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Re: {Ahzenai} New; Oelaer | Event!

Postby Onyxeva » Sat Sep 24, 2011 10:03 am



A new Ahzenai has appeared from the vortex- the first to appear on the alt lines as well. Oelaer is his name.

Also, I will be putting up an Ahzenai for wooing on the proboards, I'll announce when that is here so you all know. :3

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Re: {Ahzenai} New; Oelaer | Event!

Postby TheScamperPony » Sat Sep 24, 2011 10:06 am

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Two deep, oceanic blue eyes peered out from the water that gathered at the bottom of the grandiose waterfall in the back of the Ahzen cave. Nothing seemed to the be diferent. The vortex swirled lazily around, as it normally did without preparing to create an ahzenai, though strangely, it began to change colors. The vortex flashed colors of deep, mystic blues along with light blues that reminded one of the sea. A small spatter of pale, glowing yellow was mixed in. Few noticed until someone exclaimed about the oddity that was taking place.

A new look of confoundment clouded in the dark, cryptic pupils of the creature that lurked in the frothing blue water below the waterfall. The eyes, esconced by the white foam of crashing waterfall, watched as paw, moving slowly, emerged from the vortex. Casually, a dark blue, rather bulky ahzenai revealed himself. His pale yellow eyes scanned the cavern, then his jaws split into a large yawn. Slowly, he meandered over to the river and looked into it, smiling at his reflection. True, he was rather vain, but at the same time, he took pride in his natural appearance, taking no time to groom himself at all. He loved the water, for it provided many things for this earth, including life. It also allowed him to see himself and others around him.

"Oelaer." Valcyon called to the crowd of people quietly. The creature in the water made no move to show itself. Instead it just sat and watched, straining it's ears to hear what was going on. The dark eyes watched as the Ahzenai pricked his ears a bit, observing the reflection of those who approached him with interest. He had no problem either staying in Ahzen or going off with a new companion, but he took no interest in debates or things that took a lot of energy. He also didn't like to make plans. He was a 'go with the flow' kind of guy who was easy to get along with. His eyes held a friendly note as he turned to face the crowd. Calmly, he sat down and wrapped his bushy tail around his paws. Lights reflected from the shine of the vortex upon the water danced across Oelaer's blue fur, giving him a magical appearance.

"Hello to all of you." he dipped his head, his deep, relaxed voice resonating around the quiet cave. "I'd like to hear what you have to say." he smiled, an air of calmness radiating from his presence alone. At that moment the creature with the unfathomable, deep oceanic blue eyes knew what it had to do.

Paw by paw the creature pulled it's self from the water, quickly shaking off any access water that clung to it. It stalked calmly into the soft light of the caves, revealing it's elite feline shape. Beautiful blue and gold markings swirled all around it's sturdy body. It's coat was much like that of Oleaer, but darker. It was that that held the swirls and patterns that incaptivated it's body, making the fur go from gorgeous to something beyond gorgeous.... something beautiful.

And then it was gone, back into the deep shadows of the cave. All gone. All except those dark, mysterious blue eyes.

Silent pawsteps carried the creature on a lethargic pace towards the new Ahzenai, Oelaer.

"Hello, Oelaer," rang a transcendental, but mysterious feminine voice. Once again the feline figure came out of the shadows, letting the light touch her soft fur. She sat calmly in front of Oelaer, wrapping her tail around her tenacious paws.

"I've heard you're the new guy around here," she said. "Looking for a companion." Her dark ocean blue eyes looked intently into his. She shook a drop of water from the tip of her nose. Then she remembered she had not yet told this Ahzenai her name.

"My name is Aeycorr."

Her face showed no emotion, but her voice seemed friendly and welcoming, embracing his presence before her. Her eyes seemed to smile though she did not. She stood and stretched, etching her needle claws into the soft cave ground.

