Rise | #2509 by silver ~

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Rise | #2509

Postby silver ~ » Sun Nov 10, 2019 12:55 pm

Welcome to Rise!
Rise is an adoptable based on Warrior Cats and focused around world building and character development.
Please make sure that you read the main thread so that you understand limits and levels!


This cat may not be traded until: feb 28, 2019
There is a 2 month cooldown after each ownership change.
For a transfer to be official, both parties must post on this cat's page. The original owner must post in the archive.


    username: jay.
    cat name: norte
    clan: kin of the barren tundra
    rank: outsider

    gender: she-cat
    age: 48 moons
    description: an off-white cat with brown rosettes and icy blue eyes. a few faded scars are scattered around their flank and they have a notched ear (seal mink rosette tabby)

    other features: none
    siblings: none living

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    father: Foundation
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    dam: Foundation
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Re: Rise | #2509

Postby jay. » Sun Nov 10, 2019 1:07 pm

username: jay.
cat name: Junco
clan: Kin of the Barren Tundra
rank: Outsider (temporary exile, former warrior)
gender: Female
age: 48 Moonpassings

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ꜱʜᴇ ꜱᴀɪᴅ ᴛʜᴇ ᴅᴇᴠɪʟ ᴡɪʟʟ ᴡᴀɴᴛ ʏᴏᴜ ʙᴀᴄᴋ
ʞɔɐq noʎ ʇuɐʍ llıʍ lıʌǝp ǝɥʇ pıɐs ǝɥS


ꜰᴏʟʟᴏᴡɪɴɢ what one believes is true can, occasionally,
lead to the downfall of both them and their beliefs.
What you view as morally correct could tear into
another individual, throwing them against you,
regardless of how strong of a connection you held
with them. Sacrifices thrown around like leaves
in the wind. No one cares to stop them, any attempt
to clear them up will result in the same mess all
over again, where it be the wind or another
competitor, one who sees the chance to strike
and make a difference. They are unsettled,
nothing can be done in order to prevent or
cause hesitation in the individuals. It's
a train of sheep; mindless and following with
no personal awareness of their surroundings.

Are those who follow along with what they see as
right still liable to being punished in the same way as
the leaders, punished for the direct intent of their
actions. Is that ᴊᴜꜱᴛ, or do they deserve
a chance at ʀᴇᴅᴇᴍᴘᴛɪᴏɴ?

ᴊᴜꜱᴛɪᴄᴇ is often key at heart with
the lack of malicious intent.

ᴛʜᴇɴ ᴡʜʏ ɪꜱ ɪᴛ ᴛʜᴀᴛ ᴛʜᴇʏ ᴀʀᴇ ᴘᴜɴɪꜱʜᴇᴅ?

Justice is nothing but a ludicrous action, one only
those who strive to make a difference go for, a difference
that cannot be achieved. That set in stone can't be altered,
you follow along or get trapped within it's grasps.
Striving for a difference is ʀᴇʙᴇʟʟɪᴏɴ.
ᴛʜᴀᴛ'ꜱ ᴡʜʏ ᴛʜᴇʏ'ʀᴇ ʙᴇɪɴɢ ᴘᴜɴɪꜱʜᴇᴅ

ʀᴇʙᴇʟʟɪᴏɴ can be achieved in many ways, however,
it all counts down to the ruler's opinion on what a rebel would
fall under, how insecure and paranoid they are about losing
their own position above others. Rebellion can be passive,
then what's the harm in doing so? Use a symbol against those
you despise, something you can't be punished for.. right?

ᴛʜᴇ ꜱᴋᴜʟʟ ᴏꜰ ᴛʜᴏꜱᴇ ᴛʜᴇʏ ᴡᴏʀꜱʜɪᴘ.
ᴛʜᴇ ꜱᴋᴜʟʟ ᴏꜰ ᴀ ʙɪʀᴅ



















Paws splashed along the puddles as thunder crashed above, lightning illuminating the sky and reflecting against soaked pelts: silver lining. Yet only one pelt appeared, the other set of paw steps echoing with the thunder, another illusion of those who walked before them. In comparison to the visible paw steps, the hidden ones held more resentment, a controlling atmosphere that the former appeared to be running from, making an escape despite the attachment they presented to each other. An evil bound to a pure spirit.

