by pees » Sun Sep 24, 2017 2:34 pm
Woah one of the last forms in
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Good luck!!
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I'm sorry I left you alone, I should have known better. I wish I could have said that I loved when I was able to. I'm sorry Simon
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by Sixbane » Mon Sep 25, 2017 9:22 am
Sorry on my delay! I ended up busier today then anticipated (So busy I missed my break at work entirely,Darn)
I've decided this one will go to~
hazilnut
As your story was wonderfully written, extremely intriguing as a character, and it really drew my attention as a reader. It was well thought out, and expressing the character from the perspective of another proved a brilliant take on this prompt. Well done!
With honorable mentions to~
Ethulai
As I enjoyed your writing style and the story it implicated! it was a nice read and made me very curious about the past of the character you created.
caius
As I thought the message your writing conveyed about loyalty to oneself to be unique and well expressed. Using few words- but your words were very well chosen.
wolf ;;
As I enjoyed your story, I thought your interpretation of loyalty as the loyalty of his subordinates (Im assuming he's a military leader of some sort?) was quite interesting
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by Ethulai » Mon Sep 25, 2017 9:33 am
Ooooo hazilnut, as soon as I read your story I knew you would be tough to beat! Congrats! I really enjoyed reading your form and was completely intrigued by your character.
Thank you very much for the HM Sixbane, I always enjoy compliments about my writing ^^
Grats also to caius and wolf;; and of course good luck to everyone in your next competition.
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