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Rise | #1236

Postby Hawky<3 » Mon Dec 03, 2018 3:28 am

Welcome to Rise!
Rise is an adoptable based on Warrior Cats and focused around world building and character development.
Please make sure that you read the main thread so that you understand limits and levels!


to enter this competition, you must own a founder and at least be at level 1!

this cat seems a little shy... um, where are they? they’ve buried themself in snow! maybe one of your cats should try to lure them out with a compliment or two? write about your cat(s) encountering this cat! you have 1000 words max.

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end date: december 12nd, 12 AM EST



    Username: canary22
    Cat Name: cloudwhisper
    Clan: dawnclan
    Rank: furcatcher

    Gender: male
    Age: 34 moons
    Description: a short-haired blue chinchilla with white spotting and teal eyes.

    Other Features: none
    Siblings: none living

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    Father: Foundation
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    Dam: Foundation
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Re: Rise | #1236

Postby coppercanary » Mon Dec 03, 2018 3:35 am

Username: Canary22
Cat Name: Cloudwhisper

Gender: Tom
Rank: Furcatcher
Age: 34 moons
Clan: Dawnclan

Prompt:
“Daddy! Daddy!”
The shrill voice of a young kit rang out over the frozen snow. Four small kits darted between half-hidden bushes, followed by their father, Birchstar. “Thornkit, Emberkit, Smokekit and Honeykit! Get back here!” He was smiling, and all five of the cats knew he didn’t mean anything. Thornkit tested the snow beneath his paws, his thick, dark grey pelt standing out against the shining blanket. He mewled excitedly when one paw fell through. After digging a small hole, he curled up inside it and waited for his sister to come past. Watching Smokekit with beady eyes, he shifted himself and readied to pounce. When Smokekit was near enough, Thornkit leapt from his hiding place, squeaking and pawing her with sheathed claws.
“Thornkit!” Smokekit wailed. “That’s not fair, I didn't see you!” Thornkit laughed and darted away, leaving a set of miniature paw prints in his wake.

Feeling the cold wind in his fur was a relief for Thornkit. Although he was young, the feel of being too hot due to long fur was not uncommon in the stuffy dens back at camp. Out here, the air was fresh and helped to keep him cool. Unbeknownst to him, Smokekit hadn’t stayed back where he’d surprised her. She’d followed silently, and was waiting for the perfect opportunity to scare him. She gradually closed in on him and launched herself through the air, landing squarely on his back and sending them both tumbling through the snow. In front of them was a huge pile of snow. They crashed into it, mewling indignantly at each other. But instead of finding themselves stuck in a cold, snowy embrace, they lay in a small cavern. And there was another cat in there.

The unfamiliar tom hissed, baring his teeth at the kits, before realising what they were and relaxing. “What are you two doing here?” The strange cat growled. Thornkit sat up, a little dizzy, before responding.
“Hello cat! I’m Thornkit and I was playing with my sisters then I fell in here.”
“Yeah,” Smokekit added. “Cinderkit and Honeykit got left behind when we ran off, and Daddy didn’t even try to follow us.”
At the mention of other cats, the tom shrank into the corner of the snowy hollow. “Other cats?” He hissed, laying his ears back. “I can’t have other cats see me!”
“But why not?” Thornkit replied.
“Because I look horrible! Haven’t you seen the state of my fur?” Smokekit looked closely at the tom.
“You look nice,” she mumbled. The calls of her family met her ears, which flicked in recognition of the sound. “It sounds like our family are looking for us,” She mewed to Thornkit. “We’d better go.” With that, they erupted from the snow, surprising the nearby Emberkit.
“Thornkit! Smokekit! Where’ve you been? Daddy’s been worried,” Emberkit mewed.
“There was such a handsome tom in the snow,” Thornkit replied. “I need to show Daddy!”
“Show me what?” Birchstar’s slender form had materialised behind them.
“Oh, there you are,” Thornkit sighed. “I saw a beautiful cat beneath the snow, but he didn’t want to come out. He said his fur was messy, but I think it was perfect just the way it was.”
The tentative white paw of the cat emerged from the hole, followed by the rest of him. His grey and white fur gleamed in the weak leaf-bare sun. “Hello,” the cat said. “So you are these kits’ father. I didn’t want to come out, but I never could refuse the magic of a kit.”

