Re: WME: Chestnut pinto

Postby ɹǝʇsɐsıp ǝuıʌıp » Wed Oct 26, 2011 8:58 am

Owner:starlegend
Equid Name:Tears from Within
Equid Age:3
Story: I clutched my hands tightly. I was going to a horse auction for the first time ever. It will be so cool to own my own horse! As the truck screeched to a stop, I hopped out before my dad could tell me to stay. I was too excited! I had $750 to spend. My shoes crushed the wet snow that layed over the ground. When I walked to the barn, it took my eyes a moment to adjust. That's when I saw him. He was a gorgeous white and bay stallion that stood about 14 hands high. His name was Tears from Within. He's mine.His name and number were written down on my sketch pad. A did a quick sketch of him before returning to my dad.
"I found the one." I showed him the sketch.
He whistled, "Wow he's a beaut. Hope no one else bids on him."
I nodded, "He's number 8."
Number 8 sold to 2376! Number 9! Can I get $400?

I gasped, "I missed him!" I ran towards the auctioneer, "Who bought number 8?" He pointed at an old man in a cowboy hat.
I raced towards him. He was loading Tears from Within and a few other horses into and old, rusty trailer. "Mister!" He turned around. "Can I buy that bay and white one from you?"
"Well, Missy, I bought him fair and square."
"I-I'll buy him! How much?"
"How does $1,000 sound?"
I gulped, I only had $750!
"I don't have enough. Where is he going?"
"To the dog food company."
I began to cry. "They can't kill him! I won't let them!"
The man whispered, "I can't bear to see you cry. How about this hand me what you can pay and he's yours."
I looked up at him and my eyes sparkled. I wiped my tears away, "Thank you so much. This means the world to me." I handed him the money and grabbed his lead. I led Tears to my dad.
He smiled, "You got him."
I nodded. I began loading Tears.
"You can ride in the back of the trailer if you want."
I smiled, "Thanks Daddy." I climbed in with Tears.
The truck rumbled as it pulled away. A strange sound seemed to be coming from Tears. I looked over and saw a beautiful, long tail. I gasped. "You-Your tail. It-It's beautiful!" Tears had shown me his true form. I got my dream horse that day and I have never let him go.

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Re: WME: Chestnut pinto

Postby Green Arrow » Wed Oct 26, 2011 9:07 am

Owner: Astraeus
Equid Name: Hyperion
Equid Age: 5
Story: In a small glade, in the mountains, a young WME stallion cavorted in the lush grass. The snowy patches on his sorrel coat glistened as he moved, heading for a narrow path that would take him away from the emerald dell. In fact, the shade of the grass was the precise shade of his sea-tinted eyes. Those eyes were now scanning the track ahead of him, wary of the rugged wolves that roamed the terrain. Shrugging off his trepidation, the stallion trotted along the rocky path, moving with a strange grace that oddly suited him, considering he was a male. After a while of steady traveling, he came upon a curled up form, barely breathing. Shivers wracked the body of the female human, and hearing hoofbeats she looked up. "H-hello." She coughed, sitting up. Wary of this human, yet curious, the young WME leaned forwards to touch her forehead with his muzzle. Instantly, the girl seemed to fill with determination. Shakily, she got to her feet and leaned against the gentle creature. Careful not to jolt her, he started to walk down the path, to the human dwellings. There was a bond forged between human and beast. An everlasting bond...

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Re: WME: Chestnut pinto

Postby ~Smiley~Doggy~ » Wed Oct 26, 2011 9:17 am

[code]Owner:samyela
[b]Equid Name:patch work
[b]Equid Age:5
[b]Story:([b]THE HORSES POINT OF VIEW
) I was garzing and a roar of thunder swept beneth my hooves i looked were my heard was and they were gone. I was morn full because my hole family was gone and i hade no hope of finding them. I heard a rustling in the bushes and a strange creature walked out of the bushes on 2 legs. I started to back away slowly but it seemed frendly. I thought what do i have to lose my hole family is gone. So i walked towards the creature and let it touch me. It was as frendly as any one could ever imagein. It started to walk away but it was the only thing to keep me company so i fallowed it. I fallowed it into this big area with alot of creatures like it.
It walked into this big cave looking thing. And picked up this big pice of colored moss so i took it and ate it it ended up not being moss it was a quilt as she called it. I lived many happy years with her but i think that is the day i will always remember.
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Re: WME: Chestnut pinto