"I supposed you will be wondering why I would like to be your companion," she began, stalking in wide circles around him. She seemed relaxed, not fazed by the pressure put on her to impress him. "I noticed you like water for one," she went on. "As do I. I love how it shines in the right tone of light, the way it feels as it slides through my fur." she closed her eyes, as if she were imagining a nice swim an a lazy summer day.

"I live in a cave- it's quit comfortable, actually- that is by the sea. It's not the most... attractive? But it is certainly not languid. Every night I fall asleep with the sun licking my pelt, warming me like a mother would her newborn. The tide brings the water part way into my cave in the mornings... it's so wonderful." her eyes glowed with affection for her home.

"Wouldn't it be great if we were companions?" she said, a purr in her voice. She sat once again in front of him, holding his gaze. "We could live in my cave, relax by the water all day. It would be just so glorious!" Her eyes, those eyes that captured the pure essance of the ocean, shimmered with excitement.

"It gets so lonely in my cave... it would really be nice if someone else was there. I mean come on, how many other humans can offer you what I can?" she purred, a hint of persuasion in her voice. "I would love to be your companion." she paused to stretch once more, her forelegs sprawling out in front of her. She tilted her blue head, searching his eyes for answers. "All those other people, those other suitors, why choose them? We could be so much more." Her voice held a note of superiorness as she tried to persuade him to come with her.

Aeycorr stood, preparing to leave. She walking up close to him, leaning in to whisper in his ear. "Consider what I've got to offer," she murmered. "Oh, and I almost forgot." She backed up and dropped a dagger before him. It's blade was pure blue crystal, it's handle amythyst, giving it the appearance it was pure water. It shone in the dim light from the vortex, making it look like it was... flowing. "This is for you," she said before disippearing back into the shadows, leaving only those deep ocean blue eyes staring out at Oelaer, their necromantic spark calling for him to follow.
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Re: {Ahzenai} New; Oelaer | Event!

Postby Horneddragon » Sat Sep 24, 2011 10:15 am

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Oelaer

Callie awoke with a start, a light cry erupted from her mouth as she realized she was face to face with the unusually long pointy teeth of some alien orange shark. Wait. Not a shark. just Jerico. her sigh of relief sent a visual shudder through her body, she rubbed her arms attempting to rid them of the goose bumps that has formed. though she was a surfer and had been surfing literally since she could successfully balance on a board, she detested sharks, no she feared sharks. it was a paralyzing fear, one she had carried since she saw her uncle get attacked by one. she shook her head one last time, her arms were still bumpy, but weather it was from the dream, or the could air that filtered through the cave she did not know. lightly she cursed her luck for fallowing Jerico with only her bikini and a towel on.




Yawning she looked around, her eyes fell on a small glimmering object, reaching forward her thin fingers met the smooth surface of a pearl. A half smile touched her lips as she brought the small jewel closer to her, inspecting its glowing surface with knowing eyes. She was mesmerized by its glow, almost like the small object held a small pulsating fire with in, like it held its own small fire just beneath its surface. Reluctantly she drug her eyes from the pearl, and slowly reach across her sleeping companion depositing the pearl in her bag. Making a silent pact with herself to never let Jerico know about its whereabouts. She knew that it would break his heart if he knew the stunning Ahzenai female he had given it to as a token of his affection had given it back, and she could not bear that ever happening to him.

She shook her head, as if the simple motion would dispel the disturbing thoughts that had danced across her mind. She again let her eyes wonder, they fell this time on a happier scene, a small group of Humans and Ahzenai had formed, following where she thought their gaze lead, her eyes settled on the vortex. It had changed to a deep Royal blue, a color so glorious it dulled all others around it. Callie's mouth fell open in awe and slowly slowly she rose to her feet,silently, eyes never leaving the dancing vortex, she secured her towel around her in a makeshift dress. She had missed the last Ahzenai being born, and she would not miss the next. With light almost soundless steps she quickly made her way to the growing crowd.