Diving for shelter, Junco collapsed under a fallen tree, heavily breathing in order to catch her breath. An unheard voice whispered... or was it just the wind? Junco muttered back, shaking her head and flicking her tail in a direction, longing for it to go away. Rain poured down on the roof of the collapsed tree as she shook her pelt off, pushing her nose into the damp dirt to unbury a section of it that had been turned up. With the use of her nose and paws she unburied a small collection of off-whites in the mud, splatters of brown and darker colours embarked in the paler colours. Bones. Dragging her claws into the dirt, Junco retrieved one of the bones, looping her claws around the now-empty eye socket and throwing it to be outside in the rain, the dirt slowly washing off with the intensity of it.

She watched with curiosity before too sticking her nose out into the rain, dirt pouring down her muzzle as she stared down at the bird skull that had displaced the dirt. Huffing she spun back around to look at the other collection of bones: broken bird skulls and other unidentifiable bones coated in the same darkness that had covered the skull. The one bone of the collection that had survived, yet to perish under the pressure of nature. Junco refused to sit down, the dirt would only coat her in it's presence too, marking her as a vulnerable act towards nature, she only allowed for her paws to be coated, as they always had been. Misled by misfortune and power above her. Relief still lingered from the lack of company she currently had, giving her the freedom to, she hoped, mind her own business and plan her return.

How many moonpassings had it been?

Last she heard of The Kin, the uprising had happened, an attempt against the Origin that had wiped one of her lives away from her. Junco had been caught up in that and accused as one of those within the rebellion, going against any attempt she had to try and reason and be passive with her reasonings. What had been the cause of her departure sat in front of her, torn into by the heavy rain, dominated by the claps of thunder roaring in the sky above them, lightning teasing at the hint of hope and freedom that was present in the storm. Who knew a bird skull could pose a threat towards the clan. Junco scoffed, completely stepping back out into the rain to feel the same pressure as the skull. Her pelt was already soaked, what was the point? It was mental preparation for tomorrow, if she even got to that point without back away. It had to be sorted at some point, she couldn't leave the problem to float and grow bigger.

There was no harm in waiting out a passing storm. Stay vigilant.

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West pressed her paws against the wooden bridge, contemplating the intensity of the damage that had been inflicted on the wooden planks. Water still completely soaked the wood and she let out an agitated sigh - last time there had been a serious storm they had lost one of their bridges to the lightning. A sign from those who had walked before them, she guessed. Pacing forward, she took note of how her paw steps imprinted into the wood, leaving an obvious trail of where she had trekked. Her focus switched to these paw prints as she pressed down into the wood again, checking to see if everything was still safe.

"You never felt wood before?" A sudden voice made West's fur bristle as she unsheathed her claws and spun around, her muzzle drawing back into a snarl. "Junco." West forced a chuckle at Junco, who stood there with a point-blank expression, the skull of a bird resting at her paws. "Oh please, don't play tough." Junco remarked, yet with no hostility towards her companion, who radiated fear and hatred back. Swallowing her words, Junco hesitated and paced forward, resulting in West bracing herself even more, her muzzle still drawn back in a complete snarl. "You have no right here," West reinforced the idea into Junco's mind, yet she pushed through. She had bigger problems. West's voice wasn't the only one she heard, the whisper that had haunted her from the previous night drew closer again, telling her what to do. Of course, she ignored both: two different sides to the same coin.

"The storm last night, I-"
"You've come here to tell me that was your fault, haven't you? That you angered those who walked before us."
Junco looked taken back and bit her tongue, casting a glance away from West and towards the skull, almost staring at something unseen that was standing over the skull. As she had before she closed her eyes and shook her head before pacing towards the skull, turning her back to West and picking up the skull. West watched with fear, still completely braced at what Junco was going to do. With obvious hesitation, Junco carried the skull over to West, before veering off to her side and peering over the edge of the bridge, flicking her tail for West to watch.

