Re: Adoptable WOI (Open!)

Postby Kaylawolf » Mon Nov 21, 2011 6:18 am

Name:
Nyx

Why the name Nyx?
I thought for sure I would name her Calypso, then I was like no that name didn’t seem to fit her perfectly. I knew I wanted her to have something to do with Egypt in some way or another and I looked up the goddess of the night sky and found the goddess Nut. I knew I would not name her Nut, that’s for sure. So then after I read a book and Nyx was the name of the goddess in the story. Nyx, I knew that would be the name of this amazing Warrior of Isket, because her colors looked like the night sky with her dark blue and slightly lighter blue pelt, and with stars. Nyx just seemed the ideal name for this beautiful warrior.

Why would I want Nyx?
Like most, if not all, people who have entered just think this girl is drop dead gorgeous. I think I just stared at her for hours, just studding the design of her. I thought when the contest was over, one of the winners would chose her, but I was surprised to find her still adoptable because of her beautiful design. The color scheme is so different and unique, the dark blues and white reminded of me of the night sky, which I love. Her two toned eyes are just magnificent; they just capture your attention and draw you into the picture. Of course I am always drawn to animal print markings on WoI’s. (Her ‘tiger’ stripes on her back and tail.)

Her design is just half the reason I would want her. Nyx’s personality is just like mine, it kind of surprised me on how much we were like. We are both shy around new people that we don’t know, a day dreamer (Except she doesn’t get caught in that awkward moment when you were day dreaming in class and you get called on by the teacher, and you have no idea what they were talking about, so you just feel like an idiot because you know they just explained it in class.)

I have always wanted a Warrior of Isket, even in the beginning. I know I have come close to winning (2 second place, 1 third place) even though I loose sometimes it just gives me more hope that I will eventually get the one beautiful warrior that I would die for, and I think I found the one. This warrior is by far one of the warriors that I connected with the most, our personalities are almost exactly alike and I just love the colors of her fur, markings and eyes. I know that there is a lot of competition out there for this warrior but that does not discourage me from wanting this absolutely stunning warrior.

By the sheer chance that I win Nyx I know I would love her unconditionally. She would get tons of art by me and I would also buy art of her. I can tell that Nyx will be an exciting character to role play on the WoI role play. I also can’t wait to design her armor; I think that is one of the things that make a WoI truly yours is when you design their unique armor. (I don’t know if I will finish the sketch of her armor but if I do scratch that sentence.)


//:\Genetics/:\\
Official Name: Nyx Syritha (Si-re-tha)
Nicknames: Nyx
Gender: Female
Age: A year and a half

Mother: Xeinista//Unknown Rank[Alfa Maybe, Though because of Swiftness and Intelligence seen in some Alfa families]
Father: Unknown to Pack//Unknown Rank[Alfa Father Maybe, Though because of Strength seen in some Alfa families]\\Remembered Only to Nyx
Siblings: Unknown//Thought to Be an Only Pup
Birth Pack: North

Eye Color: Right Blue, Left Light Green
Base Color: Dark Blue, Slightly Lighter Dark Blue
Marking Color: White
Type: Big Wolf with Normal Ears and Long Tail

Genetic Strengths: Strength, Swiftness, Quick, Intelligent, Quiet, and a Knack to Find an Enemy’s Weakness.
Genetic Weaknesses: Long Tail, White Markings Under Eyes, Quiet.

Armor Style: Egyptian
Armor Material: Titanium and Leather
Main Color: Charcoal
Secondary Colors: Silver and Gold

Personality:

The Quiet One:
Nyx, the shy little girl. No one knows how she became to be a quiet warrior, or why she never answers everyone’s questions. Of course she has a reason, but refuses to share it with anyone else. She is the type of wolf who is a listener and not much of a talker. Some may think that she is smarter because of just listening, but others disagree and say she is not any smarter than any other trainee, because she does not ask any questions. Nyx may speak when she completely disagrees with someone, she will speak her mind on what she thinks they should do. It is rare that anyone who barely knows has ever heard her voice.

The Adventurous One:
Though Nyx is a shy warrior that does not make her any less of an adventurer, she is no less adventurous than any other teen. She loves going off on her own little quests in the woods of Isket. Finding new area in the woods, tracking pray, or just running through the woods are some of the things that Nyx loves to do. Being a naturally quiet wolf makes her a skilled hunter and tracker. Even after she came to Rayo’s pack she is still an adventurous teen.

The Day Dreamer:
Nyx is a little dreamer, which comes with a down fall; she tends to zone out and not listen to what others are saying. But, sometimes those day dreams form into a day nightmare, if there is such a thing. The best way for Nyx to day dream is if she is walking around the woods, during the night under a full moon. Sometimes she dreams of impossible things like: seeing her mother and father again one more time, finding a friend that she can trust with her life and tell everything to without the worry that it will flow through the pack, and killing the Kronadors that murdered her parents, on her own. (Nyx plans to make this dream a reality.)

The Sprinting One:
Nyx has ran for her life once and barely won; so now she has devoted her life to be one of the fastest sprinters in the Warrior of Isket territories. Usually Nyx heads out for a couple mile run right before she goes to be, after most of the pack had fallen asleep. She is inspired a lot by Tira who is one of the fastest warriors she knows.

The Brave One:
Nyx may be one of the shyest warriors you may ever meet, but she is also one of the bravest. She would risk her life for this pack that took her in and raised her from a teen to a warrior like they were her birth pack. Nyx also doesn’t want anyone else to go through what she went through, losing her pack and family. She would do almost anything to save another warrior, even if that means risking her life trying to save you.




Short story:

Mother? Mothe…. Kronadors!

”Don’t go too far off to get food, Nyx dear.” My mother, Xenisita, warned me. She had sent me off to fetch some dinner for the two of them. I knew as well as she that the North pack was one of the weaker packs, because the food had died out or gone south to the other packs; to make things worse Kronadors were now attacking the pack. Gosh, no words can describe how much I hate those beasts. I looked at my mother and nodded.

”I won’t mother.”

“Nyx, now don’t go knocking on Death’s door.”

“I won’t mother.” I repeated and smiled back towards her, then padded myself into the dark woods. The moonlight glittered threw the trees and onto the bluish green grass, I had my nose to the ground to find any sent that could lead to a meal. Nothing. I could not find anything here. I guess I went miles before I found the slightest sent of a rabbit. She smiled slightly then Nyx fallowed the trail fast, trying to sniff out a fresher trail, luckily Nyx found one.

“There you are.” She said quietly as she crept up towards it. Her eyes sighted on the rabbit and she crept down low in to the blue grass of Isket. She swiftly, yet quickly, fallowed the rabbit and only moved when it was eating grass. Soon Nyx was at least 5 feet away so the young female jumped to her feet and sprinted, with long strides, towards the rabbit. Just before Nyx could get her mouth around the neck of the rabbit, it saw her coming and it bolted off into the woods.


“You’re not getting away that easy.” Nyx mumbled, followed by a small growl, and then she was off in a sprint after that rabbit. That rabbit was fast, Nyx could admit that but not as fast as this Warrior of Isket. She was within inches of the rabbit, and Nyx jumped forward and her jaws landed on the rabbit. Quickly it was killed and she held her head high in pride as she trotted back to the pack where she last saw her mother. Though this rabbit was small, it was better than nothing.

