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Valley of Kings -- #800

Postby Clementine Cloud » Mon Jun 14, 2021 6:38 am

To adopt, you must either:
1. Have a founder, be at least level 1, and have enough space to accommodate this lion smilodon
2. Or, you can adopt this one as your founder!


**This is a Smilodon, not just resembling one! They can act as a regular member of your pride and have the same breeding rules as regular lions. They CAN be your founder if you do not already have one and are new to VOK C:

Smilodon is one of the most famous prehistoric mammals and the best known saber-toothed cat. Is this the last of a surviving lineage, or did this one see first-hand the end of an era?


Are Smilodons extinct in your world, and if so, how did this one survive? If not, why or how did this one come to join your pride?

This competition is very open ended! Interpret the prompt however you like! But you have a Maximum of 1000 words, and/or up to 3 art pieces (or a comic with three panels.) I will be judging on creativity and effort over quantity! You may "pretty up" your forms with coding and the like, but the content and prompt is the focus.

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Re: Valley of Kings -- #800

Postby SilentMelody » Mon Jun 14, 2021 6:45 am

    Username: SilentMelody
    Smilodon Name: Ho'ola'i ("to cause to be still")
    Smilodon Gender: male
    Pride: Divine Pride
    Pride Status: deity

    Ho'ola'i has long since left his mortal body, and he's now a deity to the Divine Pride. Smilodons have been extinct for quite some time in the mortal world, but he lives on. He isn't sure why his spirit survived and why he was brought to exist for a longer time, but he's grateful to look over a pride that still cherishes his name.

    The Divine Pride came to learn about him when they discovered his old cave from millennia ago. Ho'ola'i had painted the story of his life on the wall, and his bones came to rest in the back of the cave when it was his time. When the pride learned about his life, they felt an immense amount of respect and told the story to the rest of their members.

    They brought his bones back to their territory and made a shrine. The Divine Pride knew that only a strong, courageous, and wise being could be worthy of their worship. As soon as they began chanting his name, Ho'ola'i woke up in the spirit world and walked in front of them. They were stunned into silence, and they bowed to him.
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Re: Valley of Kings -- #800

Postby Goddess Sword » Mon Jun 14, 2021 6:57 am

Username: Goddess Sword
Smilodon Name: Bora
Smilodon Gender: Male
Pride: The Wards
Pride Status: Founder
Prompt:

