Rise | #0740 - WINNER

Postby ~HєуRєι~ » Tue Jun 26, 2018 4:01 pm

I felt this form showed the most personality and reason why in the prompt, even though the answer to the prompt was rather simple. Congrats!

Diamondshine101 wrote:
    Username;; Diamondshine101
    Cat Name;; Lightningfoot
    Gender;; Male
    Age;; 17 Moons
    Clan;; Cascadeclan
    Rank;; Warrior

    Prompt;;

      "Please, swear on Starclan you'll never tell them I'm sick."

      The medicine cat sighed. He was dead-set on becoming a warrior, even though it was entirely possible that he'd end up dead before then. His plea was too heart-breaking for her to say no. She gave him a solemn nod and a dose of anise before dismissing him from her den. He left her care still coughing his head off, but strong.

      Lightningfoot was born with asthma. It makes it difficult for him to do anything strenuous. But the little tom was also born to run. He loved nothing more than the wind in his fur, the roar in his ears when he picks up speed. He was the fastest runner the clan's had in many moons. And he wasn't going to let this condition stop him from being the best warrior he could be. Even if it meant he'd face his death sooner than he could've. At least he would've lived to the fullest.

      He decided the best way to keep everyone from figuring out he was ill and worrying themselves about him, is to ignore it as much as he can. He pushed himself through training, and continues to push through countless patrols each night. The strain he puts on himself has caused him plenty of asthma attacks. But he keeps it quiet. His many trips to the medicine cat's den for the herbs to manage his breathing are kept a secret between them. Because all he wants is to have a normal life.

      [256/350 words]


I'd like to give Only_Sky a hm as well as while i adored your form, you went over the limit and I'm rather strict when it comes to those. However I enjoyed your form greatly and the unique character it came with.

Thank you to those who participated and i hope to see you around in future competitions <3
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Re: Rise | #0740

Postby MeltiTheDragon » Tue Jun 26, 2018 5:03 pm

    Ahh, I was just about to log off for the night until I saw you announced winners for this one too. :mrgreen: Thank you so much again, ~HeyRei~. Really cool that I got him too, because he matched the character concept that I used for Mallowwhisker's crush in her form perfect. I was so happy when I saw him. Can't wait to write up a full personality for this little boy. Now, I finally have a clan for the clan meeting story I need to level up.

    And congrats on the HM, Only_Sky! :3 Your form was really cool too.
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Re: Rise | #0740

Postby MichelleP224 » Tue Jun 26, 2018 5:39 pm

Congrats!
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Re: Rise | #0740

Postby Only_Sky » Tue Jun 26, 2018 7:51 pm

      Congrats, Diamond :) And thank you for the HM Rei ^^
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