Soon Nyx was back at the camp and she sniffed the air, is smelt different but how? “Mother!” Nyx called out. “Mother!” Her eyes flicked side to side as she emerged from the woods. ”Mother? Mothe… Krondaor!” She said as her eyes laid a pone the large Kronadors. Her two toned eyes widened in disbelief, and she had dropped her kill. Around her she was surrounded in dead bodies, warrior bodies.

It felt like a dream, just a dream. There was no Kronadors here. The warriors were alive and chatting battle tactics amongst themselves. And my mother. Yes, my mother and my father happily talking together as they use to when I was first born. And Isket was its beautiful natural color of blue/green grass and full moon covering the night sky.

No, it was not a dream, and it will never be. I had crashed back into reality, the place was gloomy and dark, not just because of the night sky it was dead and it felt dead too. It was all too real, Kronadors had taken over the North pack, and warriors were dead. The North pack was already weak but now we are just about dead. My father would never come back, because he had died before I became a teen and now my mother, where is she?


Nyx looked franticly around for her mother, nothing. She smelled for her sent in the breeze, nothing. But, she saw a Krondaor and heard a familiar yelp not too far away. Mother. Nyx took off in a flash in the direction of the yelp. She soon came to the scene and her heart dropped, her mother, Xeinista, was dangling from the mouth of the large Kronador.


Knock on Death’s Door:
The Kronador’s eyes locked on Nyx, and he roared ferociously. He was terrifying, Nyx could admit that. She just stood there, but before she knew what she was doing, Nyx turned and ran. Nyx ran for her life, she barely thought about where she was going, but she was heading south.

Ohmygod,ohmygod,ohmygod,ohmygod,ohmygod… Nyx had been thinking that over and over, that’s all she could think besides, running, breathing, and trying to avoid running into trees. Her heart had been beating a million miles an hour. Nyx had felt that she was in a dream, she felt as if she was flying across the ground. Her paws barely touched the ground as she ran over the land of Isket. The Kronador was on her tail, fallowing fast behind her.

She could feel it in her, they had ran miles from the scene; Nyx kind of guessed that she was at the edge or in the south territory. Her paws burned from the running, but she knew that if she stopped she would be killed. Nyx howled for help, but knew no one could hear her. She knew she would have to fight him, or collapse running, running away is not a way a Warrior wants to die.

Nyx stopped and faced the Kronador, who had also stopped and panted like her. Her fangs showed threw her muzzle as she sent out a loud snarl to the beast. ”Leave!” She growled out at him. He just glared and roared loudly at her, and then he ran towards her. Nyx panicked for a second as she realized the fact that he was charging at the young female, soon she calmed down and glared at him, showing no fear.

The Kronador came closer and closer, soon he was a few feet away and Nyx held her ground. But, Nyx jumped to the side right when the Kronador was about to swing his claw at hear head. She heard the swishing sound of his claw rang past her ears, and Nyx ran past the large beast and stopped behind him. She snarled and ran towards him, and jumped up on his back; she tried to dig her claws in to his back to get a grip, but Nyx was still uneasy on his back and jumped towards his neck. Nyx bit down right under his horns, the skin there was one of the rare softer spots on a Kronador. The Kronador howled in pain and shook his head side to side hard, trying to get Nyx off his back, and it worked. The force that the Kronador had threw her at a large boulder, and poor Nyx was knocked out cold.

The Kronador came towards her, to finish his kill and he heard this barking and howling of Warriors rang into the sky as they charged for the Kronador. Three warriors had come, Darzek (a.k.a Dex), Rayo, and Tira. Dax and Rayo battled off the Kronador but he escaped alive, and Tira ran towards the unconscious Nyx. Tira called her brother’s to help her bring Nyx back to the healer’s den.

“Tira, go on and tell Igino to prepare for this teen.” Rayo said to his sister, she nodded and sprinted back to the shaman, Igino. Dax and Rayo figured out how to get her back without hurting her more, so they decided to put Nyx on Dax’s back and they headed back to the healer’s den.


When Will You Ever Slow Down Nyx?
One night a full moon shined over the land of Isket Nyx ran across the dense forest, taking long strides every time she leapt forward. Her blue fur glistened in the moonlight that shone through the tree’s branches. Her paws lightly touched the soft grass as she made her way through the forest. Many people ask Nyx why she would rather run through the forest than an open field and she would always say that if you run through a forest that teaches you to stay sharp, because you don’t know what could jump out at you, and makes you become more agile than just running through an open field.

She runs every night even when she is not told to, Nyx can’t just not run, it is in her blood. Her mother was a fast warrior as was her father. Nyx is built like a runner: she is a normal height wolf, but she is slender, not blocky or muscly, but she has strong leg muscles. Running builds endurance and stamina that warriors need during a battle. Not to say that Nyx isn’t strong in the first place she is, Nyx gets it from her father, but she is not the strongest of the warriors and she got most of her genetics from her mother. That’s why in running, Nyx makes up for the strength she doesn’t have with the speed and stamina she does have.

Nyx had been heading down river fallowing the banks. She had been in full sprint, for the last month she had been trying to make her sprint last longer, the month before she had been building her pace. The reason for her to be on the bank is for easy water access just in case she needed it badly. After about a while of sprinting she stopped and was panting hard, and walked to the bank and took a drink. Soon she had cooled down and Nyx had been sitting on the edge of the water. Thump thump. Nyx felt the ground shake as she felt the light thumps. Her heart skipped a beat when she heard it again, louder. Her two toned eyes widened when she thought of what it could be, a Kronador.

She was scared Nyx could admit that, she is not one of those warriors who pretend like they have no fear just to impress people, wouldn’t you be scared if that could be your last night alive? Her heart pounded threw her chest, she felt as if the beast could hear her heart beating a million miles an hour, which kind of scared her more. She knew that she would have to face her fears and fight this beast.

Slowly Nyx turned to face this beast that came closer and closer; finally she had turned and faced the forest. It was dark in the forest, not even the moon shined through the branches. Nyx saw nothing in the forest until a pair of yellow eyes gleamed threw the shadow and stared directly at Nyx, followed by a loud roar which made her fur stand on end. Before she could think, a loud snarl rose from her muzzle and her eyes glared at the male Kronador. This was the one who killed her mother and Nyx made sure that she was not going to be his next victim.

“Are you back for more?” Nyx teased, her teeth bared. She knew that she wasn’t going to get an answer back from him, but he charged towards her and Nyx easily avoided the attack that she planned for. Nyx was now behind him and she snarled. He turned around and charged at Nyx again but this time instead of swerving Nyx ran forward, then at the last second she jumped up, avoiding his claws barely. Nyx lunged forward, and bit down hard on the Kronadors muzzle. The Kronador roared loud in pain, which must of woken a couple of the warriors from their sleep because Nyx heard the howling of warriors coming towards her.

The Kronador shook his head back and forth hard, flinging Nyx towards a tree; Nyx ricocheted off the tree and back at the Kronador’s neck and the force that Nyx had, she dug her fangs into the neck of the beast. By that time two warriors came and surrounded the Kronador and they attacked the Kronador. Nyx still had her strong grip on him and her mouth was locked on and every time the Kronador would shake his head, the flesh in her mouth would loosen and her fangs would go deeper. From the attacks the two other warriors took on the Kronador weakened the beast and Nyx jumped off from exhaustion but she knew that Nyx couldn’t give up. So, Nyx backed up and glared at the male Kronador, and she bolted towards the beast, landing in that exact spot she was before and made the killing blow. The Kronador wobbled for a while then fell over dead.

