Re: Valley of Kings -- #800

Postby Tiger♥Bear » Wed Jun 16, 2021 2:13 am

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    SPACE"It's important to care for the land. We must abide by the rules of nature. If we don't limit ourselves, the world would become barren and we would surely die." The group of cubs gave a collective "ooh" as Razshamira finished her lesson. The older smilodon smiled at the class. Spotting a familiar face approach, her smile widened and she addressed the cubs again. "Why don't you all take a moment to think about what I said, hmm? We'll get back together in a few minutes."
    SPACEThe excited cubs got up and spread out as the other smilodon joined her side. "You're always so wonderful with them."
    SPACE"I try to be. It won't be too long before we have some of our own, don't you think Adir?" Razshamira smiled and nuzzled his forehead with her own.
    SPACEHe gave a warm chuckle, reciprocating her affectionate gesture. "Of course, Raz. I think we're bound to be expecting any day now."
    SPACERazshamira and Adir had been together nearly three years now. But they were young and wanted to have time to enjoy themselves before adding any children to the mix. Though she adored cubs and wanted to be close to them. It was one of the reasons she took to teaching them. She wanted them to be aware of the world around them. How special it was. She couldn't recall much about her own childhood or much about her parents but she remembers the drive to keep a balance in life. A balance she taught to the others. It seemed especially prudent now with the changes around them. It was growing colder and the wildlife around them was adapting in a way that they just couldn't compete with. Faster prey with faster predators leaving her kind to fend for themselves...and they weren't doing very well. Still, she was hopeful they would make it through this.
    SPACE"I'm glad you think so. I can't wait. Just think- we'll be parents!"
    SPACEAnother warm chuckle from Adir before he gave a soft kiss to her cheek. "I'm glad you're so excited. I just wanted to check in with you before I left."
    SPACE"Well, I appreciate that. I'll be counting the days before your return. Come home safe to me."
    SPACE"Always. I'll be counting the days myself." After another quick nuzzle, Adir left Razshamira to her class who was slowly starting to make their way back to her.
    SPACEShe finished up her lesson with the cubs and went about her day. It passed quickly and she soon found herself back in her personal den. It was a bit lonely without Adir but it wasn't uncommon for him to go on these long trips. With the prey becoming scarce, hunting parties would take longer trips to find sufficient food for the pack. If she was being honest though she was worried. The trips had been longer and longer lately and it was definitely taking its toll on the hunters. The weather was getting worse too. It was so cold last week that strange white flakes fell from the sky and piled up on the ground making her paws feel frozen.
    SPACEThe next three days had been horrible. The weather made a turn for the worse. Much like the previous week, the white flakes had plagued their skies but this time there was a harsh freezing wind that only made it that much colder. She hoped that Adir was faring better than the pack had been. Unused to the change in their climate and going without food for almost two weeks now... a lot of the members didn't survive the harsh shift in their lives. Razshamira did what she could to comfort and help protect the others while waiting for the hunters to return with their meals. But even that wasn't enough to keep up morale.
    SPACEWhen a full week had passed, she started to get concerned. Adir had never been away this long before. It'd never been this cold before either. The ground was completely white and the the trees were starting to ice over. More of the members were lost over the past few days. She considered going out and trying to find Adir or even just the rest of the hunting pack. Surely someone was out there. Even if she couldn't find the pack, perhaps she could find food. She needed to eat, even if she wasn't feeling in dire need of it. Which was strange when she dwelt on it. Others were weak due to lack of sustenance and often preferred to stay huddled away in their dens. But Raz hadn't felt that way.
    SPACEHalfway through the second week, she was the only one left and the hunting party had yet to return. With nothing keeping her back and deathly afraid of what became of Adir she set off in search of him. If she was lucky enough to find any of the others from the hunting party, she'd be grateful but she'd be lying if she wasn't a bit selfish in hoping to find Adir. The snow came high on her legs, her paws not built to walk on it like the solid ground. It was cold as was the wind that constantly tousled her fur. She walked for what felt like forever. Of course she stopped to find shelter when she could but she was determined to find Adir. She had to. The days blended together. It didn't always snow but it was always present on the ground. Days passed with still no sign of Adir. She wasn't even fully aware that she should have perished by now. She hadn't eaten since before the hunters left and she'd barely slept since leaving her home. Time passed slowly and she was getting discouraged but she always held out hope. Even now, thousands of years later...though it's unlikely...she hopes Adir is out there.
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Re: Valley of Kings -- #800

