[ExVenor]

*smoke bomb and glitter*

Username: aray17
Show Name: Infinite Intrusion
Barn Name: Rousey
Gender: Mare
Eye Colour: Thine Flesh
Sire/Dam: Foundation
Sire/Dam: Foundation
Phenotype: Silver Sooty Buckskin Pangare Tobiano
Genotype: Ee Aa Crcr Zz Stysty Pngpng
Breeding Notes:
- [n/a]

This one was going to be just a sooty buck but I didn't want to cover them up and just kept going.
Kinda remind me of a barn owl now. cx

Explanation contest! This one always seems to be getting into scuffles with other tolters. What makes them act so tough? Are they fighting with specific tolts or just anyone?
You have a minium of 200 words.
[writing can be done as a horse, human, or centaur]


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[b]Username:[/b]
[b]Show Name:[/b]
[b]Barn Name:[/b]
[b]Gender:[/b]
[b]Halter:[/b]
[b]Explanation:[/b]

[Gaycko]

Username: Seven of Sushi
Show Name: Pass on the Summer Mountains
Barn Name: Mantique
Gender: non-binary
Halter: Pastel red to pastel blue gradient
Explanation: WiP

[aray17]

Username: aray17
Show Name: Infinite Intrusion
Barn Name: Rousey
Gender: mare
Halter: surprise me
Explanation: My breaths became shallow and frantic as the metal walls tightened and collapsed on me. Cold sweat dripped down my spine as I searched desperately for a familiar face in the tight trailer full of horses I had never seen before. My imagination ran wild as anxiety consumed and controlled my body. I closed my eyes and reset my mind. I tried to wiggle through the masses, screaming for mother, father, or anyone from my herd. I pushed disgruntled horses out of the way, scrambling to the back of the trailer. The scorching hot metal stung my face as I pressed up against it to try to see out the small holes. Everything was moving so fast. My heart pounded and ricocheted against my skull. I felt my blood boil and burn. Thoughts raced through my head, but one kept knocking on my skull. I just want someone from my herd. Just one. Tears began to puddle and cloud up my eyes as I tried to suck it up and keep my outer shell from cracking. My eyes began to burn as the tears overwhelmed my eyes. I couldn't hold back anymore. I rammed my body against the wall and then struck it again. Heads began to turn but I didn't care. Horses began to back away from be, so I continued to strike the wall, only to deepen the pain and bruises. An older mare looked deep into my troubled eyes as I screamed out for my mother. She tried to soothe and calm me. One by one, more horses began to surround me. Blood began to boil inside of me and I shoved all of them off of me in a furious rampage. Screaming out to my mother, I only wanted her. No one else. All I wanted was my mother. The pain surged deep. As the truck came to a halt, light surged through the opening as horses began to unload, into another tight area. There was lots of shoving and yelling, as humans surrounded us. I screamed out for mother. Still responseless. I collapsed onto the dusty and dry ground, as horses trampled around me. At this point, I didn't care if I was stepped on. I was truly broken. Never again would I depend on others, as I navigated and survived through the long months in the crowded corral. My heart hardened and I distanced myself from others. If anyone came close to me, I would instantly snap at them. I didn't want to be weak ever again. Throughout my youth, I jumped from place to place. Always fighting with anyone and everyone who came near me or looked at me funny. But isolation only makes the pain deepen. Making friends never was my priority in life. Survival always has and will be my priority.

[paradise,]

mark!

[Lush]

Username: HowlToTheWind
Show Name: MLS Dark Dancer
Barn Name: Cinnamon
Gender: Stallion
Halter: Dark red
Explanation: wip!!

[Nocsokol]

Username: Nocsokol
Show Name:
Barn Name:
Gender:
Halter:
Explanation:
possible res. i might base this one off me since i pick fights a lot rip

[dollissa]

Username: Foxish
Show Name: Desert Storm
Barn Name: Duke
Gender: Stallion
Halter: artist's choice!
Explanation: Duke met Dutch after he'd transitioned to a new barn. As soon as Duke was loaded off the trailer, he and Dutch began to fight. It took a team of four trainers just to get them apart, and when they did, both stallions had their fair share of injuries. But now, after a few months of careful training, positive reinforcement, and waiting for those injuries to heal, both have started to get along better. Even though there are still many flaws in their relationship, the future looks promising for these stallions.

[ExVenor]

Looking for a few more finished forms before I judge this one.
Don't forget to include some form of an answer to both the questions!
"What makes them act so tough? Are they fighting with specific tolts or just anyone?"

[cujo.]

Username:
Show Name:
Barn Name:
Gender:
Halter:
Explanation:
wip

[ExVenor]

Username: aray17
Show Name: Infinite Intrusion
Barn Name: Rousey
Gender: mare
Halter: surprise me
Explanation: My breaths became shallow and frantic as the metal walls tightened and collapsed on me. Cold sweat dripped down my spine as I searched desperately for a familiar face in the tight trailer full of horses I had never seen before. My imagination ran wild as anxiety consumed and controlled my body. I closed my eyes and reset my mind. I tried to wiggle through the masses, screaming for mother, father, or anyone from my herd. I pushed disgruntled horses out of the way, scrambling to the back of the trailer. The scorching hot metal stung my face as I pressed up against it to try to see out the small holes. Everything was moving so fast. My heart pounded and ricocheted against my skull. I felt my blood boil and burn. Thoughts raced through my head, but one kept knocking on my skull. I just want someone from my herd. Just one. Tears began to puddle and cloud up my eyes as I tried to suck it up and keep my outer shell from cracking. My eyes began to burn as the tears overwhelmed my eyes. I couldn't hold back anymore. I rammed my body against the wall and then struck it again. Heads began to turn but I didn't care. Horses began to back away from be, so I continued to strike the wall, only to deepen the pain and bruises. An older mare looked deep into my troubled eyes as I screamed out for my mother. She tried to soothe and calm me. One by one, more horses began to surround me. Blood began to boil inside of me and I shoved all of them off of me in a furious rampage. Screaming out to my mother, I only wanted her. No one else. All I wanted was my mother. The pain surged deep. As the truck came to a halt, light surged through the opening as horses began to unload, into another tight area. There was lots of shoving and yelling, as humans surrounded us. I screamed out for mother. Still responseless. I collapsed onto the dusty and dry ground, as horses trampled around me. At this point, I didn't care if I was stepped on. I was truly broken. Never again would I depend on others, as I navigated and survived through the long months in the crowded corral. My heart hardened and I distanced myself from others. If anyone came close to me, I would instantly snap at them. I didn't want to be weak ever again. Throughout my youth, I jumped from place to place. Always fighting with anyone and everyone who came near me or looked at me funny. But isolation only makes the pain deepen. Making friends never was my priority in life. Survival always has and will be my priority.

Congrats! <33