Rise | #1860 by Neah

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Rise | #1860

Postby Neah » Sun May 19, 2019 1:46 pm

Welcome to Rise!
Rise is an adoptable based on Warrior Cats and focused around world building and character development.
Please make sure that you read the main thread so that you understand limits and levels!


This cat may not be traded until August 9th 2019.
There is a 2-month cooldown after each ownership change.
For a transfer to be official, both parties must post on this cat's page. The original owner must post in the archive.



    Username: Thunder.Collects
    Cat Name: Buckleap
    Clan: CreekClan
    Rank: Warrior

    Gender: Male
    Age: 42 Moons
    Description: Fawn with low white and pale yellow eyes.

    Other Features: None
    Siblings: None living

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    Dam: Foundation
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Re: Rise | #1860

Postby Momochii » Sun May 19, 2019 2:25 pm

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Cat Name: FawnWhisker
Clan: Seaclan
Rank: Scout

Gender: Female
Age: 28 Moons

Prompt:
Sand beneath my paws
The smell of the sea
A whisper in my ear
Who could it be...

The faintest shadow
Dissolved by the light
As the evening
Turned slowly to night

"Hush my child
there's no need to fear"
The sound of the voice
One again in my ear

"Who is there
What do you seek"
A chuckle arouse
With a brush along my cheek

"Oh dearest boy
Is it true what they say?"
A chill down down my back
I don't wish to stay

"What is true
What have you heard"
It paused for a moment
To find all the words

"You're a Coward!
Is it true that you lied?"
My ears flattened
My eyes opened wide

"YES I did ok
but I had a reason!
The kit needed help
I couldn't just leave him"

"Now my dear child
Was that so tough?"
The shadow smirked
And left, hearing enough

The kit needed help
Even if from another clan
I couldn't let him die
Fear, thats why I ran

I ran with the kit
To help find his home
I lied to keep him safe
And I'm sorry if I'm wrong...
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Re: Rise | #1860

Postby SurgeFire » Sun May 19, 2019 2:32 pm

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Re: Rise | #1860

Postby ThunderCry04 » Sun May 19, 2019 2:39 pm

Username: Thunder.Collects
Cat Name: Buckleap
Clan: CreekClan
Rank: Warrior

Gender: Male
Age: 42 Moons

Prompt:
Hurry now
Hurry quick
Time won't wait
The clock will tick

Your heart beats hard
In your chest
A perfect moment
Your family crest

Your children are here
and your mate is fine
Come and meet them
They are inside

You push inside
Of the dimly lit den
To see your small children
All of the kids peaceful and zen

You are a father
Your heart glows with pride
'I love you," he says
and never leaves their side

This is the story of a father
Who loves his family with his heart
He will protect and love them
He will do his part
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Re: Rise | #1860

Postby Sabatea » Sun May 19, 2019 3:37 pm

Username: Sabatea
Cat Name: Dawnpaw
Clan: TreeClan
Rank: Apprentice

Gender: She-cat
Age: 14 moons

Prompt:

Here, I know, I had seen
In the dreams I walked.
A scene that was now routine,
Yet I recall when I was shocked.

The swaying of the trees,
Used to be so bewildering.
But now they put me at ease,
And I find myself lingering.

The spectral shape I knew,
Though no words spoken.
His form I did pursue,
Even as it left me broken.

I knew not the tom,
Nor the reasoning.
Yet his presence did calm,
The aching tightening.

My heart, so lonely,
Wanted for anything.
That an illusion was the only,
Hope that it could bring.

Or, so I thought,
But the figure stopped.
Below a great tree he'd brought,
My aching heart I'd dropped.
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Re: Rise | #1860

Postby Birchii » Sun May 19, 2019 10:50 pm

Username: Birchii
Cat Name: Reedpounce
Clan: GealachClan
Rank: Warrior

Gender: Tom
Age: 39 Moons

Prompt:
Can it really be?
My heart is beating fast.
Is that truly me?
I think I'm in love at last.

I saw him from afar,
His wide smile warmed my day.
Those eyes... so clear, like stars.
I've never felt this way.

I laugh til my face hurts,
His wit and humour bright.
Is this how I should flirt?
He makes me feel so... right.

