[Ringo.]

Username: Maxy Max
Name: Dalia
Gender: Female
Quote: "I am an Angel,
I have fallen from the sky.
Broken and bruised yet I still stand.
Nothing can bring me down,
For I am an angel,
One who has fallen to Earth."
Extras (2 allowed - 400 words or art piece): Dalia was broken and bruised. She was lost and hurt. She never gave up though.
She was one with the world.
She has always been different, she wasn't as interactive as the other Viscets were. She kept to herself, wrote in journals.
Talked to herself and drew weird things. Things she has seen in her past lives. She couldn't tell anyone, not even her own parents. For everyone would see her as crazy, in need of help.
But she was fine, everyone else around her just couldn't accept the fact that she had an active imagination and always came up with the most insane stories. She always told others how she'll grow up to be someone fantastic, but all they did was laugh.
They didn't believe her, they ruined her dream. But she didn't care. She ignored them, she did what she wanted to do.
She set out on an adventure, one that will make her known.
She was broken and bruised, but she will never give up
Because she's an angel that came onto earth to make a legacy that every Viscet will learn.
She is one with the ground, she is
Dalia, an angel who has fallen onto the earth.

She isn't afraid. She learns as she grows and she becomes more intelligent.
She doesn't give up, why would she?
She wants to prove others wrong, she wants to show them that she can do whatever she sets her mind to.
One day, she said to herself. One day they will beg for forgiveness, they will be on the ground, bowing before me. Begging me to forgive them.
And I'll say no, for they haven't believed me before, they will never get forgiveness now.
Or shall they ever.

She was wrong though.
She hadn't failed, but someone wouldn't allow her to have her fame, not yet.
She didn't mind, she pushed it away. Ignored it.
Moved on, she knows there will come a day when the world will need her.
And she'll be there, ready as ever.
339 words.

[corrosive_limes]

ahh good luck everyone! <33
everyone has such great forms <3

[Matreats]

Whoops! Forgot to close this :0 I'll be posting results soon!

[Matreats]

Oof you guys, this was a lot more than I was expecting :'0 I'm so happy!! I'm also super sad I only get to choose one winner ;^;

@BarnesandRogers I loved the small and simple little coding extras! Very aesthetically pleasing c: Your story was also awesome!
@UniversalSong I think the concept of her being a skilled archer and hunter is an awesome idea!
@MaxyMax I can totally see her as a fallen angel! I like where you were going with the idea c:
@.kaede I seriously was debating between yours and the winner's - it was seriously a hard decision for me! The concept of her being possessed by a demon that's trying to deal with another entity is so cool, and it made me second guess myself several times :'D

And the winner is @corrosive_limes! I've never seen a story like yours before - it was new and original and the art set the stage and mood for it so well! I love the perspective to the drawing and how dark your story concept was! Definitely want to see how you take this!

Thank you guys! I'm glad I was able to read all of your entries <3

[Ringo.]

can i just get my first viscet ;-; btw.
Not trying to make anyone feel guilty -_-

Congrats to the winner
Also thanks for the kind words c:

[Vixen Luo]

congratulations to corrosive! <3 she's an absolute beauty!

and just a gentle reminder to be a good sport and not make the judge or winner feel guilty. c:

[Barnes&Rogers]

huge congrats corrosive! i loved your story, and the art was just stunning

and thanks for the kind words, Matreats ^^

[corrosive_limes]

ahhh thank you so much! <333 I honestly was not expecting to win this babe because I thought everyone else's stories were better, so this was quite a surprise!
she'll be well loved and taken care of, I promise <3
may i be added?

And kind of a fun fact, she's actually only the second female Viscet I have |D

@Maxy Max - just keep trying and you'll get there eventually ^^ i really liked the idea you had for Dalia honestly. my only advice in the future would be maybe explain a bit more about what being an angel entails? like what makes angels any different from normal Viscets, and why was she sent to earth?

[✦ nemuri]

shdbbd congrats corrosive_limes on winning !! the way you used both art and writing to make the story flow and pop was very admirable c:

[Ringo.]

ahhh thank you so much! <333 I honestly was not expecting to win this babe because I thought everyone else's stories were better, so this was quite a surprise!
she'll be well loved and taken care of, I promise <3
may i be added?

And kind of a fun fact, she's actually only the second female Viscet I have |D

@Maxy Max - just keep trying and you'll get there eventually ^^ i really liked the idea you had for Dalia honestly. my only advice in the future would be maybe explain a bit more about what being an angel entails? like what makes angels any different from normal Viscets, and why was she sent to earth?

Thanks for the advice.
Maybe I'll be able to use it some day c:
And congrats again, your entry was really amazing and Im a bit jealous xD