Nyx backed up and looked at the dead Kronador, she panted from the battle. Honestly she knew that she couldn’t have done this without the help of the two other warriors. She was thankful of them and would risk her life for them, just like they did for her.


Art:
There You Are
Knock on Death's Door

Amor:
Nyx’s armor is light weight titanium with leather. It is based off of Egyptian armor and the Egyptians wore hardly any armor because they would become hot faster with heaver armor on. Nyx’s armor consists mainly of leather, dark almost black leather. Reason for leather that it is flexible and light weight, making it easy and quiet to run in though it will block some attacks, it will not block severe attacks just lower the severity of the attacks. The metal on her armor strong and light, it is located on her chest, back and in her helmet because that is where vital targets are and the warriors need more protection there. The armor is a dark charcoal color, to match the night sky and the shadows, and some of the markings on the armor are silver and gold, to match the stars up in the sky.

Tell me something about the WOI stated on the official page:
~There are four types of Warriors of Isket,
//Big Wolf with long ears and a long fluffy tail.
//Big wolf with normal ears and a long tail.
//Big wolf with normal ears and a normal (round ended) tail.
//Big wolf with short ears and a curled tail.

~Their enemy is Chimerial Kronadors, which are horse reptile mix.

~Only Custom and Alfa Warriors can breed.


Other:
Thank you so much for adopting this beautiful little teen out, I know she’ll get a wonderful home if she’s with me or any of the other entrants. I am sorry that it is kind of tedious and long, but I just had to express all my feelings out for this form, and I hope you see that I very much love this teen and would be honored and shocked if I won. But thank you, the WoI team, for putting together this unique and beautiful species and keeping it going for so long, I feel that this species will be one of the few that lasts years and years on this site, getting stronger as it grows.
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Re: Adoptable WOI (Open!)

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Re: Adoptable WOI (Open!)

Postby MissKiwiBird » Mon Nov 21, 2011 6:36 am

Naming
Wazzala (Goes by Zala)
http://babynames.merschat.com/ wrote:Wazzala is an Amharic name for girls meaning beautiful and elegant.


Why I chose this name
This name seemed to pop at me. I was going to use it once befre, but decided it didn't fit the character at all. Now I feel as if this name is call out, yearning to be with this WoI. It is something unique, from a language not many know about. I can assure you that this is a name not commonly used for characters, for it took me ages to find. I'm glad I found this though, for it fits perfectly.

The Story of Her Naming
In a dark, shady den, the sounds of a new life rang out. But only one voice was distinguishable, that of a pup, barely a week old. Her coat was bland, a dark blue at its lightest. The tiresome mother was in utter lack of energy, though her spirits were lifted at the sight of this small pup. The little newborn was unique, all right. Being the only pup to have been born, she inherited a strange charisma. It was obvious that this unmarked little pup was going to be unlike any other.

Days passed. The pup grew stronger, but still hadn't opened her eyes. Her fur had grown and slightly lightened, little specks of white becoming visible. Her face started to thin and little bits of blue began to frame her unopened eyes. She had become a lively pup, exploring every inch of the den, the only place she knew in the world.

Several weeks flew by, yet the pup still hadn't opened her eyes. Her once plain coat had now been filled with different shades of blue, with white starting to fully emerge. Her face had stretched out to a length that had a beautiful elegance to it, even at such a young age. Her legs stretched out, giving her a coltish gait when she played in the den.

After several months passing, the mother began to worry. Her pup radiated beauty, yet her eyes still remained unopened. She first-time mother became sick with worry of a blind pup. She began to form the syllables of a name. She feared naming the pup before her eyes had opened, for she wouldn't know how the pup felt about it. This another week passed. Bees seemed to flood the den, their "z-like" sound filling the tight space. The little pup showed an immense amount of interest in the little creatures that she couldn't see.

The mother raised her head with curiousity. She rolled her tounge slightly, mimicking the sound of the bees. Her young pup raised her head, then clumsily tumbled towards her mother. She yipped and licked her mothers chin. Her mother smiled, knowing she will have Zs in her only pup's name.

~6 months old~

The pup was growing rapidly, causing the den to become increasingly crowded. Her mother wouldn't dare let her out into the open, though. She had finally decided on a name, one that was told in through a myth in her former pack. The story was of a young she-wolf that went by the name of Wazzala. She had left her pack to start her own, a deed which was almost always preformed by males. The mother hadn't spoken the name out loud, though. She had anxiously waited until it was time.

She slowly stepped out of the den and called to the frisky pup inside. The little female creeped out of the opening and was surprised when her fur was ruffld by the wind. She lifted her now fully marked face, finally opening her eyes. First a blue one, then a green.

"Wazzala..." Her mother murmered.

Short story:
During Her Naming
Zala, barely a week old, started experiencing wild dreams; they were so vivid that it seemed that Zala was actually experiencing the dreams in her physical self. She also had a strange feeling, as if when she was awake, she wash't with her body. Her mind seemed to float freely.


Zala, only a few days old, entered her first dream...

A fully matured Zala landed on her side with a thud. Her armor was torn from her body, barely holding on to the support straps. She looked around to see death, but only that of Kronadors. The sickly blood caked her fur, and she struggled to stand up. Strangely, she was unscathed; only her armor had acquired damage. The grass of Isket was stained a dark red. Not a single speck of blue was able to be seen through the gore upon the ground.

The pup shuddered in her sleep, and her fur grew hot. It seemed to lighten, but only slightly.

Zala picked her way through the remains of the battle. Bits and pieces of armor lay everywhere. She could smell the scents of every warrior that fought. In the distance she saw the Shaman, Igino, at work. A young warrior lay on the ground in front of him with a large gash running down her side. Zala stared, mortified. Her knees began to wobble and she struggled to walk away. She then came upon a dead kronador. Its eyes were open, the yellow iris clouded with death. Zala shuddered at the sight of the female enemy, and continued to walk. She crossed endless bodies of both warriors and kronadors. Finally she reached a shallow pool, also filled with blood. There, she collapsed.

The sleeping pup shook awake, yet her eyes remained closed.
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After her first dream, Zala's patterns began to fill her blank coat. Her dreams continued, some being horrible, yet some bringing a feeling of peace.


Zala's dreams barely visited her, but they always brought different events.

Zala found herself as an old adult on the side of a cliff. Her frail limbs struggled as she walked up a thin pathway lined with grass. She eventually reached the top, where a den was carved into the rock. She slowly approached, her weak nose searching for a scent. Zala could smell milk and the feeling of warmth and happiness surrounded her. She poked her head into the den and saw a female that looked a lot like herself; surrounding her were six pups.

The sleeping Zala's fur began to heat up again, but only in her face. Slowly the white markings around her eyes began to show.

Zala looked at the female that resembled her. The young female lifted her head.
"Hello" she sighed wistfully. A smiled stretched across her face.
Zala found her self walking into the den and slowly licking each pup. She felt a love for them that she could not explain.