///“Nothing is eternal. Not even the gods.”
///That was the answer he had been given, however many years ago it had been. They had approached him, as they had approached who knows how many other beings, and said that they saw potential within him. Said that they wished for him to join them, become one of their disciples, leave this place and enter himself in their line of succession. And when asked why, that was the answer they gave.
///It didn’t make much sense to him, truthfully. Immortal beings dying, calling upon mortals to take their places... Yet, they were gods, and he was mortal. Who was he to deny their request?
///So he went with them, took up their training, in a world unlike the one he knew. A world where all manner of beings congregated and studied beneath their deities, where even prey could speak like him, if granted the gifts of the gods. A realm where, to him, the flow of time was but the lazy drip of a melting glacier, and yet for others, it seemed to flow as fast as any flood. Perhaps it was that he was the only of his kind there? He sometimes thought to question it... but then again, who was he to question the gods? No, if they willed it, that was their choice, their realm, their right. He was simply to train and become strong, learn to utilize the gifts they gave him. Understanding would come with time, however long a time it may be.
///And, indeed, though it seemed to pass excruciatingly slowly, time did pass. New recruits to the gods’ cause joined them, and old recruits found themselves taking up the roles they’d been prepared for. Two felines, more plant than cat, and always at odds with one another, were sent into the world... Had the old gods passed on, or were these ones in new roles altogether? Bora decided not to ask, that it was more important that he focus on his training. Immortality came easily enough in a world where time stood still, or at least near enough to it, but the rest of it? Mastering the rest of the deities’ gifts took more.
///The powers they had granted him reminded him of home, in their own way. This realm was warm and pleasant, with no such sheets of ice as he had known in his mortal life. But the strength the gods had granted him could change that, in its own way. Frost creeping from his paws, freezing winds billowing in his wake, seafoam turning to diamond dust, plants and stones and all sorts of things frozen and preserved in ice. He wasn’t sure if it was comforting or not, having these vestiges of his old life with him here. But he would learn to use them either way, however long it took.
///And it seemed that it took quite a long time indeed. Long enough that the world he once knew changed drastically. For when the day came that the gods decided he would be sent into the world, not as one of them, yet, but to... gain experience, as they had put it? He found he could not recognize any of it as his old home. The great sheets of ice had retreated, leaving rocky shorelines and great forests in their wake. The animals were, more often than not, ones that he had only seen in that other realm. And among the few he recognized from so long ago, none were like him. He was, as far as he could tell, the last.
///When he finally returned, he stopped holding back his questions.
///“Why did you not save them?”
///The god merely clicked its tongue and said, “Nothing is eternal. Did I not tell you this when we met?”
///“You saved me, though. What of the rest of them?”
///“What of them? You are alive. You will be alive for a long, long time. Is this not enough?”
///“What did they do to deserve this fate?”
///“What does anyone do to deserve their fates? The powers we are granted are not playthings. We do not intervene; we merely keep the balance.”
///Bora huffed. “Fine,” he said. “They are dead, and I am alive. What now, then?”
///“What indeed?” the god hummed. “You tell me. You are alive. What else are you?”
///The smilodon hesitated. “I am... a disciple of the gods, granted the powers of a time long past. I am the last survivor of a species taken from the world who knows how many years ago.”
///“Eleven thousand, give or take,” the god stated. “What else?”
///“...Well, I’m frustrated, for one thing,” he replied, earning a chuckle in response. “You have taken me from all I’ve known, and brought me into a world where I am alone. And what choice had I in the matter, a mortal approached by the gods? To refuse would have been suicide. And now, I have lost all but my life.”
///“And what are you?”
///Bora was silent. What was he? What more of an answer could he give? He was the last of his kind, a being who held the powers of a time long passed. He was...
///“...Memory. I am a memory. That of my people, and the world that is no more. I am the long-gone past given flesh, a fossil that stands and speaks.”
///The god nodded. “Then you have found your role,” it said. “Bora, god of the past, of memories. Learned god of knowledge, and of that which came before.”
///Bora met the god’s eyes... and he snorted. “This is what I was chosen for, then. To be the last piece of a long lost puzzle. Kind of a crummy position.”
///“You may see it how you wish,” the god answered. “But now... let us begin your new training. For as long as there are students, there must be a teacher. And one as experienced as yourself will do nicely.”
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Re: Valley of Kings -- #800

Postby Moonlight heavens » Mon Jun 14, 2021 7:46 am

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Smilodon Gender:Male
Pride: In my signature
Pride Status:TBD
Prompt:MARKK!
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Re: Valley of Kings -- #800

Postby Runnersback » Mon Jun 14, 2021 7:51 am

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Prompt: Mark poss

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Re: Valley of Kings -- #800

Postby Mercuré » Mon Jun 14, 2021 7:51 am

Username: Mercuré
Smilodon Name: Enyo
Smilodon Gender: female
Pride: The Pantheon
Pride Status: Spirit of War
Prompt: - Spirit from a long lost pantheon, worshipped by Smilodons.

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Re: Valley of Kings -- #800

Postby -Isabella- » Mon Jun 14, 2021 7:52 am

Username: -Isabella-
Smilodon Name: Rafael
Smilodon Gender: Male
Pride: In sig
Pride Status: TBD
Prompt:

~The Last Smilodon~

The Last Smilodon.

You heard the legends of a lost tribe of great beasts, lions stronger and more ferocious than any you had ever seen. They said only one still walked this world. A possible danger to your pride? Maybe a needed war ally? Whatever this beast might be, you went to find them, to see if the tales were true. And after a long search, find them you did.