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Re: Rise | #1236

Postby Wolfiedog3 » Mon Dec 03, 2018 3:37 am

    Username: Wolfiedog3
    Cat Name: SnowFleck

    Gender: Male
    Rank: Low Ranking Warrior
    Age: 17 moons
    Clan:

    Prompt: res w/ trying to flirt and falling out of a tree into the snow
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Re: Rise | #1236

Postby EchoVoyd » Mon Dec 03, 2018 3:43 am

Username: Faededfyre
Cat Name: Frozenspirit

Gender: Tom
Rank: Warrior
Age: 40 moons
Clan: BreezeClan

Prompt: (1000 words max)
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Re: Rise | #1236

Postby zippo. » Mon Dec 03, 2018 3:49 am

Username: zippo.
Cat Name: snowshroud

Gender: molly
Rank: warrior [rogue specialization]
Age: 20 moons
Clan: the land of three crows

Prompt: 707


"Shall we practice, then?" There was an edge to her voice as she circled the midnight tom. He smirked, a coy grin that twisted into the shadows of his face.

"Even in the snow, I will still find you" Shadowcry warned, following after the icy molly as they slipped from Sacred Meadow.

"Are you sure about that, Shadow man?" The two danced through the snow, sliding beneath each other and leaping over snow ridden branches as they raced into the Chaos Woods. A dangerous destination perfect for the two and their mysterious methods of training.

It took only moments before Snowshroud disappeared into her surroundings, leaving the dark colored tom standing in the center of a clearing with narrowed eyes. His ears flickered as sounds barraged his senses, the sound of snapping twigs and the soft crushing of snow under delicate paws.

The younger molly was learning - her breathing was quiet and even, paws barely leaving a dent into the snow as she traced through the trees. She watched Shadowcry as he remained still, listening, sensing. He was fascinating to her - the way he could just disappear into the darkness of night and the crevices of midnight within the woods; however, it was her time now. Winter had come and snow had overtaken all traces of night. She would prove herself to her superior.

"You are doing well" His words broke her from her concentration, she hesitated behind the tree line. Shadow began to move, circling the outer rim of the clearing they had been so often before. He kept a steady pace, not giving any indication of knowing where Snowshroud was hidden. She smiled at the thought of besting him; allowing herself to be distracted. When she regained focus the shadow was gone, not even a trace of his presence.

Slowly she emerged from the trees, trotting into the center of the clearing. She looked over her shoulder, than before her with narrowed, stone cold eyes. "Shadow?" she called, knowing there was no way he had simply left. He was here, she just couldn't pinpoint his exact location. Her ears swiveled with the sudden sound but she was too late, her eyes darted to above as she saw his descent from the tree to her right. Her eyes followed the snow that joined its brethren among the dirt before the collision.

Her body hit in the snow, she made note that it was definitely just as hard as ground and provided no comfort. Her eyes slowly blinked open as she groaned with discomfort, looking into the yellow of Shadow's.

"You cannot let your ego get in your way of completing the mission" His stone was strict, though she could swear she could hear the distinct traces of disappointment.

Snowshroud shoved him backwards, dragging herself to her feet with a heavy sigh. She stared into the snow, the blank space - allowing the chill of winter to overcome her aching bones.

"Snow" he beckoned with no return, leaving him to sigh now. He moved to her side and sat down next to her, staring out into the trees.

"You have come so far, Snow" He felt the sentiment growing in his heart, an odd feeling for the rather cold tom. "I'm hardest on you, but it's because I believe in you. In what you could be - We are opposites, you know that, that's why I need you just as I need Swiftlight. The two of you are the only ones I trust, the only ones I want by my side" he gave a soft nudge to her shoulder at the end of his heartwarming speech, nodding as he began the journey back to camp.

She smiled, laughing softly while shaking her head. Pride swelled in her chest knowing that he needed her just as much as she needed him, and that they too felt the connection between the trio that she had always known as fate. Snowshroud shrugged the blanket of snow off of her back, tail flicking sharply through the air as she trotted after him. Back home, where they would rest and eat together only to begin another training session as soon as morning struck.

"Tomorrow," The molly whispered to her. Tomorrow would be her day.


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Re: Rise | #1236

Postby slythecho » Mon Dec 03, 2018 6:21 am

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Re: Rise | #1236

Postby liightning » Mon Dec 03, 2018 7:39 am

    Username: liightning
    Cat Name: Luna ---> Drizzlepaw (Drizzlemist)

    Gender: female
    Rank: apprentice
    Age: 10 moons
    Clan: DeltaClan

    Prompt: [999/1000]

    Owlheart padded through the marsh, enjoying the light crunch of his paws on the freshly fallen snow. His whiskers quivered in the frosty air and his breath drifted before him in little clouds. Everything was silent and serene.

