[ChickenPopper]

Hey all! This is my first long dog as an official artist soo I am pretty excited for this.

To win this long dog, tell me their favorite activity. Decorating and any extras will improve your chances! <3

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End date is 10th December.

Winner is redwolf466

[birdbones]

Username: redwolf466
Name: Ripple
Gender: male
Favorite activity: Running, jumping, play and building in the snow, he also loves when it snows so he can catch it on his tongue

Here is a very dramatic story I rote about him:
(Dogs can use bow and arrows now!!??)
also it is in a code box because it is really long and in a code box you can scroll down

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Ripple was very very young when he got lost, his family and he were very happy together. one day Ripple's mother and father had to go to a work meeting, leaving Ripple at home, by him self. The age the Ripple was at it was an adventurous age wanting to go every where, his mother and father had not Locked the door properly, Ripple ran up to the door charging at it *clonk* *bump bump bump* "Ouch". Ripple had gotten outside he sat up, looking around this huge strange world. hearing a *crash!* he turned his head to hear where it was coming from, "ohh look" he was staring at a cake shop he ran across the road as fast as he could dodging cars. he got to the other side he was out the front of the cake shop. looking back he could not see his home. he made up his mind that he would go for a wonder, see some sights, go new places. Explore, yes that sounded like fun so off he went. after hours of walking he reached the edge of the forest it was forbidden for any one to go in there. but he didn't care so the entered the forest. he heard foot steps that was the last thing he heard.

Opening his eyes not remembering much.
he asked "where am I?".
a soft voice answered "don't worry dear child your safe".
"where am I?" Ripple asked again
the soft voice answered again "where you are my dear is in the forest, the middle of the forest"
"w-h-a-t?" Ripple asked tiredly
"you need rest, sleep little one"
after a few more hours of sleeping Ripple woke up, got up and had a look where he was " Hello!" he called out the soft voice answered again "your awake, come, come sit down you must be confused "
"a-h yes I am, where am I,why am I here, who are you, how do I get home?"
"well to start wit whats your name?" she asked
"its umm its my name is. whats my name!" he cried
its alright my dear one I am Flora or some call me The lost one if you would like I will call you
Ripple. i found you collapsed and wounded on the forest floor"
"what happened to me?" asked Ripple
"he found you"
"He? Ripple questioned
"he is the one of the forest feeding off young ones and lost ones, you must be careful"
"come, I have something to show you"
Flora lead Ripple from the dimly lit room, down many stairs and into a large room, this was the first time Ripple had acutely seen Flora she looked to be a young Lady, with dark fur, and a reddish mane with feathers plated into her hair. many scars littered her body. She dashed over to the far corner and grabbed a small box it had tiny engravings on it they looked like symbols of some kind. Flora opened the box and inside was a tiny charm with a silver vine.
"this my dear one, Ripple were there amulet everywhere you go, it is very powerful it only speaks truth it will guide you and keep you safe. a thought you must still be careful" Flora put the amulet one Ripple's neck, it glowed a very pale blue. he heard whispering listening in he tried to focus on one voice what was it saying, he couldn't tell
"what are they saying" he asked
"their telling you the truth" Flora informed him


after many years of Ripple living with Flora
Ripple woke up on a rainy day he was thinking what he would do with life
who was He?
how was he to survive being hunted?
and why did Flora give him the amulet?
Amissa Unus's thinking was interrupted by a sudden *scratch,scratch, scratch, tat, tat, tat*
"FLORA! Whats going on!" he screeched
"Ripple Come with me, QUICK!"
she lead down the stairs to the room where he first saw Flora, everything was so different Ripple was much older he could barely remember his real parents and now his life was flashing before his eyes
the door crashed to then ground, then with a horrible *tat,tata,ta* he heard them flooding in though the door.
"Amis, I may not be able to make it out with you, Ripple take these" she said handing him a bow and some arrows
"RUN" she yelled pointing to a very very small trap door.
Ripple obeyed jumping thought the tiny door slamming the hatch behind him.
running down the passage way looking be hind him
he had been running for what seemed like hours
he had to rest
he sat him self down, and waited he waited for Flora
was this it?
would he never see Flora again?
What were they?
will they get thought?
are they all gone?

but he was asking him self all the wrong questions
he should have been asking:
when will they get in?
when will they get to me?
she's gone isn't she?
when should I start running again?
should I be waiting?