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Zala now explored the den quite a bit. She could sense every corner of the den; she felt no urge to open her eyes. When the changing of winter to spring came, she could feel the den warming up. Slowly, she began to notice bees flying in. Their sound intrigued her and she loved the feeling that came when they flew by her ears. She now began to feel trapped in her den since she was growing so fast. Her dreams have been recently showing new life in all forms, even the birth (hatching?) of a kronador. After hours of boredom, she finally heard her mother speak.
"It's time to go outside."
Zala eagerly followed. When the sunlight first hit her face, she flinched back in surprise. Her eyes flew open, and she was in awe of everything she saw. She explored everything with her eyes, and then finally looked at her mother. Her mother was a beautiful blue wolf with patterns of all sorts. Not a single speck of white was visible on her body, though.
She saw surprise register on her moms face. Then she heard her name for the first time. She spirits lifted, hearing the familiar sounds of the bees in her name. She smiled and lifted her head, enjoying the feeling of being outside. She finally made eye contact with her mother again, and a wave of shyness washed over her.
She had never seen her mother before, and only a few words were exchanged in the den.
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Their land is beautiful, but is no where near peaceful.
They receive armor at the age of 5 months-1 year.
Their armor always consists of a chest plate and back plate.


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Re: Adoptable WOI (Open!)

Postby .|| KenzieBoo5 ||. » Mon Nov 21, 2011 6:40 am

Name:
Satinka
(Native American for – “Sacred Dancer”)
Nickname -Tink


Gender:
Female/Fae

Age:
One Years Old

Why I want this WOI:
Many have put this in their form for each WOI they have tried to get, and I think it’s important to do so because you really need to know why that person wants the WOI. I have heard of the species and have really liked the concept with wolves in amour trying to keep their land in peace, even if it takes many wars between friends and foes. In my process of debating which pup from a litter I should try out for, it has been difficult. You need to try out for the one that when you look into their eyes, you feel each other’s souls become one. That happened when I saw Satinka.

Lillian Nightshade did a wonderful job on designing this WOI teenie, though I don’t want it because of that. I want her because I can see me through her two coloured eyes. Satinka is a name that I found while searching for an appropriate name for this teenie, and one that I think is suited for her. She will be treated like a princess and get many drawings from me and others who I order from. I can’t wait to bring her to life in the RP and let her story grow in it also.


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Personality:
The one who is invisible (Shy/Reserved):
Because of her sever shyness, Satinka tends to not be known or heard of by others. It’s like she has never been set on the planet of Isket; when in reality she has. Her past has done this to her, but also because she chooses to be secluded from others. She is rather close to the land of Isket instead of its inhabitants. Since she was little Satinka has been closer to nature than any other wolf that has come across her to become friends or get to know her. Talking is useless to her, along with socializing. If it’s important, than she will talk and socialize with others, but she rather have others come to her if they want to get to know her. Even then, she might not even say a word.

Adventure is her middle name(Adventurer):
Making quests to go out into the land of Isket is like a sugar high for Satinka. Being in one place drives this fae insane and quite antsy. If someone is willing to come along with Satinka on a little adventure, than she is all in for it; sometimes a little too much. She loves to go on adventures in the lands of Isket, but she isn’t a good one to get back, which revolves in getting lost on the way back to home. But to her, that is an adventure all on its own!

Brave little soul(Bravery):
Being small and shy doesn’t mean she isn’t brave at heart. If you think she is the one who would run if a Kronador comes into her path, then you’re wrong. Satinka will try anything that may boost her bravery. If there were ever a game of truth or dare, then she would pick dare because she hates being considered by others as being small and fragile. Ever since she was little, many have said how small she was and they took extra care of her, but Satinka always was the one who ignored their constant help and did things that were meant for older warriors instead of trainies. Whenever warriors were needed to fight off a clan of Kronadors, Satinka would try and sneak off with them to watch or maybe get into the action, but she has always gotten caught in the act.

My Fantasy(Day Dreamer):
The land of Isket may be different in Satinka's two colored eyes, than to any other WOI. She fantasizes that there is no war between the warriors and their enemies, the Kronadors. Or, she thinks that one day, both species can get on some terms and share Isket in peace, even if that time will never come. If you ever see Satinka, then you will probably see her talking to nothing in particuler, or just has this glazed look to her eyes whenever she is just sitting there. Since she is lonely and likes to stay that way, then she tends to talk to the empty space beside her, like someone else is there having a conservation to an old friend. It's true to Satinka, but to others, it not so much. Since the accident with her her older brother, she tends to see him as if he was still living instead of gone from life as death took him. Her brother is the one who truely understood her and was always her guardian in a way, so even if he is gone in the flesh, Satinka still sees his spirit when others don't.

Hopless Romantic or Hard to get?(Flirtious):
Love is usually the last thing on Satinka's mind, but if it ever where to come up, then she would be into it. She's not a big flirt, but she will put herself out there if a certain someone catches her eye. Now, she is a picky fae, so don't expect her to like you because of your good looks, cause it won't happen. You have to be able to sweep her off her paws with not only your charm, but your patience on being able to understand her problems. Her past has scared her, so she has this wall that many can not break easily. If you can break that wall, than you will have a girl who will love you for life and not let anyone else get in her heart but you.

Untamed Fire(Depression/Anger):
Loosing the only other person who understood every fiber of your being to the point that you think your souls are one, it can have a harsh effect on someone. It did for Satinka after her brother passed. Depression has a strong hold on her, though she is able to loosen the ropes and get free, but not for long. Because of being depressed and not able to control it, her anger flares at times. Sweet and gentle is mainly what Satinka is, but there is also a side of her that many don't see. Anger. If she evers gets pushed the right way, then she will lash out, but usually not at that person. She will run off and unleash that anger on objects because she knows that harming someone doesn't solve anything, but makes things worse.

Nature is my home(Nature lover):
This is a weak part of Satinka that many can see by watching how she acts around the land of Isket. Whenever she walks, her paws are gentle on the blue grass and hard ground. The trees are beings that hold many memories and stories that has been brought to the land, so Satinka respects that by sending silent prayers and thank yous to the giant beings. It's odd and many don't understand why this fae is so tuned to nature, but they also marvel her as they watch her every move and listen to every kind word she speaks. Whenever she hunts for her starving stomach, she bows softly and whispers a thank you for the generous gift that nature has given her before eating the meal. It has always been an automatic thing for Satinka to do whenever she walks these lands and she never will stop doing was she does, because Mother Nature should be thanked for all she has done to her children of Isket.


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Memories are Valuable, no matter how painful they can be.
(The last memory that Satinka had of her brother before his passing.)


Almost there, just a few strides and I will be the one! Push....Push!!

All you could hear was soft thumping sounds in the dense forest of Isket at the break of what could be sunset, though Isket is usually under a constant blanket of black skies. The crickets chirped their bedtime melodies as all the small creatures of the day went to rest and all the creatures of the night came to wake. Not all creatures were resting like they were supposed to though. A dark canine figure with an abnormally long tail was running as fast as her long legs could take through the foliage to get to her to where her mind seeks; Satinka was the name she was given at birth. Normally a wolf her age would be with her family's pack sleeping, but see that was a problem. She didn't have a family pack, nor did she have any family. Well, except one person.

Inching her claws into the dirt that made up the land of Isket, the young fae haulted from running and stood frozen in place.

I can't believe it!

Her pupils widened as a familiar scent slid into her spotted nose and ran through her mind that registered the familarity of it.

"I thought you got lost for a minute there."

Deep but smooth like velvet, the voice rang out from the thick bushes that seperated the fae, from the brute. Numbly taking a few paw steps, she moved through the thick foliage to come face to face with her brother; Roran. He was the only family she had left since her family was murdered by a clan of passing Kronadors. That day was a vague memory that was stored far behind Satinka's mind so she didn't have to relive that day. Of course, she was only a moon old(month old), but it was all vivid in her brain.

"Awh, speechless I see. Well I can take care of that!"