No sooner had she made her way to the front of the group, than a single paw emerge from the vortex, it was as blue as the sea. Her heart fluttered at the sight, her breath caught in her through with wonderment. She knew she was witnessing a miracle. As her lungs screamed for air the Ahzenai fully revealed himself, he was as blue as the sea and sky, like both ancient deities had collided together to form his pelt. Callies pent up breath rushed out of her body in a loud audible Woosh. slightly embarrassed she sheepishly gazed around the crowd, if anyone had heard her they were too mesmerized by the New Ahzenai reprimand her.
she looked back up as she heard the Older dark Maroon Ahzenai call out a name
"Oelaer"

Oelaer,
Her murmur was barely audible to her self, let alone those around her. Her eyes fell to the Young Ahzenai once more, he had settled down next to the river, a perfect picture of how she had reacted when she first wondered into the cave herself. A slight smile fell across her face, she wanted to approach him but for the life of her, she did not know how. Slowly she fell to her knees she would wait until the time was right. She would watch those approach him before her, and learn on her feet how exactly to woo an Ahzenai.

It Did not take her long before she was confident in her abilities, with a sigh she was up onto her feet. Her nerves, ripped at her stomach as she approached visibly shaking with adrenaline, and fear. This was nothing like when she first met Jerico, but then again their connection just sort of happened. Finally she was directly in front of the other Ahzenai, opening her mouth to speak to her dismay all that came out was a strangled croak.

Her eyes widened in despair and her hands flew up to her mouth, catching a squeak in her throat. She was so, not ready for this. She closed her eyes and forced herself to calm down, taking a series of deep breaths. When she opened her eyes yet again, she met the Ahzenai's dreamy golden eyes. An unusual calm came over her, she let her hands fall back down to her sides as a sy almost dreamy smile fell over her mouth. He was just so dang beautiful.

"Ello der, mi name's Callie. I 'pologize if i 'fend yah in any way. can't say oi've evah wooed an Ahzenai like yah self. Though I 'ave a Ahzenai fah a Freind-uh mine. Yah 'esly on ah duh most magnificent Ahzenah oi've evah had duh pleasure ah meetin'."

Her odd accent was quite prominent in her speech this time around, a slight chuckle shook her body, she could only hope he could understand her.

" I say yah like Water, can tell juss bah duh way yah look at it. Oi live bah duh water miself, I was raised der. Some say oi shud have fins, on account a how much oi mah time oi spend in dah water uh by dah shore. Oi love it, n If yah 'side ah- company me oi'll take Yah der. ih-tall be Jus' Yah, nd meh, nd Jerrico. I'mm Sah yu'd like 'im Jerrico waus preatty much bawn on duh wa'er 'imself. Yah could join us serfin' ah juss lay on dah beach listen' tah duh waves crash genst dah sand. Sup tuh yah though, I'm not gonna fawrse yah if yah don'se wanna come long."


Callie fought off the urge to reach out and touch his fur. instead she nodded at him in good bye, pulling her makeshift towel dresscloser around her body she slowly made her way back to the area were Jerico was still sleeping.
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| Woo for Oelaer |

Postby Kat. » Sat Sep 24, 2011 10:21 am

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"Bye, Bleu! See you in a few weeks, girl!" I watched as my best friend Emily drove off with my dog, taking her for a dog show. I probably wouldn't see her for a few weeks, but it was OK, since she loved to run and play with other dogs.

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My cotton candy perfume seemed to fill up the whole bus as we sped along. What was I doing? Running away like this... Nah, I wasn't running away... Just taking a drift away from heartbreak. I felt as if all that had happened was buying flowers and trinkets, with cool little shines and dewy droplets that seemed to sparkle like the sun. But nothing had worked. I peered out the bus window, watching as people passed with ear buds crammed in their ears or their pit bulls lolling along happily. Every day seemed the same, with everybody doing the same thing, and I had even seen the same dude with the same iPod and the same spotted black and white labrador.

