by The_Golden_Jinx » Thu Jun 01, 2017 4:26 pm
Username; The_Golden_Jinx
Name; Paki
( meaning Witness is Swahili)
Gender for breeding purposes; male
Gender; Male
How did they get that alien snake (OR) how do the two interact with each other?;
Paki is a traveler. He doesn't know when he started or where it is he came from. Only that he travels and observes the world around him as it grows and changes. One cool evening whilst walking a worn narrow path along a still, peaceful lake, Paki heard a low gentle hiss eminating from a smooth stone poking up from the shallows. Ever curious, Paki moved closer. As he did so the stone let out a sharp *pop* and a long dark crack spread from the point the rock touched the water upwards to its highest point. Paki watched, transfixed, as the rock broke apart, piece by piece revealing that it was not a rock at all but in fact an egg. From the egg emerged a strange yet beautiful snake the color of the dawn complete with tiny shimmering stars. He looked at the newly hatched snake and it looked back at him before it timidly swam towards him from the remnents of its egg. As it reached him a strange feeling of protectiveness washed over Paki and he leaned down and let it curl up around his neck. From that day forward Paki and the star serpent were inseparable. No matter where Paki's wandering feet led them.
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by Bettalong » Fri Jun 23, 2017 8:31 am
Thank you so much for your patience, everyone! This was pretty tough, honestly. q v q I had a bit of help !~
First, HUGE SHOUTOUT to oneinthecold ! I really wish I could reward you with a RU, but I unfortunately can't with the GA position. ;O;
Between your form and the winning form, it was pretty close. The character you created was very thoroughly developed and I absolutely loved the creativity and thought that went into the stories. I really especially enjoyed the fact that you incorporated the snake as an important character throughout the stories. While, again, I cannot reward a viscet RU to you, I would at the very least like to offer you an OC design (non-viscet) that comes with its own sparkle noodle for your efforts. ; v ; Let me know if you would like that!
The winner of this viscet is Gazoonia! Congratulations!
Your form was very VERY well written, and again, it was very close between the two forms. ;o; I loved the development of Benjamin's character very much, and the stories written were really neat and definitely expanded on a number of aspects about Benjamin's and Zuriel's characterization (as well as their closeness)! The story at the end was super cute honestly, and it really allowed me to see how Benjamin behaves around other 'cets. q u q Congratulations again, and take good care of the duo! <33
Thank you so much for entering, everyone! ; v ;
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by CO1LD » Fri Jun 23, 2017 9:52 am
Bettalong wrote:Thank you so much for your patience, everyone! This was pretty tough, honestly. q v q I had a bit of help !~
First, HUGE SHOUTOUT to oneinthecold ! I really wish I could reward you with a RU, but I unfortunately can't with the GA position. ;O;
Between your form and the winning form, it was pretty close. The character you created was very thoroughly developed and I absolutely loved the creativity and thought that went into the stories. I really especially enjoyed the fact that you incorporated the snake as an important character throughout the stories. While, again, I cannot reward a viscet RU to you, I would at the very least like to offer you an OC design (non-viscet) that comes with its own sparkle noodle for your efforts. ; v ; Let me know if you would like that!
The winner of this viscet is Gazoonia! Congratulations!
Your form was very VERY well written, and again, it was very close between the two forms. ;o; I loved the development of Benjamin's character very much, and the stories written were really neat and definitely expanded on a number of aspects about Benjamin's and Zuriel's characterization (as well as their closeness)! The story at the end was super cute honestly, and it really allowed me to see how Benjamin behaves around other 'cets. q u q Congratulations again, and take good care of the duo! <33
Thank you so much for entering, everyone! ; v ;
Ah thank you! I would love to accept your offer for the OC/with noodle partner.
Also congrats to Gazoonia! Your story was indeed very good along with your spectacular art along with added side characters!
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