Roran was a large wolf with a pelt black as night, but there was a purple irridencese about it that made every wolf frozen with awh. He didn't have the long tail that his younger sister had, but he didn't mind because he wasn't too focused on his looks like Satinka may be. The similar white stripes that Satinka had on her tail, back, and front legs were also on Roran, but only on his neck and back. His eyes were an amber color, which was quite unusual because many WOI had bright colored eyes that weren't as simply colored as Roran's, but like before, he doesn't mind what he looks like.

Aside from what he looked like, now Roran's front legs were bent so his front half of his body was lower than his back half; commonly known as the play bow. Satinka snapped out of her shocked stance a little too late because now her small frame was crushed by her brother's larger one.

"I would get off if I were you!"

Snapping her jaws around Roran's muzzel and shaking her head violently, Satinka was able to get free from his grasp when he backed off yelping in slight pain. Satinka never took a easy on her older brother, no matter how small or young she was, she knew how to push her brother, even if he knew how to do the same to her. Rolling her body on its paws and lifting it off the grassy cliffside floor, Satinka shook her night blue pelt and sat on her haunches to face out towards the night. Roran, despite his new wounds that his sister conflicted on him, sat beside her and looked out in the forest of Isket. The two liked to come out at the this cliffside and imagine the bright orb that many know as the sun come up over the horizon and actually shine some light onto Isket, even if that was impossible.

"How do you manage to beat me everytime, when I'm known for my speed in these woods?"

Satinka broke the few seconds of silence that surronded her and her brother with her curious question. It seemed to nag her because he seemed to beat her to this spot everytime, even if many others have said how impressive her speed was.

"I have my ways, Tink."

A smirk occompianied his muzzel after a rough chuckle erupted from his broad chest, but he stopped once he felt a force collide with his back; Satinka's tail. He knew she hated his little pet name that he gave her, but he loved to annoy her whenever he had the chance. Sibling love.

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Love eachother until the End
(Roran's last breath)


"Roran! Roran!"

On her way to the usual morning meeting that her and her brother usually meet, Satinka spotted what appeared to be large greenish blue coloured beasts who had hooves and claws that can tear anything in their path. Kronador. And they were closing in on Satinka's and Roran's cliffside.

"Roran!! We have company!"

Again, no response! This wasn't like him at all. Satinka was only a mere five feet from the line of bushes and other foliage that seperated the cliffside from the forest, so he surely could have heard her shouting cries. But, no sound. She couldn't hear his deep velvet voice that made her heart melt, nor could she hear any paw steps from any other being but herself. This was a bad sign. A very bad sign!

"Ror-"

In a milasecond, Satinka dug her claws into the dark soil of the ground and braced herself to faceplant into it from the suddon hault. Exactly that happened, but not as badly as she thought. Tumbling into the ground, causing dirt and clumps of blue grass to fly into the air, Satinka rolled a few times until she stopped by the line of bushes that made a border between cliffside and forest. Moaning from the ache that seared through her muscles and limbs, Satinka just layed there for a moment.

Get up you fool!

Cursing under her muffled breath, the fae untangled her limbs from herself and some foliage before managing to stand, though her legs shook violently from pain. Nothing seemed broken nor seriously damaged so that was a relief, but she did have some scrapes and possibly some bruises forming under her dark fur. Setting aside the pain and shock of what just happened, Satink let the concern and panick overflow her nervous system.

Inching ever so softly forward, Satinka came across the border of plants and bushes to be blinded by the stench of fresh smells. All were not smells of plesure, but of sickness. Her two coloured eyes took in the scene that was displayed before her. Destruction and gore. A battle deffianitly played her, but for how long? The obivious answer to the one question that Satinka didn't want to know was infront of her. Roran lost this battle. But, so did atleast one Kronador.

"Roran!"

Screaming with pure sorrow, Satinka ran forward to what appeared to be a dark furred canine figure that was indeed Roran. She slid as she swung her body around his to look into his face, though it had no life on it. His sides didn't rise for air, nor did his amber eyes open to see his dearing sister's form. All life was gone. His body had deep puntures all along his chest and neck, followed by stratches along his sides and hinde quaters. He managed to fight off one Kronader during this battle, but in the end he couldn't take it.

"Now you know why I hate it when you beat me!"

Anger welled up with the sorrow as Satinka slashed at Roran's beaten body, but that anger only lasted a few second before she crumpled in complete despair.

"You amaze me brother, even if it seems I hate you all the time. You amaze me and you always will."

This was the last thing she whispered to her brother's body before dragging herself away from the gorey scene. It took all her well being to keep moving, but that's all she does. Keep moving forward, no matter how painful it is, just keep moving. The scene plays out everyday in her mind, even if she trys to push it back, it never siezes.

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Say 3 things about the WoI Species:
~ WOI's armour consists of a Back Plate, Chest Plate, and Belly Plate.
~ WOI's fight their enemies, the Chimerial Kronadors, for peace on the land of Isket, but both are not strong enough to overrule the other.
~A warrior of Isket could be -
1) A big wolf with Normal Ears
2) A big wolf with Long Ears
3) A big wolf with really Short Ears
4) Have a long tail (Common)
5) Have a normal tail (Semi Common)
6) Have a curled tail (Rare)
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Re: Adoptable WOI (Open!)

Postby fili; » Mon Nov 21, 2011 6:40 am

Name: Skyla
Short story: {Skyla's POV} I love the night. So peaceful, no one to worry about me. No one to pester me. I felt the rain fall onto my silky fur, trickling down my muzzle. I watched the moon in the sky as I padded softly over the ground. The ground was wet, covered with puddles. I stood on a cliff edge. I looked over our land - the valleys and the hills, the caves. I howled faintly. I lay on the edge, in the rain, howling to myself. Yeah, I must look so childlike. I laughed quietly to myself. I pricked my ears, and listened carefully into the night. I heard the water running in a stream in the forest below. I closed my eyes to listen. The wind blew around the mountains. The soothing melody of a birds night song sang me to my sleep.

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Say 3 things about the WoI Species:
Their main rivals are chimera's who are a mix of horse and reptile.
The country is divided into 2 territories.
Warriors of Isket fight to find peace for the land of Isket
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Re: Adoptable WOI (Open!)

Postby Ana! » Mon Nov 21, 2011 6:42 am

Dropping out, whoever wins may have this as fan-art :3
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Re: Adoptable WOI (Open!)

Postby Raella » Mon Nov 21, 2011 6:44 am

Name:
Akiaterine (Aki-ater-ine)
Nickname: Akia

Why I want her:
Well, so many other people added this in, I'm sure it wouldn't hurt for me to put my reasons here too^^

Everyone else here says that the moment that they looked at her, they saw into her soul and wanted her. For me, it started out with a subtle intrest. I was paging through Lillian's gallery (like the fangirl I am) and noticed something. The white swirls got my attention first. I clicked on her picture and it took me to this thread, and I literally had a seizure (xD). She's just so beautiful and different from most other W.o.I's, I just had to have her. But it wasn't just her looks that made the decision for me, it was her endearing little spirit. Something about her eyes really drew me in, she just looked so sweet and innocent.

I've been wanting a WoI for quite some time, but none of the other pups really 'clicked' with me, you know? They're all very beautiful creatures, but they lacked that special something I feel with Akiaterine.

If, by some obscure chance, I actually win her, I promise to (after the intial heart attack) make boatloads of art and short stories dedicated to her. In addition, I'll immediately add her to the WoI role-play and deepen her story there. I have a character thread that's pretty doted on in my opinion, and I'll put her there too, on one of the first posts of course.