I couldn't hold back the sigh. It seemed to escape me, laughing at how I didn't even want to hold it back. My mind seemed to drift off into wonder, dreaming up unimaginable Ahzenai. For each Ahzenai, they had a special rose, all different colours with wet, gleaming dew drops gliding down the stem.

"Excuse me? Is this seat taken?" I looked beside me, taking the weight of my face off my sore hand. A small girl, with a beaming smile across her face, "Umm... No, you can take it." the girl sat down, wiggling and twisting to try and get comfy. "So! What's your name?" she stared at me. I blinked once, then turned to face the window. "Hello?" she coaxed. "Aaaaaarrrrree yoouuuuuu deeeeaaaafffff?" she said slowly. By the tone of her voice, I think she actually thought I was... "Er -- no. My name is Razz (LOL)." she giggled, and turned to talk to the boy beside her.

FINALLY! Some peace and quiet. I stared out the window again, letting my green eyes trance me again. This time, I dreamed up a loominating blue Ahzenai, crawling across a sandy shore, lonely and in need of a friend. A name came in my head: Oelaer. Weird name, huh? I thought it was cool, but to the average human being it would be a little awkward -- "IS THIS YOUR STOP?" the girl said, with small drops of spit taking orbit to my face. I wiped them off with my sleeve and looked at her, "Yeah, sure." I got up, and squished passed, speeding towards the exit.

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My feet scuffed the hard dirt as I came wading through the people-thick crowd. A large stone started squawking at my screaming hip, which hurt from a bike fall.

As I sat down, a cool chill shot through me, which woke me up from my Ahzenai-filled trance. When my glazed eyes awoke and widened, all I saw was blue. It wasn't the pale blue you'd find on most modern jeans, either. It was the blue you envy and plead for, for just another peek... It was the blue from Oelaer. No... It couldn't be from Oelaer! He was a figment of my imagination. I looked over at Valcyon, who I casually admired for his wisdom.

"Oelaer!" He announced to the surprisingly quiet audience.

Oh crap.

I watched Oelaer emerge from the vortex, from paw to tail. My astonishment kept me from running to him and tackling him just for me to stare for endless days. My fingers and palms twitched as my anxiety came bubbling over. I looked at my side for Bleu, but she wasn't there. Her usually soft enjoyment -- disapeared -- filled my heart with sadness til I thought I was going to choke on it.

Just then a mob of suitors waved through me, crashing me down to the floor. They were like crazy girls gone mad, as if Oelaer was Justin Bieber or Grayson Chance... I followed them, interested to hear what Oelaer was going to say. But over all teh girls screaming and shouting I couldn't understand anything!

I pushed aside a rather short girl, who -- like dominos -- pushed over the next, who crashed onto the next, who fell on the next, then lastly only about three girls were left standing -- an me. They all stared at me, then at Oelaer, as if he would tell them where to pinch me.

I glared at each girl, until finally they packed up the papers from their pockets and left. This left me alone with Oelaer...

I sat down next to him, then I looked up solemnly, with a twinkle in my eye. It was rather hot here in Ahzen, so I took off my coat and scooted closer to the Ahzenai, "Umm... Hi," I said nervously, "your Oelaer, right? I'm Razz..." I put my face in my hands, embarrassed and nervous, "I had this... I don't know... Dream, I guess -- about you. You were blue, of course, and you seemed lonely." I paused, to let him take it all in if it seemed weird, "Are you lonely?" I finally asked, putting my hands behind me for me to lean on. They pressed into the soft earth, leaving little hand prints with long 'piano-fingers', as my mom had called them.

I waited for a reply, but got none, "If you are... I'd... I'd like you to come with me." I bit my lip, staring at the ground, "You know, to be my companion. I think... Maybe we'd really like each other, you know." my feet seemed to twitch anxiously, waiting for me to run away in terror, "What I meant to say, was... Well I guess I'm just lonely. Bleu seems lonely, too. She's my rough collie, by the way. I wish she could have met you... She really loves Ahzen, and all the creatures in it."

