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[Kickin' up dirt]

I see these everywhere,glad I found it :3
But,i'm a bit confused on which are for adoption.

[RainbowBizkit <3]

You make a story on trying to 'woo' the Ahzenai that came out of the swirling vortex :3 So the one for adoption is Erita

[Mukumuku]

BACK FROM THE DEAD O v O

I have another question that's probably worth considering? can unlimited people apply for slots? if that's the case, the downside would be, then, there's a higher chance of sheer randomness with the choosing, because if 20 people enter, the chances of the person who deserves with the best story decreases dramatically. ; u ; However, limited entries isn't fair to the slow writers, even if it can help take care of the last minute entry shebang. SO IN THE CAR, WHILE BREAKING SPEEDING LAWS, I THOUGHT. maybe there could be limited slots available to give away? like, 40 or something, which guarantees that the 8 point super writer will get at least a 20% chance. ouo the issue there is still that if a bajillion less capable writers get entries in fast, the person who spent time and effort doesn't have a chance, again. I really dunno, it's hard to make this fair ; u ;. Which is why I thought the infinite variable with slots would possible be a good option. like, you could have as many slots as possible, but the good stories automatically get 10%, and the soso stories get 5%, and the meh stories get 1%. this doesn't make sense so i'll explain with an example.

say, for instance, you get 11 entries. 2 of them are yayay! 6 of them are pretty good, and 3 more just make you sad. In this case, because there are more than 10 people and using 100 slots doesn't sit right with me, we'll go with 200 total for easy number calculate.
person 1 has a great story, gets 10%, which is 20 slots.
Person 2 has a great story, gets 10%, and brought a live rat, which is 23 slots.
person 3 had a good story, gets 5%, which is 10 slots.
person 4 had a good story, gets 5%, and murdered a kitten, which is 15 slots.
person 5 had a good story, gets 5%, and brought a rat, which is 13 slots.
person 6 had a good story, gets 5%, which is 10 slots.
person 7 had a good story, gets 5%, and brought a bone, which is 11 slots.
person 8 had a good story, gets 5%, and collects skulls, which is 13 slots.
person 9 had a poor story, gets 1%, which is 2 slots.
person 10 had a poor story, gets 1%, and brought a dagger, which is 7 slots.
person 11 had a poor story, gets 1%, which is 2 slots.

then we total it all for 124 slots (or more i did it in my head) which leads us to the great story people ultimately having a relatively 20% chance of winning. ultimately it still has issues because if there are tons of people with great stories, you'll go over 100% lmao. but at the very least it raises the chance of good stories winning. ouo

I HOPE THIS MAKES SENSE I'M KIND OF TIRED AUGH. ; u ;

[Kickin' up dirt]

Ok,thank you.And,is there a form anywhere?

[RainbowBizkit <3]

Nope you just create a story to woo her :3

[pacificcc]

As I entered the cave, I was taken aback at the beautiful waterfall with each droplet of water shining like sterling silver. I ignored my real mission for coming here and walked toward the fall. I glanced upward to see the water cascading down from above the cave. There must be a lake nearby or at least a spring of some sort. The Ahzenai whom had greeted me upon entering stood on a rock near this "vortex" or so he called it. The Ahzenai are supposed to arrive through that. Hopefully, if one came, I wouldn't miss it. As I examined the waterfall, I could hear the water beating the ground with such brute force that anyone would think that they were angered at one another. I turned around, seeing no arrivals at the vortex, so I simply decided to explore a bit. I noticed another pool of water nearby, and started to wonder if it was 'magical' since the entire place felt different and more special than any old cave.

Walking to the smaller pool of water, I glanced in, able to see my expression. My hair was messy, I was dirty, and looked tired. I should throw in the towel soon if I still don't find anything, I thought, with my will starting to waver. I noticed a tiny pair of eyes above my own in my refection, and instantly glanced behind me. I had no idea what it was, and hoped it was finally an Ahzenai. I stayed in my same spot, staring at the lifeless water, hoping those two icy blue eyes would make a reappearance.

