I'm fine... Just...eh....slipped." Realizing how dumb she was, she went in the bathroom next door, for a drink of water. Hoping, oh how much she hoped their was water... and their was! She put her hands in, and took a huge sip. A large burning sensation tugged at her hands, mouth a nd throat, getting worse and worse. She screamed. Running next door for help, now blood pouring form her neck, she saw Drew flopping helplessly on the floor, the same as her. The last thing Hayley saw was a crazy many, holding a tape recorder and an empty bottle of sulfuric acid.....

I know I've already read something like this, but I made my own version. Pleeeeeeaaaase comment! ;D




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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby climbing{the}world » Tue Nov 29, 2011 2:35 am

Woah, thanks! XD
Because I met my best writing/internet buddy through her signature, I decided to list a bunch of things about me. Not that I like making friends. Or that I'm good at it.

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Take... whatever you want from that. Just, please, no weird, obsessed stalkers, okay?

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Howl of death » Tue Nov 29, 2011 2:42 am

No prob!

I need story idea......*sigh*
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby climbing{the}world » Tue Nov 29, 2011 2:50 am

Here, this one happened just a minute ago! I'm home alone!!!!! :((((((

OK, so I'm sitting on the couch looking at my computer, when I notice something move in the fireplace. Not actually inside the firplace, but a reflection moved. So I look up, and before anything happens, I just look away, and forget about it. Then I look at the window, which is across from the tv. I see the tv twitch, like it turned on and off real fast. Then, all of a sudden, I see a large wooden frame fall of the shelf in the reflection. I look at the real thing it didn't move.


I'm not coming back on this thread tday, too scary. I'll be be back on l8r. Bye!
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Because I met my best writing/internet buddy through her signature, I decided to list a bunch of things about me. Not that I like making friends. Or that I'm good at it.

Harry Potter; Lord of the Rings; The Hobbit; The Silmarillion; Anything Tolkien Really; My Little Pony; FimFiction; Fanfiction; AppleDash; TwiDash; RariJack; Writing; Poetry; Camp NaNoWriMo; NaNoWriMo; Rabbits; My Pet Rabbit Nali; Slender; Steam; Team Fortress 2; Minecraft; SkyDoesMinecraft; HuskyMudkipz; PewDiePie; Stephano (duh!); Smosh; Ian is Best Smosh; Woona is Best Princess; The Youtubes; Skypes; Scrivener; Movies; Scripts; Award Shows; Elijah Wood aka Frodo; Pippin is Best Hobbit; Tumblr; Shadowlands MC; Tinq.

Take... whatever you want from that. Just, please, no weird, obsessed stalkers, okay?

Okay.*

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby olivionary » Tue Nov 29, 2011 7:52 am

These stories are awesome, I've read the first 11 pages.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby just'marley » Tue Nov 29, 2011 9:19 am

Howl of death wrote:No prob!

I need story idea......*sigh*


You seem to like zombie RPs... Why not something about Zombies? Ill probaly have nightmares, though... SCARED OUT OF MY PANTS OF ZOMBIES.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Jinx. » Tue Nov 29, 2011 10:11 am

Zombies? Yes, somebody really needs to make on about zombies...I'm gonna try now.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Howl of death » Tue Nov 29, 2011 10:25 am

NO! Teh story will beh mInez!
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby just'marley » Tue Nov 29, 2011 10:28 am

xD wowww
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Orangelake » Tue Nov 29, 2011 12:40 pm

Forever_Broken</3 wrote:One night about four years ago, She was laying in bed and she woke up to hear people whispering. She thought it was my family so she screamed at them to shut up, but they wouldn't. So she got up and walked to my door, but stopped and waited. She didn't know what I was waiting for, but she waited. She started to hear what the whispers were saying, so she sat down and listened. "So we jump in and slit her throat or we jump in a stab her?" , She heard one of the voices say. Then the other one responded, "No we suffocate her, you moron!"

She ran into the bathroom that connected to her bedroom to hide. She reached for the faucet when she heard a little voice behind her. "Don't drink the water." She turned around and she saw a little girl with long brown hair standing in the bath tub. the girl had ugly bruises all up and down her arms and around her neck. She screamed and fainted only to wake up hours later in the hospital. The nurse told her that two serial killers had broken into my house. They had been outside the door of her room waiting to kill me when a little girl called 911. They were caught and arrested for attempted murder.

She allowed herself a little smile, "I knew who the girl was," She told the nurse. "Who was it?" She asked me. "It was my little sister who had died three years ago while spending the night at a friends house." The nurse walked out of the room crying. She believed her, She could tell, but do you?


i just stayed still like this :shock: for about a minute, i dont know why but when the killers were talking about how to kill her i was laughing XD
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