Re: Beaumont Collie #1000 Available

Postby Shadow17 » Tue Nov 19, 2024 12:57 pm

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Name: SLK Millennium Sunrise // Sunny
Gender: Female
Life as she knows it: begins in the house. Not a pet, you say? It's alright, for now. The ranch is spacious, life is good. There's siblings to play with. There's life here. And when it's at its peak, she leaves.
"What's adolescence?" Sunny wonders. It's a waltz, learning what goes here and there. It's learning, and she learns. She learns what a "sit" is, and what a sheep looks like. That's not so interesting though. The people seem disappointed she doesn't like it. So she leaves.
The learning is more specialized now. She likes this stuff, sniffing everything. She smells bags, suitcases, and tries to find the dupe between a pizza slice and the scent she wants to find. The pizza tastes nice, but the smell is what she wants. She hasn't tried it yet, but she knows she gets good treats if she does. She wonders if maybe that's what it is? And just as soon as she arrives, she walks a stage. She sees other people and dogs she knows. And then Sunny leaves.
She grows taller, and starts seeing more things. "The city is busy today," she hears nearly daily. There's much older dogs beside her. Ones that have lived different lives. She's never been to "the city," she thinks, forgetting how short life is. "This place is a city." her handler says. "Well, who cares for niceties. Let's get to work, and everything I do know." And they leave.
Her bones take form. She's used to the hustle and bustle. Life is good. But one day, she sniffs the last thing she'll ever sniff, not that she knows it. When she gets ready to go to work, her handler looks sad. She's not sure why she can't cheer them up. At the end of work that day, she gets many balls. She's never seen so many in her life! She gets treats and lots of love. Familiar and not-so-familiar faces congratulate her. "For what?" she wonders. But there's not much time to. There's balls to play with. And then, Sunny leaves.
That drive home, she hears a church bell toll. She'd heard it before. But she realized she couldn't quite hear it very well, not like she used to. She couldn't see it as well as she used to either. That drive home, she started thinking. You could see it in her face, her eyes lost in thought. She starts thinking of times from her youth. She remembers her brother, always stepping on her "on accident", or the beagle that she would find watching her from the other side of the security line, whatever his name was. She goes home to the puppy that came into her life recently. He reminds her of herself. She decides to tell him her stories, however boring they may be to him. She watches as he and her handler leave to the backyard.
A fateful day, Sunny wakes up. She feels herself being called home. Her handler sees it. She licks him one last time. It's the last thing she can do before she leaves.
And yet: the world moves on without you. (please let me know if this link doesn't work!)
Art: “Airport Security” Image
Last edited by Shadow17 on Sat Nov 30, 2024 3:55 pm, edited 1 time in total.
and the universe said i love you because you are love.
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and the game was over and the player woke up from
the dream. and the player began a new dream. and
the player dreamed again, dreamed better. and the
player was the universe. and the player was love.
you are the player.
wake up.
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Re: Beaumont Collie #1000 Available

Postby Vinson » Wed Nov 20, 2024 4:29 pm

this collie's competition has been extended by one week! they will close for judging on rollover from November 30th to December 1st.
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Re: Beaumont Collie #1000 Available

Postby werepickle » Thu Nov 28, 2024 1:46 am

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Name: MSK The Changing Winds ‘Ivo’
Gender: male

Prompt here
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Re: Beaumont Collie #1000 Available

Postby Vinson » Tue Dec 03, 2024 3:53 am

forgot to post, but this collie is now closed for judging! there’s a lot of wonderful entries to read through and look at, so I’ll appreciate your patience as I give each one a thorough review.
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Re: Beaumont Collie #1000 Adopted

Postby Vinson » Sun Dec 22, 2024 6:40 pm

Thank you all for so many amazing entries, I had an incredibly hard time deciding on the winner of this collie! In the end, I felt there were three of you that deserved recognition and award for your development - I'll be giving out runner-up and honorable mention prizes, since only one person can win this collie. Please be on the lookout for a message from me with instructions in the next day or so if you've won one of these prizes!

Our honorable mention, Shadow17 - your score was absolutely breathtaking, and its composition evoked so many different emotions! Throughout my listening to it, I felt as though I was traveling with Sunny throughout the moments in her life that you described, and the importance of the end of her life, after retirement, really hit home.

Our runner-up, kijauni! Your development of Clark's character from young and self absorbed puppy to a true hero was so fun to read about, and I enjoyed your style of storytelling immensely. Watching Clark's entire perspective on his training change when presented with the milestone of a real life, high-stakes challenge was amazing, and I appreciated that he was able to realize his dream of becoming a real life hero (even if his superpowers were a little different than the ones he was imagining when he was young).

And finally, our winner, Griffin Torrens - oh my goodness, what a story! You managed to include so many different characters and allow all of their personalities to shine through while also spotlighting Senomoide and the journey that they took, both literally and figuratively. I could tell that an immense amount of thought went into crafting this entry, and I loved how you were able to tie everything together through fragments of memories intertwined with present moments to really show how Sen was attempting to reform themself and their concept of self. I can't wait to read what you've got planned past the open ending you left us with, and I hope Senomoide is able to make many more memories in their new home with you!
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Re: Beaumont Collie #1000 Adopted

Postby Griffin Torrens » Sun Dec 22, 2024 8:11 pm


    Firstly a big congratulations to the other winners! I've been on the edge of my seat refreshing this page every day to see who won because I read all your entries and was so impressed! You both brought to life such different but interesting characters!

    And secondly, ahhhhhh!! Thank you so much! Since the second I saw them I fell MADLY in love with this collie, and their adult form is so perfect and beyond worth the wait! All the little details and the character are so perfect!

    Right away when seeing their hidden genotype I was filled with ideas! Some came right away, like the blixt loyalty, and others took many days sat drinking hot chocolate while I waited for rainbow to close the coffee shop she works at to develop and tie in, such as the striped harlequin patience! Senomoide is easily my favourite and most developed collie now, I've been physically restrained myself from doing more development in case one of the other amazing entries was the winner!

    And lastly, to the core of my entry, thank you so much everyone for the thousand memories you've created with me in this species, and here's to one thousand more <3
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