I smiled a little, then reached in my pocket, pulling a picture pf Bleu, "See..." I handed it to him, then stood up and hugged the big blue Ahzenai, "Please come with me... On my journeys and adventures. It'll be fun!"

I smiled.
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Re: {Ahzenai} New; Oelaer | Event!

Postby Onyxeva » Sat Sep 24, 2011 10:22 am

HD; It's possible, Ikarin wrote his intro so I don't think it was anything intentional. Also he is gas, I'll make a preview image for the alt lines like I did for the original- that way you can tell what element is what. xD
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Re: {Ahzenai} New; Oelaer | Event!

Postby keydemon » Sat Sep 24, 2011 10:24 am

Sorry, it was nothing intentional. xD;;;
I haven't looked at many ahzenai personalities, but Onyx told me he was laid back and chill, so yeah. x3
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Re: {Ahzenai} New; Oelaer | Event!

Postby l o v e l y ~ » Sat Sep 24, 2011 10:25 am

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I would like to use my Live Rat

After the suprising entrance of a handsome blue ahz I looked at him and knew he was the one for me. I carefully made my way over and put my hand on the leather bag that hung down on my side. I felt the rat move around slightly and knew I would have to get it out of there soon or it would eat its way out. I thought about what I could do with it. hmm. I snapped my head up and smiled to myself. They had said that ahzen like rats, I could give it to him. maybe he would come with me... I dreamed of the fun we could have together and nearly walked into him. I smiled, [color=#FF00BF]"Oh, hey. I am Kite. Oelaer right?" I smiled and opened my bag, "Well anyways I found this live rat and I really had nothing to do with it. Would you like it?" I said setting it down and managing to hold it down without it biting me.
I looked at his blue appearence and thought of the beautiful colors and how well they contrasted. I looked at him and he caught me staring, I refused to embarassed myself in front of him and smiled, "Your color contrast is great." I knew by the way he had walked and looked into the water he was proud of his looks and I tried to brag on him without seeming cheesy, " That element on your back is nice. I like the power of gas. And my favorite colors are blue and orange too." I smiled once more, stumping my toe again. I looked at him once more, "I would like it if you came with me. but if you don't want to no problem. What ever you want." I lifted my hand up and the rat scurried towards him. I hoped he would pick it up, maybe that would mean he wanted to stay with me... but whatever he decided I couldn't change his mind. I would just have to go with the flow. I would not worry about it. My worrying wouldn't change his mind. I just decided to wait... And maybe I would go fishing...
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Re: {Ahzenai} New; Oelaer | Event!

Postby ShyAnnaSophia » Sat Sep 24, 2011 10:51 am

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Ahzenai you're applying for: Oelaer

Short Woo: (doesn't need to be too long, 2-3 paragraphs would be perfect.:
I walked around after my dog named Roudy my blue tick hound.He piked up his pace and his tail flew up as he darted at something barking widly.I was worried and scared at first till i seen it was a Ahzenai he was so BEAUTIFUl!!I wanted a companion other than my old hound.I watched him then smiled,"Hi!You sure look very nice today!"I smiled pacing torwards him with a huge smile on my face.
I smiled,"I live in a huge house only me andmy old dog,I like to watch tv.I love to excersize."I smled petting him softly i kept petting him then got up,"You would be a awesome companion i would do whatevert you wanted i would play with you everyday and pamper you you ask for it you get it!"

(SOrry it would be longer but a friend is coming over)

Sum up why you want this Ahzenai:I love the color blue!!This new design isso so awesome this Ahzenai is beauful!This would be my first time winning one if i win it!
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Re: {Ahzenai} New; Oelaer | Event!

Postby *~*BurningStars*~* » Sat Sep 24, 2011 10:53 am

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Re: {Ahzenai} New; Oelaer | Event!

Postby jern. » Sat Sep 24, 2011 11:09 am

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