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Cat Name: bramblingbrair
Clan: wolverineclan
Rank: sleet (warrior equivalent)
Gender: (DFAB)
Age: twenty-eight moons
Prompt: when bramblingbriar was just bramblingpaw,
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Cat Name: Alice
Clan: The Kingdom of the Isles of Nes
Rank: Knight
Gender: Female
Age: 26 moons
Prompt:
“It’s a right of passage Alice if you’re going to be a knight this has to be done,” Her mentor told her flatly having told her to many times before to count.
Alice only sighed in response and rolled on her back, “But I don’t get it Reg it seems so pointless, travel down to the bottom of the cliff. Why? What is that going to prove? That I can walk on some rocks?”
Twitching his tail in imitation the knight cursed the good spirits for making him train such an unreadable she-cat. “The spirits named you as a knight and should you fail this task you will fail your training and in turn fail the good spirits. You know what happens to those who fail to complete there training.” His words turning slightly cold at the last part, no one wanted to fail there training.
Alice sat up at the clear threat at the end of her mentor's words, she knew it wasn’t a threat from him though it was a reminder of what happened to those who didn’t pass, those who became less. “When have they decided to send me?” She asks carefully with her words now, her voice coming out softer.
“Tomorrow,” Reg tells her simply, “You will brave the cliff tomorrow and only return once you can prove that you have completed the task.”
Taking a deep breath Alice nodded, she was scared and was sure her mentor could see it through the shield she carried, she didn’t care right now though. “And how will I prove it to the King?”
“You’ll know once you get down there.” Was all Reg told her before leaving her to her thoughts.
——
Looking out over the cliffs, the waves crashing below and the salt air thick on her tongue, listening to the sound of her mentor leaving her at the edge of her world. He walked her to the cliffs along with the priest and recited the worlds to the spirits about how she had completed her training and had one final task to prove her worth.
“Okay you can do this, just climb down the cliffs to the ocean below and climb back up. No big deal to it, just a drop into the crashing ocean below if I make one wrong step.” Talking out loud Alice realized that this really wasn’t helping her.
The path at the top was only a few tail lengths to her left, well worn for the first quarter till it started down. With a deep breath Alice stepped onto the rocks, her claws already how and clicking on the ground as she walked. Eyes up and forward, ignoring the sound of crashing waves below.
It was easy at first to follow the narrow well-worn path, her body steady in her walk, tail out behind her to keep her balance. It was once she got to the end of the worn path that Alice stopped, wide-eyed as she tried to figure out where to go from here. As part of the test, she wasn’t told really anything about the cliff she’d have to climb down, just shown the path at the top and told to return by the end of the day.
It seemed to be easiest to just keep going the way the path had been going, but Alice could see farther down that it faced out and there would be no way to go down after. So against what she wanted to do, Alice went down to the right, rocks nagging at her fur when she had to hold her body close to keep from slipping off the edge. Rocks rolling down from under her feet and bounce down were what scared her most, but she kept going.
It was a third of the way down when Alice lost herself, eyes blowing wide as the rest of her body followed her left foot that had slipped from the rocks. Twisting herself in the air Alice desperately grasped for the rocks as gravity took hold of her, pulling her towards the water bellow. Her left paw struck a rock and Alice could only yell as it sliced open her flesh and the blood welded from the wound. From there it was just a free fall to what waited for her bellow.
Alice just managed to brace herself before she landed, seeing it would be on rock and not water like she had thought, rock. It was a hard impact that knocked the air from her lungs and further tore the cut on her leg when she bent it. She didn’t yell though, she didn’t have any air left to yell with. But she was alive or at least her breathing was hard enough to suggest it.
“I’m okay,” Alice whispered to herself, before wincing at the sight of her leg when she glanced down. “Okay lie, I’m alive though.”
One heavily breath to steady herself and leg held up to keep pressure off Alice took the moment to look around, seeing now how the cliff hanging over the bottom, there was rock above her, which explained why from the top she could only see water and not the flat rock that she was standing on now. The waves lapped as the rock about five cat lengths to her right and Alice knew she had to hurry in case the water rose up here with the tide.
“Find the proof and get back,” She told herself, light glinting off an object, and forcing her body towards it.
——
“Under the watchful gaze of the good spirits you Alice have passed the final test to become a knight!” The King announced to the waiting crowd as Alice stood proudly beside him, a shard of sea glass rounded from the waves hanging from her neck. Her leg throbbed but she didn’t feel it, because she’d done what she had thought just days before was impossible, what everyone had thought was impossible for her.
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