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Rise | #2862

Postby SurgeFire » Fri Jan 10, 2020 5:15 pm

Welcome to Rise!
Rise is an adoptable based on Warrior Cats and focused around world building and character development.
Please make sure that you read the main thread so that you understand limits and levels!

To claim you must be at least level 1 or not have a founder in progress or a founder at all. Please be sure you have room in your clan before applying for this cat.

This cat may not be traded until: 2 months after date judged
There is a 2 month cooldown after each ownership change.
For a transfer to be official, both parties must post on this cat's page. The original owner must post in the archive.

i'm back
here's another adopt
my own prompt this time wow

This cat has gotten into conflict or disagreement with another cat in the Clan... what was it, and how does it go? Were they right in the first place? How severe is the conflict, anyways... is it over something trivial, or a bigger, more pressing issue?
(If trying out for this cat as a founder, feel free to use a NPC for the other cat.)
Minimum 50 words, maximum 500.


End Date: January 15th, 11:59 PM EST


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Username: Archery_TPC
Cat Name: Sandyfeather
Clan: GladeClan
Rank: Warrior

Gender: Male
Age: 40 moons
'Simplified' Description: Light brown point with
white and blue eyes.
Genetic Description: Fawn mink point with
low white and blue eyes.

Other Features: None
Siblings: None Living


---------------------------------------- SSS: Foundation
----------------- SS: Foundation
---------------------------------------- SSD: Foundation
Father: Foundation
---------------------------------------- SDS: Foundation
----------------- SD: Foundation
---------------------------------------- SDD: Foundation

---------------------------------------- DSS: Foundation
----------------- DS: Foundation
---------------------------------------- DSD: Foundation
Dam: Foundation
---------------------------------------- DDS: Foundation
----------------- DD: Foundation
---------------------------------------- DDD: Foundation
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Re: Rise | #2862

Postby Sinful_Lies » Fri Jan 10, 2020 5:18 pm

Username;; Sinful_Lies
Cat Name;; Sandshrew or Dustshrew
Gender;; Female
Age;; 57 Moons
Clan;; Mudclan
Rank;; Warrior

Prompt;;
Res w/ Badgerheart decreasing the territory
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Re: Rise | #2862

Postby .sins. » Fri Jan 10, 2020 5:31 pm

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.sins. | they/them | sagittarius
enfp-t | true nuetral | slytherin

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just a vet student trying to enjoy the
minimal amount of free time they have

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Re: Rise | #2862

Postby alphatoros » Sat Jan 11, 2020 2:31 pm

Username;; alphatoros
Cat Name;; Pearheart
Gender;; Female
Age;; 27 moons
Clan;; Singeclan
Rank;; Warrior

Prompt;;
Pearheart watched her leader, Sleetstar, hiss aggressively at the stranger who cowered before her. Pearheart knew that cats who didn't meet the standards to join Singeclan were chased off. However, she didn't believe that this particular cat deserved to be left alone in the desert.
For the past month the tom cat had been tested by Sleetstar, a series of challenges to ensure that he had the best interest of the clan at heart. Recently he had been accused of injuring one of the clans warriors, knocking her unconscious and she still hasn't awoken. Because of this the warrior has not been able to disprove the accusation and as such the stranger has to be run off.
Sleetstar hissed again, batting the cat with unsheathed claws, pushing him further back into the wasteland. The stranger mewled pitifully and backed up, searching the eyes of the clanmates who watched the event. Any who caught his gaze lowered their eyes, unsure but following their leaders guidance.
Pearheart never went against her leaders word, but this was cruelty without evidence.
"Sleetstar!" Pearheart called, pushing her way through the crowd of her clanmates to stand behind her leader, "You can't banish him."
Sleetstar whipped her head around, staring at Pearheart. Her hackles lowered as she took her in, and her eyes glinted curiously.
"And why is that?"
"You have no proof." Pearheart responded quietly, "It's unfair to him and to the clan rules."
Sleetstar nodded gently and considered her clanmate, "This cat is the only possible suspect for the crime. What else would you suggest I do? "
Pearheart paused, feeling her heart hammering in her chest as she felt her leaders gaze. "I think you should extend his trial period."
A few cats in the crowd began murmuring unintelligibly at the suggestion. The stranger gave Pearheart a thankful look amidst the commotion.
"All right! All right," Sleetstar hushed her clanmates, "Each cat, deputy or not, is allowed to bring their opinion to me."
The cats quietened down, returning their focus to their leader. Sleetstar looked back at Pearheart.
"You are right in some ways, Pearheart. Apart from this one incident the stranger has been nothing but amicable."
Pearheart nodded, appreciating her leaders willingness to listen.
"But," She continued, "the information we have points towards this stranger-"
Pearheart opened her maw to rebut, stalling as Sleetstar gave her a look.
"-and as such we shall have a vote. All in favour of extending the trial period until definitive proof arises?"
The majority of cats shouted their support, the cacophony of approval almost deafening.
"Alright." Sleetstar said as the clan quietened once more, "I'd say that's an overwhelming choice. He stays."
Sleetstar gave the stranger another look, making her way back to the sleeping hollows.
The stranger cat bounded up to Pearheart, "Thank you! I swear I didn't do it. You won't regret standing up for me, I swear."
Pearhearted merely nodded as he wandered away, dumbfounded that she had actually managed to make a difference.
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Re: Rise | #2862