    The young warrior kept his ears pricked and jaws open, hoping to return to camp with prey after his stroll. The river, frozen in its steady flow, glimmered in the morning sun that danced between the reeds. Unfortunately, the scent of snow was too strong in the air for him to detect any prey. He considered breaking the ice of a river to fish below the surface before he heard a rustling in the reeds ahead.

    Instinctively, he dropped to his belly, feeling his underbelly brush the snow. He took extra caution in stalking, careful of deeper snow that would alert his target. There was still no scent that could help him identify what he was stalking, but from the slight whisper of paws on snow he knew it was prey. His jaws watered at the thought of a warm water shrew, or perhaps a duck if he was lucky. The feathers would certainly be great for lining nests.

    The pale morning sun was in his eyes, shining through the gently swaying reeds, and he narrowed his eyes, unable to see what he was hunting. Please, StarClan, don't let it be just a trick of the wind, he begged silently before leaping.

    He realized too late that there was nothing here. His paws landed on a mound of snow - no shrew or duck in sight - until he realized that it wasn't quite snow. There was something moving, something that let out a yelp and shrugged him off, sending him rolling into the reeds.

    Owlheart rose to his paws, shaking the snow out of his thick fur. Eyes wide, he blinked at the pile of 'snow' he'd landed on. "What in StarClan...?" he wondered aloud.

    A moment later, a head popped out of the snow and two blue eyes blinked back at him. No, it was another trick of the light - they were the snow. Not entirely buried, at least. Their fur was snow-white, blending into the pale landscape around, and light gray patches were mostly covered in real snow. No wonder Owlheart hadn't seen anything besides snow, especially with the sun in his eyes.

    "Hey!" the cat chirped cheerfully, springing to her paws. She looked to be no more than a moon younger than him. A bit of snow slid off her sleek pelt while the rest clung on, dusting her fur and giving her a glowing appearance in the morning sun.

    "H-hi," Owlheart stammered. His paws felt frozen to the ground as awkwardness took over. He finally managed to blurt, "Drizzle," before wishing that wasn't the only thing he could manage to say.

    The stranger tilted her head. "Drizzle?" she echoed curiously.

    "I-I mean your fur looks like a drizzle," he stammered, words rolling off his tongue, bubbling like a river. "No, it reminds me of drizzling rain. The color, I mean. When the sky is pale gray and the clouds are thin and from the sky comes a light misting of rain." He shifted uncomfortably, snapping his jaws shut before more words could escape.

    "Oh," she meowed at first, blue eyes wide, before she burst out laughing. "Very descriptive," she purred. "Thanks, I guess?" She grinned at him. "What's your name?"

    "Owlpaw," he answered instinctively before shaking his head. "Owlheart, I mean."

    "Did you just forget your name?" Her voice was edged with amusement. Something about her laugh was musical, reminding him of birdsong at dawn. Her blue eyes twinkled in amusement, reminding him of the lake rippling during summer.

    "No, we just switch names in the Clan," he quickly explained, desperate to prove he wasn't as ridiculous as he'd been acting. "I just got my new name a few sunrises ago and I'm not quite used to it."

    "Ooh, in the Clan?" Her eyes lit up. "There are more cats?"

    Owlheart nodded. Before he could explain the Clan, she barreled on, "More cats mean food! You have food, right?"

    Owlheart noticed for the first time how thin she was. Despite her energy, she was thin and scrawny, the bones showing through her thin pelt. "We probably have some to spare," he offered. "I can take you there if you'd like."

    She eagerly agreed, and Owlheart set off through the marsh, glad to be able to talk to her longer. He learned her name was Luna. She'd been wandering the marsh for a while after being left behind by her twolegs.

    "You used to be a house cat?" Owlheart gasped in both surprise and admiration, even more so after Luna nodded.

    She was used to roaming the wilderness and had learned how to hunt, fish, and swim. Being on her own was a little more difficult since she'd had to rely entirely on prey.

    "I was trying to hunt but decided to rest there for a moment," she recalled. "I didn't even hear you until it was too late!"

    "Sorry," Owlheart apologized guiltily, hoping he hadn't hurt her by pouncing.