Postby zoocyte » Wed Jun 16, 2021 12:36 pm

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Re: Valley of Kings -- #800

Postby Raptocidic » Fri Jun 18, 2021 6:55 am

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It was common knowledge that time travel was a risky business. To put things simply, too many things could go wrong. Although Sable was aware of this, she had ignored the warnings and signed up to the agency anyway. The job was well paid, and the statistics looked reasonably small that Sable had thought it would never impact her.

Well, she was certainly wrong there. Sable had been adjusting the intertime extrapolator when her ship started to violently shudder. This point of a spacetime jump was always a little shaky, so this didn't concern her. Her ship, Ruckbucket 40, may have flown like an ancient rusty sky bus, but it still had plenty of life in it. Well, at least that’s what she had thought.

As it turned out, Rustbucket 40 had just kicked the bucket. Well, to be accurate Rustbucket had collided with a piece of space debris. To be precise, the ship had collided with a piece of itself. Well, the wreckage of itself, sent hurling towards itself, from the future. Oh, Sable had thought. At least she was wearing her spacesuit, she supposed.

Something that wasn't common knowledge about time travel was that when timeships die, they don't just explode like regular spaceships. Yes, they do explode. The difference is, when exploding that energy powers up the routine hyperjumper, which in turn sends parts of the ship flying in all directions of time. This will also power up the backup time emulator, which creates a small pocket of slowed time. This was meant as a safety measure, something to give the pilot a chance to respond. However, slowed time wasn't very useful when the entire control deck had long since blown up and hurled itself into the distant future.

Sable watched as the back half of Rustbucket detached itself from the main ship and hurled itself directly into the near past. Ah, that would be the part her timeship had collided with then. She stood on what was left of the deck in amazement. It was falling apart beneath her paws, but she didn't really care. The whole thing was quite beautiful when slowed down.

A small piece of debris snapped Sable back to reality as she stumbled sideways in attempt to avoid it. Normally she would have hit a wall, but that had been torn away long ago, so instead she walked off the edge, finding herself slowly falling through the spacetime void.

Free falling through time wasn't anything like what films made it seem like. There was one of 8 directions a living being could fall in and survive, but many other directions that were only safe to travel in a heavy timeship, which Sable didn't have anymore. Luckily for her, Sable found herself falling through the 4th direction, known to most as the sideways past. This was a considerably lucky thing. Sideways past timestreams had a tendency to collapse; which made it irritating to traverse in a ship, but meant that sooner or later her timestream would collapse, spitting her out at a random point in time and space.

Thankfully, this didn't take very long.

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Sable had expected to spend longer in the portal, but was pleasantly surprised when it almost immediately spat her out onto an unknown planet. She landed on her side, but besides some minor bruises she wasn't badly injured.

Standing up, Sable brushed the dust off her suit. She looked around as she ran a diagnostic on the spacesuits internal scanning system, ignoring the 27 safety alert messages that were queued as she scanned the area.

Looking around, Sable could see clear signs of life. There were various fungus like and plant like lifeforms. Oxygen levels were safe enough, no toxic gasses, essentially a breathable atmosphere. That was lucky. She took her helmet off and took a deep breath of fresh air.

After walking around for a while Sable came across some sort of primitive campsite. There was a small burnt out campfire, logs (presumably used for seating), and a what looked like a cooking pot. It seemed basic, but at least she had landed somewhere with intelligent enough life.

Sable had lost herself in her imagination when a maned big cat (not too unlike herself, but with no visible fangs) approached her. His expression was difficult to read. He didn't seem angry, rather more... confused? Sable found his gestures to be completely alien to her, despite their visual similarities. She stared at him intensely, trying to figure out what was going on. Then another cat, only much smaller, approached the larger maned cat. The two appeared to be having a conversation, occasionally gesturing towards Sable and pulling odd expressions she couldn't understand. After a while the larger cat approached her cautiously. He appeared to be gesturing towards the logs, urging her to sit down. The smaller cat had scurried off, and soon returned with an offering of food.