Junco dropped the skull into the rushing water below, the water bellowed upon contact. West slowly relax, watching in awe as Junco turned around to face her, her tone genuine. "I'm not here to cause trouble or anything, please listen to me." Junco meowed, nodding towards the water once more, only to lock eyes back with West, who had now sat down in her spot, awkwardly shuffling her paws attentively as Junco spoke. Occasionally she would look around at either side of the bridge, checking that none of The Kin walked in on them. Neither of them would be willing to explain that. "Make it quick." She warns as Junco also takes her seat, wrapping her tail around her front paws. "As I was saying.. the storm last night. That must've hit hard." Her voice fluctuated for a moment - a detail West caught onto very quickly, yet remained quiet herself. It wasn't worth mentioning that, West was amazed that Junco even had the courage to show herself again after their previous encounter. Traitor.
"It's nothing, just flooding as usual. You know what it's like." West retorted back, her gaze locked completely on Junco in the event she tried something suspicious. Junco stayed put, however. It was now, no arguments about that.

"I want to help." Junco finally confessed, earning a sudden laugh from West. She drew her ears back.
"You, of all cats, wanting to help out? Oh by Overseer's paw steps, what are you talking about?" She snickered, mocking Junco, whom of which she didn't believe was being serious. Why would a traitor offer help? What was she trying to get out of this? "If you've come here looking for shelter, this isn't the place for you, turn back-"
"I just want to help rebuild whatever was broken, please." Junco repeated, her ears still at an angle as she spoke. West narrowed her eyes, leaning forward as she watched Junco. "And why should I believe you?" West snarled again, rising back to her paws in suspicion and pacing towards Junco, "What do you want from us so badly?"
"West-"
"No. No! Answer the question, Junco. What do you want from us?"
Junco suddenly hissed, causing West herself to draw backwards. "How many times do I have to say it? I want to help you. Was that skull not enough for you? Not enough to prove I'm not here to harm you in any way?" She snapped at a now very surprised West who stood her ground. "Let me help clean up - I'll leave the second everything is better. Please." Junco continued on, watched closely again by West the entire time. Finally sighing, West nodded, the faint remains of her drawn back muzzle still showing through as she spoke. "If you're true to your words, maybe. On the condition that you don't sleep in camp and that you have to hunt for yourself." West spoke, pacing around Junco in an off-circle as she went, flicking her tail around her companion. "However." Her tone suddenly changed as she stopped in front of Junco again, staring directly into her eyes.
"One mess up, and I'll assure you don't get a second chance ever again. Do I make myself clear?"

No response.
"Junco."
"I, uh, yes, yes West. I understand." The forced sympathy had returned as she shifted her own paws, looking away from West in shame. "Prisoner, not one of us. Gather what you must, I'll meet you back here come tomorrow's Moonrising." West nodded towards Junco in acknowledgement before passing on by her, making her way back across the bridge in the mirrored direction Junco had come from, leaving the she-cat alone in her own thoughts. Tomorrow Moonrising. As far as she knew she would be killed,

but what other option did she have?

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Luckily for Junco, West hadn't been as harsh on her as she had originally expected. While she didn't let her return back to The Kin due to her ''crimes'', Junco was allowed back on the territory, reforming her place back into the clan after the rebellion. West had taken her sacrifice of the bird skull as an eventual peace offering, despite seeing it as a hint of hostility before, that Junco had tried to use it to lower her defences. Junco had been influenced by the ancestors of The Kin who walked through Narrow Paths - cats who weren't allowed through to the Overseers due to their own crimes or beliefs during their lifetime. Disagreement with the leaders of The Kin had led to Junco turning to those of Narrow Paths for assistance, buying into what they had fed her with. She hasn't completely left these spirits, occasionally talking to them due to emotional attachment, just how she will most likely never be apart of The Kin again. Neither her nor West are willing to take that step into reintroducing her into the clan, she stands as an Outsider that assists those inside, not one with The Kin.