In Depth Personality:
I see people addind stuff on to her personality, but I'm thinking I'll try to keep her as close to the original as possible :3
Shy
Akiaterine is what most would describe as shy and usually soft-spoken. This being said, she doesn't really 'put herself out there' in the social sense; she usually likes to keep to herself. She isn't antisocial, however, because she does enjoy the company of like-minded Warriors. It benefits her to have an extrovert in a group who will encourage Akia to interact. Once you get her talking, you'll find that she's surprisingly intelligent and thoughtful, if not a little distracted at times.

Brave
Despite her deceptively quiet exterior, Akia has a rock solid core. The only time she's ver fled from a possible fight was when she was five months old and just starting her training. If anyone or anything threatens to harm those she loves, she'll not hesitate to attack.

Adventurous
It is Akia's adventurous spirit that gets her into the most trouble, yet gives the most rewards. She loves exploring the tunnel system that the WoI live in and has discovered many nooks and crannies that few others know of. Let's put it this way; if a group of her friends were standing around a deep hole looking nervous about going in, Akiaterine would be the first to stick her head in and look.

Day-dreamer
Akiaterine is alway seeing beauty in nature, especially in the white, delicate moths (butterbirds, I think they're called?) that roam Isket. She can often be found just staring into space with a vacant expression, dreaming up imaginary things that only she can see. When it comes time to really focus though, you can trust Akia to not drift off.


Short story:
I tried to keep them short so as not to tire you out :3
The Forgotten Story of Akiaterine's Birth
Kayo trudged across the barren plain, rain and driving wind cutting through her soaked blue coat. Being a loner, she had no pack or even a den to wait out the storm in, and to make matters worse, Kayo was heavy with unborn pups. A white light up ahead drew her attention, and in desperation the mother-to-be staggered towards the glow with the last dregs of energy she had stored up.

It was a moth. Out in the storm, the fragile creature should have been either tossed away by the wind or be torn apart by the rain, but there it was, perching on the branch of a lone, stunted tree. It wasn't much, but the tree provided adaquite shelter for the desperate she-wolf. Kayo collapsed by it's gnarled roots, unable to walk another step.

Her abdominal muscles started to contract. Kayo steeled herself to the pain. An hour later, four pups jockeyed for position beside their mother, securely wraped in her tail and pressed up against her warm belly. The young mother and the newborns were far from safety however, because despite the cover from the worst of the storm, Kayo's fur was getting wetter by the minute. The pups squirmed unhappily when water from their mother's saturated tail began to chill their small bodies, and a wave of despair crashed over Kayo. How could her pups possibly make it to the morning?

Suddenly, one of the pups stopped wriggling. Kayo peeked in, only to see that her firstborn son had died from the cold. "No!" she shrieked, her heartbroken cry torn away by the unforgiving wind. She drew the remaining three even closer, keening in despair as another bundle stopped moving. Kayo vigorously rubbed the two pups she had left in a last ditch attempt to keep them warm. But some things can't be changed, and one of the two survivors' life faded and Kayo could only watch. With three pups dead within the hour, Kayo hopelessly licked her last pup tenderly as it too grew cold and still.

Kayo had no more reason to live. Her pups were dead, her mate was gone, and no one would ever find their bones in the vast, barren expanse. So Kayo died there, under the lone tree during a cataclysmic storm, with a broken heart and four dead pups.

The moth drifted down smoothly, as if the wind had no effect on it, and landed on the last pup's forehead. Her bi-colored eyes snapped open and her ribcage expanded.

Breathe.

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Akiaterine was found the morning after the storm by several Warriors. She was lying beside the bodies of Kayo and her three brothers. A white moth was resting on her forehead.

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A Memorable Instance
Bounding through the dark bluish forest, Akia took in a great breath of air. Wild, intriguing scents filled her nostrils and the thrill of running was enough to make her happy like never before. She passed a stream of tumbling white water, leaping over a large pile of reddish boulders. A whitish, translucent moth caught her eye. It fluttered closer to her, trailing specks of glittering dust in its wake. "Aren't you beautiful," she said to it, reaching to brush its wings with her spotted nose. The moth danced away before she could touch it however, and vanished behind a gnarled old tree. "Come on now," Akia whispered, "wait for me." The blue she-wolf followed the glowing little wraith, swishing her long, full tail. As she rounded the corner, a cold, rank scent assaulted her sensitive nose. Eeuch, what is that?

She looked up. Tough bluish-green skin, shot through with lighter stripes. A stiff, ice-blue mane over a long neck. And green, glittering eyes filled with cold hatred. Akia's blood chilled.

A Kronador!

The beast hissed furiously at her and lurched forward, baring its hideous fangs. With a terrified yelp, Akiaterine whirled around and sprinted back through the trees. She felt hot, rotten breath on the end of her tail and heard jaws snap and miss the tip of it by a hairsbreadth. Trees flashed by and she caught a glimpse of the stream. An idea bloomed in her mind suddenly. Turning sharply, Akia raced towards the rock pile. The Kronador was gaining on her.

With a great leap, she launched herself up to the top of the pile and landed on a large, unsteady boulder. The beast roared and paced around the pile, unable to climb it due to its weight. When its circling placed the Kronador near the stream, Akia made her move.

The young wolf leaned into a huge boulder next to her with all her might. A dry scraping sound emitted from the rock and the whole pile trembled. With one last push, the boulder and several other rocks tumbled down the pile, landing directly on her attacker. The Kronador screamed, the horrible sound making her cringe as the frequencies vibrated in her ears. Climbing slowly down, Akia studied the Kronador that lay broken under the rocks. Only its upper body was uncovered, the rest was crushed by the wieght of the falling boulders. The creature writhed in agony, still hissing defiantly at her.

Akia remembered something; Darzek, one of the Subordinate Leaders, liked to keep the fangs of Kronadors he had killed. By now, the beast under the rocks had gone limp, and with a careful listen from Akiaterine, had stopped breathing.

I killed it, she realized, I actually killed it.

Slowly, she reached down and took one protruding fang in her teeth. She pulled and....it didn't budge. She pulled again and growled when it wouldn't come loose. Akia shook herself violently back and forth, trying to prize the fang from the jaw of her fallen adversary. It wouldn't come loose. A dull shimmer drew her attention from the fang and she saw the moth brushing itself along the shiny blue mane of the Kronador. The mane? I could take that instead. Switching her focus, Akia positioned herself behind the neck. Here goes nothing.

With a strong yank, a large section of the mane came loose. Akia staggered back, landing with a splash in the stream. I got it!

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Rayo and Soraya are the Ultimate Alphas (both owned by TWG90), The grass in Isket is blue, the mountains are a reddish color, and the water is white. It's always sort of dark in Isket, and the wolves live in a cave system high in the mountains. They chose this barren location because enemies and returning warriors can be easily spotted.
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Re: Adoptable WOI (Open!)

