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Re: {Ahzenai} New Ahz; Levorith // New Event!

Postby Nimaine » Fri Sep 16, 2011 9:50 am

This post contains two things, a personality for Passa and a woo for Levorith:

Passa's personality (at long last)
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After her infamous and undignified exit from the vortex, the beautiful but astonishingly lazy Passa refused to move even the smallest part of herself. She had no interest in anything or anyone who came to woo her. Not until two Ahzenai named Benediction and Sartores found her lying there, and did something drastic about it (tossed her in the cold river), did she bother reacting to her surroundings. Now, because of constant, unwilling companionship with these two Ahzenai, Passa is accustomed to spending slightly more energy during the day. Her greatest desire, however, is still to be left alone, and to that end, her tepid interest in the world around her is aroused long enough to discourage any of dreams or plans. She likes to advise other Ahzenai to quit or give up, especially if they intended to do something energetic that she might be forced to become involved in. Drastic, tough-love measures are still the best way to reach the inner Passa. Though she doesn't mind recieving kindness, don't expect her to bother thanking you.













Woo for Levorith, using shiny rock item:
After an unsuccessful woo, Sartores crept sadly back to his friends. Benediction frowned at his mood. "Don't take it so hard," she tried to say kindly, "Everyone gets rejected by someone. Look at that guy over there. See him? He got rejected by that female, and he sure doesn't care." She continued to watch Levorith. "In fact, I'd say he's going to get rejected by a lot more females."

Benediction's voice held even less love than usual, and this caused Passa to glance at the source of Benny's annoyance. Her lips curled slightly. She was too lazy for a full-scale grin. Here was her chance at revenge! And it wouldn't take much energy to talk to someone. Getting him over her would be easy. She knew her rainbow-colored markings were considered beautiful, and Benny, despite her love of battle, moved like a dancer. Passa pulled her head up, and tried to arrange her limbs more artistically, the way Benny did naturally. Eventually achieving a look she liked, she called out, not too loud, as that would require more breath than she cared to acquire, "Hey Levorith, I see you have good taste! Don't limit yourself to one part of the cave, darling," she finished with her lazy smile. Benediction was scowling at her, Sartores seemed shocked. Good, she thought, this is working already.
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Postby Sabatea » Fri Sep 16, 2011 10:05 am

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There was a sudden shift in color, a transition from earth browns and reds to contrasting teal streaked with whorls of pink, as the vortex again worked itself in to frenzy, signaling the imminent arrival of a new Ahzenai. The occasional flashes of rosy whites seemed to eddy and drift at once faster and against the remainder of the vortex, almost mesmerizing in their distinctiveness. The pink bands paused but for a moment, then swiftly converged to a circular central mass, bright spots of gray gold popping and flickering, until a smooth-stepped Ahzenai glided effortlessly out, the pink colors fading as though he was pulling them from the vortex as he left.

He chuffed once, twice, a sort of throat clearing cough that implied disarming ordinariness, professing that he was but another conventional Ahzenai, and would not be prone to any form of strangeness or peculiarity. Wooing him, then, should seem a simple enough task, his unassuming personality further implied as he seemed to wait for further instruction or direction, with no particular inclinations of his own.

“Levorith,” declared Valcyon, as though there was something to be noted, something memorable, in the name if nothing else.

Before making his way to the humans, all eagerly awaiting his first move, he meandered a bit, circling around his fellow Ahzenai, the picture of innocent curiosity searching for reassurance. Guileless pale gold eyes blinked rapidly, absorbing all he saw with gusto. If his eyes tended to linger on those with finer shapes, more interesting markings, higher quality posture, the most riveting conversation, this too could easily be attributed to curiosity. It was only when Levorith became prone to initiating direct contact with these more appealing Ahzenai that an inkling of truth was shown; his judgment of character and desirability lied predominantly with his own aesthetic sense, and he would have his desires and conclusions be known.