I can't help but blush,
My face is full of heat.
Is this more than a crush?
He makes me so complete.

He took me to the glen,
A unique glint to his eyes.
'Deep breaths; count to ten;
Glance up to the blue skies.'

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"I really like you, Reedpounce,
I keep thinking this is fate.
You make my heart burst, my gait bounce...
Would you, maybe, be my mate?"

A flurry of thoughts and feelings,
Too many to comprehend.
'Focus is hard when your mind is reeling...'
"Hailsky, you're my dearest friend.

These past few weeks have been great,
I've never been happier than now.
But I've made myself just... wait,
While I think, and figure out, somehow...

How you felt when it was just us two,
And I'm ecstatic you feel the same.
My heart just sings when I'm with you -
Of course I'll be your mate, mousebrain!"

We stayed in the glen til the next dawn,
Just lying there, side by side.
We only moved when we began to yawn,
and headed back to the camp with pride.
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Re: Rise | #1860

Postby ienrir » Thu May 23, 2019 5:01 am

Username: ienrir
Cat Name: ottereyes
Clan: cryptclan
Rank: keeper

Gender: tom
Age: 40 moons

Prompt:
Inevitably, a smile tears across my lips
Meek arms held wide, his stone guard slips

He flees to me for comfort and when trapped in my embrace,
Understands all of my faults behind the mask I call my face
Rage returns after a while, because I always seek the thrill
Turning nothing into something, and something worse still
In a fit of frenzied envy sounds a resonating cry
'Never free from my bared fangs, sharp claws and untrusting eyes'
Guilt and silence follow.

He's sorry. His expression devoid; hollow.
I offer him forgiveness, though i'm the reason his eyes are bleak.
My paw caressing the scars across his cheek.
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Re: Rise | #1860

Postby Yellow. » Mon May 27, 2019 12:37 pm

Username: Yellow.
Cat Name: Fenris
Clan: Ridgeclan
Rank: spy

Gender: tom
Age: 65 moons

Prompt:
Yelling, pain, cries of joy
unable to close the distance.
crying, pain, whimpers
unable to close the distance

New life joins the clan,
two strong.
Warriors in just a short span,
themselves not in the wrong.

Unable to close the distance,
one watches from afar.
Unable to close the distance,
one wonders who they are.

Congratulations to the mother,
same to a liar,
For it's someone other,
who is the sire.

Unable to close the distance,
none to know the truth.
Unable to close the distance,
but wanting to know the youth.

It's better this way,
words repeat on end.
For safe they will stay,
as long as they blend.

Unable to close the distance,
but proud none the less.
Unable to close the distance,
no reason to confess.

Proud even with the lie,
honored to hear them cry.
Never one to say bye,
but always the one to crucify.

Unable to close the distance,
a father now.
Unable to close the distance,
thought he'll figure out how.
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Through the endless night,
comes a star.
Shinning so bright,
to cut through the darkness.

Never would one think,
the light would go out.
But what if it does,
and darkness takes over?

But what if it doesn't?
If the star shines bright,
and forever takes over the darkness.

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Re: Rise | #1860

Postby Neah » Sun Jun 09, 2019 12:43 pm

Thunder.Collects wrote:Username: Thunder.Collects
Cat Name: Buckleap
Clan: CreekClan
Rank: Warrior

Gender: Male
Age: 42 Moons

Prompt:
Hurry now
Hurry quick
Time won't wait
The clock will tick

Your heart beats hard
In your chest
A perfect moment
Your family crest

Your children are here
and your mate is fine
Come and meet them
They are inside

You push inside
Of the dimly lit den
To see your small children
All of the kids peaceful and zen

You are a father
Your heart glows with pride
'I love you," he says
and never leaves their side

This is the story of a father
Who loves his family with his heart
He will protect and love them
He will do his part


I love poems about happy subjects so this def fits the bill. It's sweet in the subject and I love that the rhyming is only every other line.

I'm also awarding and hm to Yellow. I really loved the setup and flow f your poem.
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Re: Rise | #1860

Postby ThunderCry04 » Sun Jun 09, 2019 12:45 pm

    Thank you so much Neah! c:
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