Postby .yuanfen » Mon Nov 21, 2011 6:55 am

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Name: Athena (Pronounced ah-thee-nah). Athena was the Greek goddess of wisdom and the arts, and her name is very symbolic to me (for personal reasons).
A Brief Summary of the Story of Athena Athena had one of the more stranger births of Greek mythology. The story begins with Zeus' first wife, Metis, the goddess of prudence. Gaia, the essential personification of the Earth, warned Zeus that Metis' son would overthrow him, following the pattern of his ancestors.
Delving Further Into the Myth: In the beginning, there was Gaia, the Earth, and Uranus, the Sky. Her children were the handsome Titans, the ugly Cyclopes, and the horrifying Hecatonchires. Uranus was angry with the ugly children, and cast them into Tartarus (equivalent of Hell), angering Gaia. She had the youngest Titan, Cronus, attack Uranus, and he fled. Cronus in turn was overthrown by his son, Zeus; so it was quite plausible that Zeus' son by Metis would overthrow him. Zeus quickly swallowed Metis so she could not give birth to a child, but alas, she already had a child, and when Athena was born, and Metis made armor for her, the poundings shook Zeus' head so much that he asked Hephaestus, the blacksmith of the gods, to split it open. Out sprang Athena, fully grown and fully armored.
Therefore...:The markings on the teenie's tail, back, and legs are a bit like lightning, which is one of the symbols/ powers of Zeus, and implying that this WOI inherited markings from her parents, Athena would be a good name for her. Some of her other markings remind me a bit of certain components of an owl, the symbol of Athena. I don't know why. It's just...yeah. *awkward pause*

Short story: Her birth:First off, this WOI wasn't born out of her father's head. That would just be...strange.
The night was cold and unforgiving. Snow and hail drove mercilessly down upon the den under a dead birch tree where a mother wolf shivered. The biting wind seemed to reach all corners, even the deepest, of the den, blowing right through the bones of the mother wolf, and she howled as a sudden gust of wind carried wet snow into the den.
The blizzard had struck suddenly upon the loner as she trotted through the blueish grass of Isket, and in desperation she had searched for a den. It wasn't much, but she'd found a small buildup of rocks on the side of the mountain, and had to make do before the hail began to rain down. To make things worse, she was about to have puppies. Oh, where were the brave wolves that she had heard of, the Warriors of Isket? She knew that long ago her ancestors had separated from the Warriors of Isket during a storm like this one when the Kronadors attacked- oh, she hoped that Kronadors would not find her den now!
Howling in desperation, she cried for the Warriors to save her.


How She Was Found:The armored wolf trotted through the snowy fields, on the trail of a strange scent. Hm? It wasn't one that he knew. It didn't even smell like it had originated in Isket. Ah! There it was, stronger than before! He snuffled at the snow, and noticed paw prints. The wolf who had created them must have been tired, because the paw prints were close together and dragged out, as if it had been limping or shuffling. With a snort, the Warrior ran a bit faster now, following the paw prints, until he reached a pile of boulders. Looking around, he noticed some kronador tracks, and quickly he squeezed into the little cave that the boulders made.
He gasped at what he saw. A bloody female wolf lay on the ground next to a kronador, which was just as bloody. Both appeared to be breathing, but the Warrior needed to eliminate the first threat. Quickly he clamped his jaws around the kronador, and it died without struggling. Then he focused his attention on the female wolf, ears pricking as a low whimpering sound reached his ears. "Save my pup," cried the female hoarsely, lifting her tail to reveal not one, but three pups. "Pup?" echoed the Warrior. There were three...but two were stillborn. There was one still alive, whining and yelping as it was exposed to the cold. It was a little bluish-pup with white markings. "Please!" whispered the female, trying in vain to wag her tail and show she was friendly. The armored wolf looked at the female, then picked up the pup by the scruff. Squeezing back outside, he deposited it on the boulders.
The female didn't look like she would live, despite the shaman's best efforts. Her beautiful green eyes stared at him. The Warrior stared back. And he knew what she wanted him to do. She was worthy of a quick death. Swiftly the armored wolf bent down and crushed her jugular, and backed away quickly as air and blood whooshed out of it. Then, he walked outside, and pushed boulders over the opening. It was as much of a burial as he could give her, as she was not a Warrior of Isket and there was no place for a burial anywhere near here besides this.
The warrior bent down at looked at the pup, straight into its eyes. One was green, the other blue. It whined pitifully. Sighing, he stared at it for a while. And then suddenly he had a vision. It was simply of the pup, grown, in armor, and it erased his doubt. Yipping, he picked the pup up and sprinted as fast as he could, back the way he had come, to bring to his pack this new Warrior of Isket.

Her Training:5 months after that night, in the middle of spring, the Warrior looked down proudly from the top of the largest reddish boulder as the pup he saved began training to become a Warrior of Isket, just like him. But he was old now, and he wasn't sure if he'd be alive after the 7 months that it took for the pup to train to become a soldier. Sighing, the armored wolf watched contentedly as the pup frolicked with the wolf that trained her. He'd thought about training the little pup, whom they named Athena for her courage and bravery despite the violent past of her birth and mother; before she'd came of age, and had almost asked Rayo, but after a bit of pondering, he'd realized that he probably would simply be too old to keep up with the pup through her training. Despite how much it pained him, he let another W.O.I. train Athena. He whimpered quietly and lay his head on his paws. Would Athena even remember him, having being raised mostly by Soraya? She simply knew him as a close friend, and had no idea of her history and the part that he played in it.
Over the last two months of his life, the old Warrior watched her progress, each new thing she learned bringing joy to him as she scampered, stretching her tiny puppy legs, up the tall reddish boulders to tell him what he had learned that day. There came the week when he didn't have enough strength to even stand, and he passed away on the anniversary of her birth. None knew, not even the old Warrior or Athena, but he passed away about the exact same time as she was born.
She was motivated to train harder when one of the more experienced WoI's told her about how Dax and some other Warriors had gone to rescue Nexus and Lyra, and how they had fought off a large kronador. Eagerly, she thought how she wanted to be just like them when she grew up! Dax was such a good fighter; she wished she could be like him. But she'd have to go through that mission to get her armor first...Athena feared it, for other WoI's told her it was very hard. So she decided to train harder, so that she would pass the mission for sure!

Her Personality as a result of all of this:I read that this teenie is "very shy, but still brave and adventurous. Tends to be a day-dreamer, too. So here's her personality, a bit more in detail.
Athena is very shy. She's a bit of a loner most of the time, and only has a few close friends...eh, you could call her an introvert most of the time. She doesn't like being pushed to make conversation- if she doesn't want to talk, don't make her do so. She's a bit awkward when talking to others that she doesn't know, i.e. 5-minute uncomfortable pauses, miserable attempts at social questions; but you should see her around her friends! She loves to have fun and is very enthusiastic about things...sometimes, a bit too rambunctious. Athena is very brave, like her name implies, and is the first to lead the chase or adventure into unknown territory, but is cautious about what she does.
Day-dreaming is a problem. Athena loves to envision different scenarios that are overwhelmingly fantastical and impossible. So some wolves call her delusional. But she isn't, and as her name means, she's wise and reasonable most of the time, but believes that it can't hurt to have fun every now and then. It's hard for her, though, to concentrate for longer than five hours straight. She'll start talking off onto tangents or zoning out, much to the amusement of other teenies and the annoyance of the wolves that train her.

Athena likes: Talking with friends, exploring, dreaming, envisioning things, discovering new things, swimming, running, and thinking that she can talk to butterbirds. Oh, really. She tries, but they don't pay any attention to her. It's all play, though, she doesn't have any motive except for carrying on a one-sided conversation and pretending that they're saying things that favor her. Athena is not sure what the shaman thinks of this.

Athena dislikes: Earthworms...um, also as her name implies, the goddess Athena didn't get along well with Ares, her half-brother. He was the god of war, and enjoyed bloodshed and fighting just because it was fun to watch. So, that's definitely something she doesn't like- teenies that charge at her and attack with brute force and no strategy during training, and wolves that enjoy fighting all the time.

