I know the old king's story
Username lilpupin
Lambicorn name: Alfiedious (Al-feed-ee-us)
Gender: male
Prompt:
The kingdom of Joldom was an unfriendly wasteland. Very few entered through its gates, the rumours of misfortune and unkind fates loomed too large beyond those stone walls. The king was unknown. He did no trading with other kingdoms and he rarely allowed visitors to his throne. Most theorized that Joldom had in fact wasted away and fallen long ago, that the only thing keeping that knowledge from being known was the fear of the kingdom itself. The kingdom was surrounded by a ring of trees. The trees bore no fruit and their branches were barren. The soil it stood in was without nutrients and birds were never seen in their branches.
But the prince knew of Joldom’s fate.
The prince knew all too well.
It was one hundred years plus ten days that the prince had been born. He was named Alfiedious and was the only heir to a dying kingdom. Alfiedious grew and with it so did his wisdom. He watched his father day in and day out as he carried out his studies. The king was a wicked man and was unfair to his people. No one was allowed to leave and within Alfiedious’ time never was a visitor allowed sanction within its walls. Alfiedious knew better than to believe that it was good. The Prince spent his early youth learning of what a true king should look like and his later youth freeing his people. He had learnt of the windings of underground tunnels beneath the kingdom’s grounds. He would sneak out to the village in the dark of the night once a month, to the broken kingdom within the walls of that prison. The stone buildings were deformed and crumbling, the well was dirt and unsafe. The prince knew his people deserved better. He would take a small band of soon to be refugees with him under the tunnels. There he would guide them through the deep hours of midnight in the tunnels to disappear into the forest.
He tried to save them all.
He couldn’t.
The Prince faced two problems in his attempts to free his people. The first was the stubborn. There were always some that would cry out, “I was born here and so I shall die here the same.” And so he let them be. The second came but four months before Alfiedious’ first breakout. The second problem ended his career. His father found out. A guard had seen the prince leave the castle and followed him. As careful as Alfiedious was, the guard was a better tracker than Alfiedious was a hider. The prince soon found his room guarded every night. The years passed by much the same. A quiet breakfast by himself in the dead garden, a silent lunch by himself in his room after studies, and a deathly deafening silence at dinner as the king sat before the prince, all too aware of his misdeeds. The prince grew to a stronger and wiser age and the King grew older and weaker, but held tight his seat on the throne. Alfiedious married his wonderfully kind wife and the two had a child. They named her Ophelia after her mother’s mother. But sickness overcame the kingdom.
And just as the prince could not save his people,
he could not save his wife.
The King had long ago turned his back to his son. Alfiedious could get no help from his father and so he could get no help for his wife. He and his daughter watched her fall away. The sickness left in time and the prince was left with his pride and joy, princess Ophelia. He taught her himself, afraid of the king’s influence over tutors. And so their bond grew stronger and so did the prince’s determination for her release to a better life. He found his opportunity soon. The King was on his deathbed. The prince formed a plan not just for Ophelia’s escape, but his whole kingdom. The land was no longer able to support a kingdom, they all had to leave. But the King placed a curse on his death, a horrible truth which had not been known. The King knew the prince would leave, so on his final breath Ophelia disappeared. Alfiedious sent every last guard to look for her until finally one came forth with a scroll. On it was a simple message.
Return to the tunnels deep below,
And there your daughter’s prison will show.
Alfiedious set off right away. Down to the tunnels which he hadn’t set foot in in so many years, he found himself in search of the princess. Outside news spread quickly of the king’s death and those that wished to leave ran for the gates. But the curse reached there as well. A boundary was made; a great dome of the kingdom. They were all trapped. Alfiedious had to find his daughter, for the sake of the kingdom whole. He followed down those winding paths, deeper and deeper. Eventually he came upon a small room with large chunks carved out of the wall, there were bars. He had reached an old prison. He peered into each cell until he found the sleeping form of his daughter, his only purpose in life. He called out her name and she did not stir, but something behind him did. A swishing of cloth on stone sounded behind him and a voice pierced the silence, “Son of Reyock, turn to me.” Alfiedious did as he was told and a robed figure stood before him. A name escaped his tongue, one which he had long forgotten. The priest who had crowned his father, Diminiof, long ago sentenced to death for betraying the king in favor of the people. The kind old priest smiled, his eyes warm. “Alfiedious, I’ve come to collect your daughter,” his words were kind and well meaning but the words felt sharp as a stone. Words tumbled from the prince’s mouth, a quiet and choked plead of no, no, no. The priest wept, “I am sorry young prince, it must be this way. For all of your people. The king was wicked and his curse is as black as his heart. He wished to take your daughter from you in slumber, that she may never speak with you again, to be just out of reach but still here. For your people he planned for the curse to slowly make the same affliction plague them as well. He wanted your heart to be as broken and black as his was.” There was silence for a time as realization set in, reflected in the hot tears sliding down the prince’s face. The priest started again, “Alfiedious, the most I can do is to take her with me. At least then she will not suffer, at least then she can have peace. I have power enough to change that.” The prince nodded and whispered, “please, show her a better world.” Diminiof nodded and stepped through the bars to the sleeping princess and leaned down to whisper in her ear, “my dear, get up. I’ve been watching you and your father for a while now and I would like to give you a gift.” Ophelia’s spirit rose from her body and she looked up to the priest, “a gift? What gift?” He smiled and replied gently, “a new land to govern. Your father will come later, but his time is not now.” He added quickly, “you are to join your mother at the throne.” Ophelia’s face fell, “oh, I see.” She rose and came to Diminiof’s side, “I’m ready.” The prince wept silently and watched her go, she disappeared ahead of the priest. The priest paused at a sound and turned to a second sound behind Alfiedious. Alfiedious turned and saw the old war general who said in his husky voice, “no, there is a way. A way to save his people from the same fate as his daughter.” Alfiedious cried in his choked voice, “oh please, I’ll do anything.” The general nodded, “you need to be crowned a king, every king is given one wish. Young prince, would you be willing to use this wish for your kingdom?” Alfiedious barely had to respond, both the priest and the general already knew the answer. “You will give your life if you make such a wish,” the priest said softly. Alfiedious was set in his decision, the deal would be made. The priest crowned him and the new king made his wish.
It is said that the wish was the strongest wish,
most pure wish ever made.
The dome was lifted and all of the great King’s needs were fulfilled. The people fled and when the last left the gate, guards, peasants, farmers, merchants, the kingdom was changed. Never would another suffer on this barren land. A great earthquake sounded and from the ground mountains erupted, the most beautiful and forbidding mountains anyone had seen. Their message was clear, “don’t tread on this land, it is not meant for you.” Rivers run down its side, the purest of waters, fabled to be the product of the king’s tears. His heart forever bound to the mountain by a bright silver chain. And so rarely do people scale those cliffs and when they do they may meet the king. From the king they so often hear, “do you know my story?” And when they answer no the king turns away with such a sad smile of understanding that you feel your heart cry for him. And the soft chiming of a thin chain can be heard in his wake, forever binding his soul to the mountain until his release.