Sable listened intently to the two cats as she ate. Although she didn't understand their words, she could at least infer some meaning from basic gestures. They seemed kind enough, and were very cheerily including her in the conversation, despite the language barrier. By the end of the day they had devised some basic gestures for communication. Sable had also discovered drawing in the dirt to be an effective method of communication, and had soon found herself telling them stories in the form of poorly drawn doodles.

As time went on, Sable found herself more and more integrated into daily life at the camp. She had met a few more felines and was slowly beginning to learn their language. It had been hard to adjust at first, but each day gradually got easier.

Sable stared up into the night sky and grinned. The stars twinkled as if to smile back. It was somewhat funny that she was there, stranded on an alien world, and yet, for some strange reason, she no longer wanted to be anywhere else. She felt at home.

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Re: Valley of Kings -- #800

Postby Cactologist » Mon Jul 12, 2021 5:57 am

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Re: Valley of Kings -- #800

Postby Clementine Cloud » Sat Jul 24, 2021 11:45 am

So, after a long time of deliberating I've finally chosen the winners. The entries were all so unique and I loved reading all of them!

Firstly, I'd like to award three RUs, it was so hard to pick because everyone's entries were so different but these three stood out as very interesting takes on the prompt!

Minifun990's Dissent: I really like your interpretation for how this being was influenced by the mortals which caused it to take on this strong and powerful form!

Tiger♥Bear's Razshamira:
What a heart wrenching story! So full of hope that her loved one would return to her, eternally searching for him. So sad but such an interesting story!

Raptocidic's Sable: This one threw me for a loop! This smilodon, instead of being from the ancient past, is from a futuristic group of time-travelers. But it looks like Sable found her home, even if it was unintentionally haha!

But, the overall winner of #800, the entry that really stood out to me the most was: Goddess Sword's Bora
Taken from his home and his people, being the lone survivor of a place lost to time, "...Memory. I am a memory. That of my people, and the world that is no more. I am the long-gone past given flesh, a fossil that stands and speaks." What an impactful and moving line, I can't wait to see where you take them. Congratulations!
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Re: Valley of Kings -- #800

Postby Goddess Sword » Sat Jul 24, 2021 1:46 pm

Oh my god, I was not expecting this??? I had been planning on doing art to go with my entry but got too caught up with my new job to actually get any done, so especially with all the great work everyone else did with their entries, this is a big surprise, haha! Thank you so much - I'll go claim the prompts I did this morning and grab a level up to make sure I have space for him, since I won another lion from a giveaway in the discord earlier this week. I can't wait to start working on Bora's character and story :0

Congrats to everyone who won RUs as well! You all did a great job, and I'm hyped to see all your RUs!
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Re: Valley of Kings -- #800

Postby Raptocidic » Wed Aug 04, 2021 12:08 am

I'm super late but thank you very much for the ru! And congrats to Goddess Sword for winning, I really liked your entry!

Do we need to send a om about our rus? Im unsure if I should or not. ^^
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Re: Valley of Kings -- #800

Postby Clementine Cloud » Fri Aug 06, 2021 10:58 am

Raptocidic wrote:I'm super late but thank you very much for the ru! And congrats to Goddess Sword for winning, I really liked your entry!

Do we need to send a om about our rus? Im unsure if I should or not. ^^


No need to PM, they're on my to-do list, I've just gotten super busy recently but I haven't forgotten! <3 <3
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Re: Valley of Kings -- #800

Postby Raptocidic » Fri Aug 06, 2021 11:13 am

Clementine Cloud wrote:
No need to PM, they're on my to-do list, I've just gotten super busy recently but I haven't forgotten! <3 <3

Ah alright, thanks for letting me know! I was just wondering since in the past ive sometimes been asked to pm about rus, so I wasn't sure if I need to pm or not since it wasn't mentioned. Feel free to take as long as you need! ^^
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