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Kirai T.T by ~Mystery~

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Kirai T.T

Postby ~Mystery~ » Thu Jun 23, 2011 7:09 pm

It didn't have wing add ones so i tried to make one D= i know it sucks, don't rub it in @_@ practice makes perfect, i guess.
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Re: Kirai T.T

Postby Ivara » Fri Jun 24, 2011 1:37 am

I think the wings are great! If you don't look very close it looks perfect! And to make it perfect close up I think you could maybe make the line for the wing by the shoulders thinner.
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Re: Kirai T.T

Postby ~Mystery~ » Fri Jun 24, 2011 7:20 am

Ivara wrote:I think the wings are great! If you don't look very close it looks perfect! And to make it perfect close up I think you could maybe make the line for the wing by the shoulders thinner.

OK. Thanks for the critique ^.^ i'll change the line for the shoulder now ^.^
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