A saucy wink and purr ruthlessly shattered any preconceptions of naivety; here was an Ahzenai who knew what he wanted and was not afraid to go get it. The female he’d been cozying up to snapped, rather offended by his chauvinistic antics, and he backed up with a jaunty hop skip, physically speaking, ‘you’ll be bake for more later, babe, I promise.’

Finally turning away from the congregated Ahzenai, he returned his attention to the humans. Obviously playing innocent was a guise run out of purpose; a different tactic must be here employed. So he strutted, placing one navy blue paw in front of the other in an exaggerated, highly predatory swagger, dark blue tail flicking sharply side to side, head help high and nose lifted at the optimum angle for balancing plates.

He made for the females first, naturally, for they were clean, smelled sweet, and tended towards visually appealing clothing, adorned with trinkets that only further highlighted physical beauty.

“Voulez-vous coucher avec moi?” came a rumbling purr, molten voice dripping with innuendo.


Designed by nocNoctua, written by Mukumuku.

Judging will occur on: September 17th.



I looked up as I saw the vortex begin to change colors, from a brown and red to a teal blue and pink. I curiously awaited the new Ahzenai's "birth", wondering what that color design would look like. I watched as a royal-like Ahzenai leapt from the vortex, his pink siwrls flashing brightly against his blue fur. I watched as he approached a female Ahzenai, though she seemed disgusted by his attempts at roamance with her and padded away. I laughed at this Ahzenai, wondeirng what it would be like to have the flirty creature at her side.

Mist padded up beside me as the Valcyon called his name for all to hear. "Levorith." Valcyon called and the name stuck in my head. Mist eyed the Ahzenai, "Handsome, but not very good at flirting." Mist grinned, watching as Levithor asked, “Voulez-vous coucher avec moi?” I wondered what it meant. It sounded like French to me but I wasn't sure. Mist glanced at my confused expression and rolled her eyes, explaining to me. I laughed, "Well, we might aswell go meet the flirt." I grinned, walking towards the large group of females that eagerly awaited his inspection.

Mist padded after me, her excitement obvious, though she tried to hide it. We waited for the ring of humans and animals to thin out before pushing our way to the front. I couldn't help but glance at what I was wearing, a little annoyed at my clothes, but I wore a nice necklace with a charm that depicted a beautiful waterfall. Mist eyed me dissaprovingly before noting the necklace. She nodded a little, "It adds more color." she said, grinning a little as she fixed her fur quickly, sitting down with her tail curled over her paws.

I laughed at her, "I think you're hoping to woo him just as much as me!" I grinned at her and she rolled her eyes, though she didn't protest. I glanced at Levithor to find him near me and paused, wondering what to say. Mist padded forward some, "Well Levithor, you've got a nasty mind." she said, her eyes sparkling as she murmured, "I like that about males, always trying to make the females fall head-over-heels before your glory." she grinned, gently brushing her tail under his chin as she added, "See you around soon I hope." before returning to her place beside me. I held back my laugh as best I could as I noted his regal appearance and the confident way he held his head, proudly standing before me. "Your a pretty nasty boy, aren't you?" I grinned, laughing lightly at myself as I said, "I've never met an Ahzenai like you, Levithor, I hope to see you around sometime soon." I leaned forward and kissed his nose before turning and walking away.

Mist laughed at me, "I don't think he'll bye it." she grinned as she padded after me, glancing back over her shoulder to note his regal stance and predatory walk, as if trying to find the juiciest peice of prey. She rolled her eyes at him, though she couldn't help but grin wider. "I'm nott he only one who likes him I see." I teased her, leapingout of the way as she swatted at me with her large paw. I laughed racing away as she chased me.
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Re: {Ahzenai} Quida winner; pg 409 // New Event!

Postby Aima » Fri Sep 16, 2011 10:52 am

Onyxwings wrote:Ainki/3B; Ainki do you mean like what 3B put? Where I'd have the Ahzenai's name then put the nominations underneath?