Junco did end up helping around camp, repairing the damages and was even allowed to tend for the kits: they adored her and became fascinated with the bird skulls due to her, constantly asking for her to bring them one. She refuses, of course, as it had been denoted to a symbol of rebellion rather than one of peace. Sunflower offered Junco a place back in The Kin, a chance for him to talk to West into considering her back into The Kin, but she humbly refused, still not mentally prepared to throw herself back into a clan-like situation after taking care of herself for a such a lot time. She still distances herself from cats now and again, often seen around the kits, bringing up a positive influence on them, a new start on what she once ruined.

Maybe one day everything will seal back over and she can live with The Kin again, act towards taking care of the kits.
Maybe one day she won't be reliant on those who walk through Narrow Paths.
Maybe, just maybe, her and West will finally put their differences aside.
Maybe.

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Word count: 2,297 words

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Re: Rise | #2509

Postby osamu » Sun Nov 10, 2019 1:08 pm

dropping out! sorry, but congrats to who ever wins!
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Re: Rise | #2509

Postby .sins. » Sun Nov 10, 2019 1:30 pm

username: .sins.
cat name: Lynxfire
clan: Strawberryclan
rank: Hunter
gender: male
age: 49 moons

prompt:
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xxxxx"Look I'd agree with you, but then we would both be wrong." The rosette tom hissed.
He was tired of having to fight with his learner everyday. She was a stubborn cat that
refused to believe everything she was told, and thought she knew better. It took all
his will power to not claw her ears off.
xxxxxHe watched his learner lash her tail in frustration at him. "You never listen to what I say
and think you're right! Why can't you ever just let me make mistakes and learn!" She took
off into the forest, her body disappearing within a few heartbeats. His ears hot with anger,
he stopped by the river and lapped at it.
xxxxxHe didn't care what happened to his learner at this point, he stood over the river, sun to
his face as he waited for fish to swim under him, allowing him to quickly hook the fish
with his claws and pull them from the water. He wasn't much of a cat to get fully in the
water. Noticing the sun was starting to set, panic set in as his learner hadn't come back.
He started into the forest after covering the fish with moss rocks.
xxxxxHer scent was faded, but still trackable through the
forest scents. It seemed like it stopped at the base of a tree before he heard a sharp
hiss from the branches above.
xxxxx"Go away!" He sighed at her anger and sat beneath her.
xxxxx"Can you please come down? We need to go back to
the camp for the night."
xxxxx"No!" He dug his claws into the soft dirt under him.
xxxxx"I'm sorry. I should have let you learn your mistakes
through experience. I just wanted to save you some pain and possible physical hurt."
His ears twitched as he heard claws scraping against the tree bark. He looked up to see
his learner standing before him. "You know, with those climbing skills you would do
better as a Forest Dweller. Maybe we can talk to someone about taking you as their
learner next?" He felt a deep purr in his chest as she nodded and they both headed
back to camp, not forgetting the fish he had caught earlier.
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Re: Rise | #2509

Postby Zephara » Sun Nov 10, 2019 2:01 pm

username: Diamond pet
cat name: Frostsnap
clan: MoonClan
rank: Warrior
gender: Male
age: 48 moons

prompt:

The mountains were cold. Not the typical brisk temperature that was always present in mountainous regions. No. This was freezing, bone-chilling, death-inducing cold. It was the coldest frost-season Frost had ever endured. And he wasn’t enduring it well.

Frost shivered as he struggled through the almost shoulder-high snow. He needed shelter. Even more importantly, he needed food. He hadn’t eaten in days, and all the prey had either been driven away from the cold or already killed.

Through the snow, a huge pine appeared before him. In between the tree’s roots, barely visible was a small hole. Frost let out a small gasp of relief. He dragged himself to the hole and plunged down it. He tumbled down into a hollow beneath the tree. Frost lay on the ground, relived that the cave was warmer than outside. He lifted his head and surveyed his surroundings. What he saw made him stop short.

A few tail-lengths in front of him were two shapes. One was the body of a female cat. She was clearly dead. The second was a kit, curled on the ground, feebly nudging the dead cat. She must be the dead cat’s daughter.