    "My fault," she purred, "and you were too good at stalking!"

    Once they reached camp, Owlheart shared a surprisingly plump trout with her, purring as she licked every bone clean. After, he introduced her to Wrenstar, who warmly welcomed Luna, as did the rest of the Clan.

    "Since you're 10 moons old, you'd still be an apprentice," Wrenstar mused. "Two moons of training should be sufficient, given you already know the basics to survival." She blinked at Luna. "If you don't mind, we can give you a new name. An apprentice name, ending in 'paw.' Do you have any ideas?"

    Luna thought for a moment, tapping her paws thoughtfully on the ground before glancing at Owlheart, eyes lighting up. "Drizzle!" she exclaimed. "Drizzlepaw!"

    "Drizzlepaw," Wrenstar echoed with a smile. "I like it. Welcome to DeltaClan, Drizzlepaw."
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Re: Rise | #1236

Postby mynameisbacon » Mon Dec 03, 2018 7:57 am

Username: mynameisbacon
Cat Name: Crystal

Gender: female
Rank: warrior
Age: 14 moons
Clan: Winterclan

Prompt:
Crystal's paws crunched through the snow as she ran. Delicate flakes streamed around her and she could barely see where she was going. She stumbled to a halt and sniffed the air. It smelled strange, wild and free. Perhaps it's a bird! Birds fly free! Crystal thought. A pair of whiskers glinted through the flurry of snow. A bird with... whiskers?
The whiskered bird stepped forward to reveal a set of front paws. It has paws? What kind of bird has paws? Crystal shivered. Not because of the cold, but because of the thought of a whiskered bird with paws.
The snow parted for a split second, and Crystal recoiled in horror as she realized it wasn't a bird, but a cat. Her paws were frozen in place and her tail stopped swishing behind her. The cat moved again, and a face appeared. Crystal wanted to run, but she couldn't. She willed herself to move, to get to safety, but her mind wouldn't listen.
The wind whistled and a small pile of snow hit Crystal square in the face, bringing her to her senses. She pushed desperately through the strong wind to find a place to hide. As she spotted pine, something rumbled. The tree next to her swayed, and down came a huge mountain of snow. Crystal let out a strangled oof! as her legs bent under the weight of the snow. It felt like twenty cats sitting on her. Her pelt was slick with water and her eyes and nose stung from the cold, but she tried her best to hide from the approaching cat.
"Hello?" A gentle mew sounded through the soft buzz of the falling snow. Crystal held her breath. The cat could be dangerous, for all she knew. What if it tried to rip her to shreds? Or eat her? Crystal couldn't imagine how hungry the cat must be, with the weather hardly nice enough to sustain the life of a mouse or vole.
"Hello?" The voice sounded again. Crystal whimpered.
"Hi there," The cat murmured. She padded around to face Crystal. "You've got lovely eyes. They remind me of the ocean."
Crystal stopped shaking. This cat was being nice. What kind of mean cat would compliment my eyes? Crystal shifted her paws in thought. One that's trying to get me to trust them so they can claw my ears off! She huddled a little farther under the snow.
"Don't worry." The cat was in full focus now. It was a lithe, calico cat with delicate hazel eyes. "I won't hurt you."
Crystal peeked out the slightest bit.
"It's okay." The she-cat was smiling now. "Come on out, now. Those eyes need to be shown to the world."
Crystal couldn't help herself. The cat was so kind. She crawled slowly and stood up, revealing a smooth pelt. Her eyes shimmered in the dazzling light that shone from above, and a snowflake landed on her nose. Her whiskers twitched and she sneezed. The calico giggled.
"Hi." Crystal mewed softly. "I'm Crystal."
The other cat smiled wider.
"I'm Winterstar."
Crystal admired the cat's kindness. She shifted her paws and gave her chest fur a lick.
"Did you really mean what you said... about my eyes?" She looked at Winterstar. Winterstar nodded.
"Yes! They're like the clear waters of the sea, the ones traveling cats have painted pictures of in my head." Winterstar mewed.
Crystal felt better.
"Glad to hear it." She smiled.

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Re: Rise | #1236

Postby .Lyrebird » Mon Dec 03, 2018 2:59 pm

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Prompt: res with them being overwhelmed as a new apprentice and their mentor, slatecloud, finding them and burrowing into the snow with them and napping together
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Re: Rise | #1236

Postby stormzien » Tue Dec 04, 2018 7:10 am

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