Postby bake4u » Wed Oct 26, 2011 9:41 am

Owner:
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Equid Name:
Rail
Equid Age:
two years,2
Story:
The sound of steady hoof beats, hit my ears as I entered the barn isle. The rows of stalls, were filled with tall purebred beauty's. But one stall appeared to be empty, making my way over towards the stall, bedding flung its self out over the door. Jumping back, A large tail appeared, then the rest of the animal. Two barn staff, came running they were wearing winter coats witch made me think they might have been a bit crazy. I only watched from a distance. one of them turned as he ran past. "He just came in, waking up now from his tranquilizer dart"the horse like animal stood up, and flung his head around, kicking the walls, and doors of the wooden stall. bedding still flying out in every direction. the animals eyes met mine in a mid swing of his head. Piercing green eyes meeting mine. Intently staring at me, my gaze didn’t waver but I moved closer. finally close enough to put my hands on the door. the Stable hands, shocked standing there. "Is he for sale?" I asked not even looking over at them. "We just brought him down from the mountains.. But yeah I guess so.. the boss already say's to us they don't wanna um" the male hand, said. The WME Stallion walked up, almost as if he trusted me completely, already placing his nose into my hand. "Ill take him from you" "for a cost...?, you do realize there is hard work into training an animal of this magnitude, and rarity correct?" I nodded " under stand completely... now how does 1200$ sound to you?..
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Before I knew it I was loading, Rail into the trailer, to drive home. I got the name from the rail way, that was to be placed at the base of the mountains later on in the year It seemed to fit.


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Re: WME: Chestnut pinto

Postby canis, » Wed Oct 26, 2011 9:48 am

Owner: .:Canis Love:.
Equid Name: Shard
Equid Age: 3 years
Story: (No, according to my word counter, it is not over 200 words ;) )
Shard was prized. One of the best racers on CS, he had many ribbons and trophies. Shard's previous owners truely loved him with all of their heart's. One day, though, a strong wind picked up. The roof of the barn was soon ripped off, and all that was left were the stalls and the barn's foundation. Shard became frightened, as any normal horse. But he was not normal. He turned and kicked open the gate tht imprisoned him. Shard looked back at his best friend, Ash. He was panicking, but Shard could only neigh to him before the foundation began to collapse, burying Ash in a pile of wood and hay.
Shard was saddened by his friends death, but the Mountain Equid also remembered that he could've been the one, and at this thought, he did the only thing that was natural at this point. He ran. Ever since he was a colt, he had been told stories of the Wild Mountain Equids, like himself, but free. This gave him motivation, and he ran harder. Shard had only just left the large property and saw the mountains in the distance, when thundering hooves sounded behind him. Looking back, Shard saw through his vivid green eyes a nightmare. A human, his owner, rode on the back of his enemy, Rosco. Rosco's eyes were red, as he had always been jealous of Shard. And as Shard ran, a rope tightened around his neck, still running.
He soon felt the rope slicing into his skin. But nothing can stop a racer, or a Mountain Equid. He ran faster and harder. Soon, Shard felt the rope peeling and breaking, strand by strand. He smiled and with one sharp and strong jerk of his head, Shard was free. Running faster, he heard the cursing human and the enraged Rosco stop. Shard galloped, his hooves stepping to the beat of his heart as he head for the mountains.
Soon, he was crunching through the frosted grass. Shard stopped, his nostrils flaring as he caught his breath. Shard found a flat and high rock. Galloping onto it, he could see all that he had ran. From the place where the barn used to be, to the normal horses running towards the meadows. But Shard ran to the mountains, where he belonged. Triumphant and happy, Shard reared up. His enlongated mane waved like the flag of success he felt in his heart, and he long head stretched up. Hooves flaring gracefully, Shard let out a huge and loud neigh. It was the call of freedom.. the call of a Wild Mountain Equid.
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Re: WME: Chestnut pinto

Postby Solanum » Wed Oct 26, 2011 9:52 am

My word counter says it's 481 words? x3
I'm sure it doesn't matter. It still counts as a short story to me, though I think it makes horsy's job harder xD
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Re: WME: Chestnut pinto

Postby canis, » Wed Oct 26, 2011 9:54 am

(Your word counter probably counts the spaces)
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Re: WME: Chestnut pinto

Postby Novallic » Wed Oct 26, 2011 10:19 am

Owner: Tinebrook
Equid Name: Arrow
Equid Age:3
Story: I trotted to my mate, Kereen. She was about to have our first foal, the beginning of a new herd. I nuzzled her happily, watching her with protective eyes. She nickered softly, and layed down. I bent my neck down and nuzzled her mane. The foal came that night, Along with unwanted company.
The next morning, I look over to Kereen to see a little Filly standing on shaky legs. She almost fell, but I caught her before she did. She gave an exited squeaky neigh, and bounded off, closely followed by Kereen. I hadn’t scented or heard the lion, nor seen him. He just sprang out of nowhere and everything went black.
I woke in a Stall, my tail wrapped around me. I looked around, dazed. I saw my new master’s face. I neighed angrily, and sprang to my feet. I collapsed back down, and tried again before I realized that my leg was bandaged. I had encountered humans before, but only when they came to kill us. “It’s alright, arrow. I won’t harm you. “She said, coming to me. I bent my neck to the ground, afraid. She just put a warm hand on my neck and offered me an apple. I took it, knowing this was the start of a new life.


Do you know how many words and sentences i had to cut? XD but, i think it's worth it.
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Re: WME: Chestnut pinto

Postby horsy1050 » Wed Oct 26, 2011 10:31 am

it's fine to go over, though it means more reading for me xD
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Re: WME: Chestnut pinto

Postby ɹǝʇsɐsıp ǝuıʌıp » Wed Oct 26, 2011 10:35 am

how many stories can we write?
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