Ainki; I crossed out your name? :o


Well truly I don't like that idea because then it makes people more judgmental on the amount rather than the quality of the work.
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Re: {Ahzenai} New Ahz; Levorith // New Event!

Postby Horneddragon » Fri Sep 16, 2011 11:59 am

I'd like to nominate someone!
Their Username: NocNoctua
Link to Woo: viewtopic.php?f=58&t=642838&p=16971618&hilit=Fane&sid=cb29062aff8605cf6e17da60ac9661d0#p16971618
Why you like this woo: Noc's wooing of Fane was one of the first few i had ever read when first finding the thread, and it is one of those i can never forget.
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Re: {Ahzenai} New Ahz; Levorith // New Event!

Postby nowi » Fri Sep 16, 2011 12:30 pm

Onyx, who is "Nabetse"?
I was looking through the event post, and I was confused as to who this Ahzenai was.

    i am no longer that active on cs.
    i am looking to trade all of my pets for art or fr!
    if interested you can pm me or send a trade c:

    i am still using all my ocs!

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Re: {Ahzenai} New Ahz; Levorith // New Event!

Postby Firefly_Dreamer » Fri Sep 16, 2011 12:56 pm

Can you buy items with hoard pets?
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Re: {Ahzenai} New Ahz; Levorith // New Event!

Postby ♛ feral » Fri Sep 16, 2011 1:23 pm

-raises hand-

How do we know if we've been nominated? {Just asking, not that I have been nominated, I haven't unless they sent it in PM form}
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Re: {Ahzenai} New Ahz; Levorith // New Event!

Postby Bast-et » Fri Sep 16, 2011 2:29 pm

Woo using: sharp dagger
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~AhnenRah noted Bast's disheartened face.
"It's alright Bast, she just would have walked around with her nose to the ground if she picked us. We'll be faster now" he told her in a falsely cheery voice. Bast managed a smile for him, but it was shaky and weak.
"I just need something to keep me occupied" she said, "Feel like helping me dress up in my egyption outfit from the trip there?" Rah readily agreed for her sake, and gave her hair critics as she placed a gold circlet with the traditional cobra on her head.
"How do I look?" she asked spinning in a slow circle. With her long hair down from it's usual ponytail, in an outfit of creams and blues, and shining gold jewelry, Bast looked every bit the egyptian godess.
"You look wonderful Bast, just like your namesake. Here, let's go down by the pool so you can see." Rah and Bast walked down to the water, and Bast looked in.
"Wow, I don't look like me." she breathed.
"Yes you do, just a fancier you" Rah declared. This time Bast smiled, and it stayed strong and clear. At that moment, the vortex began spinning again...


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There was a sudden shift in color, a transition from earth browns and reds to contrasting teal streaked with whorls of pink, as the vortex again worked itself in to frenzy, signaling the imminent arrival of a new Ahzenai. The occasional flashes of rosy whites seemed to eddy and drift at once faster and against the remainder of the vortex, almost mesmerizing in their distinctiveness. The pink bands paused but for a moment, then swiftly converged to a circular central mass, bright spots of gray gold popping and flickering, until a smooth-stepped Ahzenai glided effortlessly out, the pink colors fading as though he was pulling them from the vortex as he left.

He chuffed once, twice, a sort of throat clearing cough that implied disarming ordinariness, professing that he was but another conventional Ahzenai, and would not be prone to any form of strangeness or peculiarity. Wooing him, then, should seem a simple enough task, his unassuming personality further implied as he seemed to wait for further instruction or direction, with no particular inclinations of his own.

“Levorith,” declared Valcyon, as though there was something to be noted, something memorable, in the name if nothing else.

Before making his way to the humans, all eagerly awaiting his first move, he meandered a bit, circling around his fellow Ahzenai, the picture of innocent curiosity searching for reassurance. Guileless pale gold eyes blinked rapidly, absorbing all he saw with gusto. If his eyes tended to linger on those with finer shapes, more interesting markings, higher quality posture, the most riveting conversation, this too could easily be attributed to curiosity. It was only when Levorith became prone to initiating direct contact with these more appealing Ahzenai that an inkling of truth was shown; his judgment of character and desirability lied predominantly with his own aesthetic sense, and he would have his desires and conclusions be known.

