Box of Beasts wrote:Here is one I came up with just now!Quite the Plumbing
Hayley's family lives in an old run-down shack just outside of Geltsville. Her family was rich many, many years ago, but they have lost so much money of making bad decisions. Anyway, they currently have no electricity and they often don't get water. But tonight they had some, and they read for entertainment. It was a quiet night out in the woods, and Hayley's father, Drew, just came home form a visit the city. "Hayley, please lock the windows and the door. A man is on the loose, and he recently was in a mental hospital." Startled, Hayley jumped up, locking the windows, closing the blinds and the doors. "Sweetie, I've had a rough day, I'm going to bed. Your welcome to stay up." He said, and without an answer, he hobbled off to bed.
An hour later, Hayley was reading when she heard a large knock at the door. She went to the door, opened it but noone was their. She stepped out onto the poorch, and the door suddenly slammed behind her. A large scream was heard from inside. Hayley, now sobbing, kicked open the door, and ran to Drew, but he was in the bathroom. "Drew? Are you okay?" She asked cautiously. "Yes, yes.. I'm fine... Just...eh....slipped." Realizing how dumb she was, she went in the bathroom next door, for a drink of water. Hoping, oh how much she hoped their was water... and their was! She put her hands in, and took a huge sip. A large burning sensation tugged at her hands, mouth a nd throat, getting worse and worse. She screamed. Running next door for help, now blood pouring form her neck, she saw Drew flopping helplessly on the floor, the same as her. The last thing Hayley saw was a crazy many, holding a tape recorder and an empty bottle of sulfuric acid.....
I know I've already read something like this, but I made my own version. Pleeeeeeaaaase comment! ;D
I LOVE IT!!!!