the face stripes look good! i'm not sure if my eyes aren't picking up on it, but i would suggest having some lightness around the eyes. tabbies typically have this, seen here on a fawn tabby. i recommend looking up some references! here's some good examples: xxx additionally, classic tail stripes are much thicker and are less plentiful than mackerel stripes. ex. mackerel: x versus a classic: x the white and color of the base/stripes looks great though! keep up the good work!
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