A saucy wink and purr ruthlessly shattered any preconceptions of naivety; here was an Ahzenai who knew what he wanted and was not afraid to go get it. The female he’d been cozying up to snapped, rather offended by his chauvinistic antics, and he backed up with a jaunty hop skip, physically speaking, ‘you’ll be back for more later, babe, I promise.’

Finally turning away from the congregated Ahzenai, he returned his attention to the humans. Obviously playing innocent was a guise run out of purpose; a different tactic must be here employed. So he strutted, placing one navy blue paw in front of the other in an exaggerated, highly predatory swagger, dark blue tail flicking sharply side to side, head help high and nose lifted at the optimum angle for balancing plates.

He made for the females first, naturally, for they were clean, smelled sweet, and tended towards visually appealing clothing, adorned with trinkets that only further highlighted physical beauty.

“Voulez-vous coucher avec moi?” came a rumbling purr, molten voice dripping with innuendo.


Designed by nocNoctua, written by Mukumuku.

Judging will occur on: September 17th.


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AhnenRah sat down in a regal pose beside Bast and told her in a conversational tone,
"I don't like him. He's rather full of himself isn't he," expecting her to agree with him. Bast watched him, a smile tugging at her lips.
"I rather like him. He's very full of himself. Like another Ahzenai I know" Bast replied shooting Rah a look. Rah curled a lip but said nothing. Bast watched Levorith as he stalked through the crowd. His muscles were well defined, and he had a good balance from what she could tell. He would be a good travel mate, capturing the love of many foreigners, and maybe, maybe, getting them some good deals on supplies and such.

"I think I will go talk to him" Bast told Rah, straightening her circlet.
"Go woo him you mean"
"Yes. Tell me honestly you wouldn't enjoy having someone to talk to besides me. Somebody to compete with and who would push you. Look me in the eyes and tell me that"
Rah looked into her green eyes, opened his mouth, and then looked down,
"I would like someone to be like my brother. Levorith would be an honorable Ahzenai to have with us. I just don't want him to pass us over." Rah admitted.
"If we only strive for things that we are certain of, we will be striving for death. Because that's the only thing we know we will ever have for certain." Bast told Rah, a sad smile on her face. "Not to be depressing or anything."
"Not at all" replied Rah sarcastically. "Just go woo my future travel brother"
"I'll do my best"

Bast glided through most of the other wooers like a swan through ducks, although she knew it was only because of the happy chance that she had put on her clean nice clothes. On any other day she would have blended in perfectly and would have been a wallflower. Her circlet gleamed and in the low light of the cave, Bast's white robes seemed to glow. She approached Levorith at a leisurely pace, and arrived before him as another suitor was leaving, overawed expression and all. She gave Levorith a slight bow and spoke as smooth as she could,
"You caught my attention. Not many Ahzenai are such supreme actors just moments from exiting the vortex. And even fewer are so confident and sure of themselves." Bast took a small but sure step forward. "I would like to know you better. You interest me. By traveling with me, you would experiance the cultures of the world. As of now, I am planning a trip to Europe with AhnenRah" hearing his name, Rah padded forward, his strides quick and silent. He arrived beside Bast and wrapped a tail posessively around her ankle to send a message to Levorith- Bast is my beautiful human, find your own. Rah knew that the challenge would interest Lavorith, and the devotion of another Ahzenai would make Bast even more of an attractive travel partner. Bast gave Rah a smile and a secretive wink to thank him, and continued with her speech.

"From the personality you have shown so far, I know you to be a brillant actor, a good flatterer, and a powerful Ahzenai. You would be honoring us by traveling with us." Bast drew a sharp dagger from the waist of her robes, the blade glinting from reflected light. She offered it to Lavorith, hilt first.
"Please accept this gift from us as a promise of our sincerity."