Art: Without armor:http://my-soulless-reverie.deviantart.com/art/W-O-I-Entry-Picture-1-270619396
With wooden armor:http://my-soulless-reverie.deviantart.com/#/d4hhe3j
With full warrior armor:http://my-soulless-reverie.deviantart.com/art/W-O-I-Entry-Picture-3-271235175
Say 3 things about the WoI Species:
    1)The armor of the WoI's was found by the UR's; and it lay in a cave in the forest of Isket. All young WoI's must go on a special mission to retrieve their own armor from the cave.
    2) There are many different types of WoI's. They are all big wolves, but there are variants in the ears and tails. A wolf can have long ears and a long fluffy tail, normal ears and a long tail, normal ears and a normal (round ended) tail, or short ears and a curled tail.
    3) The armor of the WoI's must always have a chest plate and a back plate.

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Re: Adoptable WOI (Open!)

Postby robyn » Mon Nov 21, 2011 7:18 am

Name:
Divinae
Name Translation:
Divine in Latin
Why I Chose This Name:
Lets get this thing straight: I love Latin.
And I love this WOI.
Latin words always sound beautiful to me, and saying them is very fun and sometimes challenging. I wanted a somewhat simple, yet beautiful name for this WOI that fit would her perfectly, but not be hard to say. What do I do? Bring up Google Translate. 8D
This is how I name things: I look at their design, and notice every suddle detail and marking. While studying the design, I think of a few words to describe it. A few things I thought of for her; River, Beauty, Cloud, Sky, Divine. I typed these words along witg many others one by one into the translate box, translate, and keep note of which ones fit her best. After a while, I find that the prettiest one describes the design I am looking at best. In this case, it was Divine.
Personality:
Well, it's up there, but I'll add a bit :
Very Shy, but still Brave and Adventurous. Tends to be a daydreamer, too.
Divinae tends to be very shy and quiet around new wolves and wolves she doesn't know. Although if you know her well, and you are her friend, she will open up and show her crazy side. She will howl like crazy, run around and knock things over, and drive you wild sometimes. She gets hyper easily. She is a quick learner, and catches on easily. She loves the wilderness, and often wanders off into it and occasionally gets lost. She is very kind, sweet, andcaring, but she will spill blood of her enemies if she needs to, or wants to. She down-right hates Kronadors, fore several different
reasons. One, they are all of the WOI's worst enemies, and two, they killed her mother. She has a dark past, yet her personality shows that she is a bright, wonderful girl.
Likes:
Sleeping
Food
The Forest
Training for Battle
Her Friends

Dislikes:
Being Alone
Kronadors

Hurting people's feelings

Why I Want Her:
This is only my second time applying for a WOI. I read the thread,
and it said there that you may only have one unless you have been given special permission. So I thought carefully about the first WOI I was applying for, and I thought "Ok. She is pretty, I an live with having her forever." So I filled out my form. When I had finished, I looked through the Lillian Nightshade's gallery. Then I saw her. I was freaking out, and clicked like a million times. When I finally got to this page, I said "OH MY GOD. OHMYGOD. AAAAAAH. I NEED HER. SHE IS THE ONE FOR ME!" And I was secretly praying inside that I wouldn't win the other WOI I had applyied for, so I could apply for this one. I truly think that she is gorgeous, and I could not think of another WOI being created that I love more <3
Her personality is just like mine, and her colors are beautiful and work so well together. Her markings are simple yet complex, and are gorgeous.


Short story:

"Nobody has ever measured, not
even the poets, how much the heart can hold."


Prolugue - A Dark Past
"Amthoru, What was that?" Meia called, panicked, to her mate. She had only just given birth a few months ago, and she had but one pup left.

"Meia. It's nothing. You need to calm down." Amthoru said calmly. "I won't let anything hurt you." He whispered.
"But-" Meia sighed. Her one pup was nursing quietly, unaware of her missing brothers and sisters. She lay shivering in the crook of her mothers belly. Her blueish pelt was still thin and downy, and extremely vulnerable. Meia's eyes filled with tears, and she began to silently cry. Her and Amthoru were miles from their home, and were hidden away in a small cave they had found a few days before. It was rocky, old, and could fall in at any given moment.
They knew they had to move, but with their pup still to young to
travel so far, they had no choice but to stay. "Oh, Divinae." Meia sniffled. "You deserve so much better than this." Divinae glanced up at the sound of her name, and whimpered at her mother. Her
beautiful eyes gazed up at her mother, staring directly into hers. "Mother, don't cry!" She seemed to be saying, and Meia smiled faintly. Meia gave her pup a rough lick, and she went back to nursing. Then Meia heard it again. It was a deep, unsettling growl, though this time it came with a rustle. She quickly turned to her
mate, and he had heard it too. He stood up, and looked allaround, only to find nothing. "Who's there?" He called, starting to snarl. In return, he received a blow on the head, from no other than a Kronador.

Chapter One - This is Me
I don't remember much about my parents. All I know is their names, Meia and Amthoru, and that they gave their life to Kronadors, to save me. Their only surviving pup. I don't even remember what they look like. I remember being nursed by one of the wolves that had given birth earlier, and the shock when she told me she wasn't my mother, that my real mother was dead. remember sitting deep in the forest, crying. They spent so long looking for me. It were my friends who finally found me, they comforted me, and tried to make me feel better, and I stopped crying, but nobody could heal my crying heart.

From the minute of the first day of training, I knew it was my destiny to kill Kronadors. To let my Parent's soul be at rest, for their little girl. I made a promise to myself that day. To kill any Kronador that comes my way. I told all my friends about this, and they vowed with me. I held my head with pride that day, and many days after.

Lost
I love the woods. There are so many unknown mysteries there, ones we can't even see. sometimes they just float by in the wind, right in front of our noses, and we go on with everyday life, paying not a speck of attention to it. Not me. I notice every detail, even on a single rose petal. I realize the delicacy of a flower, how easily it is crushed, how easily destroyed. I know the strength of my claws. I'm not afraid to use them. I wish I had known when I was young. I wouldn't have let my parents die.
Training can be hard, on the body and mind. One day after training, I wandered into the woods. I had no idea of the horrors I would face.
I was sitting on a large rock by a river. It was like a white ribbon, satin flowing over and under stones. The rushing sound filled my ears, and I heard nothing more. You could say I was daydreaming. I was anaware of everything lurking in the shadows. I gazed at a beautiful tree nearby, of red, yellow, and orange. It's leaves shook faintly in the Autumn wind, and my mind wandered. Before I knew what was happening, I felt a sharp pain stab through my scruff.

To be continued...
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Say 3 things about the WoI Species:
1.) Kronadors are their worst enemy, who have no unique powers other than teeth, claws, and tough skin.
2.) The land of Isket has Reddish mountains, White rivers, and Blueish grass. It is more night than day, and there is no Autumn.
3.) Each Warrior has it's own set of unique armor, which they find on a journey through a deep cave which Rayo and Soraya, the first WOI's, found many years ago.


(Yes, I edited my story a bit when it was closed. I had it all ready, and then it said closed D: I really hope it is ok, I love her so much!)
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Re: Adoptable WOI (Open!)

Postby Transmute » Mon Nov 21, 2011 7:19 am

Lilian Nightshade wrote:Well, she's open for applications now, guys. If you're interested, feel free to post your form ^^.

PS: Thanks a lot for mini mod'ing, RW... X3.


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