Postby kkilljoys » Tue Jan 14, 2020 1:22 am

Username;; Archery_TPC
Cat Name;; Sandyfeather
Gender;; Male
Age;; 40 Moons
Clan;; GladeClan (In Sig)
Rank;; Warrior

Prompt;; [ 500 ]
Sandypaw stared at the border solemnly. After becoming an apprentice, a war broke out Between Gladeclan and Skyclan. It was fine... until Gladeclan was ambushed by the rogue clan. He loved the idea of being a warrior - but as he grew, he had begun to realize it wasn't everything he dreamed of. His thoughts were interrupted by a dappled she-cat across the border.
"Why are you so sad?" The cat mewed.
"None of your business," Sandypaw quickly snapped. "Sorry," He apologized promptly.
"I know you aren't, but that's fine if you don't want to talk to a stranger like me-" The she thought for a moment. "Well, I'm Pebblepaw! There, now we aren't complete strangers," Pebblepaw smiled. "What's your name?" She asked.
"Sandypaw," Sandypaw mewed quietly. "Wait," It took him a moment before he noticed she had a clan name. His fur began to bristle. "Are you a part of that other clan?"
"What? Do you mean Skyclan? Yeah, why? Are you in Gladeclan?" Pebblepaw answered as if it meant nothing. Sandypaw hissed at her.
"Yes! And your mouse-brained clan attacked my clan! Gah, why am I talking to you?" Sandypaw growled the last part to himself.
"Well, I'm sorry about that, but you should know I don't like what my clan does. Harestar needs the prey and borders, and ever since our deputy passed, he's been devastated." Pebblepaw sighed, hurt by Sandypaw's comments.
"Oh," Sandypaw huffed. He began pouring his feelings onto the she-cat and the emerald grass.

+++

Sandyfeather greeted Pebblefur warmly, purring sweetly.
"It's been a while, Sandy," Pebblefur mewed happily.
"What did I say about calling me that?" Sandyfeather laughed.
"I think you said... What did you say?" Pebblefur pretended to look in thought. "Oh, right! You said it was weird," Pebblefur exclaimed. Sandyfeather sniffed, grinning. His gaze darkened. "What's wrong?" Pebblefur asked, concern evident in her tone.
"I just- Gladeclan expects so much of me, and if they found out I was in love with a cat from Skyclan-"
"You love me?" Pebblefur cut in. Sandyfeather's belly dropped. His jaw gaped, him being at a loss for words. Pebblefur began to squeal. "I love you too! Oh, I wish we could see each other every day!" Pebblefur nuzzled against Sandyfeather, purring. Sandyfeather heard a harsh growl and whipped around. His clanmate stood with their fur bristling, claws bared.
"Sandyfeather? What are you doing with... with that cat?" The cat growled.
"Lightningpelt, this isn't what it looks like-"
"I'm telling Cinderstar. You know there's a war going on, and you chose to take that risk." Lightningpelt growled.
"Excuse me?" Pebblefur hissed. "What if it was you? In love with a she from another clan?"
"This isn't like that, you fox!" Lightningpelt replied angrily. "This was has gone on for ages! Why would you do this?" Lightningpelt cried out.
"I'll join your clan!" Pebblefur yowled.
"You think it's that easy?" Lightningfur yelled.
"I'll make it up to you! Get extra prey! Give me a shot!" Pebblefur cried.
"Fine," Another cat mewed, coming into view.
Cinderstar.
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Re: Rise | #2862

Postby Dragonheart48 » Wed Jan 15, 2020 2:28 am

    Username;; Dragonheart48
    Cat Name;; Copperfrost
    Gender;; molly
    Age;; 36 moons
    Clan;; Shatteredclan
    Rank;; Scout

    Prompt;; How could everything go so wrong in only a day, it was just a border patrol that was all it was supposed to be and now she was alone and her paws were stained with the blood of her own clanmate. His name was Vinepool and together they'd been asked by Wolfheart to go on a quick patrol to make sure Elkclan wasn't somewhere they weren't supposed to be.

    That's what they did, case the stupid border eight times double or triple-checking their markers looking for any sign of probing enemy warriors. The trouble didn't start until the two cats where on their way back to the clan passing by the slope where the dense pine forest bled away into an open grassy field. Vinepool paused then looking out into the open field, maybe even past it, all the way down to the ocean that was supposedly beyond the reaches of the plain.

    Copperfrost bumped against his side her expression riddled with concern about the tom. "Hey, what's eating at you". Vinepool looked a little startled but flashed her a weak smile nodding his head to the field, "we could go right now make our own way without all of the pretentious laws and hollow oaths". Copperfrost laughed hoping beyond all reason he was just joking, Vinepool did that all the time right. He couldn't be serious, it wasn't....