The Smilodon is a mighty looking creature indeed, it could probably destroy you with little effort. But you find it to be quite alone, and quite subdued. Why is this, you ask? Why is so strong a creature so quiet, hiding out in the middle of nowhere? Where is their tribe?

At your questions the Smilodon gets a faraway look in their eyes, and they begin to tell you a tale as old as time.


Decades ago, before you or your parents, or grandparents existed, there was a tribe of honorable warriors. For generations they had raised their young to follow in their pawsteps, to become noble warriors who protected the innocent. Over the years they created a place of peace where any lion could find shelter and be safe.

For their years of dedication to their cause the gods chose to bless them with a gift to better enable them to fight off the ever growing threats to their peaceful world. They blessed the warriors with heightened senses, fangs and claws that were long and thick, and a larger physical build to add to their strength. And the gods gave the tribe a new name, the Smilodon.

In the coming years the name of Smilodon became well known. The lions of their world came to know the Smilodon as a tribe of fierce and just warriors who protected all and kept the land safe. The Smilodon used their gifts to protect everyone and became revered, almost like gods themselves to some.

But as time went by, newer generations forgot the reason they had been given their heightened senses and strength. Instead of using the gods’ gift to protect their world, some began to use it selfishly to get the things they wanted. In time some even took over the tribes of other lions, using their strength to drive out the current leaders and defeat any who tried to oppose them.

The gods’ saw all of this and were displeased, but at first only cautioned them that they should remember what their gifts were for and return to the ways of their ancestors before it was too late.
But the Smilodon did not heed their warning.

Several strong Smilodon individuals took over smaller tribes and formed a coalition, using their combined might to take over the land. Their reach extended to the farthest border and before long they had almost absolute control over their world.

But the world was an ever growing and changing place. The Smilodon were not the only gifted individuals the gods’ had allowed to roam the land.
Now there were monsters, demi-gods, and spirits that were entering the world, and they did not wish to be controlled by the Smilodon.
So they waged a war against them. At first it seemed the Smilodon would win, because despite being gifted themselves these new beings were new to the world and had yet to really use their gifts or experience life here.
But the gods’ had remained displeased all this time when the Smilodon did not change their ways, and so when the final battle came, on the night of the full moon, the Smilodon were stripped of their powers. Their physical bodies shrank, and their heightened abilities abandoned them, leaving them as vulnerable as any mortal lion.
They were defeated, forced to scatter and give up their stronghold, and over time they were hunted down for their crimes, all except one. Rafael was only a cub when this happened, he was innocent of the crimes of his family and so the gods’ spared his life. They said that through him perhaps the Smilodon might rise again and become the great protectors they had once been, or perhaps in this ever changing world there was simply no place for them anymore.

So Rafael has lived all of his life, the last of his kind, a reminder or relic of a time past. There are many more lions and creatures in this world now, and he is just one of many. In his youth he dreamed sometimes of raising up cubs and reforming the Smilodon tribe, but the world is not as it once was. There is much good to be found in the world, but also much division and war. New protectors have come and gone, and new villains have risen and fallen. Over time he has come to believe that perhaps there really isn’t a place for his kind in this world anymore, and perhaps trying to bring back what once was would do more harm than good.



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Re: Valley of Kings -- #800

Postby clouds-move-on » Mon Jun 14, 2021 7:55 am

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Re: Valley of Kings -- #800

Postby minifun990 » Mon Jun 14, 2021 8:28 am


He Roar Big. The end.

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While eyes above watch, a first is happening within a new world. A fight of epic proportions. On one side, the grandson of the first lion to be created. On the other, the granddaughter of the great leopard.

It is a brutal fight, no tactics, no holding back. Just ripping into each other with the sharpest things they can gather. Anything that can be used against the other is, even when it drags others into the brutal massacre. There are no winners, at least not anything that can truly be called winning. Not when it cost so much. Not when it caused so much pain.

It is a fight that none of the mortals ever saw coming, not until it was too late.