Frost began to move towards the kit but froze. In the mother cat’s jaws was the limp body of a hare. A hare! Frost almost yelped in excitement. Prey! With a sudden burst of energy, Frost leapt over to the body and snatched the hare from her jaws. The kit startled, looked up at Frost. Eyes on the hare, she let out a tiny hopeful mew. Frost looked at the hare. It would be able to sustain him for days if he was careful. But if he shared with the kit...

Hardening his heart, Frost turned and curled up in the farthest corner from the two cats. He quickly devoured half of the hare and then tucked the rest of it in a shallow hole in the hollow’s wall. He briefly glanced at the kit, who seemed to want to follow him, but stayed with her mother.

Frost curled up in a tight ball, attempting to shut out the mewling of the kit. He heard her whispering in a tiny voice to her mother, and he heard her grow weaker and weaker from the lack of food. Eventually, Frost slipped into an uneasy sleep.

Morning came, and the kit was dead. Frost walked over to the two bodies. He looked at the kit, whose face was twisted into an expression of hopelessness. A sudden pang rushed through Frost. What have I done? He thought in mute horror. Remorsefulness coursed through his veins and he felt tears prick at his eyes. There was nothing he could do to change his actions. I need to bury them.

For the entire day, Frost dug two graves. Graves for the mother and the kit whose names he didn’t even know. The entire time, silent sobs wracked his body. When he finished digging, he placed the bodies in the ground. Then, he took the rest of the hare and dropped it in as well. I will not eat what I stole. Even if it makes me starve. Frost covered up the graves and for a long time, he remained beside them.

~
Many moons later

For the past moon, Frostsnap had observed a strange, starry mist. It seemed to always be present in his vision, yet it disappeared if he came close. After puzzling over the matter, Frostsnap had come to a conclusion. He must visit Starclan.

The moon was full as Frostsnap made his way through the forest. It illuminated the forest, basking everything in a silvery light. Soon, Frostsnap had reached his destination: the Skyspring.

Silently, Frostsnap padded to the pool’s edge. He leaned down and touched his the water, gasping as the cold liquid brushed his nose. When Frostsnap looked up, he was in a misty forest, blanketed in stars. In front of him, he saw the starry mist.

Frostsnap walked towards the mist, and as he did, it swirled, forming the shape a small cat. Frostsnap gasped. The kit! A wave of sadness and guilt crashed over Frostsnap. His eyes filled with tears and averted his gaze, not daring to look the kit in the eye.

“Frostsnap.” The kit’s voice caused Frostsnap to look up. The kit was looking at him, her eyes a mix of sadness and bitterness. I don’t blame her for that. Thought Frostsnap. He opened his mouth and spoke in a trembling voice.

“I- I’m sorry. I know how horrible I was to you. I know my decision is the reason you are here. And if you hate me because of it, I do not blame you. My actions that day were absolutely horrific and I have regretted it ever since.” Frostsnap took a deep breath and waited for a response.

“Frostsnap. I forgive you.” A bolt of shock raced through Frostsnap’s fur as he registered her words. “I have seen you, all your regret, your pain. I understand that you wished you could undo your actions. And I still hold a little bitterness of a life lost, but I can forgive you.” The two cats stood silent for a moment. Frostsnap was shocked at the tiny kit’s maturity and wisdom. There was only one thing he could say to her.

“Thank you.” The kit nodded and turned to leave, stars swirling about her tiny paws.

“Wait. I never got your name,” Frostsnap called, seized with a sudden impulse. The kit turned, her gaze piercing.

“My name.” She said slowly. “My name is Snowdrop.”