    "Come on Vine, stop messing around we've got to get back before Shatterstar eats us". The she-cat turned away from the grasses starting back towards camp still chuckling to herself. She felt a wave of relief when she heard Vinepool bounding after her, everything would be fine they'd go home and forget this ever happened. Until the tom was suddenly in her face, "I'm being serious Copper, you can't be serious about this, you can't be happy here. It's awful".

    He was more desperate now pleading with her to see reason and her stomach dropped through her paws the she-cat fighting the urge to yowl in his face. "We can't talk about this it's hearsay". Vinepool looked at her like she'd grown another head as if she was the crazy one for wanting to remain loyal to the clan built by her ancestors and their ancestors before them. "Copperfrost come on, you're being ridiculous look how close we are we could run they'd never catch us". "We'd be happy out there I know it".

    The quiet that followed the declaration was smothering the tension coiling tighter and tighter stealing the breath from her lungs. "This is goodbye then". Copperfrost said turning her signature chill against the tom who looked heartbroken. "Come on, I can't leave you, I won't leave my sister". Vinepool quietly leaned his head against her shoulder only to have the she-cat jerk away from him and slash at his face. Her eyes were glossed over, unfamiliar, removed from the reality of what was happening, "you have no family here you made your choice. You're no brother of mine".

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    edit: thought I submitted the edit before the cut-off, but the story itself had no changes just edits for readability.
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Re: Rise | #2862

Postby Griffin Torrens » Wed Jan 15, 2020 11:25 am

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Re: Rise | #2862

Postby SurgeFire » Tue Feb 18, 2020 2:52 pm

Archery_TPC wrote:
Username;; Archery_TPC
Cat Name;; Sandyfeather
Gender;; Male
Age;; 40 Moons
Clan;; GladeClan (In Sig)
Rank;; Warrior

Prompt;; [ 500 ]
Sandypaw stared at the border solemnly. After becoming an apprentice, a war broke out Between Gladeclan and Skyclan. It was fine... until Gladeclan was ambushed by the rogue clan. He loved the idea of being a warrior - but as he grew, he had begun to realize it wasn't everything he dreamed of. His thoughts were interrupted by a dappled she-cat across the border.
"Why are you so sad?" The cat mewed.
"None of your business," Sandypaw quickly snapped. "Sorry," He apologized promptly.
"I know you aren't, but that's fine if you don't want to talk to a stranger like me-" The she thought for a moment. "Well, I'm Pebblepaw! There, now we aren't complete strangers," Pebblepaw smiled. "What's your name?" She asked.
"Sandypaw," Sandypaw mewed quietly. "Wait," It took him a moment before he noticed she had a clan name. His fur began to bristle. "Are you a part of that other clan?"
"What? Do you mean Skyclan? Yeah, why? Are you in Gladeclan?" Pebblepaw answered as if it meant nothing. Sandypaw hissed at her.
"Yes! And your mouse-brained clan attacked my clan! Gah, why am I talking to you?" Sandypaw growled the last part to himself.
"Well, I'm sorry about that, but you should know I don't like what my clan does. Harestar needs the prey and borders, and ever since our deputy passed, he's been devastated." Pebblepaw sighed, hurt by Sandypaw's comments.
"Oh," Sandypaw huffed. He began pouring his feelings onto the she-cat and the emerald grass.

+++

Sandyfeather greeted Pebblefur warmly, purring sweetly.
"It's been a while, Sandy," Pebblefur mewed happily.
"What did I say about calling me that?" Sandyfeather laughed.
"I think you said... What did you say?" Pebblefur pretended to look in thought. "Oh, right! You said it was weird," Pebblefur exclaimed. Sandyfeather sniffed, grinning. His gaze darkened. "What's wrong?" Pebblefur asked, concern evident in her tone.
"I just- Gladeclan expects so much of me, and if they found out I was in love with a cat from Skyclan-"
"You love me?" Pebblefur cut in. Sandyfeather's belly dropped. His jaw gaped, him being at a loss for words. Pebblefur began to squeal. "I love you too! Oh, I wish we could see each other every day!" Pebblefur nuzzled against Sandyfeather, purring. Sandyfeather heard a harsh growl and whipped around. His clanmate stood with their fur bristling, claws bared.
"Sandyfeather? What are you doing with... with that cat?" The cat growled.
"Lightningpelt, this isn't what it looks like-"
"I'm telling Cinderstar. You know there's a war going on, and you chose to take that risk." Lightningpelt growled.
"Excuse me?" Pebblefur hissed. "What if it was you? In love with a she from another clan?"
"This isn't like that, you fox!" Lightningpelt replied angrily. "This was has gone on for ages! Why would you do this?" Lightningpelt cried out.
"I'll join your clan!" Pebblefur yowled.
"You think it's that easy?" Lightningfur yelled.
"I'll make it up to you! Get extra prey! Give me a shot!" Pebblefur cried.
"Fine," Another cat mewed, coming into view.
Cinderstar.


congrats! loved the development of their relationship in this one, the conflict itself, and the uncertainty of what is to happen next after cinderstar comes in is int e resting ^^
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