They did, and I was in luck. I darted around quicker than I did the first time, finally to see a creature hiding behind a pile of rocks. I was a bit nervous to investigate, for all I knew it could have been a rabid wolverine. However, curiosity took over and I peered through the rocks. A furry creature with beautiful black horns curled around its dark blue-grey head. Then I saw those blue, blue eyes and knew it was the very Ahzenai I'd seen before. I pulled out a bit of a Fiber One Bar out of my pocket, and held it out generously to her. She jerked backwards, like the food I was giving her was a weapon. "It's filling, and trust me, it won't kill you." I glanced at her again, and she seemed cautious of me. I talked to her quietly again, "See?" I took a bite of the chocolate bar hoping it would convince her it wasn't poisoned or toxic. The crept away, and I thought that I might have been pressuring her a little, so I myself backed off and took a seat on a rock that was a far distance. She moved forward, extremely slowly as a matter of fact, and sniffed the area upon which I'd been standing. With those bourgeois blue eyes, she looked right at me, and said the word, "Eriat." Then flung her tail to the left. Looking at me with a cocked head, she waited for a response, and said again, a bit louder too, "Eriat." She sniffed the air, then padded forward again, coming closer and closer, but still not right at my side. "Two-leg, friendly, yes?" Two leg.. does she mean 'human?' I answered full of truth, "I'm friendly, and would never hurt you. I'm exploring here, and was hoping to leave with a companion." Eriat looked up almost like she was thinking, then glanced back at me.

[Kickin' up dirt]

Shaye saw something in the distant breeze.''Hello?''she called out.The creature stepped out slowly,being easy on it's feet.Shaye held her hand out,and the creature came closer,but slowly.Shaye smiled softly,''Hello''she whispered so softly you could barely hear.The creature smiled and allowed Shaye to pet her.Shaye stood up and walked to the river,''Come on,I won't hurt you''she replied.The creature came out and stood next to her,she drank from the river.Shaye smiled and threw rocks.Later that day Shaye's parents where calling her to come home for dinner,she was so upset.She wanted to stay with the animal,she loved her.She hugged her neck and walked away,a tear fell from her cheek.She knew she probably wouldn't see her again.Weeks later Shaye was out sitting on a rock when she heard the plants moving,''W-who's there?''she asked shakily.The creature stepped out,''Hello''the creature replied.Shaye ran over to her,''I missed you!''they said at the same time.They both smiled and Shaye hugged her again.Years later they were still best friends.That is there story.

I hope I did this right.

[Midnyte Stohrm]

The vortex takes on similar appearances as it did for Temur, only this time instead of fiery colors the hues swirling through it are cool blues and violets. When the light diminishes a female counterpart to Temur appears, her name Eriat. She moves with a serene grace as she pads from the vortex swinging her head from side to side as she takes in her surroundings. She is mild mannered and curious, harboring no hard feelings to what her brother called 'two-leggers'. Truth be told, she was actually rather fond of the beings and was fascinated by their ways.

"Hello?" she called, swishing her tail lightly.

The Maroon Horned Cat-thing friend who introduced you to Ahzen informs you that her name is Eriat.


Gender: Female
Element: Gas
Likes: Exploring
Dislikes: Straight-forwardness

As I turned I saw a beautiful creature. Instantly the hues of blue and purple called to me. I stood dumb-founded by her beauty for several minutes before i could finally speak.

"Hello." I said softly not wanting to scare her. "My name is Midnyte. I'm terribly sorry for staring earlier. It was horribly rude of me. I hope you can forgive me. I was out exploring my world when i stumbled upon your home here. It's absolutely beautiful. Do you like to explore? If you do I could show you so many beautiful places in my world. I've travelled to almost every country."

I stop not knowing what else to say. All i know right now is that I want to go exploring with her. When she walked I noticed a grace about her movements.

" There are so many beautiful sites to see in my world. If you want you could come with me and I'll show you around." I say hoping she will agree. I just know that we were meant to be together. I had been looking for someone who enjoyed exploring and experiencing new things and I believe she likes both of those just as much as I do.

" We could go scuba diving and explore the under water world. Its absolutely amazing, the light from the sun reflects off the water making millions of tiny rainbows all around you. The fish are so beautiful with all their different colors and shapes." I stop talking and wait for her to speak. A few minutes go by without her talking.

" If you don't like the water I could always show you so many other things, like beautiful gemstones that glitter and shine in so many different wonderful colors. Or perhaps we could go and try a different meal in every country, go cave Spelunking, or even rock climbing. There are so many different activities and places that you can explore in my world. And i would love to explore your world as well. It fascinates me. Of course it's all up to you. I would never want you to force you to do anything you don't want to do."

And with that I stop talking and thanked her for listening, apologizing for hAving taken up so much of her time with my ramblings.



Did i do this right?? I have never had to do anything likes this before but when i saw her i knew i had to at least give it a tr It was actually really fun:)

[RainbowBizkit <3]

Swirl pop Actually you aren't supposed to do a form as the Ahzenai you are supposed to Charm her for say and be yourself like I tried for her and I called myself miz because thats my username, like walk up to her after she comes out of the vortex and interest her with things she likes which are in her description. When you buy Items those can help you in your form and you say something like "Here I have this object to interest you" this object would be the object you bought. :3

[Rabbitheart]

Hmm...I just used my real life middle name (just so as to prevent ID theft and such for and so on), maybe I should change that to my username.