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Re: {Ahzenai} New Ahz; Levorith // New Event!

Postby Calicokat » Fri Sep 16, 2011 2:56 pm

Razz ツ wrote:
[Ahh... Meh see. Oh my gosh dis I literally just miss the customs? Wow I'm lazy... Har har har I don't even have My Little Vortex yet :x Lemme go buy one :) Should that round of customs be done before Levorith is done judging? I really wanna play an Ahzenai for this woo, my gosh. *waits patiently then goes to purchase MLV*]


EDIT: Done tonight XD
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Re: {Ahzenai} New Ahz; Levorith // New Event!

Postby Kat. » Fri Sep 16, 2011 2:58 pm

I walked slyly passed Levorith. He was checking out every female, which kinda made me sick. Bleu walking curiously up to him, sniffing him with peculiar caution. I held my chin up high, and my eyes began to round as Levorith stepped out of the shadows. (no I'm not power-playing just making him take a step forward x3) I flicked my jeans nervously, and watched as suitors stared at him.

"You'll be back for more, babe, I promise." he said at last. I almost fainted.

Was it awkward to flirt with an Ahzenai? I hope not... 'Cause inwas going to try. I took a few steps forward, biting my lip. My cheeks swelled with embarrassment, and I almost giggled. "Never be afraid to wear pink..." I said at last to Levorith, pushing passed some people. Bleu stared at me. "Nice colors... Very... Male, I guess. Aw crap. This was going horribley. I buried my face in my hands, which I wished were Ahzenai paws. I wiped a tear off my cheek, then peered up at him again.

"I... I'm sorry. I'm just nervous..." I quivered. "Ehhhhh.... Levorith, right? I'm Razz." I smiled slyly at him, this time an urge to hug him almost taking over my actions, but I held firm.

I was standing my ground.

"Levorith, if your after the ladies, you're going to need some help. You need to take it slow. Some girls like to bring everything up fast, coming in strong and not knowing what they are doing." blood pulsed through me, "Get a grip. Take it easy. You need a random girl like you need a bowling ball dropped on your head." I rubbed my arm, which was laced in thick, sealed gouges. I had had a boyfriend before. Actually three. They were Ll losers, who treated my like crap and acted like they loved me. 32 kisses. 76 hugs. 12 crushes. Nothing was successful. "Don't be risky... It's not safe." I could picture a part of my life like a movie rolled out in front of me. He took the small, sharp edge.... Drove it through me, angry. Blood covered the floor like a rug, and the ambulance siren rang in my ears. JD was his new nickname, after all he'd done to my poor arm, and my poor heart.

This time tears came like waterfalls, clinging to my black hair, which was curled over my cheeks near the bottom. "Please don't do that... You'll get hurt, badly." I took a few more steps toward him, my arms folded over each other, and my hands grasping to my elbows, as if I was hugging myself, which I was. My navy blue eyes sparkled beneath my tears, and they glistened like pearls. I finally took my nerves together, reaching out with both hands. My fingers were shaking uncontrollablely. "Levorith, please..." my lip quivered, sending chills rattling through my spine.

I wrapped my arms around his neck, burrying my face into his shoulder. My emotions spilled out in watery forms. I hugged his neck, my converse shoes stretching up to fit my foot's form, which was on tiptoes. Levorith was tall, as was I, but I had to stretch up to hug his neck. My shirt, which was a tish too big, was stretched up too, revealing from my belly-button and down to the edge of my ripped denim shorts. I backed away from him, and ran. My heart was racing as the wind flew behind me. I felt like my skin was melting away. I ran so hard that my chest screamed like a raven. I kept going, tears pouring down my face, blurring my vision. I ran until I collapsed to the soft ground, near my dying flowers I had offered to Quida. They were splayed out in the dirt, right where I'd left them...
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