*Pita,pata*
swinging his head around he saw something coming towards him. quickly he scooped up his bow and arrows
aiming for it
almost letting go he hear
"wait!" it was her Flora was alive
he dropped his bow and came running up to her,
"Run!" she said
and thats what they did more running
they ran for a very very long time
he thought he could see an end to the tunnel
he could!
when they got to the end Flora lifted the hatch just a little, peeking out she didn't see anything
"come on, I think it safe" she exclaimed
they both rushed out thought the hatch

outside of the tunnel it looked like dawn
although it was hard to see thought the think canopy of trees


that dawn Flora taught Ripple to use his bow properly and when the sun came up that day they slept
Amissa Unus was awoken at night by a strange noise
"Flora" he whispered
"Flora!, wake up, were not alone"
Flora jumped but alert and looking around
"Ripple get your bow and be ready to fight"
a strange figure appeared form the bush

"Nova?, is that you?" she questioned

"Flora!" Nova came up and hugged her
"Ive missed you so much my friend"

"me to" replied Flora

"who's this?" Nova asked

"Well Nova I rescued Ripple, from him..."

'you can call be Ripple" said Ripple

"Why do you both look so frightened?" Nova asked

"WHAT DO YOU THINK!,WE JUST CAME OUT OF A SECRET PASSAGE WAY, OF COURSE WE WERE GONNA COME ALL THIS WAY PICK SOME FLOWERS AHHHHH WHAT DO YOU THINK!, HE CAME AFTER RIPPLE WE ALMOST DIED!" she yelled

"Flora, I-i didn't know" Nova said shaking his head

"come we should get moving you two come back to my place for something to eat and rest, then I will accompany you both to Mother oak' she told them

They walked for only a few minutes until they retched Nova's shack

"ok, Flora you can sleep here" He said pointing to a small bed

"and you Ripple can sleep here, one the couch, I don't have any other beds" He pointed to a very very large couch

Ripple snuggled down under the blankets Nova gave him
Ripple remembered the song his mother used to sing to him:



As the stars shine down
The lone wolf of the town
Howls to the moooon
I have roamed alone all my life
and my only wish is to have a pack of my own

slowly Ripple drifted off to sleep

"Ripple my dear its time to wake" said Flora

"wh-a-at?" he replied slowly and reluctantly Ripple got out form under his blankets
suddenly it hit him this wasn't home, he was being chased by a killer or something...
any day could be his last.

they sent off traveling later that day. after a few hours of walking they came across a large oak, it looked like someone was living there, so they knocked on the old oak a door opened and a deep middle age voice boomed "what do you want!" the voice said
we were just wondering if we could stay the night we've been walking for hours. "who are you!" the voice said
Flora introduced every body
"oh it's you what's your name... Ripple Ah yes, news has spread that your the one with "magical powers"" the voice cackled
"im Tiger, you can stay the night but thats all"
"thank you tiger" said the three
Ripple wondered around the small oak house, he heard a small voice humming he thought he recognised it
he followed the humming until he found a Girl about his age he saw stiching something together.
the girl turned around and said
"Kyia is that you?" she said neveosously
"hmm who?" questioned Amissa Unus
"KIYA IT IS YOU" she yelled excitedly
so that was my name thought Ripple
he suddenly recognised the girl
"Cindy?"
"yes thats a me"
"ohh Cindy I've missed you so much, but I am Ripple now"
"why are you here?" Ripple asked
"Tiger found me at the edge of the forest, he promised me that if I went with him we could kill Tiko and we'll be king and queen of the forest ruling everything. crushing our enemies" Cindy pretended to Cush something
"Cindy?"
"yes?, Ripple"
"you weren't like this"
"so!, Who cares!,...I've changed" she said proudly
"do you like the new me?"
"Cindy, yes you have changed, obviously the old Cindy is gone" Ripple turned away and walked out to the main room