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Re: Rise | #2509

Postby BugInTheWater » Sun Nov 10, 2019 2:17 pm

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Re: Rise | #2509

Postby foxxbreath » Sun Nov 10, 2019 4:46 pm

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username:
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cat name:
Singed Rose
clan:
Tribe of Wandering Paws
rank: x
gender: She-Cat
age: 27 moons


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working on diminishing bitterness in her heart
was on a path for revenge, over the death of her kits, before joining the tribe
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Re: Rise | #2509

Postby Schainukan » Sun Nov 10, 2019 8:39 pm

Withdrawn. Too many great forms out there. XD
Congrats to whoever wins this beauty!
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Re: Rise | #2509

Postby kkilljoys » Sun Nov 10, 2019 10:54 pm

In the end, we only regret the chances we didn't take.


username: ChicBoy1_
cat name: Snowspirit
clan: GladeClan (In Sig)
rank: Warrior
gender: Female
age: 61 Moons

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"Snowpaw!" Snowpaw's sister screeched as the ice-coated lake gave way and the small cat tumbled below the ice into the freezing water.
"Willowpaw, I'm coming!" Snowpaw yowled as she slid across the ice, paws churning in hopes of moving. She could barely see her sisters figure beneath the ice. Managing to slow herself, Snowpaw slammed on the ice above Willowpaw, attempting to crack the thick layer of frozen water. Up ahead, Snowpaw spotted a hole in the sheet of glimmering ice and realized she had a decision to make. Jump in the water and risk the both of them dying, or... well, try and rescue Willowpaw by slamming herself onto the ice. Snowpaw leaped to the hole, diving into the water. Snowpaw's body jerked forward as she felt teeth dig into her scruff. She was pulled from the water, gulping for air as her body began to shiver. She blinked, searching for Willowpaw's body, which twisted and turned in the water. Snowpaw let out a cry of anguish as she saw Willowpaw's fluttering eyelids, her usually light blue eyes now clouded. Snowpaw watched in horror as her sister's body slowly faded away in the depths of the icy lake. Snowpaw twisted, turning to face her mentor, Lightningfur.
"You did this!" Snowpaw screeched, fur bristling. "I was going to save her-" Her breath came in short gasps, her body beginning to shake. "I could've helped her." She managed to breathe.
"You both would have died," Lightningfur growled. "It was too later for her, anyway," He added. Snowpaw scowled at him, surprised by his cold tone.

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Snowspirit stared out at the frozen lake, her eyes distant as snow flicked across the frost-bitten grass. Her whiskers twitched as a warm breath crossed her fur, and Silverfall sat beside her.
"You need to stop coming to the lake in the winter, you know it is of no help," Silverfall mewed, breaking the peaceful silence. Snowspirit nodded her head once, her ear twitching.
"Willowpaw deserves at least this - I couldn't even muster the courage to ask for her to be named a warrior on her journey to Starclan. The journey of which I caused," Snowspirit breathed, her voice unnaturally smooth as if rehearsed. Her eyes gave it all away - the coat of glass glistened in the frosty sky, and the painful sadness flowed over her features.
"Even so, the clan began to call her Willowsong," Silverfall seemed to form a pained smile at the name. Snowspirit's shoulders sagged, and she bent her head.
"I was such a fool to leave her. I should've jumped back in, should've ignored Lightingfur. I should've risked it - instead, I was a coward," Snowspirit turned to Silverfall, remorse reflecting in her crystal blue eyes. "I left her," She choked. Silverfall hushed Snowspirit, edging closer.
"You'll be alright," Silverfall mewed, pressing her muzzle against Snowspirit. "We'll be alright." Snowspirit whipped around.
"You don't get it! It was my idea to play on the ice, and I'm the reason she couldn't even make it past her apprenticeship! She would always talk about finding her soulmate, having kits- She had so much ahead of her!" Snowspirit yelled.
"It was never your fault, Snowspirit. It was her time, you couldn't have done anything." Silverfall mewed. "Come with me," She stood, padding down to the shore of the lake. Snowspirit reluctantly followed. "What was Willowsong's favourite flower?"
"A poppy," Snowspirit breathed. Silverfall nodded, flicking her tail and moving into the trees. She returned with a small poppy, close to blooming. Snowspirit closed her eyes, taking in a sharp breath.
"This poppy is for Willowsong," Silverfall mewed, placing the poppy near the water. Snowspirit sniffed, letting out a sob.
"I'm so sorry," She breathed.

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Re: Rise | #2509

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