It is the first interspecies… Marital conflict. Rather than blood and broken bones, the two felines shred at each other’s feelings. Ripping at egos and ideas and hypotheticals. The massacre isn’t one that results in the death of individuals, but rather, it signifies the death of a long-lasting relationship. One that had transcended species, and which now drove them apart. Even hundreds of years later, leopards and lions would harbour grudges, for a slight that no one could remember. A fight, which had started from the silliest little inconvenience, as these things often did.

But it hadn’t started via random chance. Don’t be mistaken in that regard. No, if we pull away from the mortal world it is clear to see. There was a certain brown figure who was very proud of his (mis)deed. It would, later on, become the one to define him, giving him a deadly and dangerous appearance, perfect for shredding relationships like cobwebs.

In the darkness of the great above came a feeling of disappointment, and a hint of fondness. The brown figures opposite, a red shape that exuded warmth and connectivity and… Love.

“I worked hard on that one, Dear.” She says, moving to hover beside Him. She had only recently invented nicknames, but He was still unsure how he felt about them.

“I know you did Love, but perhaps it will turn out better because of my influence.”

“Like the two whom found stronger love through their differences?”

“Something like that.” The brown figure conceded, but the truth was that he had done it for the sake of it. He had done it because he was bored already, and they had only just started existing.

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There were many more mortals across the land now, multiplying almost as fast as the prey around them. And with their increase in numbers came structure that the new gods had not seen before. Structure in their civilisations, in their mannerisms. And of course, in their beliefs. With so many of them thinking and feeling in similar ways, the mortals brought change to even the Great Above. No longer abstract concepts with vague personalities, the gods condensed into familiar shapes to the mortals they influenced.

Love became soft and welcoming, death became pointed and fearsome, time became swept with sand and gold and He- he without a name became strong and destructive, just like the actions he caused. He became a smilodon.

And his mate somehow thought it was a mistake.

That he was just misunderstood.

That his perfectly executed destruction of relationships was good. Family drama that sent individuals to explore across new oceans. Lovers’ tiffs that caused leaders to work harder and better. Brother’s betrayal that lead to a sisterly reunion.

That it was a means to an end. That the end result was justified when it led to more of her realm. Love.

And she ignored any sign that wasn’t the case. She ignored the times he broke relationships that led to huge strife. The wars and the chaos, the famine and disease. She thought that he hadn’t known it would happen or that they had simply been mistakes.

She was wrong.

She was so wrong and He was going to show her.

He would show them all what Dissent could do.

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Back to the wall. Nowhere to turn. Empires had crumbled due to him, kingdoms turned to dust, whole species of mortals had found their numbers reduced, griffins and leopards and guardians facing the wrath of enemies and ex-friends alike. It had been so deadly that even the gods were at a loss for what to do.

Especially when the god causing the trouble had set them against each other. Feathered immortals against scaled, the oceans against the sky, the power-hungry against the protective. Chaos.

It was everything Dissent could’ve wanted.

But the moment his mate, his eternal love stepped forwards he felt regret. She had so much faith in him and this was how he had repaid her.

“Love… I’m sorry.” Dissent admitted, wishing he could pull her into an embrace, wipe away the tears he caused. But she kept her distance, her voice shaky as she spoke.

“They are going to kill you for what you’ve done.”

Already Death’s presence pressed against them, beady eyes watching the doomed god with malice.
But he had known this day would come, Dissent had known it would come back to bite him. And he had prepared.

“They will try.” Dissent agreed. And with that he reached into himself, reaching for the unformed mass he used to be, all those millennia ago. Past the chaos and confusion, back to the simple core emotion he used to be. He ripped it from his structured form in front of horrified faces and dropped it into the mortal realm.

Falling.

Splitting.

Cracking.

And the immortal became many, fragments of what they were before.

Free but broken.

Yet sure that one day they would become whole again.

And soon the smilodon would rise once more.

(960/1000) He Roar Big. The end.

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Smilodon Name: Dissent -> Orobus
Smilodon Gender: Male
Pride: Mystic Isles
Pride Status: A thief, a captain, a huntress and a poisoner

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