Tiger lead the three to there beds, they all settled down to sleep.
Ripple was restless he couldn't stop thinking about Cindy
after a while Ripple got up and went out to the back yard, there was a large swing to the right of him, he couldn't see who was on it but he was pretty sure it was Cindy, she was sitting with her head down, sobbing.
Ripple felt horrible so he walked up to Cindy and sat with her on the swing, She turned her head away from him
"Cindy" he said
"maybe you changing was for the best"
"remember when you were such a wimp you would never try anything"
Cindy giggled, and hugged Ripple
"you know, I missed you more then you missed me" she whispered
they sat on the swing for most of the night, finally Ripple when back to bed and feel asleep

In the morning tiger brought them breakfast, they all ate quickly they said there goodbyes
just as they were walking away Cindy yelled
"Wait!,I'm coming with you"
she said goodbye to Tiger
and followed the three

Cindy already knew that this wasn't the last time they'd see Tiger...

[saltcow]

Username: d♥e

Name: Félix

Gender: male

Favorite activity: catching snowflakes with his tongue and building little snow villages.

Extra: he likes to have snowball fights with his mum and siblings.

[Hounder]

username: bear?
name: aatto jonas
nickname: aj
gender: male
favorite activity: ice skating
extra: trying to imagine this long dog ice skating is hilarious lmho

aj has never gotten over the first step into the rink, the unsure, fawn-like feeling that you get, it always seems new no matter how many times he's done it. but then, he places all four skates onto the rink and effortlessly glides over the ice. he always starts slow, he enjoys the buildup to the treasured moments where all he can feel is the sting of air on his face while his fur fluffs up. he remembers being a kid and clinging to the wall barely able to move. then later watching in awe as professional skaters (he especially loved hockey or speed skating) practiced while he pressed his face up to the glass that separated him from the rink. he constantly begged his dad to take him to the practices for local teams (in which he had memorized the times) so he could watch from the bleachers.

his 10th birthday. the biggest present saved for last, carefully set aside with it's neat blue wrapping and a silver bow. he'd already gotten gloves, a warm hat with a puffball on top, and thick fuzzy socks along with other items that were stacked beside him on the table. aj's eyes were bright and eager as he stared at the present that his dad had picked up, setting it finally in front of him. aj adjusted his position so he was higher up, tucking in his long tail behind him so it draped off the chair. he removed the frilly metallic bow, placing it to the right, and then started to peel off the paper. pieces of wrapping paper began to litter the floor and he brushed a piece off of his lap. the first sliver of the box appeared, and as more was revealed, he could read blocky text on one side: ICE SKATES. aj's jaw dropped, his eyes wide like saucers. he slowly turned his head to his dad who was smiling, and aj broke into a huge grin. he ripped open the remaining paper and turned the box over. onyx skates with simple glossy black details and crisp white laces that were tucked inside the skate in a floppy bow were behind a plastic cover. aj leaped out of his chair and tackled his dad into a hug. " i knew it! i knew it! you got me skates, dad! yes! yes! yes!" aj danced around the table, hoisting his skates above his head as if he'd won a million dollars, although to aj they were far better than that.

xx

[Wolfswelpe]

May enter. <3

[ChickenPopper]

Bump~

[steve rogers.]

Username: gae
Name: esme
Gender: female
Favorite activity: wrapping presents!

[thingie]

username - bean-pup
name - scooter
gender - male
favorite activity - taboggoning !!

[ChickenPopper]

Ahh sorry for the late judging! >.<

Winner is redwolf466 !
Love the story that you wrote for him <3

[birdbones]

Thank you so much!
And everyone else did an amazing job to!!